Poems About Flowers Seeking Honest Critique
#flowers
Poems about flowers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Oh Happy Day
Oh sunny day welcomes me in
beautiful sunlit flowers smile up at me
while their tree guardians take note
the birds resting in their boughs
leaves rustling slightly
while their branches praise the blue
the sky reaches on forever
a home for the sun
The earth rotates lazily as the day progresses on
She is interactive, our mother
she gives as she receives
I notice that on days I'm stormy
and stomping out about the property
She will reach out and trip me
admonishing me to be kind
the energy I'm...
beautiful sunlit flowers smile up at me
while their tree guardians take note
the birds resting in their boughs
leaves rustling slightly
while their branches praise the blue
the sky reaches on forever
a home for the sun
The earth rotates lazily as the day progresses on
She is interactive, our mother
she gives as she receives
I notice that on days I'm stormy
and stomping out about the property
She will reach out and trip me
admonishing me to be kind
the energy I'm...
#flowers
#nature
#trees
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11 Comments
Weep the Flowers
tears flower on my face
blooming so beautifully out of place
a gentle smile beseeching them not to show
but their delicate nature draws attention to my hardened expressions
forlorn they grow wildly without nuture
sweet daisies of faith come from deep within me
A memory is all it takes to reduce me to nothing
babies' breath moves in its spot in the garden, grieving
exhaling the pain and inhaling something tender
Tiny epiphanies show in my eyes
my soul is disconnected from my mind
so when I weep, it is from my sacred heart...
blooming so beautifully out of place
a gentle smile beseeching them not to show
but their delicate nature draws attention to my hardened expressions
forlorn they grow wildly without nuture
sweet daisies of faith come from deep within me
A memory is all it takes to reduce me to nothing
babies' breath moves in its spot in the garden, grieving
exhaling the pain and inhaling something tender
Tiny epiphanies show in my eyes
my soul is disconnected from my mind
so when I weep, it is from my sacred heart...
#flowers
#metaphor
#sadness
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2 Comments
Some berries and a giraffe's kiss
Let me take you to a divine place
where strawberries blush and interlace.
In the heart of the savannah they bloom
soft whispers of life in nature’s room.
The rain falls warm, like a lover's sigh.
A tender caress from a generous sky.
Its drops linger embracing the earth
feeding the fields where beauty finds birth.
The light, so cool, shimmers and plays,
casting shadows in intricate arrays.
A gentle balm to the heat’s embrace
illuminating dreams in this secret space.
Feel the pulse of the land, its steady...
where strawberries blush and interlace.
In the heart of the savannah they bloom
soft whispers of life in nature’s room.
The rain falls warm, like a lover's sigh.
A tender caress from a generous sky.
Its drops linger embracing the earth
feeding the fields where beauty finds birth.
The light, so cool, shimmers and plays,
casting shadows in intricate arrays.
A gentle balm to the heat’s embrace
illuminating dreams in this secret space.
Feel the pulse of the land, its steady...
#animals
#birds
#flowers
#love
#nature
73 reads
9 Comments
Garden Flowers
Tulips can’t be roses
Daisies can’t be red
Though all are born in the soil
Of the dewy sun baked flower bed
Weathering the rain
And the heat of summer sun
Burning overhead
Together
Bright as can be
Reaching towards the sky
Freshening the air
One reaches higher
Yet the other is never outshined
Daisies can’t be red
Though all are born in the soil
Of the dewy sun baked flower bed
Weathering the rain
And the heat of summer sun
Burning overhead
Together
Bright as can be
Reaching towards the sky
Freshening the air
One reaches higher
Yet the other is never outshined
#flowers
#nature
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1 Comment
~rain.blossoms
https://youtu.be/DUphZvkt4KA?feature=shared
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core ...
still no signs of a stop .. roaring
bassy angered lions of the skies
in serial thunderstorms .. with shrilly
sudden attacking hasty insertions
now and then..
of an impudently cluster-clapping
lightnings of fluctuating whites ..
this spring rain
after so long
a heat spell
when had almost forgotten
of what rain is.. for months
now
drenching core ...
#flowers
#love
#metaphor
#rain
#sensual
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7 Comments
~of a 2 random flashed paradisiacal poetic symbolisms.. of an otherwise prosaic day
1.
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
#animals
#flowers
#nature
#symbolism
#trees
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3 Comments
Spring talks
Cherry blossoms are singing to me,
In whispers soft as the rustling breeze,
Petals dance gracefully from the tree,
Painting the air with delicate ease.
They sway in the sunlight, a pink-tinted hue,
Each bloom tells a story of warmth and of cheer,
As springtime awakens the world to renew,
Their sweet, fleeting beauty draws close and draws near.
