Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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lyrics by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
adagio
Poem Published
16th May 2024 2:00pm
16th May 2024 2:00pm
Stones of Heart
Stones of heart pretentiously
falling in my dreams weeping
masquerading twilight's sorrow
as the moon waxes and wanes
listening to winds upon a time
dance in porcelain shadows
of Autumn's crimson-red
as nature's puppets sleep
falling in my dreams weeping
masquerading twilight's sorrow
as the moon waxes and wanes
listening to winds upon a time
dance in porcelain shadows
of Autumn's crimson-red
as nature's puppets sleep
#emotions
#inspirational
#lyrics #philosophical
#lyrics #philosophical
186 reads
4 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 11:31pm
19th Apr 2024 11:31pm
Ballad of the Fire Swamp
O give me a home where nobody will roam
Where the Count and his soldiers won’t stray
Where a sudden Flame Spurt leaves them crispy and hurt
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the swamp
Where the Lightning Sands grip at their knees
Where the R.O.U.S. is our welcome house guest
And the skies smell of campfire all day
O give me a house with a giant guard mouse
Where the Terrors keep burglars at bay
Where seldom is heard an annoying loud bird
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the...
Where the Count and his soldiers won’t stray
Where a sudden Flame Spurt leaves them crispy and hurt
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the swamp
Where the Lightning Sands grip at their knees
Where the R.O.U.S. is our welcome house guest
And the skies smell of campfire all day
O give me a house with a giant guard mouse
Where the Terrors keep burglars at bay
Where seldom is heard an annoying loud bird
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the...
#love
#lyrics
#NaPoWriMo2024 #parody
#NaPoWriMo2024 #parody
141 reads
2 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
18th Mar 2019 1:10am
18th Mar 2019 1:10am
Musicality
naughty nymph loves
bending to his neurotic whims
as he sucks symphonies
from between
her slickened crease
stirring psalms of pleasure
with vocal intonations
humming deep basso..full of hunger
strumming her harped soul
seducing all 88 keys of her spine
she whines in falsettos
spilling harmonic wine for him
grinding her ass...smudging his face
in silken sheets of her music
moaning in c minor
as her g-spot tambourines to
hip shaking orgasms
glossing lips in more her glamour
for her...
bending to his neurotic whims
as he sucks symphonies
from between
her slickened crease
stirring psalms of pleasure
with vocal intonations
humming deep basso..full of hunger
strumming her harped soul
seducing all 88 keys of her spine
she whines in falsettos
spilling harmonic wine for him
grinding her ass...smudging his face
in silken sheets of her music
moaning in c minor
as her g-spot tambourines to
hip shaking orgasms
glossing lips in more her glamour
for her...
#sex
#music
#lyrics
706 reads
8 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
10th Dec 2022 6:50pm
10th Dec 2022 6:50pm
Space Geyser
#erotic
#lyrics
#dirty
254 reads
0 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
Forgive me my love (music)
Hi there,
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
#lyrics
145 reads
9 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
7th Dec 2023 00:23am
7th Dec 2023 00:23am
Cage Striped Heart
My world’s so far away
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
#lyrics
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
622 reads
29 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
6th May 2024 10:13am
6th May 2024 10:13am
RapTor
Spitting bars, you think you're Eminem
Meaningless shit, you'll never be him
Without living his life, your chance to be shady
Is slim
What makes him special is the life he led
The blood he bled
The struggles in his head
You can't talk about your feelings deep inside
When there's so much you want to hide
Take them out for a spin and giv'em a ride
Let people see your other side
They may hate you, berate you, call you an ass
They might taint you, but they ain't you
It'll all pass
Meaningless shit, you'll never be him
Without living his life, your chance to be shady
Is slim
What makes him special is the life he led
The blood he bled
The struggles in his head
You can't talk about your feelings deep inside
When there's so much you want to hide
Take them out for a spin and giv'em a ride
Let people see your other side
They may hate you, berate you, call you an ass
They might taint you, but they ain't you
It'll all pass
#lyrics
#music
154 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 1:56am
5th Dec 2024 1:56am
Broken Record
Sometimes the story doesn't end like a fairytale,
I guess that's how it really goes when you stick on a merry-go-round.
The melody of us is now a haunting sound.
Tell me, baby, how do I make it stop,
When the world spins like a broken record,
Your voice is the needle scratching my heart raw.
I had it all but I lost it loving you,
Wish I had known before I fell.
The fall was bad, but unrequited love hurts like hell.
All these thoughts play around in my head,
Like a broken record telling me what to feel.
If I could escape,...
I guess that's how it really goes when you stick on a merry-go-round.
