Lyrics by Top Critiquers
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lyrics by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 7:42am
15th Dec 2024 7:42am
Someday Soon
Desperation fuels chaos in the streets
While false idols continue to make war
Honest poets keep writing the receipts
That’s right we’ve been keeping score
Someday soon judgment catches us all
Pride hits hardest when forced to crawl
Evil people are cowards speaking in lies
Hiding behind wealth enslaved by greed
There is no light inside such barren eyes
Gotta block the signal then cut the feed
Someday soon love will restore our grace
Build us a world far away from this place
Copyright @...
While false idols continue to make war
Honest poets keep writing the receipts
That’s right we’ve been keeping score
Someday soon judgment catches us all
Pride hits hardest when forced to crawl
Evil people are cowards speaking in lies
Hiding behind wealth enslaved by greed
There is no light inside such barren eyes
Gotta block the signal then cut the feed
Someday soon love will restore our grace
Build us a world far away from this place
Copyright @...
#lyrics
151 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Today 10:25am
Today 10:25am
Fight to live
Eighteen dollars to her name
Can’t survive, it’s all the same
In need of food for her kids
Drugs & booze the way she lives
No ambition to get a job
Unless it’s slobbing on someone’s knob
How much lower can you go
You’ll be remembered as a filthy ho
You must fight to live
You must fight to live
You must fight to live
Inside your fucked up selfish mind
Sleazy strip malls is where you hang
Beware the rats with long sharp fangs
Behind the store to get your fix
Fever ignored, getting real sick
...
Can’t survive, it’s all the same
In need of food for her kids
Drugs & booze the way she lives
No ambition to get a job
Unless it’s slobbing on someone’s knob
How much lower can you go
You’ll be remembered as a filthy ho
You must fight to live
You must fight to live
You must fight to live
Inside your fucked up selfish mind
Sleazy strip malls is where you hang
Beware the rats with long sharp fangs
Behind the store to get your fix
Fever ignored, getting real sick
...
#addiction
#children
#drugs
#lyrics
#poverty
16 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Aug 2021 11:39pm
6th Aug 2021 11:39pm
Deep Cuts
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.
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I come from a time when we delved deep
Into a band’s L.P., Cassette, or C.D.
There was a ritual to opening a package
Then listening to an album in its entirety
The radio friendly hits were like appetizers
Songs which raised interest and curiosity
But an album gave a complete perspective
Discovering a recording artists’ virtuosity
In these deep cuts you’d uncover their talent
Compositions that displayed magical ingenuity
Hard work and passion poured onto projects
Into sessions where they showed...
#music
#lyrics
#memories #art
#memories #art
898 reads
13 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
16th Jul 2024 9:17pm
16th Jul 2024 9:17pm
Light
In the night I tried to find you
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears
Went through the rain and through the dark
try to find your precious heart
tried to break those chains that bind you
grab my hand so I can guide you
All that pain and open wounds
feel insane, no one coming soon
I am the one who tried to find you
follow my light I'm here to guide you
With every tear you cried and dried
You died a little every time
no one ever tried...
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears
Went through the rain and through the dark
try to find your precious heart
tried to break those chains that bind you
grab my hand so I can guide you
All that pain and open wounds
feel insane, no one coming soon
I am the one who tried to find you
follow my light I'm here to guide you
With every tear you cried and dried
You died a little every time
no one ever tried...
#lyrics
85 reads
13 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 9:49pm
9th Apr 2025 9:49pm
Song Lyrics inspired by Muse Xx
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
In love
I gave you
Vodka
Lime
Mind
Grime
Out of time
Thought
Caught
Haute
Wrought
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
Make you mine
Even if ....
You're going prime
Medium
Rare
I stare
I don't care
Catch me
Report me
Slash me
Cash me
Flash me
It's a dare
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
In love
I gave you
Vodka
Lime
Mind
Grime
Out of time
Thought
Caught
Haute
Wrought
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
Make you mine
Even if ....
You're going prime
Medium
Rare
I stare
I don't care
Catch me
Report me
Slash me
Cash me
Flash me
It's a dare
#crush
#lover
#lyrics
#music
#PopCulture
81 reads
21 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:24pm
Yesterday 8:24pm
~Our Fusing Breaths, of “-UYIR”:: body, mind, soul
(an inspired lyrical
(female lyrical in italics, male lyrical in non-italics)
inspired from the 1998 Tamil film #UyiroduUyiraga..
