Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
HadesRising
Poem Published
Today 1:47am
Today 1:47am
WE FELL AS STARS
I still recall the spires of the silver dawn
Untouched by dogmas and the blood of holy wars
Sanctimonious hypocrisy came alive
And reared its ugly head just like a hydra storm
So much jealousy and crooked pointed fingers
They were so eager to place the wages of blame
The self righteous damned their brothers and sisters
And then leagues of children followed me to the flame
"Father, when we needed you
You never bothered to be around
Oh God, when you cast us out
We fell for you"
Because we will never see ...
Untouched by dogmas and the blood of holy wars
Sanctimonious hypocrisy came alive
And reared its ugly head just like a hydra storm
So much jealousy and crooked pointed fingers
They were so eager to place the wages of blame
The self righteous damned their brothers and sisters
And then leagues of children followed me to the flame
"Father, when we needed you
You never bothered to be around
Oh God, when you cast us out
We fell for you"
Because we will never see ...
#love
#rejection
#faith #hurt
#faith #hurt
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Em-ily
Emily E.
Emily E.
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:42pm
Yesterday 5:42pm
16 August 1870
I shall
you had
where each
A lark
garden
books &
Papers an
Aste
woman with
belle dew
exquisite
to me w
my hand
breathless
I am frog
but she talks
sometimes
recommend
thoroughly
things wh
things you
This is
mountains
Not be
trail I call
much like
darling I an
I got here a
next day go ...
you had
where each
A lark
garden
books &
Papers an
Aste
woman with
belle dew
exquisite
to me w
my hand
breathless
I am frog
but she talks
sometimes
recommend
thoroughly
things wh
things you
This is
mountains
Not be
trail I call
much like
darling I an
I got here a
next day go ...
#faith
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2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
10th Dec 2019 1:32am
10th Dec 2019 1:32am
Thee Allegory of a Pumpous Ass
The pump handle is broken,
(like Out-of-Order), and all
the watchman can do is stand and
laugh, having forgotten the protocol
for dealing with a prodigal pump.
(pump pump pump, tha's all i can do
is pump pump pump, Round about
and straight away, it all comes back
to the pump.
So many time-worn (out) religious idears
that i must vomit on my shoes,
while some dickhead robs the pantry,
and another primes the pump to pump
away the primary waters that have brought
so much
...
(like Out-of-Order), and all
the watchman can do is stand and
laugh, having forgotten the protocol
for dealing with a prodigal pump.
(pump pump pump, tha's all i can do
is pump pump pump, Round about
and straight away, it all comes back
to the pump.
So many time-worn (out) religious idears
that i must vomit on my shoes,
while some dickhead robs the pantry,
and another primes the pump to pump
away the primary waters that have brought
so much
...
#religion
#faith
#fate
#morality
#curse
36 reads
8 Comments
De420
Poem Published
7th Dec 2019 10:20am
7th Dec 2019 10:20am
True Poetry! Spirituality
True poetry is real no matter how fancy it may be made to be!
even simplicity has its uses in the end to understand the greater good!
Jesus has preped god for the coming, the second or the third or the first i donno hahaha but he is believe it
NWO is coming and so is he with it bringing eternity in this astral plane
GOD is afaid of being neglected and feared so dont judge him or fear though through me he speaks to you in unison
he needs time to prepare and understand you creatures such angry little basterds, please be good he says
for he is COMING...
even simplicity has its uses in the end to understand the greater good!
Jesus has preped god for the coming, the second or the third or the first i donno hahaha but he is believe it
NWO is coming and so is he with it bringing eternity in this astral plane
GOD is afaid of being neglected and feared so dont judge him or fear though through me he speaks to you in unison
he needs time to prepare and understand you creatures such angry little basterds, please be good he says
for he is COMING...
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
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Benzy_420
Poem Published
7th Dec 2019 5:24am
7th Dec 2019 5:24am
Growth
Smart kid
Top of the class
Perfect attendance
Homework done fast
Friends with most and teachers agreed
Of all of the students most prone to succeed
Last year of primary he gained lots of weight
Saw his friends growing up, staying in shape
This killed his confidence, bullies weren't helping
First was his body, now mind is unhealthy
Quit football, the one thing he did out of school
Keeping his shirt on when hitting the pool
Soon he closed off from all socialising
Told himself he needed nobody besides him ...
Top of the class
Perfect attendance
Homework done fast
Friends with most and teachers agreed
Of all of the students most prone to succeed
Last year of primary he gained lots of weight
Saw his friends growing up, staying in shape
This killed his confidence, bullies weren't helping
First was his body, now mind is unhealthy
Quit football, the one thing he did out of school
Keeping his shirt on when hitting the pool
Soon he closed off from all socialising
Told himself he needed nobody besides him ...
#teens
#faith
#aging
#redemption
#philosophical
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Prometheus86
Justin
Justin
Poem Published
4th Dec 2019 8:26pm
4th Dec 2019 8:26pm
Culture Rebel
This is war for your mind
And this is food for the streets
It's all relative and clever but they can never defeat
The time to abide is just beneath our feet
Too deep
Senseless like a headless horseman
Politicians admitting to federal endorsements
Signing petitions for general re-enforcements
Without permission they do what they please
On your a*s like a bad case of fleas
As they take what they need
The secret societies and juries
Create the mold of the economy
And cures for diseases
With a blue eyed Jesus ...