I wander beneath their soft, gentle sighs,
Lost in the magic of nature's embrace,
Each branch like a lover who tenderly ties
Moments of wonder in a luminous space.
So let...
In whispers soft as the rustling breeze,
Petals dance gracefully from the tree,
Painting the air with delicate ease.
They sway in the sunlight, a pink-tinted hue,
Each bloom tells a story of warmth and of cheer,
As springtime awakens the world to renew,
Their sweet, fleeting beauty draws close and draws near.
I wander beneath their soft, gentle sighs,
Lost in the magic of nature's embrace,
Each branch like a lover who tenderly ties
Moments of wonder in a luminous space.
So let...
#flowers
#nature
#spring
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0 Comments
Sunflower
You are a sunflower
The glory in any flield
I wanted you from a far
But your love was too much
I wanted to be yours
To lick your honeysuckle
To smell your nectar bloom
But your love was too much
You are a sunflower
Green eyes and golden skin
I'm the daffodil king
And I loved you too much
You're a sunflower growing wild
A beauty among the bees
You're not just another wildflower
Though I could never tame you
No, I could never tame you
Your love was too high a price to...
The glory in any flield
I wanted you from a far
But your love was too much
I wanted to be yours
To lick your honeysuckle
To smell your nectar bloom
But your love was too much
You are a sunflower
Green eyes and golden skin
I'm the daffodil king
And I loved you too much
You're a sunflower growing wild
A beauty among the bees
You're not just another wildflower
Though I could never tame you
No, I could never tame you
Your love was too high a price to...
#breakup
#flowers
#freedom
#love
#lover
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Seasons Change, Do We ?
The mourning doves appeared today
I love their sound
It's a sign of Spring
Haunting
But
With hope ...
I love their sound
It's a sign of Spring
Haunting
But
With hope ...
#flowers
#hope
#spring #WritingPoetry
#spring #WritingPoetry
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24 Comments
Color my small world -
Color my small world -
Oh, fair Yeshua -
With a streak of globe mallow
Inside a rocky draw
And the morning calm
Of bergamot and lupine -
So I can stop time
And set my gaze upon them -
And a swath of poppies
Glowing in the sun
And a glint in the breeze
As if to show Your love.
I'll go and walk about
The garden variety -
Knowing that this niche
Is where I want to be.
Oh, fair Yeshua -
With a streak of globe mallow
Inside a rocky draw
And the morning calm
Of bergamot and lupine -
So I can stop time
And set my gaze upon them -
And a swath of poppies
Glowing in the sun
And a glint in the breeze
As if to show Your love.
I'll go and walk about
The garden variety -
Knowing that this niche
Is where I want to be.
#flowers
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3 Comments
's Day
Cupid's arrow flies,
heartbeats sync beneath the stars,
love's sweet clever lies.
Chocolate whispers melt,
roses blush with secret winks,
passions stealthy pelt.
Letters bloom with glee,
witty verses set hearts free,
valentine's decree.
Roses red and bright,
love's whispers in moonlit night,
hearts take soaring flight.
In this tryst we bloom,
cupid's arrows break the gloom,
love's eternal room.
Valentine's Day is today
it keeps bringing out
craziness in everyone!
heartbeats sync beneath the stars,
love's sweet clever lies.
Chocolate whispers melt,
roses blush with secret winks,
passions stealthy pelt.
Letters bloom with glee,
witty verses set hearts free,
valentine's decree.
Roses red and bright,
love's whispers in moonlit night,
hearts take soaring flight.
In this tryst we bloom,
cupid's arrows break the gloom,
love's eternal room.
Valentine's Day is today
it keeps bringing out
craziness in everyone!
#boyfriend
#flowers
#girlfriend
#lover
#passion
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9 Comments
bloom
the day awoke me slowly
with her vibrant vibrations, she lured me out of the sleepiness, of dreams
swaying in her energy, I open my eyes and look around me
trees utter wisdom
flowers in their beds, shook the dew from their dozy heads
slowly opening to the sunshine
while the day began her lessons for the day
shyness came to behold, the dawn
late for class, her mother admonished
the world is interactive, be kind to her she'll be kind to you
gentle understanding between a child and her mother
spark the child's imagination ...
with her vibrant vibrations, she lured me out of the sleepiness, of dreams
swaying in her energy, I open my eyes and look around me
trees utter wisdom
flowers in their beds, shook the dew from their dozy heads
slowly opening to the sunshine
while the day began her lessons for the day
shyness came to behold, the dawn
late for class, her mother admonished
the world is interactive, be kind to her she'll be kind to you
gentle understanding between a child and her mother
spark the child's imagination ...
#flowers
#nature
#trees
113 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Flowers Seeking Honest Critique