Poems About Dreams Seeking Honest Critique
#dreams
Poems about dreams seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
My Beautiful Butterfly
From the deepness of my thoughts to the very deepness of my heart, for it's true that you have become that very Beautiful Butterfly. THAT I saw upon at a time, when I notice that a change is about to come into my life. For sure that was a sign, from up above to really change my world around. For the very betterment of amazing things to come to fulfill my dreams. Come true to finally have what I've been looking for all my life as it was you. That beautiful butterfly 🦋 a beautiful butterfly as a disguise, to bring the deepness of my thoughts of love and happiness come alive. AS I've...
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#redemption
#TimeHeals
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 10:55am
10th Mar 2025 10:55am
Yesterday's Dream
I knew him once upon a dream.
A dream like you have never seen.
And so have I.
But it seemed peaceful,with a light blue sky.
I saw a girl in that dream.
She was doubtful of all she's ever been.
She says,my pain I don't want you to carry.
I don't want you to worry,I want you to be merry.
The way she spoke in this vivid dream.
Like there is more to her than others have seen.
She says,but what if you don't like me?
What if you dislike the real me?
What if you don't like my flaws?
That stand out...
A dream like you have never seen.
And so have I.
But it seemed peaceful,with a light blue sky.
I saw a girl in that dream.
She was doubtful of all she's ever been.
She says,my pain I don't want you to carry.
I don't want you to worry,I want you to be merry.
The way she spoke in this vivid dream.
Like there is more to her than others have seen.
She says,but what if you don't like me?
What if you dislike the real me?
What if you don't like my flaws?
That stand out...
#dreams
#hope
#motivational
#sleep
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 11:00pm
9th Mar 2025 11:00pm
How we create
I write these words of the deepness of thoughts and creativity, to inspire all who have a passion to create. Whether it's from pen to paper or paint to canvas, for I am a firm believer as a writer, that we all have special talents as it is something that we love.
For sure it's something that we do in order to express, our thoughts and insight and feelings and imagination. As we release the gifted talents that we have to be able, to create something that is apart of us to share with others and the world 🌎 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
For sure it's something that we do in order to express, our thoughts and insight and feelings and imagination. As we release the gifted talents that we have to be able, to create something that is apart of us to share with others and the world 🌎 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
#art
#dreams
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
91 reads
4 Comments
asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 9:24pm
5th Mar 2025 9:24pm
in quire
a radiation of amino acids coming down like rain falling softly. i turn my eyes in their sockets trying to see something, but nothing. i can't imagine what it's like to handle the origin, the singular effortless motion. like cursive. i am adrift in the edifices of creation. to seek is to know less and less. whereabouts are your morals? they fall down the pits. moving faster or slower makes very little difference. you get there all the same, in pieces and tattered and tired and close to death. death is then the creator. life is a brief flash overtaken by quiet. i bury you in the space between...
#dreams
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1 Comment
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
GARDEN OF EXCUSES
Place a fence around the Garden of Excuses for habits
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
#determination
#dreams
#escape
#happiness
#healing
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PAR
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 1:26pm
28th Feb 2025 1:26pm
So many falling stars
In the corridors of thought
where shadows white is sublime
wheels of memory spin
in circles they turn
whispers of forgotten dreams
linger in the air.
Faces in the mirror
reflections of the past
moments fleeting by
too precious to outlast
colors of emotion
in a kaleidoscope's embrace.
Echoes of a heartbeat
in the silence of the night
thoughts like scattered leaves
take their secret flight
twirling like a dance
on the edge of the unknown.
Threads of golden memories
woven...
where shadows white is sublime
wheels of memory spin
in circles they turn
whispers of forgotten dreams
linger in the air.
Faces in the mirror
reflections of the past
moments fleeting by
too precious to outlast
colors of emotion
in a kaleidoscope's embrace.
Echoes of a heartbeat
in the silence of the night
thoughts like scattered leaves
take their secret flight
twirling like a dance
on the edge of the unknown.
Threads of golden memories
woven...
#dreams
#memories
#mirror
#storm
#universe
84 reads
10 Comments
MYSTERIOUS_GIRL
Lizzy_3164
Lizzy_3164
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 2:28am
28th Feb 2025 2:28am
DIRTY THOUGHTS
When I'm lonely
All the corners of my mind start racing
Things that should be kept in the basement
Spend my time trying to erase them
But when you hold me
In the fantasy it's so convincing
I shouldn't think the things I'm thinking
But now I've gone and let them sink in
The more that I push 'em away
The more that you're stuck in my brain
The more I mentally undress
Oh, I'm getting frustrated
Do you really look good naked
And I know that it ain't that holy
But Lord I need this one night only
The more that...
All the corners of my mind start racing
Things that should be kept in the basement
Spend my time trying to erase them
But when you hold me
In the fantasy it's so convincing
I shouldn't think the things I'm thinking
But now I've gone and let them sink in
The more that I push 'em away
The more that you're stuck in my brain
The more I mentally undress
Oh, I'm getting frustrated
Do you really look good naked
And I know that it ain't that holy
But Lord I need this one night only
The more that...
#dreams
#FallingInLove
168 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 10:52am
25th Feb 2025 10:52am
The Satisfying Wash
Sit down, take a seat
I can't control myself
she's about to wash my hair
her gorgeous body inches from my face
the water & her fingers interact with my scalp
the shampoo she uses has this sweet, flowery scent
my eyes close as I begin thinking of impure thoughts
for the few moments i have with her, it's total ecstasy
faucets shut off, towel around my head and neck and it's over
maybe next time she can shampoo my hair at my place
I can't control myself
she's about to wash my hair
her gorgeous body inches from my face
the water & her fingers interact with my scalp
the shampoo she uses has this sweet, flowery scent
my eyes close as I begin thinking of impure thoughts
for the few moments i have with her, it's total ecstasy
faucets shut off, towel around my head and neck and it's over
maybe next time she can shampoo my hair at my place
#dreams
#sensual
157 reads
20 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 1:55pm
24th Feb 2025 1:55pm
The One Dream One Does Not Want To Wake Up From
Danny opened both his eyes.
He was the only naked man there.
Then, the ballroom door opened.
Jennifer walked in and dropped her robe.
That was before the alarm clock beeped.
He was the only naked man there.
Then, the ballroom door opened.
Jennifer walked in and dropped her robe.
That was before the alarm clock beeped.
#dreams
#fiction
#ForbiddenLove
#friendship
#sex
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0 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 4:19am
21st Feb 2025 4:19am
Alluring
a face hidden by a mobile phone mask,
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
#dreams
#passion
#romantic #sexy
#romantic #sexy
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0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 2:23pm
20th Feb 2025 2:23pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #2
In twilight's embrace, bats take to the sky,
Silent wings whisper, 'neath moon's gentle eye,
Sunflowers sleep, while stars pass by.
Nocturnal ballet, bats in shadowed flight,
Sunflowers bask in daylight's bright might,
Their worlds apart, yet both bring delight.
Bats seek the night, where darkness unfolds,
Sunflowers chase the sun's gleaming gold,
Opposite rhythms, love stories told.
Echoes in the night, bats' songs unheard,
Sunflowers sway to the sun's every word,
Contrasting lives, love's magic stirred....
Silent wings whisper, 'neath moon's gentle eye,
Sunflowers sleep, while stars pass by.
Nocturnal ballet, bats in shadowed flight,
Sunflowers bask in daylight's bright might,
Their worlds apart, yet both bring delight.
Bats seek the night, where darkness unfolds,
Sunflowers chase the sun's gleaming gold,
Opposite rhythms, love stories told.
Echoes in the night, bats' songs unheard,
Sunflowers sway to the sun's every word,
Contrasting lives, love's magic stirred....
#dreams
#erotic
#love
#lust
#passion
107 reads
10 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 2:53pm
19th Feb 2025 2:53pm
Nazare’
Waveriders
In pursuit of the most thrilling
Bone chilling
Fantastic fantasy
Upon cliffside scenes
New waves breaking
Are reborn dreams
Set in reality
Fading sometimes in the tides
And autumn light
Calm seas turning into dreams
Dreamt in the night
and
Felt in the sea breeze
by the early morning light
the ocean’s calling all
enticed by
the most alluring sight
In pursuit of the most thrilling
Bone chilling
Fantastic fantasy
Upon cliffside scenes
New waves breaking
Are reborn dreams
Set in reality
Fading sometimes in the tides
And autumn light
Calm seas turning into dreams
Dreamt in the night
and
Felt in the sea breeze
by the early morning light
the ocean’s calling all
enticed by
the most alluring sight
#beach
#dreams
#nature #sea
#nature #sea
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