Poems About Humankind Seeking Honest Critique
#humankind
oraclesight
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 5:59am
29th Oct 2024 5:59am
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Observer of the truth; only to be found out
Not of what that cloud astrays trust is.
To be Schrödinger's black cat or white within;
Still bleeding
The matrix of sentimental and elemental fires.
So burn down O old growth and just be.
Being with the raw saw dust
Over the horizon left seeing.
Feeling the world for what it really means
to be alive.
My Mothers' Nature way of just dreaming
The world for how it really is to live a life.
Intelligentia...
Not of what that cloud astrays trust is.
To be Schrödinger's black cat or white within;
Still bleeding
The matrix of sentimental and elemental fires.
So burn down O old growth and just be.
Being with the raw saw dust
Over the horizon left seeing.
Feeling the world for what it really means
to be alive.
My Mothers' Nature way of just dreaming
The world for how it really is to live a life.
Intelligentia...
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#nature
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oldmanG
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 4:28am
27th Oct 2024 4:28am
Billionaire Autocracy
Billionaire Autocracy
On a beach bunker in Hawaii
Electric car deep in Texas
Billionaire smile moves to Florida
Taking NASA away from us
Billionaires landing on the moon
Koch Brothers have been giving
Billions to roll back our rights
Billionaire with Nazi regalia
Crows that he has a Supreme Court Justice
In his back pocket he takes Clarence and Ginnie
On a Super Yacht as he buys Grand Ma’s house
Meta stealing billions off of our data
It’s...
On a beach bunker in Hawaii
Electric car deep in Texas
Billionaire smile moves to Florida
Taking NASA away from us
Billionaires landing on the moon
Koch Brothers have been giving
Billions to roll back our rights
Billionaire with Nazi regalia
Crows that he has a Supreme Court Justice
In his back pocket he takes Clarence and Ginnie
On a Super Yacht as he buys Grand Ma’s house
Meta stealing billions off of our data
It’s...
#greed
#humankind
#hypocrisy
#manipulation
#technology
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teestando
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 5:40am
24th Oct 2024 5:40am
Pyramid Scheme of our Societal Beings
I started at the bottom of the high tower
I climbed up the ladder to see the real power
Peeked the curtain and I found true cowards
I dont want to live with the false shouters
Moved to the dark but I spout louder
I was forced to a state of a deep flounder
Pyramids wiped, I represent a strong founder
I was free, once I broke the band of the structured browsers
Captured by the judges, held their standards to the wronged bowser
I was caught quickly, trapped among the trap of their sticky chowder
I was the one laughed at inside school...
I climbed up the ladder to see the real power
Peeked the curtain and I found true cowards
I dont want to live with the false shouters
Moved to the dark but I spout louder
I was forced to a state of a deep flounder
Pyramids wiped, I represent a strong founder
I was free, once I broke the band of the structured browsers
Captured by the judges, held their standards to the wronged bowser
I was caught quickly, trapped among the trap of their sticky chowder
I was the one laughed at inside school...
#deception
#humankind
#strength #rhyming
#strength #rhyming
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Naajir
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 5:47pm
21st Oct 2024 5:47pm
Sometimes....
..a caring voice is all that matters
chatter about whatever...just close the distance...
.....someone needs to hear from you
chatter about whatever...just close the distance...
.....someone needs to hear from you
#anxiety
#hope
#humankind
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 4:54pm
16th Oct 2024 4:54pm
Go-Mad
My ass cheeks got lung cancer, because fools think everything is a joke
Every day they talk mega shit and just blow smoke,
“Now I’m the motherfucka paying at the hole
That only makes the evil inside of me get Antarctic cold,
“On the hatin motherfuckas I always zig-zag
Leaving their attitudes straight stank like a bitch on her rag,
“Embarrassed because it’s always at the wrong time
But a man with bitch tendencies to me is considered a crime,
“Zero tolerance for the fag, the woke and the tranny
Along with those...
Every day they talk mega shit and just blow smoke,
“Now I’m the motherfucka paying at the hole
That only makes the evil inside of me get Antarctic cold,
“On the hatin motherfuckas I always zig-zag
Leaving their attitudes straight stank like a bitch on her rag,
“Embarrassed because it’s always at the wrong time
But a man with bitch tendencies to me is considered a crime,
“Zero tolerance for the fag, the woke and the tranny
Along with those...
#humankind
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Naajir
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 6:05pm
15th Oct 2024 6:05pm
N.I.C.E. Guys Do Finish Last
Since we're bastardizing words
Thru the warped lens of revisionist history
Allow me to throw my entry into the
Reimagined Social Contract
^^^^^
Because I've made a conscious decision long ago to
Keep Love in my Heart and God in my Spirit
I did my Human best to stay close to my Original self
Learned how to forgive myself
Make an accord with my Deamons
And cultivate a true Love for what it is to be
...
Thru the warped lens of revisionist history
Allow me to throw my entry into the
Reimagined Social Contract
^^^^^
Because I've made a conscious decision long ago to
Keep Love in my Heart and God in my Spirit
I did my Human best to stay close to my Original self
Learned how to forgive myself
Make an accord with my Deamons
And cultivate a true Love for what it is to be
...
#God
#humankind
#love
#men
#spiritual
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Isgyppie_
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 6:46am
15th Oct 2024 6:46am
Miscellaneous
Ripping off the top half
Isn’t that all we long to do
Isn’t that all we long to do
#humankind
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moon_bather
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 4:38am
15th Oct 2024 4:38am
Another Day
Waking to the city’s cold embrace
Concrete boots, heart’s misplaced
City lights, mood’s a haze
Echoes of sirens, a bad day’s craze
Coffee’s my fix, frosty veins
Steel canyons, icy reins
Luck’s lost in alleyways
Howlin’ wind, urban disarray
Detective eyes, steel and gray
Neon signs, flicker and sway
Ghost town echoes, shadows play
Lone wolf’s howl, city decay
Guitar strummin’, subway hum
Ghost in the crowd, widow’s drum
Briefcase loaded, devil in disguise ...
Concrete boots, heart’s misplaced
City lights, mood’s a haze
Echoes of sirens, a bad day’s craze
Coffee’s my fix, frosty veins
Steel canyons, icy reins
Luck’s lost in alleyways
Howlin’ wind, urban disarray
Detective eyes, steel and gray
Neon signs, flicker and sway
Ghost town echoes, shadows play
Lone wolf’s howl, city decay
Guitar strummin’, subway hum
Ghost in the crowd, widow’s drum
Briefcase loaded, devil in disguise ...
#city
#honesty
#humankind
#MyInspiration
#sky
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oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 8:07pm
11th Oct 2024 8:07pm
(You’ve) Got Mail
Growing old in Tennessee
The valley the streams I never fished upon
Got some bricks and some faulty legs
The oven stares at me and says use me
I’m getting asthma from the dust settling
My weight bears down on all that I want
Struggle to cross and get my mail
Mayor looks upon but he’s in the same boat
We got mail I don’t know about you
The valley the streams I never fished upon
Got some bricks and some faulty legs
The oven stares at me and says use me
I’m getting asthma from the dust settling
My weight bears down on all that I want
Struggle to cross and get my mail
Mayor looks upon but he’s in the same boat
We got mail I don’t know about you
#aging
#humankind
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oldmanG
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:25pm
9th Oct 2024 1:25pm
In the Quiet Moments
How do I sit in the quiet moments
When I want to rip my soul from me
Time is slow except when you want it to turn
Sitting on a rock pile whistle won’t go off for hours
Biding your time against your sanity
Sanity screams set me free
The clock isn’t a minute past midnight
So I go back into figuring
What I’ll do with the time that runs out
I don’t want to give this away
Seconds pass time turns I find my quiet times
But I want to run free from the things that hold me back ...
When I want to rip my soul from me
Time is slow except when you want it to turn
Sitting on a rock pile whistle won’t go off for hours
Biding your time against your sanity
Sanity screams set me free
The clock isn’t a minute past midnight
So I go back into figuring
What I’ll do with the time that runs out
I don’t want to give this away
Seconds pass time turns I find my quiet times
But I want to run free from the things that hold me back ...
#confessional
#evolution
#humankind
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 12:10pm
9th Oct 2024 12:10pm
On the Path
The truth of the heart is that it all ends',
the voice of a sage came quietly.
Or was it your own thoughts, locked far within yourself,
the childish need to affect rebellion
against an unfair scheme of life where all that lives will die
without a resurrection soon to grace?
The barn is empty, lashed by wind, and swaddled in blackness.
You sit inside and I come looking for you there,
to sit beside you in the cold and talk astrology, science,
belief, and other silhouettes that dance on hay bales.
We are two stalks of straw...
the voice of a sage came quietly.
Or was it your own thoughts, locked far within yourself,
the childish need to affect rebellion
against an unfair scheme of life where all that lives will die
without a resurrection soon to grace?
The barn is empty, lashed by wind, and swaddled in blackness.
You sit inside and I come looking for you there,
to sit beside you in the cold and talk astrology, science,
belief, and other silhouettes that dance on hay bales.
We are two stalks of straw...
#death
#humankind
#LifeCycle #love
#LifeCycle #love
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Koulouri
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 4:56pm
7th Oct 2024 4:56pm
The Lines We Cross
There is a line in the sand that states:
"This is how the world works."
And it is a fine line.
No one can touch it.
The sand is crowded,
with people as far as the eye can see.
All remaining firmly behind the line.
Some even avert their gaze,
as if even looking,
could cause great pain.
Yet sometimes,
in the quiet of night,
there is laughter in the air.
It laughs at the absurdity,
that words in the sand,
control us.
And there is a heavy mist in the air,...
"This is how the world works."
And it is a fine line.
No one can touch it.
The sand is crowded,
with people as far as the eye can see.
All remaining firmly behind the line.
Some even avert their gaze,
as if even looking,
could cause great pain.
Yet sometimes,
in the quiet of night,
there is laughter in the air.
It laughs at the absurdity,
that words in the sand,
control us.
And there is a heavy mist in the air,...
#humankind
#inspirational
#LifeStruggles
#support
#wisdom
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