Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about friendship seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Please Let Me Go Back To Rehab! I Have Relapsed!
Barbara
woke up so hungover
and saw that she was naked and with
two of her friends Kevin and Julie still sleeping
next to her which made Barbara get
out of bed, grab a phone
and call Liz.
woke up so hungover
and saw that she was naked and with
two of her friends Kevin and Julie still sleeping
next to her which made Barbara get
out of bed, grab a phone
and call Liz.
#alcohol
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
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Trust Me. It's The Perfect Crime.
Juliette looked at Brandon who gave
her the thumbs up before she turned
around and allowed her coat
to slide off her naked
body while her friend
attempts to steal
the fortune
of John
Hatch.
her the thumbs up before she turned
around and allowed her coat
to slide off her naked
body while her friend
attempts to steal
the fortune
of John
Hatch.
#fiction
#friendship
#greed
#sensual
#shame
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My friend Ron Delet
Do you know him?
I went to school with Ron Delet
Do you know him?
met in the 8th grade during gym
Amazing with stories & poems
one day he didn't make it home
Do you know him?
I went to school with Ron Delet
Do you know him?
met in the 8th grade during gym
Amazing with stories & poems
one day he didn't make it home
Do you know him?
#fiction
#friendship
#mystery
#rhyming
#ShortStory
28 reads
5 Comments
Okay. Which One Of You Wants To Get It On With Me First?
Anne walked into
the room to do
the nude flop in front
of the two.
the room to do
the nude flop in front
of the two.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sensual
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To Our Sin, Brother
Remember when we were way too young
To be up past one. Outside burning smores
Being chased by your campfire smoking.
Curiously poking sticks in to set ablaze.
What about those days, late teens, when
We should have been way too busy
But way too dizzy, burning joints by night
And in folly's height, cutting our classes
Or twenties, in ashes, burning midnight oil
Via two packs, royals, and smelling like shit
I prayed your grit would be smoothed over,
With work, dumb rovers, and tons of money
Thirty's: found my Bunny,...
To be up past one. Outside burning smores
Being chased by your campfire smoking.
Curiously poking sticks in to set ablaze.
What about those days, late teens, when
We should have been way too busy
But way too dizzy, burning joints by night
And in folly's height, cutting our classes
Or twenties, in ashes, burning midnight oil
Via two packs, royals, and smelling like shit
I prayed your grit would be smoothed over,
With work, dumb rovers, and tons of money
Thirty's: found my Bunny,...
#fire
#friendship
#NaPoWriMo2024 #violence
#NaPoWriMo2024 #violence
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Vertigo
It was the tone of voice
that registered
not the words
while I just tried to stay upright
in my rush to grab the phone
As the initial shock
of the call
gave way to what you'd said
the spinning in my head
became a strange underlying metaphor
for the topsy-turvy world
you're now living in
So, I put on my padded suit
your soft place to fall
but I've started to notice
it's got some wear and tear
from the unrelenting cycle of chaos and crisis
of these last few years
There's been little...
that registered
not the words
while I just tried to stay upright
in my rush to grab the phone
As the initial shock
of the call
gave way to what you'd said
the spinning in my head
became a strange underlying metaphor
for the topsy-turvy world
you're now living in
So, I put on my padded suit
your soft place to fall
but I've started to notice
it's got some wear and tear
from the unrelenting cycle of chaos and crisis
of these last few years
There's been little...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#illness
#love
#relationships
64 reads
6 Comments
You Could Not Wait! Could You?!
"You could not wait!
Could you?! You
cheating prick!" was
what an angry Phoebe
said after catching her
husband Michael naked
on a car with their neighbor Marcia.
Could you?! You
cheating prick!" was
what an angry Phoebe
said after catching her
husband Michael naked
on a car with their neighbor Marcia.
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#husband
#sensual
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Got To Admit. You're Such A Fantastic Hump.
Matthew opened his
eyes and saw Kevin's naked
mom smoke a cigarette there.
eyes and saw Kevin's naked
mom smoke a cigarette there.
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#mother
#sensual
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Maybe it was Always Going to Come to This
Sitting outside the city jail
my newly colored curls
purple and pink
blowing in the breeze
mocking my stylists attempts
to tame them
while the geese peck at the ground
with a view of the river
where the sun will sink
into the horizon
There's a long story
about how I arrived
at this unexpected vantage point
one you might enjoy
and somewhere in the back of my mind
I can always conjure the sound
of your laughter
As the evening chill
reminds that these warmer days
are just a tease of weeks...
my newly colored curls
purple and pink
blowing in the breeze
mocking my stylists attempts
to tame them
while the geese peck at the ground
with a view of the river
where the sun will sink
into the horizon
There's a long story
about how I arrived
at this unexpected vantage point
one you might enjoy
and somewhere in the back of my mind
I can always conjure the sound
of your laughter
As the evening chill
reminds that these warmer days
are just a tease of weeks...
#friendship
#love
#memories #relationships
#memories #relationships
83 reads
7 Comments
I'm Ready For My Massage If You Are
Xander
walked into
the hose
and saw his best friend
Zendaya laying
topless on the couch
and smiled
at her pal
Xander.
walked into
the hose
and saw his best friend
Zendaya laying
topless on the couch
and smiled
at her pal
Xander.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#humankind
#sensual
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2 Comments
Feel Like Coming Over And Getting It On?
Matt moved into his apartment.
He saw Olivia out on the balcony.
Then, she opened her robe.
He saw Olivia out on the balcony.
Then, she opened her robe.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sensual
#temptation
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Wants Us To Get Naked And Join Him
Vicki,
this is John.
He wants
us to get naked
and join him for a
threesome. What do you
truly
think? Should we
do so?
this is John.
He wants
us to get naked
and join him for a
threesome. What do you
truly
think? Should we
do so?
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
#threesome
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DU Poetry : Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique