Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about friendship seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
Today 3:53pm
Today 3:53pm
Put It ToThe Test
I am, inherently,
an emotional restrictor
as was my father before me
and his before him
keeping strong emotions contained
particularly anger,
indignation, and resentment
lest by their expression
I drive away a loved one or friend
for fear of abandonment
is a life-long obsession
But is it not
the most empirical
of litmus tests,
to measure fraternal devotion
when one can express
a panoply of emotion
love, fear, joy, anger, resentment, or grief;
to list a principle few,
without suffering...
an emotional restrictor
as was my father before me
and his before him
keeping strong emotions contained
particularly anger,
indignation, and resentment
lest by their expression
I drive away a loved one or friend
for fear of abandonment
is a life-long obsession
But is it not
the most empirical
of litmus tests,
to measure fraternal devotion
when one can express
a panoply of emotion
love, fear, joy, anger, resentment, or grief;
to list a principle few,
without suffering...
#emotions
#family
#friendship #love
#friendship #love
35 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 11:07am
21st Apr 2025 11:07am
Hope You Didn't Mind Me Taking A Swim
After hearing a noise, Jonah
went topside and saw Gia
naked and dripping wet on
the poop deck that morning.
went topside and saw Gia
naked and dripping wet on
the poop deck that morning.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
#water
115 reads
2 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 9:54pm
20th Apr 2025 9:54pm
Today, Again, We Met
I’ve been blessed to meet,
whilst traveling the universe
on this miniscule speck of dust,
souls with whom I share
Innately empathic traits
as if we were close friends,
frequent playmates
throughout our primordial childhood
this made manifest in this brief existence
when first we speak, call each other by name
smilingly gaze into each other’s eyes
and cosmically embrace
and whisper “I have loved seeing that face…
I have been nourished by that very smile”
I’m certain before time and space
We were...
whilst traveling the universe
on this miniscule speck of dust,
souls with whom I share
Innately empathic traits
as if we were close friends,
frequent playmates
throughout our primordial childhood
this made manifest in this brief existence
when first we speak, call each other by name
smilingly gaze into each other’s eyes
and cosmically embrace
and whisper “I have loved seeing that face…
I have been nourished by that very smile”
I’m certain before time and space
We were...
#friendship
#love
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Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 9:31am
20th Apr 2025 9:31am
Sensational Saturday Afternoon
It’s been months
since last I paid a visit
It was good to see
she hadn't changed
I, on the other hand,
after months of cloistering
had allowed my hair
to range free and grow Einstein bushy
not making me look the genius
but rather deranged
I quipped I was there
to shed my winter coat
she laughed politely
while covering my clothes
with a long black cloak
shaver on, scissors at the ready
she mowed, clipped, cut, and snipped
all the while conversing
we spoke of juvenile literature
the scents reminding...
since last I paid a visit
It was good to see
she hadn't changed
I, on the other hand,
after months of cloistering
had allowed my hair
to range free and grow Einstein bushy
not making me look the genius
but rather deranged
I quipped I was there
to shed my winter coat
she laughed politely
while covering my clothes
with a long black cloak
shaver on, scissors at the ready
she mowed, clipped, cut, and snipped
all the while conversing
we spoke of juvenile literature
the scents reminding...
#dialogue
#friendship
#happiness #love
#happiness #love
43 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 3:25am
16th Apr 2025 3:25am
I Dropped My Towel
Oh, hi. You're Kevin. Right?
Your brother happens to be my roommate.
Welcome to Berea. I'm Diana.
I dropped my towel. Why that look?
Please get your hands off my chest!
Your brother happens to be my roommate.
Welcome to Berea. I'm Diana.
I dropped my towel. Why that look?
Please get your hands off my chest!
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
191 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 11:14am
15th Apr 2025 11:14am
Friend to the very end
What had been so long ago
Is only a mist in the snow
And for the cleanses that once had been made
Are simply my sins that did fade
And for what we've become is only ecstasy
And a dream, a vision of pure misery
Let me be the one to tell you all
Of hell's resurrection and heaven's fall
Sleep sweet damned woman for you are
Caused him to triumph and forever will abide
Always will be by his side
Moon demon, celestial star gazer
Be a comfort to me and not curse my kin
Wise of all liars, stalked from the start
And not...
Is only a mist in the snow
And for the cleanses that once had been made
Are simply my sins that did fade
And for what we've become is only ecstasy
And a dream, a vision of pure misery
Let me be the one to tell you all
Of hell's resurrection and heaven's fall
Sleep sweet damned woman for you are
Caused him to triumph and forever will abide
Always will be by his side
Moon demon, celestial star gazer
Be a comfort to me and not curse my kin
Wise of all liars, stalked from the start
And not...
#dark
#death
#earth
#friendship
#gothic
96 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 8:21pm
14th Apr 2025 8:21pm
He Really Is In Trouble
Heard my friend complaining again.
I turned around and saw him naked.
He was also humping some other chick.
He really is in trouble.
I turned around and saw him naked.
He was also humping some other chick.
He really is in trouble.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
133 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 00:52am
14th Apr 2025 00:52am
Galaxy 500
Hey lady, are you going my way?
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
#cars
#friendship
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
#universe
76 reads
10 Comments
musht_e_ghubaar
Arsh
Arsh
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 7:23pm
13th Apr 2025 7:23pm
for S
This is an imagined reality
where you never left the city,
and we aren’t just strangers turned acquaintances turned friends
who crossed paths a few months ago.
In this little world I’ve built in my head,
we're childhood friends on a rickety old school bus,
always claiming the last row like it's our throne.
We share tiffins packed with love, your mom’s aloo parathas, my poha
trading bites and secrets with equal delight.
We blow bubblegum balloons till they pop on our faces,
and laugh so hard our tummies hurt.
We...
where you never left the city,
and we aren’t just strangers turned acquaintances turned friends
who crossed paths a few months ago.
In this little world I’ve built in my head,
we're childhood friends on a rickety old school bus,
always claiming the last row like it's our throne.
We share tiffins packed with love, your mom’s aloo parathas, my poha
trading bites and secrets with equal delight.
We blow bubblegum balloons till they pop on our faces,
and laugh so hard our tummies hurt.
We...
#children
#friendship
#humankind
43 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 2:12am
13th Apr 2025 2:12am
My Wife And I Do This Every Saturday
I invited my friend home.
She saw us after taking her shower.
She dropped her towel and he stripped.
I watched him hump her.
She saw us after taking her shower.
She dropped her towel and he stripped.
I watched him hump her.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
147 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 2:13am
10th Apr 2025 2:13am
Please! Get Out Of Here Quick Before They Come Back!
Todd and Cody stepped inside.
They found Lisa naked and tied tightly.
She begged them to run.
Cody left only to hear a noise.
Her parents done the same to Todd.
They found Lisa naked and tied tightly.
She begged them to run.
Cody left only to hear a noise.
Her parents done the same to Todd.
#BDSM
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#suffering
64 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 1:56pm
9th Apr 2025 1:56pm
Hope You Don't Mind Me Joining You
Diana was enjoying such a
relaxing soak in the outdoor
jacuzzi before she heard
a noise, opened her eyes
and saw her neighbor
Scott disrobe and
get in the
tub with
her.
relaxing soak in the outdoor
jacuzzi before she heard
a noise, opened her eyes
and saw her neighbor
Scott disrobe and
get in the
tub with
her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sex
144 reads
2 Comments
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