Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about friendship seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
A Daydream In The Shower
Melody was taking a shower.
Then, Steven stepped in and touched her.
That's before the phone rang.
Then, Steven stepped in and touched her.
That's before the phone rang.
#friendship
#dreams
#home
#fiction
#sensual
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What Went On Behind Her
Penelope
was busy
getting ready
to take a shower to
see Franklin walk slowly
into the bedroom and
make himself as naked as she was.
was busy
getting ready
to take a shower to
see Franklin walk slowly
into the bedroom and
make himself as naked as she was.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
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Twas Some Party Last Night
Erica woke naked and laughed.
"Twas some party last night" she said.
Then, Erica discovered Gabriel's gone.
"Twas some party last night" she said.
Then, Erica discovered Gabriel's gone.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#sensual
#dating
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Open Your Eyes And Look At Your Birthday Present
"Open your eyes and
look at your birthday present"
was what Zach heard one
person say before he saw
Tabitha standing naked.
look at your birthday present"
was what Zach heard one
person say before he saw
Tabitha standing naked.
#friendship
#birthday
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
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Tribute to Callie, A Friend Lost Too Soon
In tender bloom, she graced this world,
Each day the gift of love unfurled.
For Callie, her name a tender song,
In hearts and minds, her memory strong.
A husband's love, a child's tender gaze,
Bear witness to her life's enduring blaze.
Though parted now, we feel her near,
In laughter's echo, in each falling tear.
She loved with passion, fierce and free,
Embracing life with unrestrained decree.
And though her journey has reached its end,
Her legacy, undying, will transcend.
For Callie’s beauty in...
Each day the gift of love unfurled.
For Callie, her name a tender song,
In hearts and minds, her memory strong.
A husband's love, a child's tender gaze,
Bear witness to her life's enduring blaze.
Though parted now, we feel her near,
In laughter's echo, in each falling tear.
She loved with passion, fierce and free,
Embracing life with unrestrained decree.
And though her journey has reached its end,
Her legacy, undying, will transcend.
For Callie’s beauty in...
#love
#friendship
#death #funeral
#death #funeral
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Why Did You Do That To Me?! Are You Crazy?!
Jonathan walked
to the pool
and spotted Brooke
sleeping naked on a
float over the water.
But when he touched her skin,
it made her go into the water.
to the pool
and spotted Brooke
sleeping naked on a
float over the water.
But when he touched her skin,
it made her go into the water.
#friendship
#summer
#water
#fiction
#sensual
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the darkness only takes bodies not hands
I look around
at all the people I care about
and I see them suffering
and I can't save them
from the darkness
because the only way out
is through
and I'm only
one pair of hands
These days feel like swimming
under a black moonless sky
the shore obscured by waves
and there's water reaching
for my lungs
as I struggle to breathe
and how can I save anyone
when all I think about
is dying
and how I don't really want to
but I'm not sure how to live
in a world that wasn't made ...
at all the people I care about
and I see them suffering
and I can't save them
from the darkness
because the only way out
is through
and I'm only
one pair of hands
These days feel like swimming
under a black moonless sky
the shore obscured by waves
and there's water reaching
for my lungs
as I struggle to breathe
and how can I save anyone
when all I think about
is dying
and how I don't really want to
but I'm not sure how to live
in a world that wasn't made ...
#depression
#friendship
#MentalHealth
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4 Comments
It Was During A September Rain
Jacob told me it was
during a September
rain that he and Zelda
finished skinny dipping
but lost their clothes.
during a September
rain that he and Zelda
finished skinny dipping
but lost their clothes.
#friendship
#rain
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sensual
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What's Going On While She's On The Phone?
Kennedy, how
are you so
far, Girlfriend? I'm
just sitting here naked
and letting Apollo
take some photos of me
for his one university course.
are you so
far, Girlfriend? I'm
just sitting here naked
and letting Apollo
take some photos of me
for his one university course.
#friendship
#fiction
#dialogue
#art
#sensual
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Missing
Not so very long ago,
I did not know I needed you.
None of us did—
it's hard to miss someone you never knew.
Now, your absence looms large
every time you leave.
I did not know I needed you.
None of us did—
it's hard to miss someone you never knew.
Now, your absence looms large
every time you leave.
#sadness
#love
#family
#friendship
#IMissYou
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A Naked Portrait Of His Best Friend
Isabel
walked in the studio
section of Braxton's loft apartment
in order to slide her robe off, sit down naked
on a stool and allow him to paint
a naked portrait of
his best friend.
walked in the studio
section of Braxton's loft apartment
in order to slide her robe off, sit down naked
on a stool and allow him to paint
a naked portrait of
his best friend.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#art
#sensual
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Do Not Worry. It Will Be Our Little Secret.
"Do not
worry. It will
be our little secret."
was what Denise said to Adam
with a tee shirt on her sweaty nude bod.
worry. It will
be our little secret."
was what Denise said to Adam
with a tee shirt on her sweaty nude bod.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#sensual
#dating
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DU Poetry : Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique