Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about friendship seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 2:26am
9th Apr 2025 2:26am
Diana Woke With A Hangover
Diana woke with a hangover.
She saw herself naked in a mirror.
Then, she remembered Derek's party.
They were celebrating finally graduating from college.
She and Luke gulped one too many.
She saw herself naked in a mirror.
Then, she remembered Derek's party.
They were celebrating finally graduating from college.
She and Luke gulped one too many.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#school
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 2:31pm
8th Apr 2025 2:31pm
I Had Been Saving Myself For Marriage
Did you hump me hard?
Sure, Linda. Just like in Spartacus: Vengeance.
As in how hard, John?
Whoa! It hurts down there?
I need to go to the bathroom.
Just to find out... right?
Right. It'll be a minute.
Hi, Matt. I think I'm in trouble.
JOHN, YOU DAMN STINKING JERK!!
Now I know that. Later.
You made blood gush out of me!
Ah, Jeeze! Sorry about that.
I had been saving myself for marriage!
Great! That Gina and her bachelorette party!
Sure, Linda. Just like in Spartacus: Vengeance.
As in how hard, John?
Whoa! It hurts down there?
I need to go to the bathroom.
Just to find out... right?
Right. It'll be a minute.
Hi, Matt. I think I'm in trouble.
JOHN, YOU DAMN STINKING JERK!!
Now I know that. Later.
You made blood gush out of me!
Ah, Jeeze! Sorry about that.
I had been saving myself for marriage!
Great! That Gina and her bachelorette party!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 4:28am
8th Apr 2025 4:28am
Something Tells Me You're Really Not Thrilled
You're such a magnificent hump.
You too, Susan. But you're getting married.
I know. To Oliver. Tomorrow.
Something tells me you're really not thrilled.
Trust me, Mike. You got that right.
You too, Susan. But you're getting married.
I know. To Oliver. Tomorrow.
Something tells me you're really not thrilled.
Trust me, Mike. You got that right.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
124 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
Why Didn't You Tell Me I'm Topless?!
Carol was
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#technology
135 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 2:25am
7th Apr 2025 2:25am
What A Bad Dream She Had Last Night
Candace finished taking her shower.
She went into her and Mark's bedroom.
Candace caught Mark humping Paula.
The couple looked and laughed at Candace.
She woke screaming before she saw Mark.
She went into her and Mark's bedroom.
Candace caught Mark humping Paula.
The couple looked and laughed at Candace.
She woke screaming before she saw Mark.
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#nightmares
#sex
126 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 8:50pm
5th Apr 2025 8:50pm
Stood Naked In Front Of An Art Class
Rachel said, "Okay. We're ready."
Katherine stepped out and dropped her robe.
She stood before Rachel's class.
Rachel's roommate Griffin came home.
He saw her friend Katherine standing naked.
Rachel invited Griffin to strip.
Then, Griffin got behind Katherine.
She suddenly felt something go inside her.
Rachel said, "Please stand still."
One student looked at Katherine.
"She doesn't look so good.", that student said.
Rachel said, "She'll be fine."
After the students left,...
Katherine stepped out and dropped her robe.
She stood before Rachel's class.
Rachel's roommate Griffin came home.
He saw her friend Katherine standing naked.
Rachel invited Griffin to strip.
Then, Griffin got behind Katherine.
She suddenly felt something go inside her.
Rachel said, "Please stand still."
One student looked at Katherine.
"She doesn't look so good.", that student said.
Rachel said, "She'll be fine."
After the students left,...
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 5:00pm
4th Apr 2025 5:00pm
On Your Timeline
Have you ever thought of time
As being a line
Crossing dimensions
In our minds...
A push and pull
At first, a feeling
A feeling
Unfamiliar
Yet familiar at the same time?
Separate lines parallel
Glide closer
Ever closer
To the one
Drawing nearer
To the time that divides
Night from day
Hunter from prey
Joy from dismay
Cut a line in the sand
And take my hand
For I will stop you
Drowning -
Losing time
As being a line
Crossing dimensions
In our minds...
A push and pull
At first, a feeling
A feeling
Unfamiliar
Yet familiar at the same time?
Separate lines parallel
Glide closer
Ever closer
To the one
Drawing nearer
To the time that divides
Night from day
Hunter from prey
Joy from dismay
Cut a line in the sand
And take my hand
For I will stop you
Drowning -
Losing time
#StreamOfConsciousness
#sensual
#friendship #PowerOfWords
#friendship #PowerOfWords
241 reads
23 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 3:19pm
4th Apr 2025 3:19pm
No Shame In The Both Of Us Having Some True Fun
All
you need
to do now
is take your clothes
off and sit with me
on this bed. My friend will
be out soon. She wants to shoot
her subjects naked. And besides,
there really is no shame in the
both of us having some true fun. Is there?
you need
to do now
is take your clothes
off and sit with me
on this bed. My friend will
be out soon. She wants to shoot
her subjects naked. And besides,
there really is no shame in the
both of us having some true fun. Is there?
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
219 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 2:07pm
4th Apr 2025 2:07pm
I Can't Stay With One Who Cheats
After she caught Sean
humping her best friend
Sylvia, Nancy came to
realize that she's better
off without him and left
Santa Monica for good.
humping her best friend
Sylvia, Nancy came to
realize that she's better
off without him and left
Santa Monica for good.
#betrayal
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
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0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 9:10pm
3rd Apr 2025 9:10pm
She Found Herself Topless On The Beach
Some friends went to Florida.
Spring Break was happening at Fort Lauderdale.
Everyone's having fun going wild.
One night, Rachel woke up.
She found herself topless on the beach.
That's before she spotted Adam.
He gave her some coffee.
She asked where Bridgette and Lisa were.
Adam said, "They're in jail."
Racel bailed those two out.
Lisa suddenly remembered a wet t-shirt contest.
Some guys approached the trio.
Claiming to be with Girls Gone Wild.
Lisa and Bridgette streaked in a church.
Spring Break was happening at Fort Lauderdale.
Everyone's having fun going wild.
One night, Rachel woke up.
She found herself topless on the beach.
That's before she spotted Adam.
He gave her some coffee.
She asked where Bridgette and Lisa were.
Adam said, "They're in jail."
Racel bailed those two out.
Lisa suddenly remembered a wet t-shirt contest.
Some guys approached the trio.
Claiming to be with Girls Gone Wild.
Lisa and Bridgette streaked in a church.
#alcohol
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
139 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 2:46am
3rd Apr 2025 2:46am
Let's Call It A Little Incentive
Are you almost done, Markie?
Just about, Erin. Why the big rush?
Simple. Tomorrow is Greg's birthday.
Really? You sure it's not something else?
Okay. Let's call it a little incentive.
Just about, Erin. Why the big rush?
Simple. Tomorrow is Greg's birthday.
Really? You sure it's not something else?
Okay. Let's call it a little incentive.
#birthday
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
123 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 2:35am
1st Apr 2025 2:35am
Please Do Come In And Join Us
Lincoln opened the basement door.
Both he and Khloe saw his mom.
She was naked with Seth.
Mom smiled at both Khloe and Lincoln.
She invited them while Seth humped her.
Both he and Khloe saw his mom.
She was naked with Seth.
Mom smiled at both Khloe and Lincoln.
She invited them while Seth humped her.
#family
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
140 reads
4 Comments
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