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lyrics by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
Forgive me my love (music)
Hi there,
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
#lyrics
200 reads
9 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2021 5:27am
3rd Apr 2021 5:27am
Purple Reign
I do NOT own the rights to this song rewritten or in its altered state
This is so beautiful in harmony if you sing it as Prince is singing his version, try it, trust me
I never meant to cause you any problems
Or walk away with distress to the brain
I only wanted one time to see you smile and changing
Rapture while dancing in the bliss of a SweetKitty’s Purple Reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Only want to see you...
This is so beautiful in harmony if you sing it as Prince is singing his version, try it, trust me
I never meant to cause you any problems
Or walk away with distress to the brain
I only wanted one time to see you smile and changing
Rapture while dancing in the bliss of a SweetKitty’s Purple Reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Purple reign, purple reign
Only want to see you...
#music
#lyrics
841 reads
21 Comments
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 6:12pm
3rd Apr 2025 6:12pm
Death of the Music Thread
Let me sing the dying roses
of barbed (radio) wire bouquets,
MacGowan whispered to Sinead
“aren’t these the reasons why we lived
sang the measure of our dreams.”
The jukebox will never die
the final beat of each heart attack,
even never played symphonies
will find fingers on their piano
Russian who etched her soul
on lyrical ectoplasm, shrouded
in Kremlin mists of orchestral fists,
Norwegian who stripped bark from every tree
left wood splinters in eternal oceanic seas,
the Tamil girl who sang the negligee of...
of barbed (radio) wire bouquets,
MacGowan whispered to Sinead
“aren’t these the reasons why we lived
sang the measure of our dreams.”
The jukebox will never die
the final beat of each heart attack,
even never played symphonies
will find fingers on their piano
Russian who etched her soul
on lyrical ectoplasm, shrouded
in Kremlin mists of orchestral fists,
Norwegian who stripped bark from every tree
left wood splinters in eternal oceanic seas,
the Tamil girl who sang the negligee of...
#lyrics
57 reads
0 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2019 4:20pm
2nd Jan 2019 4:20pm
Once is not Enough
I’ve discovered an endlessness of love
when I scaled the highest heavens above
‘cause I’ve held the most precious in my life
and it’s You, it’s You - oooooooooo
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your touch…..(Your touch)
even when our closeness prevails
lovin’ You, I found
once is not enough
Inside Your love
I feel Your warmth greeting me;
I sail the oceans of our labors
and when we’re done
laying quietly together
Still ----
I’m wanting You more.
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your...
when I scaled the highest heavens above
‘cause I’ve held the most precious in my life
and it’s You, it’s You - oooooooooo
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your touch…..(Your touch)
even when our closeness prevails
lovin’ You, I found
once is not enough
Inside Your love
I feel Your warmth greeting me;
I sail the oceans of our labors
and when we’re done
laying quietly together
Still ----
I’m wanting You more.
It’s been crazy
how I hunger for Your...
#lyrics
604 reads
4 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 1:59am
6th Feb 2025 1:59am
take this sadness
intro]
Take this sadness
and turn it into silence
[Verse 1]
I bleed with it
a sadness so deep
it could hold the ocean
(Don't silence me
don't silence me
can anybody hear me?)
And you
you give me what I don't need
so tie me down
and throw me into the depths of it
where no one can hear me cry
[Chorus]
Take this sadness
take this sadness
and turn it into silence
(No one is listening anyway)
(Is there anybody left...
Take this sadness
and turn it into silence
[Verse 1]
I bleed with it
a sadness so deep
it could hold the ocean
(Don't silence me
don't silence me
can anybody hear me?)
And you
you give me what I don't need
so tie me down
and throw me into the depths of it
where no one can hear me cry
[Chorus]
Take this sadness
take this sadness
and turn it into silence
(No one is listening anyway)
(Is there anybody left...
#dark
#depression
#despair
#lyrics
#MentalHealth
136 reads
2 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
30th May 2018 11:01am
30th May 2018 11:01am
Purpose
#strength
#courage
#lyrics
#LifeGoals
#uplifting
616 reads
Naajir
Poem Published
18th Mar 2019 1:10am
18th Mar 2019 1:10am
Musicality
naughty nymph loves
bending to his neurotic whims
as he sucks symphonies
from between
her slickened crease
stirring psalms of pleasure
with vocal intonations
humming deep basso..full of hunger
strumming her harped soul
seducing all 88 keys of her spine
she whines in falsettos
spilling harmonic wine for him
grinding her ass...smudging his face
in silken sheets of her music
moaning in c minor
as her g-spot tambourines to
hip shaking orgasms
glossing lips in more her glamour
for her...
bending to his neurotic whims
as he sucks symphonies
from between
her slickened crease
stirring psalms of pleasure
with vocal intonations
humming deep basso..full of hunger
strumming her harped soul
seducing all 88 keys of her spine
she whines in falsettos
spilling harmonic wine for him
grinding her ass...smudging his face
in silken sheets of her music
moaning in c minor
as her g-spot tambourines to
hip shaking orgasms
glossing lips in more her glamour
for her...
#sex
#music
#lyrics
729 reads
8 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
5th Aug 2022 2:57am
5th Aug 2022 2:57am
Coffee Shop 2022
Coffee Shop 2022
Her lipstick glance gathers hospitality to serve her Sultan with pitted dates and cardamom tea. She opens the crack in the universe of words. “You look dazed and confused. But I have the recipe that will cast away the cloud spirits in your eyes.”
“Nothing could do that milady. My malady is deeper than tree rings in a sequoia.”
“Nonsense. Look at the rose in my lips. Absorb its luster and the Puckish luxuriance that is your flower of heaven.”
“There are veiled rumors in the sky of your words. I see a plying woman whose motives are...
Her lipstick glance gathers hospitality to serve her Sultan with pitted dates and cardamom tea. She opens the crack in the universe of words. “You look dazed and confused. But I have the recipe that will cast away the cloud spirits in your eyes.”
“Nothing could do that milady. My malady is deeper than tree rings in a sequoia.”
“Nonsense. Look at the rose in my lips. Absorb its luster and the Puckish luxuriance that is your flower of heaven.”
“There are veiled rumors in the sky of your words. I see a plying woman whose motives are...
#women
#erotic
#lyrics
#sensual
#seductive
442 reads
0 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 7:19am
18th Apr 2025 7:19am
IT'S THE BEST WAY
Verse:1
A talented hand
Is a talented brain
Ink so fresh like words that stand
Beautiful gestures that attain....
Verse: 2
I love to express
Like I do my dress
Precious heart that tries to confess
The struggle of my huge stress
Verse: 3
Flowers dance
With aroma immense
Petals with colors that caress
As they fall.They leave a mess.. but still the best
CHORUS:
It's the best way of the rest "Of the rest"
The way life shows...
A talented hand
Is a talented brain
Ink so fresh like words that stand
Beautiful gestures that attain....
Verse: 2
I love to express
Like I do my dress
Precious heart that tries to confess
The struggle of my huge stress
Verse: 3
Flowers dance
With aroma immense
Petals with colors that caress
As they fall.They leave a mess.. but still the best
CHORUS:
It's the best way of the rest "Of the rest"
The way life shows...
#LifeCycle
#lyrics
#metaphor
#MyInspiration
#PowerOfWords
52 reads
0 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 8:13pm
30th Jan 2025 8:13pm
African beat
In the afternoon
I found all these suggestions.
Everywhere reaching for my sight.
It left me thinking.
I do not feel like loosing weight,
I would rather dance
In an African beat.
With a burning indian scent
Around the fire.
It is why I am here.
To play?
It is beautiful to let me go in trance!
I found all these suggestions.
Everywhere reaching for my sight.
It left me thinking.
I do not feel like loosing weight,
I would rather dance
In an African beat.
With a burning indian scent
Around the fire.
It is why I am here.
To play?
It is beautiful to let me go in trance!
#dance
#lyrics
91 reads
2 Comments
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