…from its its soulful~ romantic love number linked below)
https://youtu.be/RpljvhSoyCo?feature=shared
(Intro Refrain)
my darling my love...
you are my child
just this flesh alone, is not love
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all truth, your soul will arrive unto me
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all...
(female lyrical in italics, male lyrical in non-italics)
inspired from the 1998 Tamil film #UyiroduUyiraga..
…from its its soulful~ romantic love number linked below)
https://youtu.be/RpljvhSoyCo?feature=shared
(Intro Refrain)
my darling my love...
you are my child
just this flesh alone, is not love
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all truth, your soul will arrive unto me
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all...
#inspirational
#love
#lyrics
#romantic
#spiritual
59 reads
2 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
21st Jan 2021 2:22pm
21st Jan 2021 2:22pm
POETRY ON MY MIND
THINKING
I got up this morning
With poetry on my mind,
So I sat right down
And wrote the first line.
I am not writing poetry
To see a book on a shelf;
I write for one reason
And that's to please myself.
I got up this morning
To face another day;
The words of my poetry
Started me on the right way.
I do not expect or need
The applause of men;
I have unlimited words
That are my best friends.
"What are you thinking?"
I am asked many times,
My answer to simple:
"I have...
I got up this morning
With poetry on my mind,
So I sat right down
And wrote the first line.
I am not writing poetry
To see a book on a shelf;
I write for one reason
And that's to please myself.
I got up this morning
To face another day;
The words of my poetry
Started me on the right way.
I do not expect or need
The applause of men;
I have unlimited words
That are my best friends.
"What are you thinking?"
I am asked many times,
My answer to simple:
"I have...
#motivational
#inspirational
#narrative
#lyrics
#confessional
446 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
16th Jan 2021 7:46am
16th Jan 2021 7:46am
DA NANG TOWN
#sex
#war
#lyrics #erotic
#lyrics #erotic
449 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Apr 2020 5:30pm
8th Apr 2020 5:30pm
Angel from Montgomery
Vizual Entry
#hope
#music
#lyrics
1523 reads
32 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:02pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:02pm
In the Dead of the Night
Intro:
In the dead of night, the cradle rocks.
Echoes in the shadows, ticking clocks.
Tiny hands reach out for air.
Chaos reigns, curly hair everywhere.
Rhyme 1:
Under the moonlight, whispers grow,
silent secrets only shadows know.
From the cradle to the rocking chair,
curly hair is everywhere.
Chorus:
Rock the cradle, feel the storm,
in the darkness love takes form.
Curly hair, wild and free,
a symbol of our destiny.
Rhyme 2:
Midnight cries break the silence....
In the dead of night, the cradle rocks.
Echoes in the shadows, ticking clocks.
Tiny hands reach out for air.
Chaos reigns, curly hair everywhere.
Rhyme 1:
Under the moonlight, whispers grow,
silent secrets only shadows know.
From the cradle to the rocking chair,
curly hair is everywhere.
Chorus:
Rock the cradle, feel the storm,
in the darkness love takes form.
Curly hair, wild and free,
a symbol of our destiny.
Rhyme 2:
Midnight cries break the silence....
#dance
#funny
#lyrics
#music
#sun
99 reads
6 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 11:31pm
19th Apr 2024 11:31pm
Ballad of the Fire Swamp
O give me a home where nobody will roam
Where the Count and his soldiers won’t stray
Where a sudden Flame Spurt leaves them crispy and hurt
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the swamp
Where the Lightning Sands grip at their knees
Where the R.O.U.S. is our welcome house guest
And the skies smell of campfire all day
O give me a house with a giant guard mouse
Where the Terrors keep burglars at bay
Where seldom is heard an annoying loud bird
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the...
Where the Count and his soldiers won’t stray
Where a sudden Flame Spurt leaves them crispy and hurt
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the swamp
Where the Lightning Sands grip at their knees
Where the R.O.U.S. is our welcome house guest
And the skies smell of campfire all day
O give me a house with a giant guard mouse
Where the Terrors keep burglars at bay
Where seldom is heard an annoying loud bird
And the skies smell of campfire all day
Home, home in the...
#love
#lyrics
#NaPoWriMo2024 #parody
#NaPoWriMo2024 #parody
208 reads
2 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
26th Sep 2024 3:19am
Forgive me my love (music)
Hi there,
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
Check out this song on Suno. The words are mine based on my poem “forgive me my love”
https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
#lyrics
196 reads
9 Comments
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