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New Kinda Down
Heavy handed often hard headed
Hot wire without a ground
Premium alcohol is now unleaded
Until insanity comes around
Digging deeper into violent acts
Rapid pulse beating hard
Money trumps stone cold facts
Another blatant disregard
Seems the world got the blues
Everyone wears a frown
Read the book missed the clues
Found a new kinda down
Hot wire without a ground
Premium alcohol is now unleaded
Until insanity comes around
Digging deeper into violent acts
Rapid pulse beating hard
Money trumps stone cold facts
Another blatant disregard
Seems the world got the blues
Everyone wears a frown
Read the book missed the clues
Found a new kinda down
Author's Note
Late night musing. Almost felt like I was writing lyrics again. Just felt kinda bluesy tonight. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" And you're on borrowed time
It comes from a jealous clock"
- David Lee Roth
- Damian DeadLove
" And you're on borrowed time
It comes from a jealous clock"
- David Lee Roth
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Re. New Kinda Down
9th Oct 2024 8:10am
I truly appreciate this message of nothing but truth as usual you keep on exposing the deepness of the words of wisdom and enlightenment and insight for sure once as a writer ✍️ you have the ability and opportunity to touch the deepness of the truth in planting a seed and watch it grow 🪴😉👍💪💯🪬 SHAMAN 🪬👍
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 3:25am
Thanks so much for reading, and your kind words. Honored to make your RL, SHAMAN. Appreciate you.
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 4:24am
Re. New Kinda Down
Anonymous
9th Oct 2024 8:48am
Nice ink, dear poet 🌹
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 3:29am
Thanks for reading, Dreamz. Your continued support means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
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Re. New Kinda Down
9th Oct 2024 9:27am
Another Gem.Damian, funnily enough apart from this page, I've never ever read poetry unless you can count Bob Dylan, John Lennon, etc... when I write it all comes from a lyric I've just heard what inspires me 🙃❤️
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 3:36am
I hear you, Pete. Lyricist's are my inspiration as well. I've read some poets, and loved their work. Online and off. But when it comes to writing, I always feel like I still pull from my lyrical background. But in the words of, Edward Van Halen, "If it sounds good, it is good." Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.
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Re. New Kinda Down
9th Oct 2024 10:59am
This totally has a lyrical vibe. Sad piece with lots of emotion, like the blues. Great!
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 3:39am
It was very much lyrical, Keith. Just curious if I could still write them, hadn't tried in a while. Thanks for reading and your support. Appreciate you.
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Re. New Kinda Down
9th Oct 2024 2:30pm
This one certainly has a blues vibe to it.
Awesome piece, Damian - it seems like many people lost the clues.
Awesome piece, Damian - it seems like many people lost the clues.
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 4:12am
That's very true, Duende. Thanks so much for reading. Appreciate you.
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Re. New Kinda Down
9th Oct 2024 2:32pm
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10th Oct 2024 4:13am
Re. New Kinda Down
9th Oct 2024 2:42pm
This is some superb writing, Sir
I love the accompanying image as well.
Blessings
Thia
I love the accompanying image as well.
Blessings
Thia
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 4:15am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thia. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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Re. New Kinda Down
Anonymous
10th Oct 2024 3:38am
The world certainly has the blues lately. And it's fallin like rain.
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 4:16am
Couldn't agree with you more, Dragon. Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.
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Re. New Kinda Down
10th Oct 2024 6:03am
This has kind of a catch and a jingle to it. It would almost sound good as a buildup verse prior to a guitar solo or something. Very smooth, transitional, concise, easy to read, and concrete solid, in terms of points conveyed. Seems all in all like a clean piece that's neat and tidy and packs a punch. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. New Kinda Down
11th Oct 2024 2:39am
Thanks for your commentary, brother. I'm glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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