Poems About Food Seeking Honest Critique
#food
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 8:28am
1st Dec 2024 8:28am
Rabbit Rabbit
Visual comp
#food
261 reads
26 Comments
rickthepoetwarrior
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 4:04am
1st Dec 2024 4:04am
Deal Meal
Make it a meal
Seems like a deal
More for less reel
Has squeak appeal
Let's just reveal
What's under the seal
Like banana peel
Spent how you'll feel
The extra you got
Is just plain rot
Sugar/starch lot
Was tossed in a pot
Pushed through a slot
Tied in a knot
Sold with a plot
Gourmet it's not
What's served is all air
Puffed magic prepare
Exaggerate's care
Extremed ordinaire
Sold as good food ware
So bad for health fare
So just you beware
Best before
Dare ...
Seems like a deal
More for less reel
Has squeak appeal
Let's just reveal
What's under the seal
Like banana peel
Spent how you'll feel
The extra you got
Is just plain rot
Sugar/starch lot
Was tossed in a pot
Pushed through a slot
Tied in a knot
Sold with a plot
Gourmet it's not
What's served is all air
Puffed magic prepare
Exaggerate's care
Extremed ordinaire
Sold as good food ware
So bad for health fare
So just you beware
Best before
Dare ...
#food
64 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 7:57pm
30th Nov 2024 7:57pm
Poverty Can Be Stopped!
Eaten from inside
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Body reeks of bile, cannot wash it clean
From infecting open wounds
Starving children die
Left to rot like meat
Nothing they can do
Western world still thrives
Masses are obese
In excess we consume
Hunger never satisfied
A constant lust for feed
Devouring disease
Overfed a human mass
Is struggling just to breathe
Devouring disease
Eaten from inside
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Western world still...
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Body reeks of bile, cannot wash it clean
From infecting open wounds
Starving children die
Left to rot like meat
Nothing they can do
Western world still thrives
Masses are obese
In excess we consume
Hunger never satisfied
A constant lust for feed
Devouring disease
Overfed a human mass
Is struggling just to breathe
Devouring disease
Eaten from inside
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Western world still...
#corruption
#food
#greed
#money
#poverty
73 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 12:31pm
29th Nov 2024 12:31pm
The Turkey Bird Song
We love meaty, big plump birds
They gobble and rarely fly
On the chopping block it goes
Don't feel sorry, no need to cry
Pluck it's feathers make it smooth
Spread cranberry sauce like sap
Spread its legs for stuffing
Leftovers galore for a midnight snack
Wings are Flappin
Necks are Snappin
Turkey Slappin
If you haven't heard
This bird is the word
A feast fit for a king
Nothing more this bird can sing
He gobbled his way into our hearts
The only song we have, are these loud, smelly farts
They gobble and rarely fly
On the chopping block it goes
Don't feel sorry, no need to cry
Pluck it's feathers make it smooth
Spread cranberry sauce like sap
Spread its legs for stuffing
Leftovers galore for a midnight snack
Wings are Flappin
Necks are Snappin
Turkey Slappin
If you haven't heard
This bird is the word
A feast fit for a king
Nothing more this bird can sing
He gobbled his way into our hearts
The only song we have, are these loud, smelly farts
#birds
#food
#funny
#lyrics
#parody
79 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 11:40am
28th Nov 2024 11:40am
It needs to be Italian Food, or I don't eat
Feast on carbohydrates
Cavatelli, Angel Hair, Mezzi Rigatoni....Great!!
Manicotti, Tortellini, Fussili....Divine!
Tagliatelle and Farfalle are okay, but never as good as Stuffed Shells
You better cook my pasta Al Dente, cause if you don't, I will destroy you!
Cavatelli, Angel Hair, Mezzi Rigatoni....Great!!
Manicotti, Tortellini, Fussili....Divine!
Tagliatelle and Farfalle are okay, but never as good as Stuffed Shells
You better cook my pasta Al Dente, cause if you don't, I will destroy you!
#food
#funny
117 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 8:44pm
26th Nov 2024 8:44pm
A Chocolately Drink That's Neat
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, You're very sweet
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, You're everything I need
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, From my head to my feet
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, Drink for a good night sleep.
Quicky, a rabbit who seems very nice
Bosco's syrup has always enticed
Hershey's Chocolate Milk, I'll never think twice
Swiss Miss Chocolate Milk is watery, with no bite.
My Chocolate Milk, needs to be sweet
My Chocolate Milk, quenches in the heat
My Chocolate Milk, stirred just right
My...
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, You're everything I need
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, From my head to my feet
Chocolate Milk, Chocolate Milk, Drink for a good night sleep.
Quicky, a rabbit who seems very nice
Bosco's syrup has always enticed
Hershey's Chocolate Milk, I'll never think twice
Swiss Miss Chocolate Milk is watery, with no bite.
My Chocolate Milk, needs to be sweet
My Chocolate Milk, quenches in the heat
My Chocolate Milk, stirred just right
My...
