Poems About Dreams Seeking Honest Critique
#dreams
Poems about dreams seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 11:03am
12th Feb 2025 11:03am
Wildest Fantasies
#dirty
#dreams
#orgasm #sex
#orgasm #sex
266 reads
6 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 7:35pm
11th Feb 2025 7:35pm
Nighttime
The time of night!
When souls are bright.
There goes the sun in flight!
The dark blankets all and many affright!
When souls are bright.
There goes the sun in flight!
The dark blankets all and many affright!
#dark
#dreams
#night
#nightmares
#surreal
85 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 11:49am
11th Feb 2025 11:49am
Purrs and Snores
Deep into the night,
there they are,
side by side
on the mattress.
The cat purrs
a miniature thunder.
The husband snores
a coral of immensity.
The sound dispute
is pure beauty.
The feline, master
of the vibrant whisper,
with its "purr-purr"
packs light dreams.
The husband, tenor
from the incessant snoring.
Their symphony
is music to the heavens.
The cat says,
with an air of superiority:
"My snoring is art,
a heavenly sound."
The husband retorts, ...
there they are,
side by side
on the mattress.
The cat purrs
a miniature thunder.
The husband snores
a coral of immensity.
The sound dispute
is pure beauty.
The feline, master
of the vibrant whisper,
with its "purr-purr"
packs light dreams.
The husband, tenor
from the incessant snoring.
Their symphony
is music to the heavens.
The cat says,
with an air of superiority:
"My snoring is art,
a heavenly sound."
The husband retorts, ...
#cats
#dreams
#husband
#love
#passion
99 reads
14 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 9:54pm
10th Feb 2025 9:54pm
A Dreamer
Like a bird
I want to croon daylong
wing off the cage to where I belong.
Like a reed
I want to sigh my wind
pipe my heart artfully to no end.
Like a song
I want to voice my inner harmony
as mind and soul merge in beauty.
Like ripples
I want to expand my feel
send waves shimmering with zeal.
Like Euterpe
I want to touch souls and inspire
my musing, my music are to admire.
Like a poet
I want to cast a spell of wit on my pen
and have the world of words as my den.
Like a...
I want to croon daylong
wing off the cage to where I belong.
Like a reed
I want to sigh my wind
pipe my heart artfully to no end.
Like a song
I want to voice my inner harmony
as mind and soul merge in beauty.
Like ripples
I want to expand my feel
send waves shimmering with zeal.
Like Euterpe
I want to touch souls and inspire
my musing, my music are to admire.
Like a poet
I want to cast a spell of wit on my pen
and have the world of words as my den.
Like a...
#admiration
#dreams
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
81 reads
8 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 11:11am
10th Feb 2025 11:11am
Once Upon A Dream
I had a dream the other day.
It was about a cat from a dimension far away.
The cat was magical and true.
It had purple fur,too.
The cat had nine eyes.
With yellow,rich color.
It floats,not flies.
And her fur shines.
The name of the breed was certainly unique.
""Purple ,arabic cat"".
The breed was certainly magical.
And something from a story-like.
The cat appeared in front of me with a friendly face.
And purred,rubbing its face onto my legs.
Maybe the cat was a magical being. ...
It was about a cat from a dimension far away.
The cat was magical and true.
It had purple fur,too.
The cat had nine eyes.
With yellow,rich color.
It floats,not flies.
And her fur shines.
The name of the breed was certainly unique.
""Purple ,arabic cat"".
The breed was certainly magical.
And something from a story-like.
The cat appeared in front of me with a friendly face.
And purred,rubbing its face onto my legs.
Maybe the cat was a magical being. ...
#dreams
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
53 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 6:37pm
9th Feb 2025 6:37pm
My Imaginary Girl
Be my wife, for you alone can arouse me.
I’m obsessed with no one else but you.
Smile at me, and hold me as you do in my dreams.
Darling, let me feel your sensual embrace.
Kiss my lips softly like the brush of the wind.
Say that your true love will never end.
I’m not sure if you aren’t just a fantasy,
So tell me that you’re as real as you can be.
Be my wife, for wedding you is my chief desire.
Make me experience incomparable bliss.
Your beauty and exceptional talent impress me.
I want to hear you sing sweet love songs.
...
I’m obsessed with no one else but you.
Smile at me, and hold me as you do in my dreams.
Darling, let me feel your sensual embrace.
Kiss my lips softly like the brush of the wind.
Say that your true love will never end.
I’m not sure if you aren’t just a fantasy,
So tell me that you’re as real as you can be.
Be my wife, for wedding you is my chief desire.
Make me experience incomparable bliss.
Your beauty and exceptional talent impress me.
I want to hear you sing sweet love songs.
...
