Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
AprylNovember
a. r. m.
a. r. m.
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:29am
Yesterday 1:29am
With a hint of sadness
With a hint of sadness.
When favorite moments.
Are shared with deeply.
The lost component.
Don't change the memory.
Remains important.
Won't ever leave you.
Resides in contentment.
As once a truth.
The one and only, you ever trusted.
Forgot your name, long past reckoned.
Now holds forever, time disrupted.
Can't erase, those favorite seconds.
As constant companion.
Your smile still binds.
With just a hint of sadness.
That love left behind.
ARM
When favorite moments.
Are shared with deeply.
The lost component.
Don't change the memory.
Remains important.
Won't ever leave you.
Resides in contentment.
As once a truth.
The one and only, you ever trusted.
Forgot your name, long past reckoned.
Now holds forever, time disrupted.
Can't erase, those favorite seconds.
As constant companion.
Your smile still binds.
With just a hint of sadness.
That love left behind.
ARM
#emotions
#love
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frankiefearless
frankieeeee
frankieeeee
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 2:54pm
7th Mar 2025 2:54pm
the big day
tomorrow is weird for me; I've always wanted to be celebrated, like hello, its me and MY day. but between spring break and unintentional friends, it was usually only an important day if I made it important. so two years ago, I decided to properly celebrate myself. on my day, I'd only do stuff for me.
that first year I spent three weeks completing a childhood goal of mine, gallivanting around Europe like I saw in the movies growing up.
and last year, I spent three days, the day before and after, bouncing around towns only doing things that made me happy.
...
that first year I spent three weeks completing a childhood goal of mine, gallivanting around Europe like I saw in the movies growing up.
and last year, I spent three days, the day before and after, bouncing around towns only doing things that made me happy.
...
#emotions
#myself
#SelfReflection
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NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 1:05am
5th Mar 2025 1:05am
Missing pieces
I miss you..
I miss the way that you lit the fire inside of me..
I miss the excitement that I feel when my eyes are about to look inside of yours..
I miss the way you dance with me in the house..
I miss how I could talk to you about anything for hours..
I miss how I'm a better me with you..
I miss the way that my hand fit inside of yours..
I miss the way your heart danced with mine..
I miss how you intoxicate me by the way that you speak..
I miss the way you would come up behind me when I was washing dishes..
I miss the way your lips felt...
I miss the way that you lit the fire inside of me..
I miss the excitement that I feel when my eyes are about to look inside of yours..
I miss the way you dance with me in the house..
I miss how I could talk to you about anything for hours..
I miss how I'm a better me with you..
I miss the way that my hand fit inside of yours..
I miss the way your heart danced with mine..
I miss how you intoxicate me by the way that you speak..
I miss the way you would come up behind me when I was washing dishes..
I miss the way your lips felt...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
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2 Comments
NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 3:40am
4th Mar 2025 3:40am
Just My Imagination
#emotions
#love
#redemption #TimeHeals
#redemption #TimeHeals
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Duice
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 00:08am
27th Feb 2025 00:08am
Alpha Male
Otherworldly lucid envisioned
insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
#emotions
#respect
#responsibility
#sacrifice
#strength
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Pete_25
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 9:28am
21st Feb 2025 9:28am
Embrace
We live, we die
Survive, fly high
We breathe, commence
Between, we sense
We fight, we win
Our rights within
We see the grace
Let's all embrace
Survive, fly high
We breathe, commence
Between, we sense
We fight, we win
Our rights within
We see the grace
Let's all embrace
#emotions
#inspirational
#love #respect
#love #respect
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 6:00pm
20th Feb 2025 6:00pm
Waking Up
What if all this misery.
Was as simple.
As getting the dose.
Right.
I'd be aghast at the stupidity of it.
If it were true that.
These doldrums.
I keep wallowing in.
Were just a balance of
Neurochemicals.
In my brain.
That I never got.
Quite right.
Maybe the despair was less poignant.
Less precise.
Than an equal measure.
Of a bitter pill.
Where does my inspiration go.
For these bleak little snapshots.
Of my private life.
These odes to anihilation?
I might have...
Was as simple.
As getting the dose.
Right.
I'd be aghast at the stupidity of it.
If it were true that.
These doldrums.
I keep wallowing in.
Were just a balance of
Neurochemicals.
In my brain.
That I never got.
Quite right.
Maybe the despair was less poignant.
Less precise.
Than an equal measure.
Of a bitter pill.
Where does my inspiration go.
For these bleak little snapshots.
Of my private life.
These odes to anihilation?
I might have...
#emotions
#happiness
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 5:13pm
20th Feb 2025 5:13pm
Wanderers on the Edge
Fingertip reaches—glass-fractured sky,
but the world keeps turning, indifferent, blind.
