Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 4:01pm
7th Nov 2024 4:01pm
Garden Of My Soul
I keep strolling in the garden of my soul
sealing a static sight
allowing my heart to a leading light
to quiet spots
spaces with no knots
to other scopes of thoughts
to healing drops..
I keep treading the soil of my garden
I need my soul to irrigate
the rays of Hope to illuminate
to have fountains of Faith be my state
willing to wide open glee gate
and all that is sad to elate..
I have my garden to heed
and what wanes of its wonders I weed
For a world full of roses
I shall sow many a seed
of scents and...
sealing a static sight
allowing my heart to a leading light
to quiet spots
spaces with no knots
to other scopes of thoughts
to healing drops..
I keep treading the soil of my garden
I need my soul to irrigate
the rays of Hope to illuminate
to have fountains of Faith be my state
willing to wide open glee gate
and all that is sad to elate..
I have my garden to heed
and what wanes of its wonders I weed
For a world full of roses
I shall sow many a seed
of scents and...
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#strength
92 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:20pm
7th Nov 2024 1:20pm
Collage YO New Art Entry
Collage
Defines me
Pieces of dreams
Word speak
Color
Box Heads
Fun
No politics
Sexy sometimes
Mood
Always …
Defines me
Pieces of dreams
Word speak
Color
Box Heads
Fun
No politics
Sexy sometimes
Mood
Always …
#art
#emotions
#identity
#myself
#risk
142 reads
12 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 9:21am
5th Nov 2024 9:21am
Sea Limits Cannot Reach Just Drink Its Power
Not chained is the heart would draw near
Feel the breeze of Heaven while heaving
The hand of Faith shall free souls and steer
A divine fountain of Love receiving
Cascaded words flowing over any weir
A grace gifted by inspiring teacher
The poet in you shall have no compeer
Nourish the soul from every single creature
Love lulls human heart to see its sea
And to eternal Love bears a vower
Lead your dives and surface.. beam to be
Sea limits can’t reach just drink its power
Feel the breeze of Heaven while heaving
The hand of Faith shall free souls and steer
A divine fountain of Love receiving
Cascaded words flowing over any weir
A grace gifted by inspiring teacher
The poet in you shall have no compeer
Nourish the soul from every single creature
Love lulls human heart to see its sea
And to eternal Love bears a vower
Lead your dives and surface.. beam to be
Sea limits can’t reach just drink its power
#admiration
#emotions
#kindness
#nature
#strength
112 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:11pm
4th Nov 2024 11:11pm
Eye
Beauty is in the eye
Sitting in a chair put back
Lift my head and look up
Dreams of blue with cotton
Spinning like a Ferris wheel
So much wonder and beauty
Bird grabs a worm
Takes back to family
Below the surface
Resides real life
Driving the autobahn
Feeling road rage
In the market look to replenish
My lost soul with some bakery
Walk on by don’t dare look up
6 inch screen is screaming look at me
Simple things essence of life
Why can’t I feel that that is...
Sitting in a chair put back
Lift my head and look up
Dreams of blue with cotton
Spinning like a Ferris wheel
So much wonder and beauty
Bird grabs a worm
Takes back to family
Below the surface
Resides real life
Driving the autobahn
Feeling road rage
In the market look to replenish
My lost soul with some bakery
Walk on by don’t dare look up
6 inch screen is screaming look at me
Simple things essence of life
Why can’t I feel that that is...
#emotions
#hope
#strength
69 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:43am
4th Nov 2024 11:43am
Wash Away
I hear you cry, I feel your pain
Your hearts ran dry, you can't explain
Down and out, lost at sea
Look around, there I'll be
I'll wipe those tears, take your weight
Blue cascades, my love awaits
The sun will rise, a brand new day
Those distant cries, washed away
Your hearts ran dry, you can't explain
Down and out, lost at sea
Look around, there I'll be
I'll wipe those tears, take your weight
Blue cascades, my love awaits
The sun will rise, a brand new day
Those distant cries, washed away
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
133 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 10:51am
2nd Nov 2024 10:51am
My Love
When I love
It's with my whole heart
Because I'm all in
From the very start
It's with my whole heart
Because I'm all in
From the very start
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#hope
#respect
166 reads
22 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 5:52pm
1st Nov 2024 5:52pm
The world of children's eyes
INSIDE ROARE
The world of children's eyes
Motivation "Aurora - Through The Eyes Of a Child"
I only want to see what I like
I don't have to listen to anything.
I have to eat and I have to sleep.
I want to see mommy's eyes in the morning
everything shines, everything warms.
I want to see butterflies fly
why do birds sing
Tell me mom, is the world really that beautiful?
I want to see forever with a child's eyes
it's beautiful, it's colorful.
I want to see butterflies fly
why do birds...
The world of children's eyes
Motivation "Aurora - Through The Eyes Of a Child"
I only want to see what I like
I don't have to listen to anything.
I have to eat and I have to sleep.
I want to see mommy's eyes in the morning
everything shines, everything warms.
I want to see butterflies fly
why do birds sing
Tell me mom, is the world really that beautiful?
I want to see forever with a child's eyes
it's beautiful, it's colorful.
I want to see butterflies fly
why do birds...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
111 reads
0 Comments
u53l355
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 1:33pm
1st Nov 2024 1:33pm
Art
Art
Let me explain
It's not about a series of words scribbled on a page.
Or
Paint splattered canvas , graphite sketch images
A series of sounds made by any variety of instruments.
Art is more than all that .
It is about expressing the emotions most people bury deep inside of their souls , the love the suffering , the joy and pain that scratches from the darkest reaches within you heart , cracking thru your rib bones and organs just to tell the world a little piece of the puzzle ,
That
Is
You
...
Let me explain
It's not about a series of words scribbled on a page.
Or
Paint splattered canvas , graphite sketch images
A series of sounds made by any variety of instruments.
Art is more than all that .
It is about expressing the emotions most people bury deep inside of their souls , the love the suffering , the joy and pain that scratches from the darkest reaches within you heart , cracking thru your rib bones and organs just to tell the world a little piece of the puzzle ,
That
Is
You
...
#art
#emotions
#identity
#inspirational
#suffering
140 reads
3 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 9:11am
1st Nov 2024 9:11am
The Light
I am the dark
You are the light
A flame, a spark
A spark ignites
Shine like a star
A torch, a beacon
Near or far
Eternally seeking
You are the light
You made me see
You are the light
Believing in me
You are the light
A flame, a spark
A spark ignites
Shine like a star
A torch, a beacon
Near or far
Eternally seeking
You are the light
You made me see
You are the light
Believing in me
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
154 reads
16 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 2:10am
31st Oct 2024 2:10am
STRUGGLING JUST TO SURVIVE
Here we are still going through the process of trying, so desperately to survive in a place. THAT has been really changed by the situations, that has been proven to have nothing in it for us. 😞 Yet this is what your keep pushing, 😭 to the black men's who has the ability to think for thyself. Yet knowing what they want and need, to sustain the quality of life. For how do you expect to talk to grown people's, like children's and think there's no repercussion with real live consequences. For sure we as real men's have had enough of the senseless, propaganda with mindless mind...
#anger
#courage
#emotions
#motivational
#strength
85 reads
0 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 6:32pm
29th Oct 2024 6:32pm
I want your red lips
INSIDE ROARE
I want your red lips
When the stars are falling from the sky, I see it flashing outside the window.
I think of you, you are my star close.
I promise you blue from the sky and gray like your soul.
Blue, gray, white, whatever you want.
Red blood beats in your veins anyway.
I just want to see your red lips.
When we divide the luck, only half remains.
You fool, you fool, you think
that when you trust someone, you rub salt in the wound
aaaaaa aaaaaa salt.
Blue, gray, white, whatever you want. ...
I want your red lips
When the stars are falling from the sky, I see it flashing outside the window.
I think of you, you are my star close.
I promise you blue from the sky and gray like your soul.
Blue, gray, white, whatever you want.
Red blood beats in your veins anyway.
I just want to see your red lips.
When we divide the luck, only half remains.
You fool, you fool, you think
that when you trust someone, you rub salt in the wound
aaaaaa aaaaaa salt.
Blue, gray, white, whatever you want. ...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
140 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 9:25am
29th Oct 2024 9:25am
Visiting
It's a sad road
To travel
Visiting people
Who you once knew
From way back when
Its like deja vu
Its like
One never left
Watching the same shit
On the box
Bitching about life
Society
The price
To have a license
To live life this way
A feedback Loop
Like hamsters
On a wheel
The same arguments
Their perspectives
All glued in place
Nothing Different
All the same
Then comes
The strange feeling
Of Understanding
The Meaning
Of...
To travel
Visiting people
Who you once knew
From way back when
Its like deja vu
Its like
One never left
Watching the same shit
On the box
Bitching about life
Society
The price
To have a license
To live life this way
A feedback Loop
Like hamsters
On a wheel
The same arguments
Their perspectives
All glued in place
Nothing Different
All the same
Then comes
The strange feeling
Of Understanding
The Meaning
Of...
#bittersweet
#courage
#emotions
#sadness
#strength
85 reads
0 Comments
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