Emotional by Top Critiquers Poems
#emotional
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 6:11am
9th Oct 2024 6:11am
New Kinda Down
Heavy handed often hard headed
Hot wire without a ground
Premium alcohol is now unleaded
Until insanity comes around
Digging deeper into violent acts
Rapid pulse beating hard
Money trumps stone cold facts
Another blatant disregard
Seems the world got the blues
Everyone wears a frown
Read the book missed the clues
Found a new kinda down
Hot wire without a ground
Premium alcohol is now unleaded
Until insanity comes around
Digging deeper into violent acts
Rapid pulse beating hard
Money trumps stone cold facts
Another blatant disregard
Seems the world got the blues
Everyone wears a frown
Read the book missed the clues
Found a new kinda down
#emotional
156 reads
19 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 10:10pm
2nd Sep 2024 10:10pm
She calls him her boyfriend, he calls her to f**k
She likes him because she could see his deep-seeded hatred for women
Every time they have sex, he thought of himself as some kind of slick con-man, managing to talk his way into her panties
He feels like a safe cracker
He knows this is his game and he's in complete control
He only visits her at her place
She's never been to his place, let alone not even sure on what town he lives in
He never bothers to ask her for her name or even age
He's been seeing her for about 4 years
She has no friends and no one she can trust, except him
She has a child who...
Every time they have sex, he thought of himself as some kind of slick con-man, managing to talk his way into her panties
He feels like a safe cracker
He knows this is his game and he's in complete control
He only visits her at her place
She's never been to his place, let alone not even sure on what town he lives in
He never bothers to ask her for her name or even age
He's been seeing her for about 4 years
She has no friends and no one she can trust, except him
She has a child who...
#emotional
#hurt
#loneliness
#sex
#suffering
245 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 3:43pm
21st Jul 2024 3:43pm
Leaving You
I tried to tell you so many times
I tried to put it so you would understand in rhyme
The best I can do is to say it straight
I hate to put more on your plate
My heart is not in what we have
Please don't cry, this is going bad
I tried to tell you so many times
I said and did things, but you were blind
You would have left me if it was the other way around
please do not crumble to the ground
My bags are packed no need for me to stay
I cannot bare to see you this way
You can hate me, curse me, do what...
I tried to put it so you would understand in rhyme
The best I can do is to say it straight
I hate to put more on your plate
My heart is not in what we have
Please don't cry, this is going bad
I tried to tell you so many times
I said and did things, but you were blind
You would have left me if it was the other way around
please do not crumble to the ground
My bags are packed no need for me to stay
I cannot bare to see you this way
You can hate me, curse me, do what...
#emotional
#hurt
#rejection
59 reads
11 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
10 COMMANDMENTS FOR POETS
1. THOU SHALL write to please self.
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
#uplifting
281 reads
13 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 2:56pm
6th Mar 2025 2:56pm
Special Healing
They say that through this life we all will go through somethings that will affect, us in so many ways that will have us to take a moment, to analyze as we exchange our thoughts turning them around. BUT yet it's those things that can break us or make us, change what needs to be done, for the true betterment of life. For sure things will happen to make us stop, taking things for granted and be thankful and grateful and blessed, for sure sometimes we are given a second chance at life. Just like we are given a chance of finding a love, to call our own woman to man and man to woman. For sure we...
#emotional
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
53 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
9th Dec 2020 7:13pm
9th Dec 2020 7:13pm
Cosmo-Dynamic SunKonsciKiss-ness: L O V E
https://youtu.be/amO9vLY0ya4
my love...
the same
(fluttery butterfly kites
of these enormously distending
incandescent starriness
amour) eyes
that you
pour inner me through
your profundity streaming
light
of this molten magnetite
love...
are now
in a wrenchy~ squeegeeing in
a withering rescindment
(from their
rigorous shrunken~ strain ...
my love...
the same
(fluttery butterfly kites
of these enormously distending
incandescent starriness
amour) eyes
that you
pour inner me through
your profundity streaming
light
of this molten magnetite
love...
are now
in a wrenchy~ squeegeeing in
a withering rescindment
(from their
rigorous shrunken~ strain ...
