Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:07pm
Yesterday 10:07pm
AQUATIC CREATURE
Diving deeper into the sea
Aquatic creature free you be
No hair…No fur…size of a pea
Silver and gold swim passed me
Transparent lesson ye teach me
My eyes now opened to clearly see
The classic beauty of simplicity
Has no need for complexity.
Your loud silence’s deafening pitch
Bothers not anyone - a single inch
Forever hydrated n your tank-water niche
Aquatic creature, you’re no snitch
Muted thoughts – your lesson’s rich:
Minding your own,
You swim alone
Back and forth – to and fro
Therapeutic tranquil...
Aquatic creature free you be
No hair…No fur…size of a pea
Silver and gold swim passed me
Transparent lesson ye teach me
My eyes now opened to clearly see
The classic beauty of simplicity
Has no need for complexity.
Your loud silence’s deafening pitch
Bothers not anyone - a single inch
Forever hydrated n your tank-water niche
Aquatic creature, you’re no snitch
Muted thoughts – your lesson’s rich:
Minding your own,
You swim alone
Back and forth – to and fro
Therapeutic tranquil...
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:30am
Yesterday 5:30am
I am your protector
I am your protector your entity that gives you, the energy and strength that you will need to survive, this cycle of life. For sure life is an never ending cycle of ups and downs, that could make you lose your mind. For I heard you in the silently sounds of whispers, that you cried at night with tears just running, down your gentle face. For I understand your pain, along with your hurt and the silents of your heart, FOR have no fear cause you are not alone in your struggles. For it's in moments like these, I will never forget you nor forsake you, that you do exist even in your time of need,...
#faith
#fate
#morality
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 8:19pm
14th Feb 2025 8:19pm
Let not your heart be heavy
Through life we will be tested by somethings, that we may not see it coming our way. BUT yet it doesn't mean that you keep an blind eye close, to really not see that is before you. For that will be your time to become aware that you have to learn, some lessons that you thought you didn't have to learn. How to navigate through the process of the nonsense, that will surely bring you down. For sure life wasn't meant to be easy, when you know that it's hard to find the right one for you. FOR sure life is a mind game of chance or even leaps of your own faith at times. Which makes your thoughts run...
#choices
#faith
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 1:43am
13th Feb 2025 1:43am
What is your aura saying
Here I am as I am a woman ♀️ in understanding my own beauty and strength and perseverance, along with the ability to have a respectful intellectual conversation. For sure there will be times when you just want to go some place far away from, the chaos of the world. 🌍 For as a woman I find myself feeling trapped, within a vortex that seems, to become more than a place of calmness and tranquility, and peaceful vibes, that I can have a quiet moment alone to breathe. For I am a woman who has fought many of battles, not knowing if I will truly make it through, the very...
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#TimeHeals
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 7:21am
12th Feb 2025 7:21am
CRY UPON HIS SHOULDERS
The elders say that we can't stop talking to GOD ALMIGHTY, no matter what we have to face in our lives,
when we have trouble waters in our lives that makes us feel as thought there is no way out of the storms. But yet somehow has changed the very course of our own lives. For sure we must continue to believe in our faith and beliefs, by leaving behind the sorrow of our hurt and pain. YET remaining focus on the task at hand, for sure we must never get caught up within, the storms of our feelings of emotions. Which makes us lose our focus draining, us of our strength and courage and...
when we have trouble waters in our lives that makes us feel as thought there is no way out of the storms. But yet somehow has changed the very course of our own lives. For sure we must continue to believe in our faith and beliefs, by leaving behind the sorrow of our hurt and pain. YET remaining focus on the task at hand, for sure we must never get caught up within, the storms of our feelings of emotions. Which makes us lose our focus draining, us of our strength and courage and...
#faith
#philosophical
#prayer
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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Ambjr
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 00:43am
11th Feb 2025 00:43am
letter to the universe’s absentee father
dear god
this is the closest I’ve come to prayer since the bottles stopped bringin me to my knees. I don’t believe in you…and you don’t believe in me. but sometimes I find myself callin out to that abandoned throne. my cries echoin back at me in the emptiness of your absence. I tried to believe but they lost me when they said we are made in your image. seems bit backwards. you are made in our image. twisted. broken. selfish. cruel.
we are lot alike. you and i. how else do you explain floods and rainbows. plagues and manna. the violent jealousies. the need to be...
this is the closest I’ve come to prayer since the bottles stopped bringin me to my knees. I don’t believe in you…and you don’t believe in me. but sometimes I find myself callin out to that abandoned throne. my cries echoin back at me in the emptiness of your absence. I tried to believe but they lost me when they said we are made in your image. seems bit backwards. you are made in our image. twisted. broken. selfish. cruel.
we are lot alike. you and i. how else do you explain floods and rainbows. plagues and manna. the violent jealousies. the need to be...
