Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
#friendship
Related Theme
#BestFriend
Poems about friendship seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 1:31am
Today 1:31am
What Have I Been Drinking Last Night?
Kevin woke up very hungover.
He saw Jennifer looking with a smile.
Kevin placed hands on forehead.
He saw Jennifer looking with a smile.
Kevin placed hands on forehead.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#hurt
#sex
30 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:01pm
Yesterday 8:01pm
And They're Not Even Married Yet
What's wrong with Kristanna yesterday?
You remember Patrick's bachelor party. Right, Sally?
It was at Caesars Palace.
Bingo. Anyway, she caught him with Heidi.
The groom humping her maid of honor?!
You remember Patrick's bachelor party. Right, Sally?
It was at Caesars Palace.
Bingo. Anyway, she caught him with Heidi.
The groom humping her maid of honor?!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#marriage
34 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:19am
Yesterday 1:19am
I'm Ready For My Massage If You Are
Marina was reading the newspaper.
Ryan came in with the Hawaiian Tropic.
She disrobed and laid naked.
Ryan came in with the Hawaiian Tropic.
She disrobed and laid naked.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#tolerance
128 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 7:42pm
9th Mar 2025 7:42pm
Kirstie's Really Got Guts
#art
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
61 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 2:38am
9th Mar 2025 2:38am
You See Hustler's Latest Issue?
Dad has really gone nuts.
What makes you say that, Mindy Sue?
You see Hustler's latest issue?
Oh, yes. With Winona as its centerfold.
Now you know why I said that.
What makes you say that, Mindy Sue?
You see Hustler's latest issue?
Oh, yes. With Winona as its centerfold.
Now you know why I said that.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
51 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 2:32am
8th Mar 2025 2:32am
One Comes To Work At The Wrong Time
Dave came to work early.
He saw Melissa naked in the studio.
Dave should've stayed with Lucy.
He saw Melissa naked in the studio.
Dave should've stayed with Lucy.
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
102 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 6:26pm
7th Mar 2025 6:26pm
He Rubbed Those Hands On Her
Lindsay walked into the bedroom.
She stripped and laid on the bed.
Neal followed his roommate in.
He rubbed Hawaiian Tropic on his hands.
Then, he rubbed those hands on her.
She stripped and laid on the bed.
Neal followed his roommate in.
He rubbed Hawaiian Tropic on his hands.
Then, he rubbed those hands on her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#summer
111 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 2:56pm
7th Mar 2025 2:56pm
Kevin, Why Are You Here?
Okay, Margot. Stay like that.
Naked and covered by my arms, Erica?
That's right. Now hold it.
For how long exactly, Erica?
Until I'm done taking pics of you.
I hope that it's soon.
Got a hot date today?
Kevin's taking me to Delmonico's for lunch.
A romantic place. Right, Kevin?
Kevin, why are you here?
I also volunteered to model for Erica.
Just disrobe and join in.
Sure thing, Erica. Are you okay, Margot?
Yes, Kevin. Just keep on humping me.
Naked and covered by my arms, Erica?
That's right. Now hold it.
For how long exactly, Erica?
Until I'm done taking pics of you.
I hope that it's soon.
Got a hot date today?
Kevin's taking me to Delmonico's for lunch.
A romantic place. Right, Kevin?
Kevin, why are you here?
I also volunteered to model for Erica.
Just disrobe and join in.
Sure thing, Erica. Are you okay, Margot?
Yes, Kevin. Just keep on humping me.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
58 reads
0 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 10:22pm
6th Mar 2025 10:22pm
He wanted psycho bitch, but all I have left is Hello Kitty
He asked me
to shove my non-existent anger
through his vulnerability
and make him bleed
And I wanted to
I wanted to be the monster
he used to love
but I'm not that vindictive anymore
hurting hurt people doesn't
give me the same rush
it used to
I don't need to carve my pain
into his skin to know
I'm branded there
So I offered him sarcasm instead
He was expecting whips and chains
unleashed from the end of my tongue
but ended up with Avril...
to shove my non-existent anger
through his vulnerability
and make him bleed
And I wanted to
I wanted to be the monster
he used to love
but I'm not that vindictive anymore
hurting hurt people doesn't
give me the same rush
it used to
I don't need to carve my pain
into his skin to know
I'm branded there
So I offered him sarcasm instead
He was expecting whips and chains
unleashed from the end of my tongue
but ended up with Avril...
#friendship
#love
#support
86 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 3:58am
6th Mar 2025 3:58am
Would This Dress Do It?
Would this dress do it?
Trust me, Linda. Peter will be hung.
It's just he's married now.
Yes. To Adrienne. Who stole him away.
Thanks so much for reminding me, Jennifer.
Trust me, Linda. Peter will be hung.
It's just he's married now.
Yes. To Adrienne. Who stole him away.
Thanks so much for reminding me, Jennifer.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#hurt
#temptation
111 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 2:00am
5th Mar 2025 2:00am
That Depends On My Head
Good morning. You're feeling okay?
That depends on my head. Your name?
My name's Richard. What's yours?
My name's Nancy. Got the same friend?
Yes. Teri is who spiked the punch.
That depends on my head. Your name?
My name's Richard. What's yours?
My name's Nancy. Got the same friend?
Yes. Teri is who spiked the punch.
#alcohol
#confusion
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
55 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 8:19pm
4th Mar 2025 8:19pm
What She Wanted To Know
Patricia looked at the mirror.
She's sexy enough for Jesse's pool party.
What she wanted to know.
She's sexy enough for Jesse's pool party.
What she wanted to know.
#acceptance
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#home
49 reads
0 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
