Poems About Freedom Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about freedom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 6:29pm
4th Oct 2024 6:29pm
She was one with nature
When I reach into your pocket
That's when I lose control
I can feel your crotch and how wet you are
Nobody knows freedom until you orgasm
My place or yours?
My place has a better view of the old oak tree that you worship
C'mon let's go
That's ok that your one with the trees, I get it
After we fuck and experience freedom, we can climb that tree to the top
Reality will creep back into our lives again
We hate it!
We need to experience euphoria in our own utopia... forever
If you reach the top before me, make a wish and then jump ...
That's when I lose control
I can feel your crotch and how wet you are
Nobody knows freedom until you orgasm
My place or yours?
My place has a better view of the old oak tree that you worship
C'mon let's go
That's ok that your one with the trees, I get it
After we fuck and experience freedom, we can climb that tree to the top
Reality will creep back into our lives again
We hate it!
We need to experience euphoria in our own utopia... forever
If you reach the top before me, make a wish and then jump ...
#apathy
#freedom
#nature
#sex
#suicide
183 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 8:03pm
3rd Oct 2024 8:03pm
Society needs more leaders, less followers
Didn’t your parents ever tell you not to be a follower but a leader? If you answered yes to this question, then why are you so trendy?
Diets, Elections, Fashion, Music, and Social Networking are some of the biggest examples of this. Society tends to go with what’s hot and popular for the time being.
Be yourself!
Who cares what others think of you & your opinion?
Do you fear exclusion?
Do you not want to be the odd one out?
You go along with what the rest of the group is doing. To ensure inclusion & social acceptance....
Diets, Elections, Fashion, Music, and Social Networking are some of the biggest examples of this. Society tends to go with what’s hot and popular for the time being.
Be yourself!
Who cares what others think of you & your opinion?
Do you fear exclusion?
Do you not want to be the odd one out?
You go along with what the rest of the group is doing. To ensure inclusion & social acceptance....
#freedom
#inspirational
#motivational #strength
#motivational #strength
113 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 12:43pm
3rd Oct 2024 12:43pm
Send a Kiss to the Sky(in blue and yellow)
A kiss to the sky in blue and yellow
Send a kiss to the sky in blue and yellow
Yea
When you know you’re right
And the world doesn’t feel the same
Said it right up tight…yea
Won’t repeat myself again
And these fiends run wild…
Till we put them in the game
And these fiends run wild
Till we PUT IN them…the nature
Of the game
When you know you’re right
And the world feels again yea
Christmas by candlelight
Isn’t as romantic as it seems to be
As the bombs drop...
Send a kiss to the sky in blue and yellow
Yea
When you know you’re right
And the world doesn’t feel the same
Said it right up tight…yea
Won’t repeat myself again
And these fiends run wild…
Till we put them in the game
And these fiends run wild
Till we PUT IN them…the nature
Of the game
When you know you’re right
And the world feels again yea
Christmas by candlelight
Isn’t as romantic as it seems to be
As the bombs drop...
#freedom
#soldiers
#war
91 reads
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 1:11pm
2nd Oct 2024 1:11pm
Adjusting The Dial (collab with adagio)
The gossipers of the clouds
rain down dark's cacophony
Leaving me alone; covered in agony
neath the veil of twilight's shroud
Adjusting the dial to a new sound.
Listening to narcissistic gossipers pound
cued in amongst the symphony.
Agnostics and mannequins confound
as indecent as they are proud
Like a two-toed sloth of the epiphany
Inside the mockery of their frown
wound among the gossipers in infamy
A loneliness intensified by the clouds
buried in a salinity of dark infinity
A promise to search...
rain down dark's cacophony
Leaving me alone; covered in agony
neath the veil of twilight's shroud
Adjusting the dial to a new sound.
Listening to narcissistic gossipers pound
cued in amongst the symphony.
Agnostics and mannequins confound
as indecent as they are proud
Like a two-toed sloth of the epiphany
Inside the mockery of their frown
wound among the gossipers in infamy
A loneliness intensified by the clouds
buried in a salinity of dark infinity
A promise to search...
#freedom
#God
#spiritual
207 reads
7 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 10:46pm
1st Oct 2024 10:46pm
Daily Black and White
The man opened the newspaper
To see how the world had changed
Since yesterday's newspaper
The paper wrapped round his face
Filled his ears
Covered his eyes
Silenced his mouth
Read his mind
Suffocated him until
He forgot his name
He turned black and white
To see how the world had changed
Since yesterday's newspaper
The paper wrapped round his face
Filled his ears
Covered his eyes
Silenced his mouth
Read his mind
Suffocated him until
He forgot his name
He turned black and white
#consumerism
#freedom
#politics
144 reads
6 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 8:33am
1st Oct 2024 8:33am
Unshackled Yet Enchained (Nigeria's Cry)
October 1st, a day of claimed pride,
Nigeria's independence, a partial stride,
From colonial chains, we broke the mold,
But subtle bonds remain, our progress to hold.
