Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 1:46pm
18th Aug 2024 1:46pm
Capricorn
1+6=7
7 is God.
16 is Hell.
I'm on fire.
Extinguishing the pyre.
With a name, 5,
Freedom of self.
Escape reality.
Take on, duality.
Achieve the manor,
Of wisdom and filth.
A snake in your garden.
Truths that harden,
A heart of energy.
A world that was built.
Always on fire.
Out of the ashes.
Higher and higher.
No cycle can break me.
I'm out of this world.
Life's a satire.
Too much work, and no hires.
Too much weight on my shoulders,
Just for a...
7 is God.
16 is Hell.
I'm on fire.
Extinguishing the pyre.
With a name, 5,
Freedom of self.
Escape reality.
Take on, duality.
Achieve the manor,
Of wisdom and filth.
A snake in your garden.
Truths that harden,
A heart of energy.
A world that was built.
Always on fire.
Out of the ashes.
Higher and higher.
No cycle can break me.
I'm out of this world.
Life's a satire.
Too much work, and no hires.
Too much weight on my shoulders,
Just for a...
#astrology
#escape
#freedom
#God
#religion
142 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 11:18am
4th Aug 2024 11:18am
Once were through, you're gone....forever
Walk with me
Speak to me
Sleep with me
Moments with me
Love & adore me
No! You can't live with me
Tough!
Not happening
Yes we love each other,
but my space & freedom I love a whole lot more
Take some time
Grasp what I just cited
You can still come over
But only if you're invited
If you don't like the idea
I understand, you can move on
My way or the highway
Once were through, you're gone....forever
Speak to me
Sleep with me
Moments with me
Love & adore me
No! You can't live with me
Tough!
Not happening
Yes we love each other,
but my space & freedom I love a whole lot more
Take some time
Grasp what I just cited
You can still come over
But only if you're invited
If you don't like the idea
I understand, you can move on
My way or the highway
Once were through, you're gone....forever
#freedom
#love
#lover
#myself
#separation
170 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 11:18pm
28th Jul 2024 11:18pm
Awake
Uncertain in the distance sounds the trumpeter
Summons to shadow war calling
The Praetorian guard plays king maker
The Republic has fallen
Failed assassinations, and palace coups
A royal game of thrones
The captain of the Pretorian guard is removed
Kabuki theater honed
Knife fighting deep in the heart of darkness
A more civil war brings
Lies, deceit, betrayal, and all the people said
The king is dead, long live the king
And yet, who shall that king be...
Change swirls hot in the air
Uncertain, unsettled,...
Summons to shadow war calling
The Praetorian guard plays king maker
The Republic has fallen
Failed assassinations, and palace coups
A royal game of thrones
The captain of the Pretorian guard is removed
Kabuki theater honed
Knife fighting deep in the heart of darkness
A more civil war brings
Lies, deceit, betrayal, and all the people said
The king is dead, long live the king
And yet, who shall that king be...
Change swirls hot in the air
Uncertain, unsettled,...
#corruption
#freedom
#politics #war
#politics #war
175 reads
5 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2024 6:49pm
23rd Jul 2024 6:49pm
Kamala
Her name is not Pamela or Cam-a-la
it is pronounced Comma-la
She is the blooming Lotus flower of our fair state
and for me that fact is not up for debate
A woman with a winning million-dollar smile
who wears pearls as an homage to classic female style
As fierce as any Lioness at defending her Pride
and the reason why Kavanaugh cried
Her grilling of Barr proved he is unfit
and he was forced to quit
The first woman, Black and South Asian, to be a President
and I can’t wait for her victory in the main event
it is pronounced Comma-la
She is the blooming Lotus flower of our fair state
and for me that fact is not up for debate
A woman with a winning million-dollar smile
who wears pearls as an homage to classic female style
As fierce as any Lioness at defending her Pride
and the reason why Kavanaugh cried
Her grilling of Barr proved he is unfit
and he was forced to quit
The first woman, Black and South Asian, to be a President
and I can’t wait for her victory in the main event
#freedom
#HumanRights
#politics #power
#politics #power
533 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2024 5:01pm
23rd Jul 2024 5:01pm
Defiant
you defeat mE
.stresS
.mE
.ouT
.so defianT
. .without a doubT
.not the samE
.not even closE
.you're my paiN
.
.why I overdosE
.you're the braiN
.inside my skulL
.can't cross the bridgE
.you're just a trolL
.you weaken mE ...
.stresS
.mE
.ouT
.so defianT
. .without a doubT
.not the samE
.not even closE
.you're my paiN
.
.why I overdosE
.you're the braiN
.inside my skulL
.can't cross the bridgE
.you're just a trolL
.you weaken mE ...
#freedom
#rebellion
170 reads
23 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
19th Jul 2024 7:10pm
19th Jul 2024 7:10pm
Monty Burns
He's evil, and he's funny...
except evil isn't funny...
so what makes Mr. Burns so great?
It's because we inherently know
that evil is silly WHEN it isn't a threat...
due to gerontologic circumstance.
Let's keep it that way.
except evil isn't funny...
so what makes Mr. Burns so great?
It's because we inherently know
that evil is silly WHEN it isn't a threat...
due to gerontologic circumstance.
Let's keep it that way.
#culture
#freedom
#risk
233 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Jul 2024 7:50pm
18th Jul 2024 7:50pm
The Sun
As we end the day and reveal the stars,
that one by one appear
i know another night has come,
revealing my fears
For in the black and endless stars, for which I run
i pray for the falling of the night, the rising of the sun
For in the night I see your face, your smile so like the sun
and in my heart I feel your warmth, then yet I have to run
Because the things to show my love, have all been done,
so I wonder through the night, waiting for the sun
And so I think I'll go out, wherever it may be
in my trouble...
that one by one appear
i know another night has come,
revealing my fears
For in the black and endless stars, for which I run
i pray for the falling of the night, the rising of the sun
For in the night I see your face, your smile so like the sun
and in my heart I feel your warmth, then yet I have to run
Because the things to show my love, have all been done,
so I wonder through the night, waiting for the sun
And so I think I'll go out, wherever it may be
in my trouble...
