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Her
Poem Published
Today 5:08am
Today 5:08am
Emotionally Invested
I was emotionally invested
So you had to teach me a lesson
There could never be an us
Your ways taught me not to trust
Now I’m just like you
I do the same thing to men like you
Now you want me too
I’m so over you
Now wanna touch this
You could never have this again
I’m with him and him, maybe him
(oooh)
And when I look in their eyes
I always see your eyes
The tears I cried
Because I
Was emotionally invested
You taught me never to respond ...
So you had to teach me a lesson
There could never be an us
Your ways taught me not to trust
Now I’m just like you
I do the same thing to men like you
Now you want me too
I’m so over you
Now wanna touch this
You could never have this again
I’m with him and him, maybe him
(oooh)
And when I look in their eyes
I always see your eyes
The tears I cried
Because I
Was emotionally invested
You taught me never to respond ...
#anger
#lover
#sex #lyrics
#sex #lyrics
22 reads
1 Comment
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 7:42am
15th Dec 2024 7:42am
Someday Soon
Desperation fuels chaos in the streets
While false idols continue to make war
Honest poets keep writing the receipts
That’s right we’ve been keeping score
Someday soon judgment catches us all
Pride hits hardest when forced to crawl
Evil people are cowards speaking in lies
Hiding behind wealth enslaved by greed
There is no light inside such barren eyes
Gotta block the signal then cut the feed
Someday soon love will restore our grace
Build us a world far away from this place
Copyright @...
While false idols continue to make war
Honest poets keep writing the receipts
That’s right we’ve been keeping score
Someday soon judgment catches us all
Pride hits hardest when forced to crawl
Evil people are cowards speaking in lies
Hiding behind wealth enslaved by greed
There is no light inside such barren eyes
Gotta block the signal then cut the feed
Someday soon love will restore our grace
Build us a world far away from this place
Copyright @...
#lyrics
113 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
Your two front teeth
#Christmas
#lyrics
#parody
#rhyming
#satirical
99 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
16th Jul 2024 9:17pm
16th Jul 2024 9:17pm
Light
In the night I tried to find you
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears
Went through the rain and through the dark
try to find your precious heart
tried to break those chains that bind you
grab my hand so I can guide you
All that pain and open wounds
feel insane, no one coming soon
I am the one who tried to find you
follow my light I'm here to guide you
With every tear you cried and dried
You died a little every time
no one ever tried...
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears
Went through the rain and through the dark
try to find your precious heart
tried to break those chains that bind you
grab my hand so I can guide you
All that pain and open wounds
feel insane, no one coming soon
I am the one who tried to find you
follow my light I'm here to guide you
With every tear you cried and dried
You died a little every time
no one ever tried...
#lyrics
57 reads
13 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 5:25pm
14th Oct 2024 5:25pm
Listening to the Highway Men
Singing the song Highwayman
Willie Nelson
Kris Kristofferson
Waylon Jennings
Johnny Cash
One left on this fair earth
Iconic
I love Johnny Cash and Willie Nelson
Cloth comes to mind ...
Willie Nelson
Kris Kristofferson
Waylon Jennings
Johnny Cash
One left on this fair earth
Iconic
I love Johnny Cash and Willie Nelson
Cloth comes to mind ...
#emotions
#identity
#LifeCycle
#lyrics
#music
156 reads
20 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
16th Jan 2021 7:46am
16th Jan 2021 7:46am
DA NANG TOWN
#sex
#war
#lyrics #erotic
#lyrics #erotic
401 reads
2 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
21st Jan 2021 2:22pm
21st Jan 2021 2:22pm
POETRY ON MY MIND
THINKING
I got up this morning
With poetry on my mind,
So I sat right down
And wrote the first line.
I am not writing poetry
To see a book on a shelf;
I write for one reason
And that's to please myself.
I got up this morning
To face another day;
The words of my poetry
Started me on the right way.
I do not expect or need
The applause of men;
I have unlimited words
That are my best friends.
"What are you thinking?"
I am asked many times,
My answer to simple:
"I have...
I got up this morning
With poetry on my mind,
So I sat right down
And wrote the first line.
I am not writing poetry
To see a book on a shelf;
I write for one reason
And that's to please myself.
I got up this morning
To face another day;
The words of my poetry
Started me on the right way.
I do not expect or need
The applause of men;
I have unlimited words
That are my best friends.
"What are you thinking?"
I am asked many times,
My answer to simple:
"I have...
#motivational
#inspirational
#narrative
#lyrics
#confessional
400 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
13th Dec 2020 8:01pm
13th Dec 2020 8:01pm
simple inspired verses.. from a night's husky melodious oozing honey breeze fm- radio music
1.
language of a flower
(https://youtu.be/r7SltY6FMUk)
she says.. "when this flower
even is in the lucid talking, my
breathing air & moving wind..
why can't you be still standstill
.. & spell at least a word.. that
one willing bliss of a word that
which will help me live intact..
with my tendrilous meristem
else, will be in an eternal plea
to you .. even as i wither & fall
off as an earthen rotting piece
of an abscissa, in patient brown.."
2. ...
language of a flower
(https://youtu.be/r7SltY6FMUk)
she says.. "when this flower
even is in the lucid talking, my
breathing air & moving wind..
why can't you be still standstill
.. & spell at least a word.. that
one willing bliss of a word that
which will help me live intact..
with my tendrilous meristem
else, will be in an eternal plea
to you .. even as i wither & fall
off as an earthen rotting piece
of an abscissa, in patient brown.."
2. ...
#love
#music
#lyrics
#TruthOfLife
#dialogue
458 reads
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Apr 2020 5:30pm
8th Apr 2020 5:30pm
Angel from Montgomery
Vizual Entry
#hope
#music
#lyrics
1462 reads
32 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 3:01am
28th Dec 2024 3:01am
Try and impress me, Shania!
(Response song)!
Response to the song "That Don't Impress Me Much" by Shania Twain
THAT WON'T EVER STOP PLAYING!!!
------------
BACK AT YA BITCH...
Ow...
Uh-huh, yeah, yeah...
anal rape's not pleasant!
You don't impress me much!
I've known plenty of ugly chicks...
who thought they were something...
you think you're special?
I'd rather eat out Lizzo...
Fuck you Shania Twit...Twain...
You hope for Brad Pitt...
You couldn't get Sheldon Cooper...
...even if you gave him a train!...
Response to the song "That Don't Impress Me Much" by Shania Twain
THAT WON'T EVER STOP PLAYING!!!
------------
BACK AT YA BITCH...
Ow...
Uh-huh, yeah, yeah...
anal rape's not pleasant!
You don't impress me much!
I've known plenty of ugly chicks...
who thought they were something...
you think you're special?
I'd rather eat out Lizzo...
Fuck you Shania Twit...Twain...
You hope for Brad Pitt...
You couldn't get Sheldon Cooper...
...even if you gave him a train!...
#crush
#dirty
#lyrics #sexy
#lyrics #sexy
136 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:02pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:02pm
In the Dead of the Night
Intro:
In the dead of night, the cradle rocks.
Echoes in the shadows, ticking clocks.
Tiny hands reach out for air.
Chaos reigns, curly hair everywhere.
Rhyme 1:
Under the moonlight, whispers grow,
silent secrets only shadows know.
From the cradle to the rocking chair,
curly hair is everywhere.
Chorus:
Rock the cradle, feel the storm,
in the darkness love takes form.
Curly hair, wild and free,
a symbol of our destiny.
Rhyme 2:
Midnight cries break the silence....
In the dead of night, the cradle rocks.
Echoes in the shadows, ticking clocks.
Tiny hands reach out for air.
Chaos reigns, curly hair everywhere.
Rhyme 1:
Under the moonlight, whispers grow,
silent secrets only shadows know.
From the cradle to the rocking chair,
curly hair is everywhere.
Chorus:
Rock the cradle, feel the storm,
in the darkness love takes form.
Curly hair, wild and free,
a symbol of our destiny.
Rhyme 2:
Midnight cries break the silence....
#dance
#funny
#lyrics
#music
#sun
60 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Aug 2021 11:39pm
6th Aug 2021 11:39pm
Deep Cuts
.
.
.
I come from a time when we delved deep
Into a band’s L.P., Cassette, or C.D.
There was a ritual to opening a package
Then listening to an album in its entirety
The radio friendly hits were like appetizers
Songs which raised interest and curiosity
But an album gave a complete perspective
Discovering a recording artists’ virtuosity
In these deep cuts you’d uncover their talent
Compositions that displayed magical ingenuity
Hard work and passion poured onto projects
Into sessions where they showed...
#music
#lyrics
#memories #art
#memories #art
840 reads
13 Comments
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