Poems About Dreams Seeking Honest Critique
#dreams
Poems about dreams seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
XiaoLong
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:19am
Yesterday 4:19am
Alluring
a face hidden by a mobile phone mask,
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
#dreams
#passion
#romantic #sexy
#romantic #sexy
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PAR
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 2:23pm
20th Feb 2025 2:23pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #2
In twilight's embrace, bats take to the sky,
Silent wings whisper, 'neath moon's gentle eye,
Sunflowers sleep, while stars pass by.
Nocturnal ballet, bats in shadowed flight,
Sunflowers bask in daylight's bright might,
Their worlds apart, yet both bring delight.
Bats seek the night, where darkness unfolds,
Sunflowers chase the sun's gleaming gold,
Opposite rhythms, love stories told.
Echoes in the night, bats' songs unheard,
Sunflowers sway to the sun's every word,
Contrasting lives, love's magic stirred....
Silent wings whisper, 'neath moon's gentle eye,
Sunflowers sleep, while stars pass by.
Nocturnal ballet, bats in shadowed flight,
Sunflowers bask in daylight's bright might,
Their worlds apart, yet both bring delight.
Bats seek the night, where darkness unfolds,
Sunflowers chase the sun's gleaming gold,
Opposite rhythms, love stories told.
Echoes in the night, bats' songs unheard,
Sunflowers sway to the sun's every word,
Contrasting lives, love's magic stirred....
#dreams
#erotic
#love
#lust
#passion
55 reads
10 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 2:53pm
19th Feb 2025 2:53pm
Nazare’
Waveriders
In pursuit of the most thrilling
Bone chilling
Fantastic fantasy
Upon cliffside scenes
New waves breaking
Are reborn dreams
Set in reality
Fading sometimes in the tides
And autumn light
Calm seas turning into dreams
Dreamt in the night
and
Felt in the sea breeze
by the early morning light
the ocean’s calling all
enticed by
the most alluring sight
In pursuit of the most thrilling
Bone chilling
Fantastic fantasy
Upon cliffside scenes
New waves breaking
Are reborn dreams
Set in reality
Fading sometimes in the tides
And autumn light
Calm seas turning into dreams
Dreamt in the night
and
Felt in the sea breeze
by the early morning light
the ocean’s calling all
enticed by
the most alluring sight
#beach
#dreams
#nature #sea
#nature #sea
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 12:54pm
19th Feb 2025 12:54pm
Dream-Seeking Under Moonlight
Dreaming under clouds,
moonlight shines upon the fields,
truth is foretold now.
Beast upon the moor,
softly speaks the song of wind,
dream is given gift.
Healing in thy dream,
stone-laid path is long and hard,
light embraces thee.
Fate is under night,
dream-traveling mind is glad,
bright rest in gold shines.
Thou hast named the dream,
wind-blown was my spoken word,
moon now seeks for thee.
moonlight shines upon the fields,
truth is foretold now.
Beast upon the moor,
softly speaks the song of wind,
dream is given gift.
Healing in thy dream,
stone-laid path is long and hard,
light embraces thee.
Fate is under night,
dream-traveling mind is glad,
bright rest in gold shines.
Thou hast named the dream,
wind-blown was my spoken word,
moon now seeks for thee.
#dreams
35 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
I feel fine
Take a trip through my magic ocean
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
#dreams
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
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10 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 3:08pm
18th Feb 2025 3:08pm
Dreamscape #102
Floating slowly away
In the space
Between the moon and the Earth
Green-blue-white Earthlight
Somersaulting backwards
Landing softly on the moon
There's not much on the moon
It's a pure landscape
Free from the ravages of human beings
It's peaceful on the moon
In the space
Between the moon and the Earth
Green-blue-white Earthlight
Somersaulting backwards
Landing softly on the moon
There's not much on the moon
It's a pure landscape
Free from the ravages of human beings
It's peaceful on the moon
#dreams
#moon
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oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 10:58pm
17th Feb 2025 10:58pm
Love on My Own….Again
Love on My Own….Again
the grey thoughts that surround my brain
try to break through and convince my soul that i am living again
but like the wisps of grey i wear on my head like a halo from Satan
they don’t convince me that I am free to love on my own again
they torment me swimming in amniotic thoughts that don’t escape me
I cant see the exit sign but I missed my ramp on my getaway to save me
they enter again working their way through my ear canals as i sleep
i miss the times when my brain is quiet...
the grey thoughts that surround my brain
try to break through and convince my soul that i am living again
but like the wisps of grey i wear on my head like a halo from Satan
they don’t convince me that I am free to love on my own again
they torment me swimming in amniotic thoughts that don’t escape me
I cant see the exit sign but I missed my ramp on my getaway to save me
they enter again working their way through my ear canals as i sleep
i miss the times when my brain is quiet...
