Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 9:12pm
2nd Dec 2024 9:12pm
A little star shines
Inside Roare
A little star shines
A spade sank into the daisies.
Only two sturdy trees cast shadows, singing softly.
About the fact that a little star cannot be seen when it disappears from the sky.
Only the glitter remains on the hand.
The one who saw her and stroked her golden hair.
The one who dared to call her by name, led her by the hand.
As the spade sank into the ribs,
His downcast eyes cast a black shadow, no one sings.
Everything that shone quickly went out, it's all gone.
Yet the star shines.
...
A little star shines
A spade sank into the daisies.
Only two sturdy trees cast shadows, singing softly.
About the fact that a little star cannot be seen when it disappears from the sky.
Only the glitter remains on the hand.
The one who saw her and stroked her golden hair.
The one who dared to call her by name, led her by the hand.
As the spade sank into the ribs,
His downcast eyes cast a black shadow, no one sings.
Everything that shone quickly went out, it's all gone.
Yet the star shines.
...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
92 reads
0 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 2:12pm
1st Dec 2024 2:12pm
The Human Tapestry
Sinking in a tapestry of emotions,
Lying on its darkest side,
Not knowing what will happen,
I’m overwhelmed and it feels like death.
Longing for the scent of a woman,
Lonely, seeking synergy,
My life feels like a hollow chase,
Affection always slips away.
Primordial instincts are so wild,
It’s fire never goes away,
Untamed but yearning to stay,
Flowing like rivers through my veins.
Illusioned by my restless mind,
Conflicted inside, always asking questions,
Like a time bomb, the clock is ticking, ...
Lying on its darkest side,
Not knowing what will happen,
I’m overwhelmed and it feels like death.
Longing for the scent of a woman,
Lonely, seeking synergy,
My life feels like a hollow chase,
Affection always slips away.
Primordial instincts are so wild,
It’s fire never goes away,
Untamed but yearning to stay,
Flowing like rivers through my veins.
Illusioned by my restless mind,
Conflicted inside, always asking questions,
Like a time bomb, the clock is ticking, ...
#admiration
#emotions
#love #strength
#love #strength
82 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 9:25am
29th Nov 2024 9:25am
Acclaim
Learn from every lesson
Overcome your fears
Life's a daily blessing
Wipe away those tears
Face the lonely silence
Puff your chest, be bold
Show them your defiance
Express your best, bestowed
Claim the brightest flame
Trust in you, forsee
Rise to the acclaim
Faith's eternal key
Overcome your fears
Life's a daily blessing
Wipe away those tears
Face the lonely silence
Puff your chest, be bold
Show them your defiance
Express your best, bestowed
Claim the brightest flame
Trust in you, forsee
Rise to the acclaim
Faith's eternal key
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational
#love
#strength
172 reads
14 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 11:25pm
28th Nov 2024 11:25pm
A Message To My Fans
To all my fans
And my haters
Do not be alarmed
If you do not see my writings anymore
I will be going to a nicer place
A more peaceful paradise
A place where I will no longer need to write
To express my emotions
My feelings
I'm following my dreams
And leaving here
Heading to a world
Where the melancholy disappears
And is replaced with an orchestra
Of nature singing harmoniously
A lullaby to help me find peace
And sleep with no stress
And no concerns
Thank you for your support
Thank...
And my haters
Do not be alarmed
If you do not see my writings anymore
I will be going to a nicer place
A more peaceful paradise
A place where I will no longer need to write
To express my emotions
My feelings
I'm following my dreams
And leaving here
Heading to a world
Where the melancholy disappears
And is replaced with an orchestra
Of nature singing harmoniously
A lullaby to help me find peace
And sleep with no stress
And no concerns
Thank you for your support
Thank...
#emotions
82 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 4:57pm
28th Nov 2024 4:57pm
Nature, Beauty and Ink
It is wise to dive headlong into the wild, close the blind eyes and open the clear mind, its wise to rise from the cluttered mind, infested with recycled cliches and mindset and outworn rotten habits..
..
Rise and stretch the feet that are turned frozen inside a cold seat, a mechanical heat, won't ever warm the cold heart, sun is your hearth, lounge in the open airs and gather as much as you can. and fill the empty inside with heaven's breath...
While time is wide and the plains get greener and flat, decked with poppies and daffodils and daisies..and so many fragrant...
..
Rise and stretch the feet that are turned frozen inside a cold seat, a mechanical heat, won't ever warm the cold heart, sun is your hearth, lounge in the open airs and gather as much as you can. and fill the empty inside with heaven's breath...
While time is wide and the plains get greener and flat, decked with poppies and daffodils and daisies..and so many fragrant...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#religion
90 reads
2 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 3:40pm
28th Nov 2024 3:40pm
Written in the Stars
Lying on a soft fragrant meadow
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
#admiration
#emotions
#motivational
108 reads
2 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 9:50am
27th Nov 2024 9:50am
Beneath The Stars
Laying there
In all your glory
Beneath the stars
We'll share our story
Soul's laid bare
Let's kiss the night
Love declares, as
Hearts take flight
In all your glory
Beneath the stars
We'll share our story
Soul's laid bare
Let's kiss the night
Love declares, as
Hearts take flight
#emotions
#love
189 reads
16 Comments
Elusive
Phillip Knox
Phillip Knox
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 3:21am
27th Nov 2024 3:21am
Let Me Introduce Myself
Let me introduce myself
as you may have heard rumors
I was wondering if I could help
expand your mind with no hubris.
You have seen me before
your form conveyed attraction
pressing against me, the storm
I could feel your reaction.
Call me the love on your mind
the sensation between your thighs
I can take you to places
and make your body rise.
Let me introduce myself
and make my intentions clear
I want everything with you
your pain, your fears.
The rumors? Are desperate lies ...
as you may have heard rumors
I was wondering if I could help
expand your mind with no hubris.
You have seen me before
your form conveyed attraction
pressing against me, the storm
I could feel your reaction.
Call me the love on your mind
the sensation between your thighs
I can take you to places
and make your body rise.
Let me introduce myself
and make my intentions clear
I want everything with you
your pain, your fears.
The rumors? Are desperate lies ...
#emotions
#happiness
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
277 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 00:32am
26th Nov 2024 00:32am
My Platonic Lover
I never planned on meeting you
but there you are
sitting with a smile and not a clue
A hello started it all off
One moment led to another.
We became so close
No one would ever discover
The beginning of my platonic lover
You had someone, and so do I
What we both feel we cannot deny
You could feel the energy
Between you and me
But we keep this all inside
Physically, we do not touch.
A caressed word ignites a fire between us
Maybe one day and not in a dream
My platonic lover and I...
but there you are
sitting with a smile and not a clue
A hello started it all off
One moment led to another.
We became so close
No one would ever discover
The beginning of my platonic lover
You had someone, and so do I
What we both feel we cannot deny
You could feel the energy
Between you and me
But we keep this all inside
Physically, we do not touch.
A caressed word ignites a fire between us
Maybe one day and not in a dream
My platonic lover and I...
#emotions
#love
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
278 reads
30 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 11:25am
25th Nov 2024 11:25am
Nature is my Creed
Nature Is My Creed
The blue sky above
The green forest below
The cold in the cove
The breeze quite mellow
'Tis Summer's gentle touch
The sun's warm caress
To stay as long as much
To push away the stress
'Tis the spirit of heaven
The beauty that impress
All the bliss we are given
Mortals care much less
The genuine words written
Nature's books are best
With fair charm i' m smitten
Eternal beauty, my quest
Beneath a pine...
The blue sky above
The green forest below
The cold in the cove
The breeze quite mellow
'Tis Summer's gentle touch
The sun's warm caress
To stay as long as much
To push away the stress
'Tis the spirit of heaven
The beauty that impress
All the bliss we are given
Mortals care much less
The genuine words written
Nature's books are best
With fair charm i' m smitten
Eternal beauty, my quest
Beneath a pine...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#kindness
#motivational
66 reads
4 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 10:48am
25th Nov 2024 10:48am
Philip Schofield and Rock Hudson were happily gay players! So why shouldn't Edward Windsor also be?
By Stanley Collymore
A state of affairs known about,
fully acknowledged and also
specifically, supported by
their respective wives. So why then shouldn't Sophie Rhys Jones effectively do the same,
if personally this gay tolerance assured her
the lifestyle, which she discernibly wanted
and still clearly opulently has? Undeniably however what actually had me in stitches
of very boisterous laughter, was the Daily
Mail's hack rather specifically describing
Sophie's Windsor monarichal and...
A state of affairs known about,
fully acknowledged and also
specifically, supported by
their respective wives. So why then shouldn't Sophie Rhys Jones effectively do the same,
if personally this gay tolerance assured her
the lifestyle, which she discernibly wanted
and still clearly opulently has? Undeniably however what actually had me in stitches
of very boisterous laughter, was the Daily
Mail's hack rather specifically describing
Sophie's Windsor monarichal and...
#emotions
#happiness
#kindness
#love
#respect
58 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 4:37am
25th Nov 2024 4:37am
Phosphorus
Phosphorus
You are phosphorus in me
You are the vital nutrient
All that I need is your chemistry in me
I evolve from a microbe on your Heavenly Body
You are phosphorus in me
You are the vital nutrient
All that I need is your chemistry in me
I evolve from a microbe on your Heavenly Body
#emotions
#inspirational
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
116 reads
4 Comments
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