Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Today 1:28pm
Today 1:28pm
Day Unschedualed
Is this a good one?
where all the roses bloom
skies are blue, and you pledge your feelings are true?
Is it a broody and contrary day?
never happy with this and that
When I say up, you say, is that a fact?
Is it going to be anger?
unleash and unabashed
Total destruction is your function
and in its wake, you leave bone and ash
Is it regret?
Of words and actions that were never meant to happen
Still, it happened
Shit, it really happened
The day I give to you
quiet and...
where all the roses bloom
skies are blue, and you pledge your feelings are true?
Is it a broody and contrary day?
never happy with this and that
When I say up, you say, is that a fact?
Is it going to be anger?
unleash and unabashed
Total destruction is your function
and in its wake, you leave bone and ash
Is it regret?
Of words and actions that were never meant to happen
Still, it happened
Shit, it really happened
The day I give to you
quiet and...
#dark
#emotions
#loneliness
52 reads
11 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 8:35pm
8th Jan 2025 8:35pm
Reflection of Tears
Crying into the ocean, I lose my way,
To add to the sea, where sorrow will stay.
To see the reflection of me dissolve,
I cry as the waves around me revolve.
To see, then fall, and splash into the tide,
Where tears and the water forever collide.
I cried into a river, where currents collide,
To see my tear just washed away.
On the bank, I did stand by the rushing tide,
My tears fell to the land, destined to stay.
The river consumed all I could resolve,
My cries to its waters did slowly dissolve.
I cried in a puddle, where...
To add to the sea, where sorrow will stay.
To see the reflection of me dissolve,
I cry as the waves around me revolve.
To see, then fall, and splash into the tide,
Where tears and the water forever collide.
I cried into a river, where currents collide,
To see my tear just washed away.
On the bank, I did stand by the rushing tide,
My tears fell to the land, destined to stay.
The river consumed all I could resolve,
My cries to its waters did slowly dissolve.
I cried in a puddle, where...
#emotions
#LifeStruggles
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0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 3:04pm
8th Jan 2025 3:04pm
My Muse of Poetry
Not all the worlds belong to me
Not all the words set me free
What the heart loves
is of will
I just free some words
to confine its spill.
****
A time, my words
on my papers sashaying
the shape to me alluring
the tone of their steps
I hear
as they are dancing
the music they are following
the soul, in a trance, just listens
without interfering.
****
A time, along with my Muse
we keep to each other
our hearts baring
secrets sharing
silently, knowingly connecting.. ...
Not all the words set me free
What the heart loves
is of will
I just free some words
to confine its spill.
****
A time, my words
on my papers sashaying
the shape to me alluring
the tone of their steps
I hear
as they are dancing
the music they are following
the soul, in a trance, just listens
without interfering.
****
A time, along with my Muse
we keep to each other
our hearts baring
secrets sharing
silently, knowingly connecting.. ...
#admiration
#emotions
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
61 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
Winter Glow
Where the pathway ends,
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
37 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 9:13pm
7th Jan 2025 9:13pm
Online Only
I did not see it coming
Your arrival was like a feather floating on the breeze
A low hum of your name
Then it started to nag at me
I looked
Why did I look?
Hooked on words
Your words ...
I raged and condemned
Could not let them see
They would all see
I am bending
Breaking
I will tell…..
No, I will demand
Cease and desist!
I'M NOT READY!
Secretly, I have goals
Goals with cobwebs
But they are my goals
What...
Your arrival was like a feather floating on the breeze
A low hum of your name
Then it started to nag at me
I looked
Why did I look?
Hooked on words
Your words ...
I raged and condemned
Could not let them see
They would all see
I am bending
Breaking
I will tell…..
No, I will demand
Cease and desist!
I'M NOT READY!
Secretly, I have goals
Goals with cobwebs
But they are my goals
What...
#emotions
86 reads
9 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 8:59pm
6th Jan 2025 8:59pm
PINK JULLIEN
PINK JULLIEN
Inside Roare
I try to read from your gray eyes
where your blue has gone.
Why are you so ordinary, why have you no color.
The blue from under your eyelashes always shone,
pink face.
Why is everything suddenly dark,
gray like a wall.
Jullien you feel that I can endure,
Jullien you see what I will endure.
Your cold gaze, icy palms.
Jullien, I want to breathe on them.
And breathe. And live.
Pull you out of the cobwebs and say I love you.
Look into your eyes and get your blue.
And...
Inside Roare
I try to read from your gray eyes
where your blue has gone.