#addiction
#anger
#bipolar
#faith
#God
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:28am
7th Feb 2025 3:28am
And So Hell Trembled With His Step
Semper Sanctus
Head bowed in contemplation
The weight of eternity pressing against my brow
Upon the parchment of the world
The liturgy of man is writ in sigil and blood
A scripture of ascent, a hymn of fire
His Glory—
A gesture of silence
A truth beyond breath, beyond name
The Alpha and Omega inscribed in unseen ink
A covenant sealed in the marrow of existence
Salvation is found in flame
In the tongues of fire that danced above the apostles
In the incense rising like the prayers of the saint ...
Head bowed in contemplation
The weight of eternity pressing against my brow
Upon the parchment of the world
The liturgy of man is writ in sigil and blood
A scripture of ascent, a hymn of fire
His Glory—
A gesture of silence
A truth beyond breath, beyond name
The Alpha and Omega inscribed in unseen ink
A covenant sealed in the marrow of existence
Salvation is found in flame
In the tongues of fire that danced above the apostles
In the incense rising like the prayers of the saint ...
#Christian
#death
#faith #God
#faith #God
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Duice
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 7:56am
5th Feb 2025 7:56am
The Destroyer (Part 5)
Doling excruciating pain is obsession to valiant soldiers
that’ll arm wrestle the very epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to strike back
Black Panther speaking open heart surgery
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be sacrificial in stance extinguished
glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered ...
that’ll arm wrestle the very epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to strike back
Black Panther speaking open heart surgery
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be sacrificial in stance extinguished
glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered ...
#faith
#fate
#redemption
#sacrifice
#spiritual
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 00:38am
5th Feb 2025 00:38am
Gate of serenity
Come and become relaxed in vibes that will affect the very, foundation of your true spiritual existence. For let's take a silent walk through, the forest of the trees of life. For don't be afraid of learning what is necessary to learn, about thyself as we go deeper than deep into the deepness of your own mind and heart. Yet as you go through the process of just eliminate what we don't want and need, you replaced it with positivity as that is what you want and need to feel, the deepness of the affect that this place has upon you. For just stop and look and listen, not to your heart but listen...
#emotional
#faith
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
47 reads
2 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 4:02am
4th Feb 2025 4:02am
Speaking my mind for the first time
I’m beginning to be so over it
That is the truth
This is how I feel after all you do
Being left on read is comical
Now you’ve just left my heart sore
So I must be a bore
Because you refuse to talk to me anymore
That is the truth
This is how I feel after all you do
Being left on read is comical
Now you’ve just left my heart sore
So I must be a bore
Because you refuse to talk to me anymore
#faith
#heartbroken
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm
What your going through
I am here for you no matter what you are going through in your life, for I give to my most strongest soldiers no more than they can stand. FOR sure no matter how dark it gets, I am there to shine the heavenly Halo's, above your head just reaching into your heart and spiritual, subconsciousness of your own mind. For sure life wasn't meant to be easy, for there will be hard times and good times in the cross roads of what is life. THAT we all will have to journey and travel and walk, through this vortex of life. 🙏 Yet have no fear because I will always be there, for you to guide you and...
#faith
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#TruthOfLife
66 reads
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Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 6:39am
31st Jan 2025 6:39am
Entitlement Egos
A young child cries before he can even open his eyes. Before his teens demanding his entitlement allowance. Curds of way, to foul to say. A shouting tense, prince making demands to young to understand what it is to be "The King". For like sour, spoiled milk...The crowds felted the somersault roll of a stomach that a mouth of watering will upchuck & boar on to the royal floors. For a spoiled child is a rotten apple for sure. Entitlement of adulthood leads his way...Without lifting a finger or dirtying a nail. To expecting the bail of money to hail...While the poor are knowing to...
#curse
#faith
#karma
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