#beauty
#dreams
#love #morning
#love #morning
82 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 8:47pm
8th Feb 2025 8:47pm
Limp Sound Display (collaboration with PAR)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#dreams
#utopia
94 reads
12 Comments
jenny_way
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 5:32pm
8th Feb 2025 5:32pm
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
You might be not who I imagined
I’m aware, yet can’t help
Staring at you stealthily, while you pass through me with your friends
Oh god, you don’t even notice me
You care less to see
How fast I’m falling in love with you
Yeah, I know. I’m too naive
You’re probably a piece of shit,
But the thought of you fills me with zeal
If I’m as good as they say
Then why am I not the one for you?
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
I’m aware, yet can’t help
Staring at you stealthily, while you pass through me with your friends
Oh god, you don’t even notice me
You care less to see
How fast I’m falling in love with you
Yeah, I know. I’m too naive
You’re probably a piece of shit,
But the thought of you fills me with zeal
If I’m as good as they say
Then why am I not the one for you?
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
#crush
#dreams
#FallingInLove #UnrequitedLove
#FallingInLove #UnrequitedLove
57 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:41pm
7th Feb 2025 1:41pm
Undoing
distraction has its side effects
attraction has its side effects
every betrayal has side effects
all betrayal is one-sided and cuts
the tradition is to know and keep quiet
____________ bleed and be quiet
____________ dream and stay awake
emotion has its side effects
lust has its side effects
perception has several altered states
contradiction is saying to be quiet
swallow to be forgotten
side effects
we are all side effects
of a void full of nothing
of a mad dog's howl
of a...
attraction has its side effects
every betrayal has side effects
all betrayal is one-sided and cuts
the tradition is to know and keep quiet
____________ bleed and be quiet
____________ dream and stay awake
emotion has its side effects
lust has its side effects
perception has several altered states
contradiction is saying to be quiet
swallow to be forgotten
side effects
we are all side effects
of a void full of nothing
of a mad dog's howl
of a...
#anxiety
#dreams
#mirror
#passion
#utopia
74 reads
12 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 00:19am
7th Feb 2025 00:19am
Towering Silence
I have no right to you, don't know you
You're just a conjuring of words, like smoke
Signaling something more, yet distant
And I can feel the heat though we've never spoke
Time slows down in dreams, you know
As we try to hold that moment in our minds
Like an old photo, slightly out of focus
That still touches something deep inside
And you, if all my imaginings could be anything
Could be believing
Though I know not your voice in love, or even
Color of your hair, my dreams conceiving
I would touch you
Hand soft...
You're just a conjuring of words, like smoke
Signaling something more, yet distant
And I can feel the heat though we've never spoke
Time slows down in dreams, you know
As we try to hold that moment in our minds
Like an old photo, slightly out of focus
That still touches something deep inside
And you, if all my imaginings could be anything
Could be believing
Though I know not your voice in love, or even
Color of your hair, my dreams conceiving
I would touch you
Hand soft...
#dreams
#love
92 reads
8 Comments
PunkPoe
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:15pm
5th Feb 2025 11:15pm
Be Set Free
"Be Set Free"
The wonders that thrive inside my mind
Anyone doubting me, I will leave behind
Come along I promise you an adventure
You have no pain measures of pleasure
Every meal includes macaroni & cheese
Ending war we all deserve to live in peace
Paradise in everyone's own shape & form
News from the headlines love your unicorn
There's a place where we can do anything
Together we restore balance of yang & ying
From now on children are safe in their beds
Board candyland express salads killed...
The wonders that thrive inside my mind
Anyone doubting me, I will leave behind
Come along I promise you an adventure
You have no pain measures of pleasure
Every meal includes macaroni & cheese
Ending war we all deserve to live in peace
Paradise in everyone's own shape & form
News from the headlines love your unicorn
There's a place where we can do anything
Together we restore balance of yang & ying
From now on children are safe in their beds
Board candyland express salads killed...
#children
#dreams
#love #sleep
#love #sleep
61 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 10:56am
5th Feb 2025 10:56am
Dear Reader
This must be what they talk about.
When they enter the fictional world,in and out.
So let us travel to a fairytale.
Written fully by ink.
It may not be real,but it makes you think.
Read this story as it evolves.
And we get rainbow clothes.
Our story eventually subsides.
After a thousand magical nights.
This story will end - so let's go to Neverland.
Write our story in this magical land.
I know there's adventures that await.
Let me be Wendy to your Peter Pan.
And use a glass,ink filled pen.
Promise...
When they enter the fictional world,in and out.
So let us travel to a fairytale.
Written fully by ink.
It may not be real,but it makes you think.
Read this story as it evolves.
And we get rainbow clothes.
Our story eventually subsides.
After a thousand magical nights.
This story will end - so let's go to Neverland.
Write our story in this magical land.
I know there's adventures that await.
Let me be Wendy to your Peter Pan.
And use a glass,ink filled pen.
Promise...
#books
#dreams
#hope
#love
#uplifting
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0 Comments
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