Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 3:31pm
20th Dec 2024 3:31pm
We miss you like crazy
Father
We miss you like crazy
That is not a lie
Please come back to us
And heal us from our sickness
That we had for many years now
Our doctors had prescribed medications
For our sickness
The medications that our doctors prescribed
To us is not helping us
It is only making us more tired
We also feel that we are a drug junkie
We hate to take medication
We want you to heal us
The natural way
Please father do that favor for us
Yes father we trust you
Also father take our worries
That we have away
Also...
We miss you like crazy
That is not a lie
Please come back to us
And heal us from our sickness
That we had for many years now
Our doctors had prescribed medications
For our sickness
The medications that our doctors prescribed
To us is not helping us
It is only making us more tired
We also feel that we are a drug junkie
We hate to take medication
We want you to heal us
The natural way
Please father do that favor for us
Yes father we trust you
Also father take our worries
That we have away
Also...
#frustration
#jealousy
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
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1 Comment
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 6:27pm
19th Dec 2024 6:27pm
Writing Pain
(Inspired by Adzy's "6 word story.")
Memories written...
sometimes fly away...
others burrow...
deeper into my psyche.
Meds frustrate...
rather than calm -
engrams triggered!
My screams are
tiny chirps...
Help (chirp) Me!
Memories written...
sometimes fly away...
others burrow...
deeper into my psyche.
Meds frustrate...
rather than calm -
engrams triggered!
My screams are
tiny chirps...
Help (chirp) Me!
#apathy
#confusion
#frustration
46 reads
2 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 8:56pm
18th Dec 2024 8:56pm
Loonies still complaining about the colour of obviously fictional cartoon characters!
By Stanley Collymore
It's a shame the same consideration
isn't give to the history nonsense
taught in a rather widespread
fashion within white Western organized and
obviously run schools, all of them depicting
all Black people as essentially slaves, while
pushing European features as the standard
of beauty. How do these clearly, discernibly
ingrained morons, suppose little Black kids
feel, being systematically told, that nothing beautiful or even vaguely so, does or really, ...
It's a shame the same consideration
isn't give to the history nonsense
taught in a rather widespread
fashion within white Western organized and
obviously run schools, all of them depicting
all Black people as essentially slaves, while
pushing European features as the standard
of beauty. How do these clearly, discernibly
ingrained morons, suppose little Black kids
feel, being systematically told, that nothing beautiful or even vaguely so, does or really, ...
#denial
#despair
#emptiness
#frustration
#hate
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Onyxceila
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
Captured
Sometimes I close my eyes so I can't see
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
#anger
#anxiety
#frustration #loneliness
#frustration #loneliness
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2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 10:57am
14th Dec 2024 10:57am
It feels good, so who really cares
When he would get off from work he would come home to his wife and her irritable old mother
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
#anger
#frustration
#orgasm
#parent
#wife
70 reads
10 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 10:24pm
2nd Dec 2024 10:24pm
Stop and Listen
Stop collaborate listen
IVF creates new ones
Family starving for a little life
She can’t do what her body requires
Doctor says this can spark a life
Back in the legislature man says
Why do IVF when we are all in pro life
Congressman or congresswoman says
I can rule your life and death until you’re no more
Momma just wanting to Mother
She just can’t deliver little ones
Without a little help welcome modern health
Living in a Red State trying to deliver voters...
IVF creates new ones
Family starving for a little life
She can’t do what her body requires
Doctor says this can spark a life
Back in the legislature man says
Why do IVF when we are all in pro life
Congressman or congresswoman says
I can rule your life and death until you’re no more
Momma just wanting to Mother
She just can’t deliver little ones
Without a little help welcome modern health
Living in a Red State trying to deliver voters...
#frustration
#morality
#relationships #sadness
#relationships #sadness
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 4:41pm
1st Dec 2024 4:41pm
Refrained
(Moon_bather/Fia Naturie)
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chains, making me stay
I’ll send help....
