Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about magic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Feeling Of A New Book
Not much people talk about the feeling of a new book.
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
#books
#hope
#magic
#motivational
#prose
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Via "666"
6 Hour's 6 minutes 6 seconds the witching hour is at hand!!
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your plans!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to excel!!
...
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your plans!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to excel!!
...
#magic
#pagan
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
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An Elementary Rhyme For No Reason
Spitting out vulgarity
When asked for charity
A motionless bird
Is often never heard
Pick up the loose crumbs
Moisten the tips of your thumbs
Remove your ear from the door
Nothing you haven't heard before
Someone's lazy brown eye
Is looking at me below the sky
Beyond the glass
Is a pain in your ass
There's a reason mom hides
That deadly bottle of formaldehyde
If you'd like to catch snowflakes
Keep a pail nearby for heaven sake
Chocolate is man's best friend
Had...
When asked for charity
A motionless bird
Is often never heard
Pick up the loose crumbs
Moisten the tips of your thumbs
Remove your ear from the door
Nothing you haven't heard before
Someone's lazy brown eye
Is looking at me below the sky
Beyond the glass
Is a pain in your ass
There's a reason mom hides
That deadly bottle of formaldehyde
If you'd like to catch snowflakes
Keep a pail nearby for heaven sake
Chocolate is man's best friend
Had...
#dark
#hell
#magic
#rhyming
#tragedy
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Black Feathers
Black feathers in the breeze
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
#admiration
#birds
#freedom
#magic
#wind
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protective spell
this is just for fun a spell falls from lips
karma's wheel is spinning
it is eyeing you and taking just revenge
you think you're smarter than everyone
the divine bears witness to your treachery
assaulting your body the things you do to me are manifesting on you body
you enjoyed harming me it's out of my hands
I'm going to step back and let it happen
the assault on your pride and freedom
cloying smell of death
I'm ready to face my maker
he knows my intent was pure
your Sadistic need for filth it is part of your...
karma's wheel is spinning
it is eyeing you and taking just revenge
you think you're smarter than everyone
the divine bears witness to your treachery
assaulting your body the things you do to me are manifesting on you body
you enjoyed harming me it's out of my hands
I'm going to step back and let it happen
the assault on your pride and freedom
cloying smell of death
I'm ready to face my maker
he knows my intent was pure
your Sadistic need for filth it is part of your...
#magic
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5 Comments
proper ettiquette, will see
Jezabelle winks a formidabel woman
she was Sampsons down fall
he was warned not to cut his hair
God was sorely disappointed, He lost a warrior that day
Sampson heed that of a woman over him
magic incantation in the color of rainbow
representing all spectrums humming on their own wavelenth
it's a ancient magic created before the sun open his eyes
it is the language of the soul
my thoughts are chided
why do you not do the rituals of the ancients
or write things down
utterking I don't...
she was Sampsons down fall
he was warned not to cut his hair
God was sorely disappointed, He lost a warrior that day
Sampson heed that of a woman over him
magic incantation in the color of rainbow
representing all spectrums humming on their own wavelenth
it's a ancient magic created before the sun open his eyes
it is the language of the soul
my thoughts are chided
why do you not do the rituals of the ancients
or write things down
utterking I don't...
#dark
#magic
#spiritual
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evolution~ I am my Fathers daughter
the visions came and I denied them entry
unlike the others I prefer the matrix
enslaving the human race
but they are honest if not free
possibly depraved but true about it
the enforcers are cold and calculating except with their own
their younglings are adored
the cracks in the wallpaper were hard to miss
great jagged black lines
on weathered blue daisies no less
even the daisies long to be elsewhere
their approach unmistakable, I hear them in my mind
and see them enjoying the riches of life
they are heavy...
unlike the others I prefer the matrix
enslaving the human race
but they are honest if not free
possibly depraved but true about it
the enforcers are cold and calculating except with their own
their younglings are adored
the cracks in the wallpaper were hard to miss
great jagged black lines
on weathered blue daisies no less
even the daisies long to be elsewhere
their approach unmistakable, I hear them in my mind
and see them enjoying the riches of life
they are heavy...
#aliens
#humankind
#magic
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A Decayed Longing
Planets Align
The dying claw at the sky
Under the beating of profane wings
Echoing the fall of the Eight
Usurp life
Insanity rides this epoch
A copulation of the mad
The Black Sophia whispering in tongues of flame
Its gaping maw
Hungers for the lush life beneath
A throne of writhing roots
Fed on the marrow of saints
Sealed by the Ninth Gate
Longinus pierces His side
The water that was spilled
Baptized a dead world
A birthright of sin
A tetrad of blood, salt, ash, and bone ...