Why are you so ordinary, why have you no color.
The blue from under your eyelashes always shone,
pink face.
Why is everything suddenly dark,
gray like a wall.
Jullien you feel that I can endure,
Jullien you see what I will endure.
Your cold gaze, icy palms.
Jullien, I want to breathe on them.
And breathe. And live.
Pull you out of the cobwebs and say I love you.
Look into your eyes and get your blue.
And...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
90 reads
0 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 8:41am
6th Jan 2025 8:41am
Melancholy's secret
it's a bad day
my ache is talking to my soul
grey feelings lost in the shuffle
rise to the surface demanding attention
my sorrow speaks first
she can't reconcile hurt feelings inside me
girl, you have to deal with this
sorrow follows behind her full of emotion, tears in her eyes
they both carry the weight of forgotten need
a desire to be loved wholly without conditions
without expensive emotional price tags, my soul can't afford
with my best not always being enough
I sometimes give up
disconnecting from self...
my ache is talking to my soul
grey feelings lost in the shuffle
rise to the surface demanding attention
my sorrow speaks first
she can't reconcile hurt feelings inside me
girl, you have to deal with this
sorrow follows behind her full of emotion, tears in her eyes
they both carry the weight of forgotten need
a desire to be loved wholly without conditions
without expensive emotional price tags, my soul can't afford
with my best not always being enough
I sometimes give up
disconnecting from self...
#emotions
#love
73 reads
2 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 2:29am
4th Jan 2025 2:29am
No Tears
just a whisper
just a thought
just one dance
one breath
one smile
one kiss
just a touch
one word
one laugh
just your scent
your time
one look
one love
one morning
one you
just a whisper
just a thought
just one dance
one breath
one smile
one kiss
just a touch
one word
one laugh
just your scent
your time
one look
one love
one morning
one you
just a whisper
#emotions
#hope
#love
75 reads
4 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 9:44pm
3rd Jan 2025 9:44pm
ice heart
INSIDE ROARE
ice heart
What you think about, what you dream,
what you believe, that is not a dream.
What you live for, let it not be a dream.
Believe that life is different.
You see the sky blue,
or full of stars.
The earth soaked in blood
that lies at your feet.
Forget about the sinful soul,
in your chest a foreign heart beats.
aaaaa
Heartless aaaa, like an ice queen,
aaaaa
look at who you have hurt,
perhaps a hundred years behind ice bars.
aaaaa
Even if you live alone,
to...
ice heart
What you think about, what you dream,
what you believe, that is not a dream.
What you live for, let it not be a dream.
Believe that life is different.
You see the sky blue,
or full of stars.
The earth soaked in blood
that lies at your feet.
Forget about the sinful soul,
in your chest a foreign heart beats.
aaaaa
Heartless aaaa, like an ice queen,
aaaaa
look at who you have hurt,
perhaps a hundred years behind ice bars.
aaaaa
Even if you live alone,
to...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
56 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
Stay
Rest your weary feet
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
67 reads
12 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 3:19pm
1st Jan 2025 3:19pm
Winter In Bloom
Morning whispers dissolved
Drizzle murmurs now disappear
Sprinkled diamonds reflected,
Glimmering in the atmosphere
Awaken the lonely stroller
Reviving the poetry flair
Rising in the vernal winter
Cast away all my despair
I yearned for a potion
To fuel my poetic dearth
That i find in the mountain
The heaven's eternal mirth
On the trail there are marks
Left behind at early dawn
The herds traveled in silence
Before even the moon is gone
The healthy herbs are those ...
Drizzle murmurs now disappear
Sprinkled diamonds reflected,
Glimmering in the atmosphere
Awaken the lonely stroller
Reviving the poetry flair
Rising in the vernal winter
Cast away all my despair
I yearned for a potion
To fuel my poetic dearth
That i find in the mountain
The heaven's eternal mirth
On the trail there are marks
Left behind at early dawn
The herds traveled in silence
Before even the moon is gone
The healthy herbs are those ...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#nature
72 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
INSIDE looking OUTSIDE
We will have challenges that will happen, in a moment notice that will affect, the very deepness of the heart and spiritual soul. Yet now we will be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of our soul. 🙏 For sure as we exchange thoughts on this subject of being alone, in peace and tranquility, with the very closeness. God's creation as our view looking at the visions of the beauty that God has created. 🙏 But yet we begin to appreciate what he has done 👍 for sure sitting here alone watching the rays, of the golden season sun over the...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#redemption
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2 Comments
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