#emotions
#freedom
#love
#night
#sun
121 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Jul 2024 7:48pm
18th Jul 2024 7:48pm
Get in on life
You just live the simple life
well you don't do nothing good
you wonder where the good times are
well there right in front of you
Stop being a grump
or you'll get dumped
come on girl, get in on life
You've been told that there's only one way,
and that's why the rules you follow each day
if you keep on living like that,
you're gonna die like the rest of the pack
Let free, let go,
let everyone know
you're not gonna be another victim of society
You're free from your daddy's hand,
go out and find...
well you don't do nothing good
you wonder where the good times are
well there right in front of you
Stop being a grump
or you'll get dumped
come on girl, get in on life
You've been told that there's only one way,
and that's why the rules you follow each day
if you keep on living like that,
you're gonna die like the rest of the pack
Let free, let go,
let everyone know
you're not gonna be another victim of society
You're free from your daddy's hand,
go out and find...
#emptiness
#freedom
#girlfriend
#LifeStruggles
#rebellion
115 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Jul 2024 7:42pm
17th Jul 2024 7:42pm
Taking A Stance
You held the pad lock,
With a key gripped in your fist,
You don’t want to stop but,
I demand you unbind my wrists.
I may’ve been born into your care,
You may think you dictate my future,
Yet none of this is fair,
To that I am sure.
I am a warrior,
A fighter with knowledge and strength,
You had me living in your horrors,
But soon you shall see.
So this is the anthem I will now chant,
Listen to my footsteps as they fade,
I deserve freedom,
I will no longer stay in your shade.
Sing with me, ...
With a key gripped in your fist,
You don’t want to stop but,
I demand you unbind my wrists.
I may’ve been born into your care,
You may think you dictate my future,
Yet none of this is fair,
To that I am sure.
I am a warrior,
A fighter with knowledge and strength,
You had me living in your horrors,
But soon you shall see.
So this is the anthem I will now chant,
Listen to my footsteps as they fade,
I deserve freedom,
I will no longer stay in your shade.
Sing with me, ...
#collaboration
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
#freedom
#strength
119 reads
8 Comments
goflow_BuddyReaux
Buddy Reaux
Buddy Reaux
Poem Published
16th Jul 2024 3:39pm
16th Jul 2024 3:39pm
Dilemma
This job…
I hate it, so unmotivated
To even try
So uninspired, I feel my soul
Slowly slipping through my fingers
I feel my heart begging why
As it lingers on the floor crushed
Stomped upon like yesterday’s business
As if it never mattered.
My mind, well I try to piece it back together
But it’s shattered and scattered across this office
This desk feels like a prison
I no longer wish to shackle
Feeling so unhinged as I cackle
Just so I won’t drop a tear
I fear that I may be losing myself
Pouring so much...
I hate it, so unmotivated
To even try
So uninspired, I feel my soul
Slowly slipping through my fingers
I feel my heart begging why
As it lingers on the floor crushed
Stomped upon like yesterday’s business
As if it never mattered.
My mind, well I try to piece it back together
But it’s shattered and scattered across this office
This desk feels like a prison
I no longer wish to shackle
Feeling so unhinged as I cackle
Just so I won’t drop a tear
I fear that I may be losing myself
Pouring so much...
#emptiness
#freedom
#job
134 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 7:20pm
14th Jul 2024 7:20pm
Darin' Aaron
Little Aaron is circling the Barbed Wire Museum parking lot on his Big Wheel, hoping to find some younger kids to run over. His parents are informing a bored couple that it's their fourth annual visit. Barb, Aaron's four-year-old sister, picks her nose, wipes it on her shorts, and hums a rap song.
Aaron graduates to a full-sized bike at seven. Out of sight of his parents, he favors bumping his way down flights of stairs, pedaling at warp speed, and flying over small obstacles like puddles and poodles. In a grocery store parking lot near home one day, he lifts his black Schwinn...
Aaron graduates to a full-sized bike at seven. Out of sight of his parents, he favors bumping his way down flights of stairs, pedaling at warp speed, and flying over small obstacles like puddles and poodles. In a grocery store parking lot near home one day, he lifts his black Schwinn...
#freedom
#LifeStruggles
#ThrillSeeking
162 reads
9 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 9:18pm
10th Jul 2024 9:18pm
Liberated Whispers
In the dim glow of desire’s flame
TheOralizer builds his spell.
A libertine of language, unchained,
his words a symphony of forbidden delight.
He whispers secrets in the night
not clinging to conventions or norms.
His lexicon a rebellion against monotony,
a manifesto of passion and unbridled longing.
“Undress your inhibitions,” he murmurs,
as ink spills across the parchment of our souls.
Each syllable a brushstroke on the canvas of ecstasy,
painting desire in shades of crimson and midnight blue.
His verses...
TheOralizer builds his spell.
A libertine of language, unchained,
his words a symphony of forbidden delight.
He whispers secrets in the night
not clinging to conventions or norms.
His lexicon a rebellion against monotony,
a manifesto of passion and unbridled longing.
“Undress your inhibitions,” he murmurs,
as ink spills across the parchment of our souls.
Each syllable a brushstroke on the canvas of ecstasy,
painting desire in shades of crimson and midnight blue.
His verses...
#erotic
#freedom
#happiness
#hope
#sexy
128 reads
5 Comments
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