Poems About Healing by Top Critiquers
#healing
Poems about healing by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Crescendos
allow me to wipe
off the dust love
slide my fingers
over your keys
play you softly
pour light into
your darkness
ease the black
revive the white
bring back to life
the sound of your
soul & heal your
years old scars
create a private
silent symphony
divine harmony
in delicate notes
& elegant tones
from the depths
of despair to the
peaks of pleasure
in a slow crescendo
until you moan in music
off the dust love
slide my fingers
over your keys
play you softly
pour light into
your darkness
ease the black
revive the white
bring back to life
the sound of your
soul & heal your
years old scars
create a private
silent symphony
divine harmony
in delicate notes
& elegant tones
from the depths
of despair to the
peaks of pleasure
in a slow crescendo
until you moan in music
#healing
#music
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Primum Non Nocere (First, Do No Harm)
Fresh thoughts don't love a haughty place
much as plants prefer fertile dirt
for growth expansion into space
and not a venue of more hurt
like what austerity provides
in old tough love die hard disguise
stabbing like knives at marching ides
or boasting brazen at demise
when austerity strips away
all pretense of love in its hate
with..."go ahead and make my day"...
proving itself as not so great
since greatness must encourage growth,
as known by Hippocratic oath!
much as plants prefer fertile dirt
for growth expansion into space
and not a venue of more hurt
like what austerity provides
in old tough love die hard disguise
stabbing like knives at marching ides
or boasting brazen at demise
when austerity strips away
all pretense of love in its hate
with..."go ahead and make my day"...
proving itself as not so great
since greatness must encourage growth,
as known by Hippocratic oath!
#healing
#honesty
#morality
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6 Comments
Ignorance
People don't realize how stressed out you get,
When your head is so congested,
You have to physically push on the vessels,
To relieve it.
Without relief, you get spasms.
Dizziness and fear.
And the annoyance of people,
Trying to be friendly.
Thinking that talking would help.
When all it does,
Is trigger spams and fear.
The fear of losing control,
Of something you never used to control.
But now you have to.
Or else you'll die.
When your head is so congested,
You have to physically push on the vessels,
To relieve it.
Without relief, you get spasms.
Dizziness and fear.
And the annoyance of people,
Trying to be friendly.
Thinking that talking would help.
When all it does,
Is trigger spams and fear.
The fear of losing control,
Of something you never used to control.
But now you have to.
Or else you'll die.
#FeelingLost
#hate
#healing
#loneliness
#suffering
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7 Comments
Trail Blazer
My mistake is leaving a trail even a blind man can trace..
My mistake is quitting the rail when the only way is the rail..
Many obstacles on the road..
So many predators on the way preying on my life..
In the blistering cold I walk.. sored up in my walking foot.. it's not soothing when it rains.. the sun rises but no shine.. in full moon we still in the dark. We dig dug and burrow in a row..
Jolly jolly Ma I raid ma I raided all the way..
Even though I hustle I made mistakes..
Relieving me all off my responses abilities I...
My mistake is quitting the rail when the only way is the rail..
Many obstacles on the road..
So many predators on the way preying on my life..
In the blistering cold I walk.. sored up in my walking foot.. it's not soothing when it rains.. the sun rises but no shine.. in full moon we still in the dark. We dig dug and burrow in a row..
Jolly jolly Ma I raid ma I raided all the way..
Even though I hustle I made mistakes..
Relieving me all off my responses abilities I...
#strength
#redemption
#healing
#determination
#risk
517 reads
2 Comments
Duels and Duets

#politics
#funny
#MentalHealth #healing
#MentalHealth #healing
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2 Comments
Galaxy of Resiliency
" The wound is the place where the light enters you" - Rumi
I have deeply loved myself
despite a heart scarred with failed fates,
and wounded eternities.
Epoch lifetime battle scars and bleeds.
I wear my wounds.
Celebrate my ruins.
What could we possibly learn unmarred?
A scab on every single solitary place
your fingers touched me.
A myriad of patient scars,
to transform me into
a human galaxy of resiliency.
I have deeply loved myself
despite a heart scarred with failed fates,
and wounded eternities.
Epoch lifetime battle scars and bleeds.
I wear my wounds.
Celebrate my ruins.
What could we possibly learn unmarred?
A scab on every single solitary place
your fingers touched me.
A myriad of patient scars,
to transform me into
a human galaxy of resiliency.
#healing
#learning
#SelfDiscovery #SelfWorth
#SelfDiscovery #SelfWorth
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10 Comments
one too many
hands brace against concrete walls
searchin for somethin solid
in a spinnin world
where streetlights melt
in late november rain
liquored up white lies
slide from a tongue gone numb
drippin like poison
as dawn ticks closer
and memory unravels
the bartender’s face
smears like watercolor
thru the bottom of my glass
measurin out oblivion
in four finger pours
while my phone buzzes
with promises I failed to keep
broken bottle self esteem
catchin glints of moonlight
in parkin lot...
searchin for somethin solid
in a spinnin world
where streetlights melt
in late november rain
liquored up white lies
slide from a tongue gone numb
drippin like poison
as dawn ticks closer
and memory unravels
the bartender’s face
smears like watercolor
thru the bottom of my glass
measurin out oblivion
in four finger pours
while my phone buzzes
with promises I failed to keep
broken bottle self esteem
catchin glints of moonlight
in parkin lot...
#addiction
#alcohol
#healing
#MentalHealth
#PersonalGrowth
67 reads
15 Comments
Antipodal
i want to go to the Taj Mahal
to forget mistakes I've made
stupid things I said when i was 20
the job I was fired from
my inability to crochet
the man I should have married
perfect symmetry
is a treasure
the Taj Mahal has it
against a polluted sky
in a strange country
a billion people
many too hungry
to harbor neurotic thoughts
a former coworker
insufferfably pretentious
dismissed the Taj
as the world's most ornate body bag
he had many other stupid thoughts ...
to forget mistakes I've made
stupid things I said when i was 20
the job I was fired from
my inability to crochet
the man I should have married
perfect symmetry
is a treasure
the Taj Mahal has it
against a polluted sky
in a strange country
a billion people
many too hungry
to harbor neurotic thoughts
a former coworker
insufferfably pretentious
dismissed the Taj
as the world's most ornate body bag
he had many other stupid thoughts ...
#LifeChangingMoment
#travel
#MovingOn #healing
#MovingOn #healing
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8 Comments
Sneaky Bitch
Some times I walk between the lines
Can you see me Lady, can you hear me baby
The walls fall down within my mind
Can you see me Lady, can you hear me baby
Can't you see that I'm in love again
I thought that things would never change
My Sahara never saw your kind of rain
I don't know if it can take this flooding strain
There's so much to take in this dark and bleeding pain
But I can feel, I can feel, my swamps being to drain
Hearing Darkness's caressing screams begin to fade away
I've never felt this, but I need you each and...
Can you see me Lady, can you hear me baby
The walls fall down within my mind
Can you see me Lady, can you hear me baby
Can't you see that I'm in love again
I thought that things would never change
My Sahara never saw your kind of rain
I don't know if it can take this flooding strain
There's so much to take in this dark and bleeding pain
But I can feel, I can feel, my swamps being to drain
Hearing Darkness's caressing screams begin to fade away
I've never felt this, but I need you each and...
#healing
#love
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16 Comments
Your Touch
I won't usurp your Midas dreams
Dripping lazy golden memories
Wherein all you touch is turned to gold
And of golden thread the spell they weave
xxx
Melting into you
Adrift
Within the incense of your grace
All that is bold - the swift pride in me
Laid down
And again, as when a child
Just longing to be held
Lost within the moments warmth
Such moments far to few
Perchance, some simple passing words
When silence says so much
To be held and by your touch
Healed and...
Dripping lazy golden memories
Wherein all you touch is turned to gold
And of golden thread the spell they weave
xxx
Melting into you
Adrift
Within the incense of your grace
All that is bold - the swift pride in me
Laid down
And again, as when a child
Just longing to be held
Lost within the moments warmth
Such moments far to few
Perchance, some simple passing words
When silence says so much
To be held and by your touch
Healed and...
#love
#relationships
#peace #healing
#peace #healing
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needing a f**k on the wild land
I'm
on
mental
repair...
I'm
focusing
on
unfocused
things...
I'm
licking
the smoke
stuck on the
wall of my
bed room that
was blown 2 years ago
that now smells like musk...
I'm taking
tablet named "fuck"
i just threw away
dreams, innocence and emotions
from my balcony...
well I'm
glad I have got
puffy boobs...
on
mental
repair...
I'm
focusing
on
unfocused
things...
I'm
licking
the smoke
stuck on the
wall of my
bed room that
was blown 2 years ago
that now smells like musk...
I'm taking
tablet named "fuck"
i just threw away
dreams, innocence and emotions
from my balcony...
well I'm
glad I have got
puffy boobs...
#healing
#sex
287 reads
27 Comments
un-therapy
He told me he could show me
the life I'd only dreamed of
that he could turn me
into the person I was always
meant to be
It sounded like the
psychological equivalent of
"Jesus can save you"
and if a dead man
I no longer believe in
couldn't save me from myself
I don't know what this man could do
I don't have all the answers
and I never know what I'm doing
but that doesn't mean
I need a saviour
I want to believe in him
of course
I want to believe
there is...
the life I'd only dreamed of
that he could turn me
into the person I was always
meant to be
It sounded like the
psychological equivalent of
"Jesus can save you"
and if a dead man
I no longer believe in
couldn't save me from myself
I don't know what this man could do
I don't have all the answers
and I never know what I'm doing
but that doesn't mean
I need a saviour
I want to believe in him
of course
I want to believe
there is...
#confusion
#deception
#FeelingLost #healing
#FeelingLost #healing
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DU Poetry : Poems About Healing by Top Critiquers