Poems About Dawn by Top Critiquers
#dawn
Betty
Poem Published
9th Mar 2023 2:10pm
9th Mar 2023 2:10pm
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Sunrise and sunset
exist
equally splendid
as your hands
on my body
(on my mind);
I understand
beauty
now.
exist
equally splendid
as your hands
on my body
(on my mind);
I understand
beauty
now.
#beauty
#lover
#minimalist #dawn
#minimalist #dawn
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 5:01pm
24th Dec 2024 5:01pm
bloom
the day cry for unintended villianry
she was contempt in her stead
intent on bringing revenge
insulted silence couldn't be calmed
resist the dawn and all will be well
nay remarked the day
she was bent on vengeance
blood will be spilt before midnight
a young bride was in her sights
contemptable reckoning the fairest in the kingdom
the day marked her well
conjuring a storm to chase her from the garden
into the hedge maze wrought with thorns
soon she was lost
the brambles warn, fair maiden your...
she was contempt in her stead
intent on bringing revenge
insulted silence couldn't be calmed
resist the dawn and all will be well
nay remarked the day
she was bent on vengeance
blood will be spilt before midnight
a young bride was in her sights
contemptable reckoning the fairest in the kingdom
the day marked her well
conjuring a storm to chase her from the garden
into the hedge maze wrought with thorns
soon she was lost
the brambles warn, fair maiden your...
#dawn
#love
111 reads
7 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
16th Jul 2023 7:34am
16th Jul 2023 7:34am
THROW THOSE CURTAINS WIDE
Throw those curtains wide,
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
#sun
#spiritual
#dawn
277 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 3:40am
11th Apr 2025 3:40am
Sun Rise, Sun Set
Sometimes things must be dark so we can see the light
Just like at night, when the stars decorate the sky
And during the day when I’ve dreamt of chasing clouds away
My mind can tend to get lost while time just flies by
But right before the sun sets there is a certain anticipation
An array of colors weaves right before the sun is gone
The light blue gives away to a darker shade for a new view
Until the hues begin to change again right before dawn
I have breathed the cool air and felt the hot afternoon glare
When every step I took made my...
Just like at night, when the stars decorate the sky
And during the day when I’ve dreamt of chasing clouds away
My mind can tend to get lost while time just flies by
But right before the sun sets there is a certain anticipation
An array of colors weaves right before the sun is gone
The light blue gives away to a darker shade for a new view
Until the hues begin to change again right before dawn
I have breathed the cool air and felt the hot afternoon glare
When every step I took made my...
#dawn
#moon
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfReflection
#sun
116 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 8:47pm
14th Apr 2025 8:47pm
"~an epic in the making.."
https://youtu.be/jQmShrpQ3c0?feature=shared
(an inspired lyrical from this song link)
(intro verses)
an epic..
will you come & sing.. my breeze..
at this nascent dawning hours
of a newness flower in bloom..
this such pleasant now..
will it be embracing me..
a quizzical puzzle ..
is this future..
when the singing blue nightingale
becomes silent at this time..
an epic..
will you come & sing.. my...
(an inspired lyrical from this song link)
(intro verses)
an epic..
will you come & sing.. my breeze..
at this nascent dawning hours
of a newness flower in bloom..
this such pleasant now..
will it be embracing me..
a quizzical puzzle ..
is this future..
when the singing blue nightingale
becomes silent at this time..
an epic..
will you come & sing.. my...
#dawn
#flowers
#music
#nature
#universe
106 reads
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 5:36pm
26th Jan 2025 5:36pm
Antemeridian
She was a wee slip of a thing
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
#dawn
#moon
#morning #sun
#morning #sun
179 reads
14 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
1st Jul 2021 7:59am
1st Jul 2021 7:59am
The Forms of Flux
Im not who I was
2 years ago
2 months ago
2 days ago
2 minutes ago
2 seconds ago
This moment is like a closing portal -
bequeathing a sight of the self
that must be seized in the moment
as the moment transforms
and the self transforms
and everything transforms
Into the forms
of
flux.
2 years ago
2 months ago
2 days ago
2 minutes ago
2 seconds ago
This moment is like a closing portal -
bequeathing a sight of the self
that must be seized in the moment
as the moment transforms
and the self transforms
and everything transforms
Into the forms
of
flux.