The masters left, but their systems stay,
Institutions rigged, to keep us at bay,
Economic strings, pulled from afar,
Our resources exploited, like a scar.
Foreign powers meddle, with hidden hands,
Influencing policies, that grip our lands,
IMF and World Bank, with conditional ties,
Shackling our growth, with debt's disguise.
Our leaders, puppets on a...
Nigeria's independence, a partial stride,
From colonial chains, we broke the mold,
But subtle bonds remain, our progress to hold.
The masters left, but their systems stay,
Institutions rigged, to keep us at bay,
Economic strings, pulled from afar,
Our resources exploited, like a scar.
Foreign powers meddle, with hidden hands,
Influencing policies, that grip our lands,
IMF and World Bank, with conditional ties,
Shackling our growth, with debt's disguise.
Our leaders, puppets on a...
#freedom
#HumanRights
#politics
#suffering
#tragedy
104 reads
1 Comment
moon_bather
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 3:36am
1st Oct 2024 3:36am
Lovely Mistake (in that life can swallow you whole before you see anything coming but next thing is they got you)
this stupid little life
in this
stupid little house
in this
empty soulless city
means (absolutely)
everything
to me
in this
stupid little house
in this
empty soulless city
means (absolutely)
everything
to me
#aging
#freedom
#happiness
#MyInspiration
#passion
109 reads
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 7:47pm
30th Sep 2024 7:47pm
Calloused
I've prayed on my knees until my callouses turned into stone. Prayers unheard, Lord am I alone?
I've flooded this earth with my very tears and pounded the dirt until it shook with fear.
I pleaded for you to lend me your ear.
I've scavenged my soul to make it whole.
Surviving wars did take it's toll.
Lord I just want to know.
Why do you let the Devil temp me so?
I've flooded this earth with my very tears and pounded the dirt until it shook with fear.
I pleaded for you to lend me your ear.
I've scavenged my soul to make it whole.
Surviving wars did take it's toll.
Lord I just want to know.
Why do you let the Devil temp me so?
#escape
#freedom
119 reads
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u53l355
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 12:33pm
30th Sep 2024 12:33pm
A Million Little Worlds
There are A millions little worlds
Flat Planets with glass panel Atmospheres
revolving around a Million individual people
they all shine brighter than the sun
every single one
looking to communicate with the other lonely planets
star gazing thru a screen
even though the stars roam by 3ft right from the scene
Flat Planets with glass panel Atmospheres
revolving around a Million individual people
they all shine brighter than the sun
every single one
looking to communicate with the other lonely planets
star gazing thru a screen
even though the stars roam by 3ft right from the scene
#freedom
#loneliness
#metaphor
#shame
#technology
190 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 11:25am
29th Sep 2024 11:25am
Run the other way
I observe from the shadows
No need for useless drama
I'll keep my distance, until it's necessary
If you pull me out of my safe spot, you better have a really good explanation
If not, you better run
No need for useless drama
I'll keep my distance, until it's necessary
If you pull me out of my safe spot, you better have a really good explanation
If not, you better run
#dark
#freedom
#shadows #TruthOfLife
#shadows #TruthOfLife
127 reads
8 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 4:27am
25th Sep 2024 4:27am
Chemically Lynched
The US justice system is broken
I wonder if Kamala will be just another token
The powers that be
don't want POC to be free
They keep us wage slaves on their high tech plantations
and when we are murdered rarely give us legit explanations
We are just pawns they sacrifice
and about it never even think twice
Tonight my soul flinched
when I heard Marcellus Williams was-Chemically Lynched
I wonder if Kamala will be just another token
The powers that be
don't want POC to be free
They keep us wage slaves on their high tech plantations
and when we are murdered rarely give us legit explanations
We are just pawns they sacrifice
and about it never even think twice
Tonight my soul flinched
when I heard Marcellus Williams was-Chemically Lynched
#freedom
#HumanRights
#LifeStruggles
#murder
#racism
161 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 2:14pm
24th Sep 2024 2:14pm
Finally Free From A Family Who No Longer Loves Me
Angela woke up,
saw the sun rising over
the Los Angeles
city scape and made herself
let out a gigantic smile.
saw the sun rising over
the Los Angeles
city scape and made herself
let out a gigantic smile.
#city
#family
#fiction
#freedom
#tanka
147 reads
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