We watch, we wait, we sift through the ashes—
searching for warmth in a fire long gone.
Ghosts of wanting drift through the ebb,
feet sinking in time’s marrow-thick river.
Clawing at the hilltop, slipping, gasping—
but do we climb or just fall slower?
Love hums then shatters,
echoes down corridors we dare not tread.
The oaken river swallows its dead,
birds fall southward, wings brittle with regret.
Winter comes for all—darkness...
but the world keeps turning, indifferent, blind.
We watch, we wait, we sift through the ashes—
searching for warmth in a fire long gone.
Ghosts of wanting drift through the ebb,
feet sinking in time’s marrow-thick river.
Clawing at the hilltop, slipping, gasping—
but do we climb or just fall slower?
Love hums then shatters,
echoes down corridors we dare not tread.
The oaken river swallows its dead,
birds fall southward, wings brittle with regret.
Winter comes for all—darkness...
#emotions
#LifeStruggles
#love
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 12:07pm
19th Feb 2025 12:07pm
Lazy Day ....
Today I want to waste it away
In the cold light of the day
Why roll out of bed for office strife
When I could just easily go on strike?
I will make that call
Not well at all!
Such is modern life
I want to laze away the day
Listen to songs that feed the soul
Nothing too hard -
Just something that captures
And takes hold
Coffee sounds good like it should
A full cup I'll be drinking
As you would
Netflix I'll stream while I dream
Imagining now a beautiful scene ...
In the cold light of the day
Why roll out of bed for office strife
When I could just easily go on strike?
I will make that call
Not well at all!
Such is modern life
I want to laze away the day
Listen to songs that feed the soul
Nothing too hard -
Just something that captures
And takes hold
Coffee sounds good like it should
A full cup I'll be drinking
As you would
Netflix I'll stream while I dream
Imagining now a beautiful scene ...
#emotions
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10 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 2:50pm
15th Feb 2025 2:50pm
Teehee!
When you see people unhappy,
Because you didn't fall for their tricks.
And laugh nonstop,
Because their faces are hilarious.
When you see them moping around,
Because they don't realize what you did.
You stared that gun down,
And turned it back at those kids.
When people see you happy,
For killing all those pricks,
Will they finally appreciate,
This suspenseful drama skit?
I'm the class act,
Distracting you from all the shit.
Tormenting all the teachers,
Because they're...
Because you didn't fall for their tricks.
And laugh nonstop,
Because their faces are hilarious.
When you see them moping around,
Because they don't realize what you did.
You stared that gun down,
And turned it back at those kids.
When people see you happy,
For killing all those pricks,
Will they finally appreciate,
This suspenseful drama skit?
I'm the class act,
Distracting you from all the shit.
Tormenting all the teachers,
Because they're...
#emotions
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2 Comments
Soulesslywhole
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 8:40am
13th Feb 2025 8:40am
The Whispering Heart!!
Art is the flow of the cosmic energy!!!
Creativity is the celebration of the celestial soul!!
Self expression is the highest devotion to the almighty!!!
Grace of pure intention is the nectar of immortality!!!
We walk the path of an infinite loop of self-realization....
Till we realize the ultimate truth of all creation!!!
Where death is a mere concept for the soul to transcend into the sacred dimension!!
Creativity is the celebration of the celestial soul!!
Self expression is the highest devotion to the almighty!!!
Grace of pure intention is the nectar of immortality!!!
We walk the path of an infinite loop of self-realization....
Till we realize the ultimate truth of all creation!!!
Where death is a mere concept for the soul to transcend into the sacred dimension!!
#emotions
#gratitude
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Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 6:50pm
7th Feb 2025 6:50pm
Some are watching
INSIDE ROARE
Some are watching
You don't know ... shh
Who watches your steps,
You don't know ... shh
Who counts the number of smiles.
You don't know ... shh
Who counts your tears.
You don't know who shares your house.
Who looks into your windows,
Who suits a black coat.
Who has tears in their eyes,
....it's probably me.
Who looks into your windows,
....it's probably me.
You don't know ... shh
Who wakes up with you.
You don't know ... shh
Who goes to bed with you.
You don't know ......
Some are watching
You don't know ... shh
Who watches your steps,
You don't know ... shh
Who counts the number of smiles.
You don't know ... shh
Who counts your tears.
You don't know who shares your house.
Who looks into your windows,
Who suits a black coat.
Who has tears in their eyes,
....it's probably me.
Who looks into your windows,
....it's probably me.
You don't know ... shh
Who wakes up with you.
You don't know ... shh
Who goes to bed with you.
You don't know ......
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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