#love
#dreams
#spiritual
#emotional
#sensual
462 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
21st Apr 2019 10:04pm
21st Apr 2019 10:04pm
Syllabus
I deny nothing—
which fills me
with experience:
Love, hate, jealousy
greed, gluttony, lust—
murderous thoughts;
suicide, shame, surrender
I welcome those that come
offer tea, also time;
realize I'm learning—
so heed their syllabus
Sometimes it took weeks
other...
which fills me
with experience:
Love, hate, jealousy
greed, gluttony, lust—
murderous thoughts;
suicide, shame, surrender
I welcome those that come
offer tea, also time;
realize I'm learning—
so heed their syllabus
Sometimes it took weeks
other...
#universe
#spiritual
#confessional
#emotional
#wisdom
1335 reads
49 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 10:53pm
21st Sep 2024 10:53pm
Goodbye Summer
She tested us
Every way she could
Burned us to the ground
Sweat, humidity and frowns
That damn sun
Relentless
Long evenings
Moon lit calls
Walking with you
Sweet summer
Margaritas by the seaside
Lust in the air
No cares
Too hot
Too much rain
Too much traffic
Too much
It goes fast
Somewhere in August
Knowing this will end soon
Labor Day
Last call
We love summer
Hate the heat
Complaints
Melancholy has a way
Autumn on the horizon
Damn pumpkin...
Every way she could
Burned us to the ground
Sweat, humidity and frowns
That damn sun
Relentless
Long evenings
Moon lit calls
Walking with you
Sweet summer
Margaritas by the seaside
Lust in the air
No cares
Too hot
Too much rain
Too much traffic
Too much
It goes fast
Somewhere in August
Knowing this will end soon
Labor Day
Last call
We love summer
Hate the heat
Complaints
Melancholy has a way
Autumn on the horizon
Damn pumpkin...
#emotional
#fall
#LifeAsAWriter
#summer
#TruthOfLife
233 reads
33 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 4:10pm
22nd Sep 2024 4:10pm
come hither
come lovely one, come out of your hiding place
within the caress, there are shadows and lace
resist a reason you love who you love
cruelty is satisfaction with linear thoughts
you reside in the heavens
then burn upon entry
entering into a vow I know you'll keep it
Your star has always shone the brightest
now it is a flicker in the wind
collect your sea shells
open your mind
stifling my feelings
tears swell my chest
and I am alone again
hopscotch and hide and seek
scaring the restless spirits...
within the caress, there are shadows and lace
resist a reason you love who you love
cruelty is satisfaction with linear thoughts
you reside in the heavens
then burn upon entry
entering into a vow I know you'll keep it
Your star has always shone the brightest
now it is a flicker in the wind
collect your sea shells
open your mind
stifling my feelings
tears swell my chest
and I am alone again
hopscotch and hide and seek
scaring the restless spirits...
#emotional
#metaphor
143 reads
9 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 00:43am
29th Jan 2025 00:43am
unexplainable draw
Beneath the surface
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
#anger
#emotional
#hypocrisy
#lies
#passion
137 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Oct 2021 5:12pm
10th Oct 2021 5:12pm
A Million Quills
When my heart broke I felt a deep seeded need to bleed
So my veins supplied the ink to write a verse
Through a million quills I dropped notions onto the page
With all the rage my soul could roar saying, this hurts
But it wasn’t enough, I wanted to dye and delve even further
Deeper into the colors of emotion and the far unknown
To paint the pain with texts and flames to somehow explain
Why I was torn at the core when I could feel it in my bones
So I travelled through what must’ve been a thousand years
Explored worlds and realms that...
So my veins supplied the ink to write a verse
Through a million quills I dropped notions onto the page
With all the rage my soul could roar saying, this hurts
But it wasn’t enough, I wanted to dye and delve even further
Deeper into the colors of emotion and the far unknown
To paint the pain with texts and flames to somehow explain
Why I was torn at the core when I could feel it in my bones
So I travelled through what must’ve been a thousand years
Explored worlds and realms that...
#heartbroken
#memories
#WritingPoetry #emotional
#WritingPoetry #emotional
653 reads
9 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 2:57pm
14th Sep 2024 2:57pm
frost watch
instinct keeps me poised
eyes darting
hovering near the shadows
always an exit within reach
winds can turn bitter
...with little warning
chilling to the bones
& I am...
deeply susceptible
...to cold
eyes darting
hovering near the shadows
always an exit within reach
winds can turn bitter
...with little warning
chilling to the bones
& I am...
deeply susceptible
...to cold
#confessional
#emotional
#LifeStruggles
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