Poems About Flowers Seeking Honest Critique
#flowers
Poems about flowers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Kittens mittens
When she sweeshs
Is sweet.
When she eats a burger
Bunch
Is a bunch of love
When she sees
Me she is like
An cupids arrows.
Nest in bed
But butter banana milkshake
Is a 🌰 erst.
Is sweet.
When she eats a burger
Bunch
Is a bunch of love
When she sees
Me she is like
An cupids arrows.
Nest in bed
But butter banana milkshake
Is a 🌰 erst.
#flowers
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Spring break.
Life blossom🌸
Into pink hair
And winds are
Waters of ice.
Life rolls
Smooth
So the sailors are going
To be boat beautiful hillside.
Dracula is a new
Mice nice and sweet.
Dreams of bat like
Sweet candy🍬.
Into pink hair
And winds are
Waters of ice.
Life rolls
Smooth
So the sailors are going
To be boat beautiful hillside.
Dracula is a new
Mice nice and sweet.
Dreams of bat like
Sweet candy🍬.
#flowers
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Stolen Haiku
Put his hand in his pocket
Couldn't buy the rose
Decided to steal her heart
Couldn't buy the rose
Decided to steal her heart
#emotional
#flowers
#love
#mirror
#rose
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The green crush.
Night angles
In green beams
Of compron 23.43.
In green beams
Of compron 23.43.
#flowers
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The flowers that grow out of wounds
There are people watching
people watching people watching
And I'm at the city mall
people watching
picking up groceries
feeding your hungry
I'm at the city mall going to the laundry
picking birds on the street
there are people on the street
there are people in the system
there are people watching and I am going on and on
there's flowers in her hair
as I am biting off a nail
there are people watching and I'm biting off a nail
and I'm looking like a snail next to my little queen
i am feeling like a dream...
people watching people watching
And I'm at the city mall
people watching
picking up groceries
feeding your hungry
I'm at the city mall going to the laundry
picking birds on the street
there are people on the street
there are people in the system
there are people watching and I am going on and on
there's flowers in her hair
as I am biting off a nail
there are people watching and I'm biting off a nail
and I'm looking like a snail next to my little queen
i am feeling like a dream...
#flowers
#music
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Murmuré Doucement
Avec tendresse, vous êtes là
Fermez lentement les yeux, sentez le rythme de nos âmes
Dansant dans l’abandon le plus doux auquel je me soumets
Attire-moi dans l’étreinte de tes désirs les plus profonds et les plus sombres
Chuchote
mon nom alors que tu gémisses au cœur des souhaits célestes
Convoite-moi de mes mains puissantes, que ta volonté soit le guide de ce qui se trouve dans les sentiments séduisants de moi
Alors que nos âmes dansent magnifiquement dans et hors du temps
Fermez lentement les yeux, sentez le rythme de nos âmes
Dansant dans l’abandon le plus doux auquel je me soumets
Attire-moi dans l’étreinte de tes désirs les plus profonds et les plus sombres
Chuchote
mon nom alors que tu gémisses au cœur des souhaits célestes
Convoite-moi de mes mains puissantes, que ta volonté soit le guide de ce qui se trouve dans les sentiments séduisants de moi
Alors que nos âmes dansent magnifiquement dans et hors du temps
#lover
#seductive
#sensual #flowers
#sensual #flowers
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Rose
Queen of the garden
Outshines all
Of her peers
Emitting a scent
as lovely
As she looks
Outshines all
Of her peers
Emitting a scent
as lovely
As she looks
#flowers
#rose
#nature
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sunflower
setting the tempo I begin to flow
gentle honey relieving some stress
reaching for the skies, I touch blue
releasing my sorrow into the atmosphere
picking up the joy of the natural world
doing what it was intended to do
flowers swaying in the wind
birds singing, springtime mating
they mate for life and so do I
my soulmate and I reuniting slowly
to love this way is to hurt
to laugh you must also cry
confronted with my heart I realize
my sincerity is altered
I get saddened then I refocus ...
gentle honey relieving some stress
reaching for the skies, I touch blue
releasing my sorrow into the atmosphere
picking up the joy of the natural world
doing what it was intended to do
flowers swaying in the wind
birds singing, springtime mating
they mate for life and so do I
my soulmate and I reuniting slowly
to love this way is to hurt
to laugh you must also cry
confronted with my heart I realize
my sincerity is altered
I get saddened then I refocus ...
#sadness
#flowers
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Little Weed
hello little weed in my garden grown
toiling on nothing really
insistent on the affection of the sun
with you brute leaves blotting it out for the rest of us
your poison ivy climbing is tiring
shrinking into the shadows
yes I see you protruding
pollinated by every busy bee
well my little scrub it is your nature
popping up where you ought not
trying to choke the daisies
who in innocence opens for the sunllight
taking no notice of your deviant scaling
I pray the son to...
toiling on nothing really
insistent on the affection of the sun
with you brute leaves blotting it out for the rest of us
your poison ivy climbing is tiring
shrinking into the shadows
yes I see you protruding
pollinated by every busy bee
well my little scrub it is your nature
popping up where you ought not
trying to choke the daisies
who in innocence opens for the sunllight
taking no notice of your deviant scaling
I pray the son to...
#flowers
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I Call It Happiness
Nature astounds
Filled with many
Possibilities
Filled with many
Possibilities
#happiness
#flowers
#nature
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Sweet Bay
Petals opening
Sweet magnolia scent
Exhilarating
Sweet magnolia scent
Exhilarating
#happiness
#flowers
#nature
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Flowers Of Emotions
One time,on a warm day.
You were bored,the sun went away.
You did not expect.
But you walk into a cemetery to inspect.
The cemetery was dark and grim.
And the clouds,paper thin.
Tombstones and graves astray.
But something was glowing in the pathway.
It was a flower patch.
As color began to hatch.
One flower was dark and blue.
It shined brightly in the storm.
And its petals were thorn.
With a sense of sadness.
You wondered,what happened to its petals?
The madness it went through.
The...
You were bored,the sun went away.
You did not expect.
But you walk into a cemetery to inspect.
The cemetery was dark and grim.
And the clouds,paper thin.
Tombstones and graves astray.
But something was glowing in the pathway.
It was a flower patch.
As color began to hatch.
One flower was dark and blue.
It shined brightly in the storm.
And its petals were thorn.
With a sense of sadness.
You wondered,what happened to its petals?
The madness it went through.
The...
#motivational
#flowers
#uplifting
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DU Poetry : Poems About Flowers Seeking Honest Critique