#food
#rhyming
#funny
66 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 10:42am
21st Nov 2024 10:42am
Avoid Processed Foods!
Take my order while you serve me
I don't like you or this food
How I got here, Not to sure
One bad trip, unlocked this door
I'm not feeling so fine
My stomach is cursed,
I committed a crime
Take me to that place where the elephants flew
Dolphins walked, swimming kangaroo's
I wouldn't mind if they all spoke to me
Maybe like playing charades
Sharks burrowing in trees
I've visited this place a few times in the last week
I needed a passport to meet with myself
He didn't understand me, I don't speak Greek...
I don't like you or this food
How I got here, Not to sure
One bad trip, unlocked this door
I'm not feeling so fine
My stomach is cursed,
I committed a crime
Take me to that place where the elephants flew
Dolphins walked, swimming kangaroo's
I wouldn't mind if they all spoke to me
Maybe like playing charades
Sharks burrowing in trees
I've visited this place a few times in the last week
I needed a passport to meet with myself
He didn't understand me, I don't speak Greek...
#food
#illness
#nightmares
#TruthOfLife
#utopia
68 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 11:26am
17th Nov 2024 11:26am
Caught His Sis With A Piece Of Fruit
A
friend of
mine told me
that after an
hour of swimming, he
went back into the house
and caught his sister naked
in the kitchen sucking on a
banana which made that guy slide off
his trunks and start to touch and kiss her bod.
friend of
mine told me
that after an
hour of swimming, he
went back into the house
and caught his sister naked
in the kitchen sucking on a
banana which made that guy slide off
his trunks and start to touch and kiss her bod.
#dialogue
#fiction
#food
#sex
#sister
211 reads
4 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 7:55pm
15th Nov 2024 7:55pm
On slicing a Kiwi Fruit
Like cracking a pebble and finding a fossil —
that no eyes have ever seen
there you were, unexpected —
a little green face gazing,
from the kitchen worktop.
My heart sighed,
seeing your pip eyes, beady, staring
knowing nothing of shape or colour;
Breakfast waited, while I stood
blinking at this sudden kiwi-creature,
tiny flat Martian,
helpless as a planet
without a mothering star;
I cradled you in my palm.
Silent
without whimper or wail,
did you exist before the cut? Would you exist ...
that no eyes have ever seen
there you were, unexpected —
a little green face gazing,
from the kitchen worktop.
My heart sighed,
seeing your pip eyes, beady, staring
knowing nothing of shape or colour;
Breakfast waited, while I stood
blinking at this sudden kiwi-creature,
tiny flat Martian,
helpless as a planet
without a mothering star;
I cradled you in my palm.
Silent
without whimper or wail,
did you exist before the cut? Would you exist ...
#childhood
#fairies
#food #magic
#food #magic
82 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 7:52pm
15th Nov 2024 7:52pm
Piggy Spunk
#animals
#food
#orgasm
#sex
#satirical
75 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 11:22am
13th Nov 2024 11:22am
Part of a complete breakfast
As I reached for a spoon in my kitchen drawer
My hand could sense a growing displeasure
What the hell was I seeing?
Something was crawling on my spoon
It was a Cockroach!
I went into the cabinet, to grab my favorite cereal bowl
The Flintstones that is, Fruity Pebbles, Yum!
As I looked into the cereal bowl,
There were three roaches taking a shit on top of the other
Disgusting!
I know, I know,
Silly rabbit, tricks are for kids
And yes I know the honey nut will help me lower my cholesterol
And I know there's...
My hand could sense a growing displeasure
What the hell was I seeing?
Something was crawling on my spoon
It was a Cockroach!
I went into the cabinet, to grab my favorite cereal bowl
The Flintstones that is, Fruity Pebbles, Yum!
As I looked into the cereal bowl,
There were three roaches taking a shit on top of the other
Disgusting!
I know, I know,
Silly rabbit, tricks are for kids
And yes I know the honey nut will help me lower my cholesterol
And I know there's...
#dirty
#food
#home #satirical
#home #satirical
166 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 10:52am
12th Nov 2024 10:52am
Fast & Easy
I'm in a library with my girlfriend
We're listening to some guy talk about politics
Pro this, anti that
He sounded like an ignorant asshole
He looks into his small, uninterested audience and says that he's looking for a great place to get some dinner
My girlfriend gets up and says, "Would you like a great meal or something fast & easy?"
He says, "I'm looking for fine dining with a romantic ambience."
She says, "I have the perfect place for a great meal and something that's fast & easy"
She takes his hand & leaves
We're listening to some guy talk about politics
Pro this, anti that
He sounded like an ignorant asshole
He looks into his small, uninterested audience and says that he's looking for a great place to get some dinner
My girlfriend gets up and says, "Would you like a great meal or something fast & easy?"
He says, "I'm looking for fine dining with a romantic ambience."
She says, "I have the perfect place for a great meal and something that's fast & easy"
She takes his hand & leaves
#food
#girlfriend
#hurt
#politics
#rejection
89 reads
6 Comments
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