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#dawn
333 reads
7 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Jan 2024 12:42pm
19th Jan 2024 12:42pm
Boreal Flower
the flower screaming
in the creases of the night
the afternoon screaming
your sunsets
its dawns and the
long night
leans out the window
and watch the procession pass
the night is still in the churchyard
loaded with wounds
the night falls from the eyes
of insomniacs and falls asleep
in the bed of all rivers
the night peers
the unfathomability.
in the creases of the night
the afternoon screaming
your sunsets
its dawns and the
long night
leans out the window
and watch the procession pass
the night is still in the churchyard
loaded with wounds
the night falls from the eyes
of insomniacs and falls asleep
in the bed of all rivers
the night peers
the unfathomability.
#grief
#sun
#despair
#emotions
#dawn
200 reads
1 Comment
runningturtle87
Poem Published
4th Jan 2022 1:37pm
4th Jan 2022 1:37pm
The Days of the Week
The Days of the Week
Each
Calendar
Starts
On its very
Own day.
Mine
Just
Begins
In its very
Own way.
Two
Taco
Tuesdays
For chicken
Take outs,
Two to
Eat there
And one
That just
Shouts.
Wednesdays
It's clear
That it's
All
My fault,
All my fault
Wednesdays
Is when
All wounds
Get salt.
Thursdays
It's back up
And all
Is
Reverse,
And then...
Each
Calendar
Starts
On its very
Own day.
Mine
Just
Begins
In its very
Own way.
Two
Taco
Tuesdays
For chicken
Take outs,
Two to
Eat there
And one
That just
Shouts.
Wednesdays
It's clear
That it's
All
My fault,
All my fault
Wednesdays
Is when
All wounds
Get salt.
Thursdays
It's back up
And all
Is
Reverse,
And then...
#morning
#night
#dawn
399 reads
0 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
27th Jun 2023 11:31pm
27th Jun 2023 11:31pm
I'm Civilized Now
Its hard to scrabble together words
Its like trying to capture feelings
When dry fitting stones
I remember cold mornings
Long draws on cigarettes
Last nights beer still clouding my mind
Ain't much different now
Just a helluva lot hotter
And I don't smoke
Don't drink boilermakers either
Let alone straight whiskey or beer
But I'm still pissed
And its still cloudy
I shoulda bought a Harley and rode west years ago
Been years since I rode ...
Its like trying to capture feelings
When dry fitting stones
I remember cold mornings
Long draws on cigarettes
Last nights beer still clouding my mind
Ain't much different now
Just a helluva lot hotter
And I don't smoke
Don't drink boilermakers either
Let alone straight whiskey or beer
But I'm still pissed
And its still cloudy
I shoulda bought a Harley and rode west years ago
Been years since I rode ...
#identity
#myself
#dawn
279 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 00:59am
22nd Jun 2024 00:59am
the robin
we had beer for breakfast
since the electric was off and we couldn’t boil the kettle
and there
was a robin in the garden
we sat drinking,
and dear, she says, take it slowly
let it settle
since the electric was off and we couldn’t boil the kettle
and there
was a robin in the garden
we sat drinking,
and dear, she says, take it slowly
let it settle
#dawn
158 reads
1 Comment
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2021 4:36pm
3rd Jun 2021 4:36pm
A dawning elixir (the umpteenth Ode in my never ending series)
Waiting for the sun
to come out and play
gathering my strength
to fight through the day
My dark super hero,
right at my side
whose energy I siphon,
fueling my stride
A knowing smile slowly curls
the corners of my mouth
as blood begins pumping
from north and then south
Black dispositions lighten,
along with the dawn
my savior's prepared me,
the game is now on
As the sky dances with beauty
the colorful playtime a delight
I softly cradle my coffee
My loyalest companion of...
to come out and play
gathering my strength
to fight through the day
My dark super hero,
right at my side
whose energy I siphon,
fueling my stride
A knowing smile slowly curls
the corners of my mouth
as blood begins pumping
from north and then south
Black dispositions lighten,
along with the dawn
my savior's prepared me,
the game is now on
As the sky dances with beauty
the colorful playtime a delight
I softly cradle my coffee
My loyalest companion of...
#love
#sun
#coffee
#rhyming
#dawn
590 reads
36 Comments
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