Poems About Forgiveness Seeking Honest Critique
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
We don't talk no more
I would like to have a conversation, with you as man to woman and woman to man. WHY is that you and I don't talk, like we use to do when we first connected, on so many levels of our own opinions. As we exchange thoughts and the subconsciousness, of our thoughts and lives together as one. 🙏 For sure what has changed over time ⌚ in each of our lives, that we never really have time to talk about situations, that we have to face in our lives. 💕 For don't we still have love and support, and understanding to make it easier. TO survive in this hard cold world. 🌍 For...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#love
#respect
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Dear Lord
Dear Lord
Your promise is my sword
to cut down all my pain
to set free every thought
that's driving me insane
Your grace for me is bigger
than what my mind can see
Your eyes on me forever
untill eternity
Dear Lord
I sometimes take for granted
how steadfast You can be
I hide away in silence
but You still compfort me
I know I don't deserve it
I'm lost in all I do
and though I feel not worthit ...
Your promise is my sword
to cut down all my pain
to set free every thought
that's driving me insane
Your grace for me is bigger
than what my mind can see
Your eyes on me forever
untill eternity
Dear Lord
I sometimes take for granted
how steadfast You can be
I hide away in silence
but You still compfort me
I know I don't deserve it
I'm lost in all I do
and though I feel not worthit ...
#courage
#forgiveness
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The Feast of Decay
Foolishness and Error walk hand in hand,
Their chains bind tight both soul and flesh,
As Man, enthralled by shadows grand,
Nourishes guilt, though bound afresh.
Sin stands defiant, repentance meek,
While trembling vows the spirit drain.
In tears, Man finds the peace they seek,
Yet falls to murk and mire again.
Enthroned above, the Devil grins,
Craftsman of craft, he works unseen;
He shapes our will like molten glass,
And hones our lead to keep it mean.
The Devil's strings direct the dance,
With foul delights...
Their chains bind tight both soul and flesh,
As Man, enthralled by shadows grand,
Nourishes guilt, though bound afresh.
Sin stands defiant, repentance meek,
While trembling vows the spirit drain.
In tears, Man finds the peace they seek,
Yet falls to murk and mire again.
Enthroned above, the Devil grins,
Craftsman of craft, he works unseen;
He shapes our will like molten glass,
And hones our lead to keep it mean.
The Devil's strings direct the dance,
With foul delights...
#corruption
#devil
#forgiveness
#morality
#redemption
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Overdue
Guilt enraptures skin
and flesh
till its bone
and blood.
Greedy fingers wanting
always wanting
never wrapping comfortably
around what they want.
Praise
a frivolous thing
handed to those
undeserving.
And I am one
who has not earned
what they desire
so deeply.
Claws rip deep
thoughts cut deeper
marrow mixing
yellow and red.
Snow and rain
sun changing them
yet do they
deserve to be changed?
and flesh
till its bone
and blood.
Greedy fingers wanting
always wanting
never wrapping comfortably
around what they want.
Praise
a frivolous thing
handed to those
undeserving.
And I am one
who has not earned
what they desire
so deeply.
Claws rip deep
thoughts cut deeper
marrow mixing
yellow and red.
Snow and rain
sun changing them
yet do they
deserve to be changed?
#forgiveness
#greed
#ImSorry #regret
#ImSorry #regret
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How Long [Redux]
There are times when a man needs to back down from his strength
And remember his weakness…
The way isn’t always easy to see but the feeling is unmistakable
My heart has missed you
You who are closest to me…
And how can that be
Have you learned to live around me instead of with me?
If I think I lead
Where have I lead us to
A place where we each go our own way
And say we’re together
Can I still touch the part of you that thought I was everything?
Because I so desperately want to feel like that person again
Would you...
And remember his weakness…
The way isn’t always easy to see but the feeling is unmistakable
My heart has missed you
You who are closest to me…
And how can that be
Have you learned to live around me instead of with me?