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chains, making me stay
I’ll send help....
#anger
#frustration
#regret
166 reads
14 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 11:14pm
30th Nov 2024 11:14pm
No Way
No way there should be more guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
No way but we look away
No way but we look away
And send them off to school
Send them into the fire
With armor of innocence
Shrapnel in soul
Wake up...
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
No way but we look away
No way but we look away
And send them off to school
Send them into the fire
With armor of innocence
Shrapnel in soul
Wake up...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#frustration
#GunControl
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 8:32pm
28th Nov 2024 8:32pm
Fall will arrive soon
Fall will arrive soon
Now we are at the
End of Summer
I must say that
I hate when the Summer ends
Because the birds migrate
South for the winter
And I will not see then
Until next spring
Yes the leaves are also
Changing its colour
From green to gold
Also when Fall arrives
The hot days will end
And I will have to
Put my Summer clothes away
And start to wear
My Winter clothes
Now it is also cold
Every single day
Now we had changed the clocks
One hour back
Also, the days are shorter now ...
Now we are at the
End of Summer
I must say that
I hate when the Summer ends
Because the birds migrate
South for the winter
And I will not see then
Until next spring
Yes the leaves are also
Changing its colour
From green to gold
Also when Fall arrives
The hot days will end
And I will have to
Put my Summer clothes away
And start to wear
My Winter clothes
Now it is also cold
Every single day
Now we had changed the clocks
One hour back
Also, the days are shorter now ...
#fear
#frustration
#regret
#sadness
#shame
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 6:45pm
26th Nov 2024 6:45pm
Unwanted: Dead or Alive (Part 2)
Speak your pride to fake your dignity
We are sons and daughters by way of mere bloodlines
But God was Father first
How do you measure up by comparison?
Boasting ego
Is there substance to your success
Give me the home makers guide to navigating survival
Show me the blueprints for how to heal the heart
Stay practical and go numb because emotions are anchors
Accepting a relative sense of unresolved dysfunction
Asking money for answers
If pennies buy thoughts how much more for a soul
As if currency is enough to purchase...
We are sons and daughters by way of mere bloodlines
But God was Father first
How do you measure up by comparison?
Boasting ego
Is there substance to your success
Give me the home makers guide to navigating survival
Show me the blueprints for how to heal the heart
Stay practical and go numb because emotions are anchors
Accepting a relative sense of unresolved dysfunction
Asking money for answers
If pennies buy thoughts how much more for a soul
As if currency is enough to purchase...
#disappointment
#father
#frustration
#SelfWorth
#son
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 1:11pm
26th Nov 2024 1:11pm
Valley Of Broken Dreams
In the shadow of mountains high
Lies a place where my dreams die
A barren land where hopes unravel
This journey I take, a mournful travel
Ambitions fade, now whispers in the wind
Visions once bright, have come to an end
Footsteps stumble on paths once clear
This valley of death I'm wandering near
Promises made I never kept
Tears of regret I silently wept
A tapestry of lost aspirations
Leveled by my lifes limitations
In the grasp of...
Lies a place where my dreams die
A barren land where hopes unravel
This journey I take, a mournful travel
Ambitions fade, now whispers in the wind
Visions once bright, have come to an end
Footsteps stumble on paths once clear
This valley of death I'm wandering near
Promises made I never kept
Tears of regret I silently wept
A tapestry of lost aspirations
Leveled by my lifes limitations
In the grasp of...
#frustration
#regret
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violet
Vi
Vi
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 11:36am
25th Nov 2024 11:36am
Door
My feet are melded to the concrete
as though a hundred stoney fingers
are fused to the soles
and the only way to step forward
is by tearing hard enough
to leave skin behind.
They only let go when I walk away.
as though a hundred stoney fingers
are fused to the soles
and the only way to step forward
is by tearing hard enough
to leave skin behind.
They only let go when I walk away.
#frustration
#shame
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3 Comments
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