Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 2:19am
29th Oct 2024 2:19am
Opposites Dependent
I've seen the darkness
And I've seen the light
Hidden in lifes secrets
Truth reveals our insight
I've experienced love
And the heartache of pain
A range of emotions
Driving me insane
You can't have one
Without the other
Opposites dependent
On one another
A colorful prism
Of spectacular rainbows
Darkness hides within
The absence of shadows
Money in the bank
Could mean wealth
But poverty in our souls
Leads to our unhealth
We live our life
Until we confront death ...
And I've seen the light
Hidden in lifes secrets
Truth reveals our insight
I've experienced love
And the heartache of pain
A range of emotions
Driving me insane
You can't have one
Without the other
Opposites dependent
On one another
A colorful prism
Of spectacular rainbows
Darkness hides within
The absence of shadows
Money in the bank
Could mean wealth
But poverty in our souls
Leads to our unhealth
We live our life
Until we confront death ...
#emotions
#redemption
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PenelopeM
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 00:03am
27th Oct 2024 00:03am
Libra
A wooden spoke in a wheel of gold.
A broken bone in a body fitly jointed.
A beautiful white blanket dawning a deep blue ink stain.
I stand on the outside of the tank, fear gripping my heart that I might disturb the waters in which there is life.
I take my stance in the middle so as to not tip the scales either way, id rather hurt than to see someone else hurt.
This balancing act, is in fact no act, it's life or death to me.
A broken bone in a body fitly jointed.
A beautiful white blanket dawning a deep blue ink stain.
I stand on the outside of the tank, fear gripping my heart that I might disturb the waters in which there is life.
I take my stance in the middle so as to not tip the scales either way, id rather hurt than to see someone else hurt.
This balancing act, is in fact no act, it's life or death to me.
#emotions
114 reads
3 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 2:17pm
26th Oct 2024 2:17pm
L'eau, l'encre et la poesie
j'aime voir le ciel vibrer en milles lumieres
et que la terre me servira a voir ça plus clair
la montagne comme un remede contre la douleur
a quoi bon exister si ton cour est un trou noir?
et que tu passeS ta vie en une vaine douceur
ouvre tes petales, et accpe le don du ciel
tu est une fleur, source de beaute et de miel
la rosee qui te baingne dans la belle matinee
sera l'encre du poete pour une celeste verite
et que la montagne se tienne debout derriere
contre tout les maivais vents et les tonnerres
et...
et que la terre me servira a voir ça plus clair
la montagne comme un remede contre la douleur
a quoi bon exister si ton cour est un trou noir?
et que tu passeS ta vie en une vaine douceur
ouvre tes petales, et accpe le don du ciel
tu est une fleur, source de beaute et de miel
la rosee qui te baingne dans la belle matinee
sera l'encre du poete pour une celeste verite
et que la montagne se tienne debout derriere
contre tout les maivais vents et les tonnerres
et...
#earth
#emotions
#inspirational #water
#inspirational #water
107 reads
9 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 1:53pm
26th Oct 2024 1:53pm
WHAT YOU NEED AND WANT
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words, ✍️ I would like to have a few minutes of your time.⌚ As we exchange thoughts, regarding our lives as man to woman and woman to man. 🤔 For sure we all have gone through some changes, before in our own lives with relationships of dealing, with someone creeping into the deepness of the darkness. Thinking that the grass is greener on the other side.🤨 Only to discover that what happens in the 🌑 dark always come to the🕯️ light. But yet they are trying to hide the truth of being unfaithful,...
#disappointment
#emotions
#heartbroken
#hope
#love
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drone
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 12:21pm
26th Oct 2024 12:21pm
Nights
Nights in the Cold Moonlight
Reaching the end
Textes I've Written
Still haven't Sent
Beauty
As always Will
In the sad ways of love
Just when I'm going to
I break what I must
NO words can help me
Thoughts I cannot decide
Just where I'm going to
Will Be In The End
Reaching the end
Textes I've Written
Still haven't Sent
Beauty
As always Will
In the sad ways of love
Just when I'm going to
I break what I must
NO words can help me
Thoughts I cannot decide
Just where I'm going to
Will Be In The End
#admiration
#bittersweet
#emotions
#love
#sadness
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 3:41pm
25th Oct 2024 3:41pm
First and Last Kiss
I wasn’t making any progress on my work and the deadline is in a week. I decided that I need a more structured environment. Being home my mind tends to wander to the wrong things. Focus has to me my main priority of the day.
Looking at the phone flashing showing a name that I do not want to talk to right now. If I am being honest at least to myself. It is him that is destroying my concentration. I saved my work, closed my laptop and grabbed my keys.
I had a thought to leave my phone but I knew that would not be wise. Other people like my publicist would need to...
Looking at the phone flashing showing a name that I do not want to talk to right now. If I am being honest at least to myself. It is him that is destroying my concentration. I saved my work, closed my laptop and grabbed my keys.
I had a thought to leave my phone but I knew that would not be wise. Other people like my publicist would need to...
#emotions
#gratitude
#loneliness
233 reads
14 Comments
drone
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 2:06pm
25th Oct 2024 2:06pm
Promises Spoken
Within the Flames of one's
Thinking
Within the Embers
Of one's
Thoughts
That Slowly burns Down
To Ashes warm
Becoming Cold
As the winter wind
That Drifts
Over the Graves
Of one's Intent
To Help the Ones
Who you Conceived
Thinking
Within the Embers
Of one's
Thoughts
That Slowly burns Down
To Ashes warm
Becoming Cold
As the winter wind
That Drifts
Over the Graves
Of one's Intent
To Help the Ones
Who you Conceived
#apathy
#denial
#emotions
#love
#rejection
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Just-Rob
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 4:12am
25th Oct 2024 4:12am
Not Mine
Trying to see if I can let you go
Can I ignore the pain and not let it show?
Over and over Im consumed with doubt
Worried about living with the fallout
So many issues that just aren't mine
Your words and your actions don't always align
You say that you're done but still keep him near
At times your motivations arent that clear
I get frustrated and go to a dark place
I wish they were my choices but that isn't the case
As much as I love you, should I take all this on?
Can I live with the fact that he'll...
Can I ignore the pain and not let it show?
Over and over Im consumed with doubt
Worried about living with the fallout
So many issues that just aren't mine
Your words and your actions don't always align
You say that you're done but still keep him near
At times your motivations arent that clear
I get frustrated and go to a dark place
I wish they were my choices but that isn't the case
As much as I love you, should I take all this on?
Can I live with the fact that he'll...
#emotions
#love
#relationships
127 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 2:24am
24th Oct 2024 2:24am
sadness, for you tinder being
i gotta say
this is one of the most eventful events
i have had, despite the empty hand
of inanimate propaganda, i have
nothing but empty hands
so just make fun of me
lackluster, no effort
so be it, I'm gone
and forgotten
so fuck all
i will fall
you are
stone-
walled
i'm nothing
goodbye
this is one of the most eventful events
i have had, despite the empty hand
of inanimate propaganda, i have
nothing but empty hands
so just make fun of me
lackluster, no effort
so be it, I'm gone
and forgotten
so fuck all
i will fall
you are
stone-
walled
i'm nothing
goodbye
#emotions
#grief
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
104 reads
1 Comment
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 2:07pm
23rd Oct 2024 2:07pm
Poetically Yours
Now, it is past summer
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
#respect
113 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 12:21pm
22nd Oct 2024 12:21pm
I JUST WANT YOU
They say that we are most blessed, when we finally have someone, who has been searching and looking for their better half 🤫 For a righteous blessing. For have you ever wanted and needed, a real consistency with honesty and truth and trust, and a genuine understanding of what is real communications with a strong commitment. For sure we both have needs and wants, that can affect the very deepness of our hearts. Yet it goes deeper than deep, into the deepness of our soul and body, healing our mind and spiritual subconsciousness of our existence. For I want you to know that it's not a...
#emotions
#kindness
#love
#respect
#StreamOfConsciousness
159 reads
2 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 5:51pm
21st Oct 2024 5:51pm
Processing
As I have previously written, my mother growing up was hard to live with, and that's putting it nicely. I never felt good enough, but now, she's back...the mother that I had up until I was about five, before she turned into a hard women.
As she lay there curled up on the sofa, her ice water with the straw clanking against the metal thermos sides as she stirred the half melted chunks around it's perimeter, all got quiet as she out of no where says, Sis...I need to tell you a few things.
As the lump in my throat seemed as if it was starting to block my airway, I mumbled ok, but wasn't...
As she lay there curled up on the sofa, her ice water with the straw clanking against the metal thermos sides as she stirred the half melted chunks around it's perimeter, all got quiet as she out of no where says, Sis...I need to tell you a few things.
As the lump in my throat seemed as if it was starting to block my airway, I mumbled ok, but wasn't...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
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