And this is food for the streets
It's all relative and clever but they can never defeat
The time to abide is just beneath our feet
Too deep
Senseless like a headless horseman
Politicians admitting to federal endorsements
Signing petitions for general re-enforcements
Without permission they do what they please
On your a*s like a bad case of fleas
As they take what they need
The secret societies and juries
Create the mold of the economy
And cures for diseases
With a blue eyed Jesus ...
#faith
#philosophical
#culture #rebellion
#culture #rebellion
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Stoney223
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2019 12:15pm
3rd Dec 2019 12:15pm
PASSAGE OF DARKNESS
Through darkness we seem to find our greatest strength but yet it is through those moments, when we encounter our most deepest forms of depression along with the sadness when darkness falls over our life and world, for it is here at that very lowest point we are reminded of our true weakness of being only human made of skin bones and flesh.
But at last when we least expect it someone or something...
But at last when we least expect it someone or something...
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
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cloventongue89
Poem Published
30th Nov 2019 2:06am
30th Nov 2019 2:06am
One Woman Army
my one woman army
equipped by love
an arsenal of prayers
reinforcing vows
faith in the ideal of me
realized by the best of you...
equipped by love
an arsenal of prayers
reinforcing vows
faith in the ideal of me
realized by the best of you...
#love
#wife
#relationships
#marriage
#faith
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da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
27th Nov 2019 1:42pm
27th Nov 2019 1:42pm
Nobody Knows
Nobody knows when's the coming of the Lord
This mere fact causes varying degrees of discord
Before denigrating another brother for his beliefs
Critically think about who wrote those loose leafs
Each sheet was composed by those in power
The 48 laws of which says to aspire to devour
Empires expire then others desires reign supreme
Causing tears & nightmares out of prior king's dreams
Bringing along new songs & Psalms to the people
Injecting their mental deception into the temple
Erecting pimples 'til those pimples...
This mere fact causes varying degrees of discord
Before denigrating another brother for his beliefs
Critically think about who wrote those loose leafs
Each sheet was composed by those in power
The 48 laws of which says to aspire to devour
Empires expire then others desires reign supreme
Causing tears & nightmares out of prior king's dreams
Bringing along new songs & Psalms to the people
Injecting their mental deception into the temple
Erecting pimples 'til those pimples...
#faith
#spiritual
#food
#historical
#StreamOfConsciousness
43 reads
1 Comment
cloventongue89
Poem Published
27th Nov 2019 3:35am
27th Nov 2019 3:35am
Static Aesthetic
Writing myself in a text reflection
Based in my relative self perception
Calibrating lines into alignment
From honest lies to the truth of who I'm called to be
Divided against myself, cloven verses of the life and death of my identity
Something like a man yet with the hope of being something more
Is it so much a matter of what I'm writing about or who I'm writing for?
Vainglory spouts from the same fountain of an eternal legacy
Of light and of shadows, the dawning hope of so much more than me
One moment my mere relatable best guess at...
Based in my relative self perception
Calibrating lines into alignment
From honest lies to the truth of who I'm called to be
Divided against myself, cloven verses of the life and death of my identity
Something like a man yet with the hope of being something more
Is it so much a matter of what I'm writing about or who I'm writing for?
Vainglory spouts from the same fountain of an eternal legacy
Of light and of shadows, the dawning hope of so much more than me
One moment my mere relatable best guess at...
#God
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
#SelfReflection
57 reads
1 Comment
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
26th Nov 2019 3:43am
26th Nov 2019 3:43am
Depart To Restart
He's fighting a spiritual battle but no one has a clue
Beliefs evolving so what he thought he knew now seems untrue
What does he do to fly free like a beautiful dove
Away from assimulation's bondage created by those above
Spirit being tugged on like strings of a puppet
As he tries to rid his soul of manufactured shit
Some from the pulpit & some from the school
Drowning in misinformation in society's pool
He'd been fooled due to his prior ignorance
Something that many think brings them bliss
Not hearing the hiss of the...
Beliefs evolving so what he thought he knew now seems untrue
What does he do to fly free like a beautiful dove
Away from assimulation's bondage created by those above
Spirit being tugged on like strings of a puppet
As he tries to rid his soul of manufactured shit
Some from the pulpit & some from the school
Drowning in misinformation in society's pool
He'd been fooled due to his prior ignorance
Something that many think brings them bliss
Not hearing the hiss of the...
#school
#religion
#faith #spiritual
#faith #spiritual
52 reads
3 Comments
Taurek
Poem Published
20th Nov 2019 6:35am
20th Nov 2019 6:35am
Russell Brand, for Real
I’m living this life
For some reason
And I’m just
Writing about
It
Videos produced for
You to
Watch
Those with the
Most views
Still
Die
A cigarette is
Useful
But that’s a
Long gone
Notion
Nothing was
Ever going
To work
Out
And the fact
That we didn’t
Believe that,
Was the
Reason
We were
All here
Now
For some reason
And I’m just
Writing about
It
Videos produced for
You to
Watch
Those with the
Most views
Still
Die
A cigarette is
Useful
But that’s a
Long gone
Notion
Nothing was
Ever going
To work
Out
And the fact
That we didn’t
Believe that,
Was the
Reason
We were
All here
Now
#death
#faith
#tobacco
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
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