The dying claw at the sky
Under the beating of profane wings
Echoing the fall of the Eight
Usurp life
Insanity rides this epoch
A copulation of the mad
The Black Sophia whispering in tongues of flame
Its gaping maw
Hungers for the lush life beneath
A throne of writhing roots
Fed on the marrow of saints
Sealed by the Ninth Gate
Longinus pierces His side
The water that was spilled
Baptized a dead world
A birthright of sin
A tetrad of blood, salt, ash, and bone ...
#death
#magic
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Latter-Day Witch
for Ann
As tall and white as gypsum lace hung high,
With eyes that kings would seek to tell
The outcomes of their wars when God
Became gnomic, a Galilean witch.
A country wife to manors born,
Yet also hermit, wise woman.
She lies in graves and pulls from ancient sod
The origins of death, and scouts the skies
For strange objects that linger in the arch.
She knows more lore than folks can tell,
She knows the meaning of each knell,
For whom it calls to heaven and to hell.
And lastly I can say she lives in Essex...
As tall and white as gypsum lace hung high,
With eyes that kings would seek to tell
The outcomes of their wars when God
Became gnomic, a Galilean witch.
A country wife to manors born,
Yet also hermit, wise woman.
She lies in graves and pulls from ancient sod
The origins of death, and scouts the skies
For strange objects that linger in the arch.
She knows more lore than folks can tell,
She knows the meaning of each knell,
For whom it calls to heaven and to hell.
And lastly I can say she lives in Essex...
#historical
#magic
#pagan #witches
#pagan #witches
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daffodil
daffodil souls like sprites among the trees
fairies that gather moss frolicking in the sun, then disappear
putting my mind at ease
they talk on the air, floating
while perfectly in tune, with the melody playing quietly, within me
dancing on the winds, they gather my secrets
saving enough for dreams
they appear as flowers should anyone else come near
dear ones of the forrested realms
tending to the sacred arts of transformation and renewal
gathering the dew from blades of grass
they glory in light but know the dark ...
fairies that gather moss frolicking in the sun, then disappear
putting my mind at ease
they talk on the air, floating
while perfectly in tune, with the melody playing quietly, within me
dancing on the winds, they gather my secrets
saving enough for dreams
they appear as flowers should anyone else come near
dear ones of the forrested realms
tending to the sacred arts of transformation and renewal
gathering the dew from blades of grass
they glory in light but know the dark ...
#fairies
#forest
#magic
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stir
they say hush now girl don't stir the air
conjuring wayward spirits
with witchy spells meant to entrance
sacred art what comes naturally
it's natural it can't be evil
occult knowledge falls from my lips
rolling off the tongue rhythmically
riding the winds to where you are
caressing your aura, the devil blushes
inside the need you are bidden
seeking the rite I rise to the occasion
mingling with lusty desire
my body tingles
and my mind is aware
dark music, exudes from my soul
troubling the winds ...
conjuring wayward spirits
with witchy spells meant to entrance
sacred art what comes naturally
it's natural it can't be evil
occult knowledge falls from my lips
rolling off the tongue rhythmically
riding the winds to where you are
caressing your aura, the devil blushes
inside the need you are bidden
seeking the rite I rise to the occasion
mingling with lusty desire
my body tingles
and my mind is aware
dark music, exudes from my soul
troubling the winds ...
#magic
#witches
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The Ship Sails
High in the mountains,the sun veils.
Cloud dances and ship sails.
They say the magical tales.
Of flying ships,ocean whales.
They say it's full of treasure.
Big,with no specific measure.
They tell he legend of an air ship.
Full of magic and whit.
You can see it in the clouds during day.
If you just look up,far away.
They say it runs by magic.
And nothing tragic happens to it.
Nor to its treasure.
I know it's just a legend.
But this myth about the treasure.
Everyone looked high and low. ...
Cloud dances and ship sails.
They say the magical tales.
Of flying ships,ocean whales.
They say it's full of treasure.
Big,with no specific measure.
They tell he legend of an air ship.
Full of magic and whit.
You can see it in the clouds during day.
If you just look up,far away.
They say it runs by magic.
And nothing tragic happens to it.
Nor to its treasure.
I know it's just a legend.
But this myth about the treasure.
Everyone looked high and low. ...
#hope
#magic
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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DU Poetry : Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique