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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 10:47pm
11th Jun 2024 10:47pm
Anyone could've forgotten
I just remembered
The baby is in the house
We can't miss our flight
The baby is in the house
We can't miss our flight
#haiku
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#uplifting
131 reads
5 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 9:46pm
11th Jun 2024 9:46pm
Confusion (Haiku)
Don't understand you.
Twisted words
What was the end goal?
Twisted words
What was the end goal?
#confusion
#haiku
87 reads
14 Comments
Verdonna
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 3:49pm
10th Jun 2024 3:49pm
Blues Umbrella
You stole my sunshine.
Caught in your rainy weather.
Looking for shelter.
Caught in your rainy weather.
Looking for shelter.
#haiku
#relationships
#MovingOn
245 reads
10 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 8:32pm
9th Jun 2024 8:32pm
Nature and life
Nature breathes us life
spurn its socour, so selfish
hastens our demise
So great its bounty
to abuse it and despise
bind that undermines
Burnt our bridges, crossed
to late, for the amens repost
inadaquacy
Ashes of what could be
paradise, dreams unachieved
our stupidity
spurn its socour, so selfish
hastens our demise
So great its bounty
to abuse it and despise
bind that undermines
Burnt our bridges, crossed
to late, for the amens repost
inadaquacy
Ashes of what could be
paradise, dreams unachieved
our stupidity
#haiku
#nature
175 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Jun 2024 10:37am
7th Jun 2024 10:37am
A Doomed State
Twilight Zone has arrived
People are drugged fueled zombies
No recovery
People are drugged fueled zombies
No recovery
#haiku
#LifeStruggles
137 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 1:17am
4th Jun 2024 1:17am
Photo
Photo reveals me
The image could be a lie
Divergent accounts
The image could be a lie
Divergent accounts
#haiku
#identity
#memories
142 reads
10 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
30th May 2024 5:32pm
30th May 2024 5:32pm
Spring Morning
awakening day
moon lingering behind clouds
sun not yet awake
moon lingering behind clouds
sun not yet awake
#haiku
#spring
129 reads
2 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
26th May 2024 1:25am
26th May 2024 1:25am
Bless Me
#erotic
#haiku
#lust
#senryu
#sensual
256 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th May 2024 10:28pm
25th May 2024 10:28pm
Mind Control
Entering my mind
Hearing silence stops all time
There's nothing to find
Hearing silence stops all time
There's nothing to find
#haiku
#identity
#memories #support
#memories #support
167 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th May 2024 10:22pm
25th May 2024 10:22pm
Delusional
My body can't move
Running thoughts create panic
Hallucination
Running thoughts create panic
Hallucination
#confusion
#haiku
168 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd May 2024 6:04pm
23rd May 2024 6:04pm
Spring = Misery
Allergic sickness
Springtime weeds, grass, mold, pollen
Dependent on drugs
Springtime weeds, grass, mold, pollen
Dependent on drugs
#drugs
#haiku
#illness #spring
#illness #spring
158 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd May 2024 5:12pm
23rd May 2024 5:12pm
Final Days
Excruciation
Joylessness tribulation
Alleviation
Joylessness tribulation
Alleviation
#haiku
#illness
#peace
#suffering
#death
173 reads
6 Comments
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