If I think I lead
Where have I lead us to
A place where we each go our own way
And say we’re together
Can I still touch the part of you that thought I was everything?
Because I so desperately want to feel like that person again
Would you...
#forgiveness
#love
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Poetically Yours
Now, it is past summer
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
#respect
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Insanity
Insane
What is it?
Is it in the mind
is it in the membrane
is it in my head
where the fuck is it
where does it come from
inside, outside
yesterday, today
insane in my mind
is it me
is it you
i don't know.
Wish I Did...
What is it?
Is it in the mind
is it in the membrane
is it in my head
where the fuck is it
where does it come from
inside, outside
yesterday, today
insane in my mind
is it me
is it you
i don't know.
Wish I Did...
#forgiveness
#strength
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Processing
As I have previously written, my mother growing up was hard to live with, and that's putting it nicely. I never felt good enough, but now, she's back...the mother that I had up until I was about five, before she turned into a hard women.
As she lay there curled up on the sofa, her ice water with the straw clanking against the metal thermos sides as she stirred the half melted chunks around it's perimeter, all got quiet as she out of no where says, Sis...I need to tell you a few things.
As the lump in my throat seemed as if it was starting to block my airway, I mumbled ok, but wasn't...
As she lay there curled up on the sofa, her ice water with the straw clanking against the metal thermos sides as she stirred the half melted chunks around it's perimeter, all got quiet as she out of no where says, Sis...I need to tell you a few things.
As the lump in my throat seemed as if it was starting to block my airway, I mumbled ok, but wasn't...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
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IT'S ONLY THE BEGINNING
From my own life I take a page from out of my life, as I reflect on the power of the mind and heart, and spiritual soul. For even though I was looking death in eye, I knew that I had to be able to share my own personal thoughts, for sure we will never know how someone else is doing in there own struggles. As life is a struggle In different stages of experience, whether in a relationship or with friends and family. 😔 Yet it is those times when we all will need that helping hand 🙏 to be able to share the deepness of what it means to be a kindred spiritual person. For sure it's...
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#strength
#TimeHeals
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Parole for my Soul
Parole for my soul
Please mister jailer just a question
Can you give me redemption
And parole for my soul
And wash away my sins
Like taking ink off a blotter
Fingerprints disappear
But a stain remains deep in my heart
Please give me parole for my soul
Go to confession on my knees
Jesus please save me
Lift my spirit and my soul
Make me like the original
God above the heaven
With parole for my soul
Free me from Satan
And dirty deeds things just that diminish me
Not...
Please mister jailer just a question
Can you give me redemption
And parole for my soul
And wash away my sins
Like taking ink off a blotter
Fingerprints disappear
But a stain remains deep in my heart
Please give me parole for my soul
Go to confession on my knees
Jesus please save me
Lift my spirit and my soul
Make me like the original
God above the heaven
With parole for my soul
Free me from Satan
And dirty deeds things just that diminish me
Not...
#forgiveness
#prayer
#redemption #strength
#redemption #strength
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Don't give up on me
Don't give up on me
Don't tell me lies
Don't tell me secrets
Because I don't want to know your secrets
Please keep it private
Don't give up on me
Because I still need you friend
In my life
Don't give up on me
Please pray for me every night
Because I need some prayers
I will also pray for you friend
Also before you go to sleep every night
You must pray to God
It only takes a few minutes
Then you can go straight to bed
I hope you sleep all through the night
Without walking up in the middle of the night ...
Don't tell me lies
Don't tell me secrets
Because I don't want to know your secrets
Please keep it private
Don't give up on me
Because I still need you friend
In my life
Don't give up on me
Please pray for me every night
Because I need some prayers
I will also pray for you friend
Also before you go to sleep every night
You must pray to God
It only takes a few minutes
Then you can go straight to bed
I hope you sleep all through the night
Without walking up in the middle of the night ...
#admiration
#courage
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#inspirational
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2837 sonata
Now that he is growing up
He doesn’t stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
He doesn’t stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
#emotions
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
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