The melody of us is now a haunting sound.
Tell me, baby, how do I make it stop,
When the world spins like a broken record,
Your voice is the needle scratching my heart raw.
I had it all but I lost it loving you,
Wish I had known before I fell.
The fall was bad, but unrequited love hurts like hell.
All these thoughts play around in my head,
Like a broken record telling me what to feel.
If I could escape,...
#hurt
#love
#lyrics
#music
#WritingPoetry
43 reads
0 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 8:04pm
14th Feb 2024 8:04pm
The Troglodytes
The troglodytes come out at night
come out at night to play,
the troglodyte delights in night
and never comes out by day
by day and never comes out by day.
Oh, the troll and his mate
in a terrible state
in a terrible state by day,
they both sunlight hate
but never ever hesitate
to come out at night to play
to play, to come out and night to play.
Oh, The troglodyte is full of fright
so full of fright by day,
is at night such a horrible sight
he frightens the trolls away
away, he frightens the trolls...
come out at night to play,
the troglodyte delights in night
and never comes out by day
by day and never comes out by day.
Oh, the troll and his mate
in a terrible state
in a terrible state by day,
they both sunlight hate
but never ever hesitate
to come out at night to play
to play, to come out and night to play.
Oh, The troglodyte is full of fright
so full of fright by day,
is at night such a horrible sight
he frightens the trolls away
away, he frightens the trolls...
#lyrics
145 reads
0 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
26th Jul 2024 1:49am
26th Jul 2024 1:49am
Algorithm One (PG-13)
Here is a clean version of the formula used by artists such as Megan Thee Stallion, Cardi B., GloRilla, Lil Kim, Sexxy Redd, Nicki Minaj, Ice Spice, and a few others.
I got good "cookie"
And your man want it
I'll take him if I want to
CHICK!!
Buy this
Buy that
Then throw it all away
Cuz I am just that RICH!!
I lick my lips
as I'm walking past
He watch my hips
cuz they shakin' fast
That's right!!
All y'all step aside!!
Because...
I got good "cookie" ...
I got good "cookie"
And your man want it
I'll take him if I want to
CHICK!!
Buy this
Buy that
Then throw it all away
Cuz I am just that RICH!!
I lick my lips
as I'm walking past
He watch my hips
cuz they shakin' fast
That's right!!
All y'all step aside!!
Because...
I got good "cookie" ...
#lyrics
#music
#sexy
108 reads
2 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 10:34pm
24th Jan 2024 10:34pm
You and Eye got a Screw loose
Whos to say who's the arsonist ?
Who's the accelerant in this pyre?
Maybe it was those green eyes
Gazing within the lunatic asylum
As opposite attractions drawn
Moths dancing the flame
Beneath the spoon
All that's left to say
I got nothing better to do
Than to get fucked up on you
Baby I'm not a heroin girl
Cocaine cowbell speed freak
Baby gotta confess
It's oblivion I seek
Hand in hand riding the lighting
Prescription pètes pleasure cruise
All the while pickling a liver...
Who's the accelerant in this pyre?
Maybe it was those green eyes
Gazing within the lunatic asylum
As opposite attractions drawn
Moths dancing the flame
Beneath the spoon
All that's left to say
I got nothing better to do
Than to get fucked up on you
Baby I'm not a heroin girl
Cocaine cowbell speed freak
Baby gotta confess
It's oblivion I seek
Hand in hand riding the lighting
Prescription pètes pleasure cruise
All the while pickling a liver...
#lyrics
#steampunk
#PopCulture
227 reads
8 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2018 4:54am
22nd Nov 2018 4:54am
Libra's Ammunition
You think you scaring me, but bitch I'm lion hearted.
Flow so toxic once you get a taste of it, you'll be under the list of dearly departed.
I'm the fire that makes your body explode like its spontaneous combusting.
There ain't nobody in the world that I would put the slighest amount of trust in.
Imma dog, I got these bitches on a leash.
Imma take yall to get spayed and neutered to get rid of yall fleas capeesh.
I'm the shit aint no aroma can clear the air of my scent.
Y'all couldn't pay to...
Flow so toxic once you get a taste of it, you'll be under the list of dearly departed.
I'm the fire that makes your body explode like its spontaneous combusting.
There ain't nobody in the world that I would put the slighest amount of trust in.
Imma dog, I got these bitches on a leash.
Imma take yall to get spayed and neutered to get rid of yall fleas capeesh.
I'm the shit aint no aroma can clear the air of my scent.
Y'all couldn't pay to...
#rap
#identity
#lyrics
817 reads
9 Comments
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