Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 3:21pm
20th Nov 2024 3:21pm
From A Man From Earth
From Man To Mankind
I don't have wrath to vent on my foe
Arrogance and ignorance are shame i know
No one has to swell with what they own
Only poor spirits can feel down and low
My name is man, i am eternal god
Eternity, is for the Only one God
But, the time i am granted on earth
Is for good doing, for eternal Lord
Let me not pretend i am the master of all
Death and sickness make me cry and crawl
They make feel little, i kneel with fear and awe
Still am i poorly armed, before the death toll
But Nature has taught...
I don't have wrath to vent on my foe
Arrogance and ignorance are shame i know
No one has to swell with what they own
Only poor spirits can feel down and low
My name is man, i am eternal god
Eternity, is for the Only one God
But, the time i am granted on earth
Is for good doing, for eternal Lord
Let me not pretend i am the master of all
Death and sickness make me cry and crawl
They make feel little, i kneel with fear and awe
Still am i poorly armed, before the death toll
But Nature has taught...
#emotions
#morality
#philosophical
#religion
#spiritual
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 7:06pm
18th Nov 2024 7:06pm
Smoke In A Flower Field
write me a poem
that i know you care
for, to give away your word
i think you'll never dare
make me hear your whisper
sense a woman's flair
who recedes like the ebb
from a thirsty sand.
play me a tune
between your closed lips
a perfume aria
floating from tulips
the world is void of romance
haunted with metal needs
abstract on their thoughts
whistling thru' empty reeds
Come pluck a chord.
from my fragile heart
it's what i can afford
i' m poorly...
that i know you care
for, to give away your word
i think you'll never dare
make me hear your whisper
sense a woman's flair
who recedes like the ebb
from a thirsty sand.
play me a tune
between your closed lips
a perfume aria
floating from tulips
the world is void of romance
haunted with metal needs
abstract on their thoughts
whistling thru' empty reeds
Come pluck a chord.
from my fragile heart
it's what i can afford
i' m poorly...
#courage
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational
#strength
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2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 2:39am
18th Nov 2024 2:39am
DO YOU REMEMBER
Do you really remember how it use to be, when we could just listen to real soul music, 🎶 of our lives. For sure there were songs that were set up, for the betterment of life and love and happiness. Sometimes there were songs, that carried us to be close than close, like when we have a honest moment of misunderstanding. There was songs that rap about some serious moments in relationships, to cost us to become separate from one another in our own lives. For sure there were songs, that recommended that we stayed together, even when things were going 😞 bad due to being unfaithful...
#emotions
#happiness
#love
#motivational
#respect
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stormiwyndz
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 4:45pm
16th Nov 2024 4:45pm
American Dream
You have no ambition
You who toil your life
Answering calls of the wealthy
Abuse your reward for service
You do not reach for greatness
Taking each day one at a time
Paying bills, minding children
Dissatisfaction the pay you receive
Don't you ever just want more?
Stretching each check to the brink
Despairing over waste
Irked when ends don't meet
No.
You're content where you are
Satisfaction in well spent coin
Joy in a hot meal served
Comfort in a full night's sleep
If one stops to think
If one just...
You who toil your life
Answering calls of the wealthy
Abuse your reward for service
You do not reach for greatness
Taking each day one at a time
Paying bills, minding children
Dissatisfaction the pay you receive
Don't you ever just want more?
Stretching each check to the brink
Despairing over waste
Irked when ends don't meet
No.
You're content where you are
Satisfaction in well spent coin
Joy in a hot meal served
Comfort in a full night's sleep
If one stops to think
If one just...
#apathy
#bittersweet
#emotions
#LifeCycle
#strength
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 3:38pm
16th Nov 2024 3:38pm
Ghost in the deep forest
Early morning walk
A misty path
The river sleeping
The time i pass
The forest a legend
A book of past
An eerie aura
A spell was cast
The earth was mild
To stir the dust
I heard a whisper
A tune in the hush
Pan was hidden
A foggy ghost
The tune echoed
The sparkling moss
As the shine was peeping
flickering between the trunks
A first poetic chapter
in Nature's charm
A misty path
The river sleeping
The time i pass
The forest a legend
A book of past
An eerie aura
A spell was cast
The earth was mild
To stir the dust
I heard a whisper
A tune in the hush
Pan was hidden
A foggy ghost
The tune echoed
The sparkling moss
As the shine was peeping
flickering between the trunks
A first poetic chapter
in Nature's charm
#admiration
#emotions
#fairies
#ghosts
#motivational
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Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:47pm
14th Nov 2024 9:47pm
I have it in me
INSIDE ROAR
I have it in me
Inspiration - The Chemical Brothers - The Test _ Hard test
I don't hear the screams of others
I don't notice who is kicking me.
