Poems About Heaven by Top Critiquers
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Poems about heaven by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
In The Spirit Of Honoring A Hebrew King
This was one powerful King and found to be in God’s favor, bequeathed upon the accession of his throne by his father King David, most historians have failed to properly manifest the importance of this Darken Hue Hebrew King who ruled Israel with an iron fist and was spiritually noted to be fair and less grievous in his principles.
I wanted to take the time to pay homage to one of my blessed Kings from the pages in the Bible and for all his extraordinary gifts that has somehow seeped into the fabric of our life.
Allow me in words to take you...
I wanted to take the time to pay homage to one of my blessed Kings from the pages in the Bible and for all his extraordinary gifts that has somehow seeped into the fabric of our life.
Allow me in words to take you...
#heaven
#moon
#spiritual
#sun
#water
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Ironia
Sun glossed white puffed sky.
Ironic imaginings.
Poised to darkly die.
Ironic imaginings.
Poised to darkly die.
#dreams
#death
#clouds #heaven
#clouds #heaven
225 reads
17 Comments
End of Days
Behold the End
comes
on earth no man will hear
the trumpets will be heard
only in the space of heavens
angels shall draw their swords
the clash of steel and shields
between Satan's legions
and angels
shall be heard
fire shall rain from the sky
lava erupts from the earth
the end time
spells a beginning.
Grace@DU
comes
on earth no man will hear
the trumpets will be heard
only in the space of heavens
angels shall draw their swords
the clash of steel and shields
between Satan's legions
and angels
shall be heard
fire shall rain from the sky
lava erupts from the earth
the end time
spells a beginning.
Grace@DU
#dark
#devil
#angels
#heaven
#apocalypse
1405 reads
16 Comments
Welcome to Hell ...
Welcome, dear soul, to the fiery embrace,
Where pleasure and sin find their rightful place.
Forget what you’ve heard, the lies they’ve spread
Hell’s not torment; it’s where life’s truly led.
Lust and desire aren’t vices to shame,
They’re art forms perfected in passion’s flame.
A dance of bodies, a feast of the flesh,
In Hell, these pleasures are always fresh.
Heaven may promise a cloud and a harp,
But its paradise is tepid, stale, and sharp.
No touch, no taste, no thrill of the chase
Just hymns on repeat in a sterile space. ...
Where pleasure and sin find their rightful place.
Forget what you’ve heard, the lies they’ve spread
Hell’s not torment; it’s where life’s truly led.
Lust and desire aren’t vices to shame,
They’re art forms perfected in passion’s flame.
A dance of bodies, a feast of the flesh,
In Hell, these pleasures are always fresh.
Heaven may promise a cloud and a harp,
But its paradise is tepid, stale, and sharp.
No touch, no taste, no thrill of the chase
Just hymns on repeat in a sterile space. ...
#devil
#funny
#heaven
#hell
#religion
85 reads
0 Comments
Vidalia Vortex
Vidalia Vortex
a whistlestop for Coolidge
whose visage shadows fallen idols
deep in the oxbow lakes of heaven
where the blues is a guitar of the delta
with boat ramp to forgotten cypress lodge
of deep dreamers in holy silence
of monochrome
from misty Vidalia vortex
whose onion eyes
see where pirogue plies the mattress soul
of Lafourche turned liquid lane
for lovers in a silent movie
when Zydeco becomes a Thibodaux anthem
for Creole ghosts
who melt into the marsh ...
a whistlestop for Coolidge
whose visage shadows fallen idols
deep in the oxbow lakes of heaven
where the blues is a guitar of the delta
with boat ramp to forgotten cypress lodge
of deep dreamers in holy silence
of monochrome
from misty Vidalia vortex
whose onion eyes
see where pirogue plies the mattress soul
of Lafourche turned liquid lane
for lovers in a silent movie
when Zydeco becomes a Thibodaux anthem
for Creole ghosts
who melt into the marsh ...
#dreams
#nature
#spiritual
#heaven
#surreal
340 reads
8 Comments
Prayer
God, if you're listening
I have but one request
when I die let me take my snes
I have but one request
when I die let me take my snes
#heaven
324 reads
2 Comments
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