Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 10:20pm
28th Apr 2025 10:20pm
Silent Passage of Love
They say that in every day of ever moment, a connection is born out of love and desire, like a shadow that reflects off the walls, 🧱 shutting the doors, 🚪 cutting off any chance of escaping, from the deepness of the darkness. For sure sometimes some things, are forbidden and sometimes they aren't but yet, we find ourselves drawn, within the mist of lust of forbidden attraction. It's like the feel of a strong magnet 🧲 attractive to the very deepness of your soul. Yet still we don't pay attention, to all of the signs just thinking it's nothing, but fear of the darkness....
#dark
#emotions
#hope
#love
#TimeHeals
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Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 3:53pm
25th Apr 2025 3:53pm
Put It ToThe Test
I am, inherently,
an emotional restrictor
as was my father before me
and his before him
keeping strong emotions contained
particularly anger,
indignation, and resentment
lest by their expression
I drive away a loved one or friend
for fear of abandonment
is a life-long obsession
But is it not
the most empirical
of litmus tests,
to measure fraternal devotion
when one can express
a panoply of emotion
love, fear, joy, anger, resentment, or grief;
to list a principle few,
without suffering...
an emotional restrictor
as was my father before me
and his before him
keeping strong emotions contained
particularly anger,
indignation, and resentment
lest by their expression
I drive away a loved one or friend
for fear of abandonment
is a life-long obsession
But is it not
the most empirical
of litmus tests,
to measure fraternal devotion
when one can express
a panoply of emotion
love, fear, joy, anger, resentment, or grief;
to list a principle few,
without suffering...
#emotions
#family
#friendship #love
#friendship #love
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1 Comment
Sappho
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 9:20am
25th Apr 2025 9:20am
Ugly Duckling
Ugly Duckling
Life was perfect in that summer of 1994. After having passed the final exams at university, Tom and I took a flight to Las Vegas where we got married. During the following
two weeks we wanted to spend our honeymoon travelling across the United States.
Our money was tight, so we were glad to hear about a car rental in Omaha, called „Ugly Duckling“, which specialized in renting old vehicles at a small price. At a petrol station we asked how to get there. The friendly attendant explained that the car rental would be easy to find, „About 30 minutes down the...
Life was perfect in that summer of 1994. After having passed the final exams at university, Tom and I took a flight to Las Vegas where we got married. During the following
two weeks we wanted to spend our honeymoon travelling across the United States.
Our money was tight, so we were glad to hear about a car rental in Omaha, called „Ugly Duckling“, which specialized in renting old vehicles at a small price. At a petrol station we asked how to get there. The friendly attendant explained that the car rental would be easy to find, „About 30 minutes down the...
#courage
#emotions
#love
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 8:36pm
20th Apr 2025 8:36pm
Manfestion of thoughts
They say if you can teach one, just imagine teaching a million 👏 NOW that you are a student, I want you to focus your energy, with your ability to manifest your deepest thoughts. Just concentrate your thoughts, as you inhale and exhale slowly and methodically thinking, about what is your true spiritual subconsciousness. FOR sure you have the ability for manfestion of which, you desire to see and behold through your third eye. 👁️ What are you thinking about as you stand upon the still water, beneath your feet, what do you wish for in this hypnotic atmosphere, as this is...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#strength
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Hashman
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 1:49am
16th Apr 2025 1:49am
Not Good Enough
I wrote a poem
for you today
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
words of love
spilled onto paper
pain and joy
desire and fear
all for you,
but my love
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
I crumpled it up
and tossed it away.
for you today
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
words of love
spilled onto paper
pain and joy
desire and fear
all for you,
but my love
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
I crumpled it up
and tossed it away.
#emotions
#loneliness
#love
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 1:43pm
15th Apr 2025 1:43pm
Nature Speaks Poesy
Nature Speaks Poetry
Flavoured with the softest zephyr, soaked into the finest dew,, served in flowered cup of the time,
spring comes to life again, waddling in the fields, dancing with growing greens bending its shoulder
to nod assent to every willing poet.....i come entranced to bow silently to this celestial eternity,
try to pour my heart, my feelings like a liquid love into honeyed words.
i am enchanted, ever again and more inebriated,,, the perfume souvenirs come alive,
with every daisy blooming; with every beak chirping, with...
Flavoured with the softest zephyr, soaked into the finest dew,, served in flowered cup of the time,
spring comes to life again, waddling in the fields, dancing with growing greens bending its shoulder
to nod assent to every willing poet.....i come entranced to bow silently to this celestial eternity,
try to pour my heart, my feelings like a liquid love into honeyed words.
i am enchanted, ever again and more inebriated,,, the perfume souvenirs come alive,
with every daisy blooming; with every beak chirping, with...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness #motivational
#happiness #motivational
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 4:39am
7th Apr 2025 4:39am
In your hands I give to you
Here we are still not really truly understanding, that it's true that no one is sent, to you by chance or accident. For I give to you my love and support and affection. For I give to you my love and support and encouragement, just because we have a connection that we can build, together a special bond. For I give to you my commitment and show you my consistency and strength of my perseverance to you. For I give to you from my hands to yours my undying love with respect and honor and trust with happiness. For sure we have history of time well spent, just getting to know each other 💕...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#love
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Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 6:25pm
4th Apr 2025 6:25pm
THE OLD CHICKEN COUP
There she stood with tears rolling down her face and cheeks
Looking downward – such innocence – mild and meek
Her first trip to the slaughter house was no joke
Proved to be a one-sick hoax!