I don't feel blows or blows
I can't feel someone stepping on me.
I don't feel, I don't feel, I don't feel
I don't notice.
Suddenly there's a flash in my eyes
I fly like an eagle over the landscape.
fuuuuuuu
I feel everything growing
green, I perceive.
Suddenly there's a flash in my eyes
I fly like an eagle over the landscape. ...
I have it in me
Inspiration - The Chemical Brothers - The Test _ Hard test
I don't hear the screams of others
I don't notice who is kicking me.
I don't feel blows or blows
I can't feel someone stepping on me.
I don't feel, I don't feel, I don't feel
I don't notice.
Suddenly there's a flash in my eyes
I fly like an eagle over the landscape.
fuuuuuuu
I feel everything growing
green, I perceive.
Suddenly there's a flash in my eyes
I fly like an eagle over the landscape. ...
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
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moon_bather
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 4:30am
14th Nov 2024 4:30am
A Friendly Euphoria
I dream about this world in my mind where you all love me and I love you as well.
We don’t judge, we don’t discriminate. We just live and we love all the same.
A beautiful place. No monsters, exorcised all demons. Stood in our place.
We love, don’t begrudge. We just live. We just live. And love all the same.
We don’t judge, we don’t discriminate. We just live and we love all the same.
A beautiful place. No monsters, exorcised all demons. Stood in our place.
We love, don’t begrudge. We just live. We just live. And love all the same.
#emotions
#happiness
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 9:29pm
11th Nov 2024 9:29pm
The Midnight Marauder
In midnight’s quiet hour, she lies at rest, body aching unable to sleep, the air musky with desire, Cool sheets wrapped around her breast, like a snake slithering around her, coiling her and wrapping her nakedness, she moves slowly, sensually feeling the soft fabric tickle her skin drifting in and out of sleep.
The room is still, no breeze to stir, quiet enough to hear the clock beating , tick tock tick tock, O how she loves the sound of a big clock beating, but unaware something wicked draws to her.
A daring thief comes through her window, his hunger for her...
The room is still, no breeze to stir, quiet enough to hear the clock beating , tick tock tick tock, O how she loves the sound of a big clock beating, but unaware something wicked draws to her.
A daring thief comes through her window, his hunger for her...
#bittersweet
#confusion
#courage
#emotions
#shame
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Pete_25
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 8:32am
10th Nov 2024 8:32am
This Star
I'll tender love your heartaches
You'll never be denied
Open up the floodgates
Our love twined, unified
Brokenhearted sad times
I will see you through
This star is a new sign
Of the love I hold for you
You'll never be denied
Open up the floodgates
Our love twined, unified
Brokenhearted sad times
I will see you through
This star is a new sign
Of the love I hold for you
#emotions
#hope
#love
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11 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 3:18am
10th Nov 2024 3:18am
Simply
I'm going to make this as simple, as simple as it can be.
I've loved you since we were kids and still now at forty-three.
What more can I say, other than, I'd like you to be here with me.
I've loved you since we were kids and still now at forty-three.
What more can I say, other than, I'd like you to be here with me.
#breakup
#emotions
#FallingInLove
#love
#relationships
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 4:18pm
8th Nov 2024 4:18pm
All The Darkness Fades Into Light
what shall i compose about the darkness
when the truth is bright like the sun
and spend a life in reasonless sadness*
while i can rejoice in smiles and fun.
do i have to complain of my own stress
isn't it empathic to keep it unsaid ?!
In self resilience, stoic, i progress
To rebuild a broken bone instead
i have to burn in the bright sunshine
as the truth lights my abyssal depths
my innerness swallows the heart that pines
grieving; is never a spiritual wealth
i will light a...
when the truth is bright like the sun
and spend a life in reasonless sadness*
while i can rejoice in smiles and fun.
do i have to complain of my own stress
isn't it empathic to keep it unsaid ?!
In self resilience, stoic, i progress
To rebuild a broken bone instead
i have to burn in the bright sunshine
as the truth lights my abyssal depths
my innerness swallows the heart that pines
grieving; is never a spiritual wealth
i will light a...
#emotions
#hope
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
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6 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 8:54am
8th Nov 2024 8:54am
Beyond
I'll take you to beyond
Arc this golden sphere
Two hearts beat along
Your fears will disappear
Interwoven dust
Sprinkle all around
In my love, you'll trust
Your feet won't touch the ground
Arc this golden sphere
Two hearts beat along
Your fears will disappear
Interwoven dust
Sprinkle all around
In my love, you'll trust
Your feet won't touch the ground
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
121 reads
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