#dreams
#love
#MentalHealth
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TimWombles
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 11:23am
17th Feb 2025 11:23am
Coffee is on
I worked late at night
2nd shift
wife already asleep
sit on the edge of the bed
take my shoe off
drop it
plop
“The coffee is already on”
I look up
wife sound asleep
I get up
check
just to see
nope
no coffee
sit down
take off the other shoe
plop
“John, love you”
my head tilts
my buddies name is John
I get up
look in the dish rack
2 coffee cups
I didn't sleep well
2nd shift
wife already asleep
sit on the edge of the bed
take my shoe off
drop it
plop
“The coffee is already on”
I look up
wife sound asleep
I get up
check
just to see
nope
no coffee
sit down
take off the other shoe
plop
“John, love you”
my head tilts
my buddies name is John
I get up
look in the dish rack
2 coffee cups
I didn't sleep well
#dreams
30 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 2:03pm
16th Feb 2025 2:03pm
The Carnival Bizarre
Dissecting the spectacle
limbless woman with tentacles
contortionists jump on trampolines
masturbating in your wet dreams
Clowns perform, drunk with sorrow
fortunes read, no more tomorrow’s
freaks shock as you watch in awe
kids frightened running towards the door
Threw-up up food after some rides
sawdust, lysol, you feel like your gonna die
at last, the show is about to begin
large audience, the lights turned dim
Animals dance, balance, and sway
lion tamer controls, keeping them at bay
cigar tossed as a...
limbless woman with tentacles
contortionists jump on trampolines
masturbating in your wet dreams
Clowns perform, drunk with sorrow
fortunes read, no more tomorrow’s
freaks shock as you watch in awe
kids frightened running towards the door
Threw-up up food after some rides
sawdust, lysol, you feel like your gonna die
at last, the show is about to begin
large audience, the lights turned dim
Animals dance, balance, and sway
lion tamer controls, keeping them at bay
cigar tossed as a...
#dreams
#happiness
#nightmares
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
73 reads
14 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 11:03pm
14th Feb 2025 11:03pm
GREENLAND
I wanna whisk you away to Greenland,
Like whipped cream -
To the largest island in the World!
I wanna spoil you with Danish Kroner -
The official local currency.
I wanna make love to you in the snow,
Like nobody knows, as we live like Eskimos,
Trudging through its 80% ice cap.
I will lavish you with fresh fish and wine -
Ravish you, once we reach Nuuk (Nuke),
The capital. Divine!
I love it when you talk like that!
Take me away and treasure me,
If only in wishes and dreams -
Then so be it.
Feed me until I...
Like whipped cream -
To the largest island in the World!
I wanna spoil you with Danish Kroner -
The official local currency.
I wanna make love to you in the snow,
Like nobody knows, as we live like Eskimos,
Trudging through its 80% ice cap.
I will lavish you with fresh fish and wine -
Ravish you, once we reach Nuuk (Nuke),
The capital. Divine!
I love it when you talk like that!
Take me away and treasure me,
If only in wishes and dreams -
Then so be it.
Feed me until I...
#dreams
#hope
#inspirational
#uplifting
#passion
121 reads
24 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 3:18pm
14th Feb 2025 3:18pm
Nightcastle
The future is only as certain
As a cold winter night
And the pale moon on the horizon
Shining Upon the edge of time
Your only comfort awaits In desperation
Beneath starlight
While your solace
Awaits in the soft dreamy realms of delight
As a cold winter night
And the pale moon on the horizon
Shining Upon the edge of time
Your only comfort awaits In desperation
Beneath starlight
While your solace
Awaits in the soft dreamy realms of delight
#dreams
#night
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 3:05am
13th Feb 2025 3:05am
eternal
my hurt caressed you
and you were caught in the moment
when my reality touched you
you look deeply into me
and we connected over shared pain
my beauty hid the scarred terrain within
I didn't trust in love I know it to be temporary with most people
and my heart has a strange way of loving forever
I will carry you into the next life as well
inteloper of soul I will find you anew
my thoughts turn to you
somewhere in the eternal sea, I was wandering
and I thought I heard you call out
so I came back to find you ...
and you were caught in the moment
when my reality touched you
you look deeply into me
and we connected over shared pain
my beauty hid the scarred terrain within
I didn't trust in love I know it to be temporary with most people
and my heart has a strange way of loving forever
I will carry you into the next life as well
inteloper of soul I will find you anew
my thoughts turn to you
somewhere in the eternal sea, I was wandering
and I thought I heard you call out
so I came back to find you ...
#dreams
#love
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