Slowly but surely – she told us the story
Leaving out NOT the gory!
“I was asked by dad
To join him fast
To pick out a chicken
“O Good Rid dens!
At last – no fret
I’m picking out my very first pet!"
Is what I thought
When my breath I caught!"
So, with joy in my heart,
And exuberantly joyful at the...
Looking downward – such innocence – mild and meek
Her first trip to the slaughter house was no joke
Proved to be a one-sick hoax!
Slowly but surely – she told us the story
Leaving out NOT the gory!
“I was asked by dad
To join him fast
To pick out a chicken
“O Good Rid dens!
At last – no fret
I’m picking out my very first pet!"
Is what I thought
When my breath I caught!"
So, with joy in my heart,
And exuberantly joyful at the...
#disappointment
#emotions
#regret
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Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 9:05pm
3rd Apr 2025 9:05pm
The Bus Driver’s Game Pt. 2
In the clatter of the bus, where laughter rides high,
She steers through the streets as daylight drifts by.
With hands on the wheel and a smile like a net,
Oh, my heart skips a beat—she plays hard to get.
Her favorite color? A subtle gray hue;
Like clouds in the sky when they’re not sure what’s due.
And daisies all wild, with their quirky display—
Crazy little blooms that could brighten her day.
I whispered sweet plans while she counted her fare,
“I’d buy you some gifts! Just give me a dare.”
But she...
She steers through the streets as daylight drifts by.
With hands on the wheel and a smile like a net,
Oh, my heart skips a beat—she plays hard to get.
Her favorite color? A subtle gray hue;
Like clouds in the sky when they’re not sure what’s due.
And daisies all wild, with their quirky display—
Crazy little blooms that could brighten her day.
I whispered sweet plans while she counted her fare,
“I’d buy you some gifts! Just give me a dare.”
But she...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#MyInspiration
#obsession
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Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 8:31pm
2nd Apr 2025 8:31pm
Like A Beacon
I thought you’d left a light on for me
in that place we built from thin air
and pieces of ourselves we hid
it stood as a monument to everything
I didn’t know I wanted
in that time it stilled
a grand design
a Van Gogh
using pain and suffering to
paint our version of “Starry Night”
turning it into the most gorgeous suffering
of fools in love
we emblazoned our names into the the bust of the mantle
with little hearts
like love sick teenagers
so...
in that place we built from thin air
and pieces of ourselves we hid
it stood as a monument to everything
I didn’t know I wanted
in that time it stilled
a grand design
a Van Gogh
using pain and suffering to
paint our version of “Starry Night”
turning it into the most gorgeous suffering
of fools in love
we emblazoned our names into the the bust of the mantle
with little hearts
like love sick teenagers
so...
#emotions
#hope
#TimeHeals
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1 Comment
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 12:42pm
31st Mar 2025 12:42pm
Burden
I just want freedom
From a place on the finest of lines
The scenario of irrational explanations
For every fucked up situation
Since I was born, these memories significantly
Impacted me tremendously
My peers have seemed to “unintentionally” mess with me mentally
But why am I I the only one who can see?
From a place on the finest of lines
The scenario of irrational explanations
For every fucked up situation
Since I was born, these memories significantly
Impacted me tremendously
My peers have seemed to “unintentionally” mess with me mentally
But why am I I the only one who can see?
#emotions
#frustration
#LifeStruggles #MovingOn
#LifeStruggles #MovingOn
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Sage_6_paths_light
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 7:29pm
29th Mar 2025 7:29pm
Eternal Love
Some people call it fate and some would call it destiny.
But what we have has much more depth I have searched eternity.
Each lifetime that we meet we have been threw heartache and deceat.
But this bond we hold is are love untold let's make a foundation that's concrete. Our eternal love will always hold my heart .
Just like davinci's life work our passion and love is like art.
I know you have doubts I had them too.
But A life with out you is not a life I wish to see threw.
No matter what we do our love is beyond...
But what we have has much more depth I have searched eternity.
Each lifetime that we meet we have been threw heartache and deceat.
But this bond we hold is are love untold let's make a foundation that's concrete. Our eternal love will always hold my heart .
Just like davinci's life work our passion and love is like art.
I know you have doubts I had them too.
But A life with out you is not a life I wish to see threw.
No matter what we do our love is beyond...
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#motivational
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