Poems About Dating Seeking Honest Critique
#dating
Poems about dating seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Koulouri
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 5:16am
10th Dec 2024 5:16am
Fruit Puzzles
I try to picture you in my life,
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
#dating
#LookingForLove
#love #lover
#love #lover
151 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
What will it take
For sure what I'm saying might be, happening in someone's own personal life, For sometimes down the very roads of our lives, that we will shed some tears in the silent of the darkness of our lives. But yet it's not over when you cry out in silence, while you are trying desperately not to cry. But instead you chose to fight back, the deepness of the truth of the fears that will haunts, you mostly in the wee hours of the night. For always remember that what doesn't kill you, only makes you that much stronger than you think. 🤔 For sure it's gonna be hard just to forget, about that part...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
168 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 7:50pm
24th Nov 2024 7:50pm
Make Sure That He Truly Loves You
Be proud to be who
you are even if you are
embracing a shirtless guy.
And don't forget to
make sure that he truly loves
you before getting married.
you are even if you are
embracing a shirtless guy.
And don't forget to
make sure that he truly loves
you before getting married.
#dating
#dialogue
#kindness
#lover
#sensual
161 reads
7 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
Changes
I shuttered my eyes and plugged my ears.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#LookingForLove
#love
206 reads
0 Comments
deadwolf
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 1:39am
9th Nov 2024 1:39am
The First Autumn
Down the hill, and across the field we wandered
Along the paths we walked and talked
laughing and playing, as children do
all day, till the sun ripened
Upon Silverbell lake,
where we swam, and made love in the waters
We ate peaches, from the tree,
with wild strawberries and sweet cream
Laying, on a blanket, drinking the last of the summers wine,
In, our first autum
Along the paths we walked and talked
laughing and playing, as children do
all day, till the sun ripened
Upon Silverbell lake,
where we swam, and made love in the waters
We ate peaches, from the tree,
with wild strawberries and sweet cream
Laying, on a blanket, drinking the last of the summers wine,
In, our first autum
#countryside
#dating
#love #wife
#love #wife
150 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
One Nervous Teenager
He would go to those dances
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
#dance
#dating
#fiction
#school
#ShortStory
112 reads
6 Comments
Major_NorfsideTsu
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 8:37pm
3rd Nov 2024 8:37pm
Tonight's Private Menu
#crush
#dating
#erotic
#lust
#seductive
343 reads
1 Comment
Koulouri
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 6:24pm
1st Nov 2024 6:24pm
I see you often
You are
the sun on my bed
on a calm afternoon
the orange in the leaves
during the change to autumn
the smell of clothes
after they have just been washed
the large chunk of chocolate
in my ice cream
the quiet whirring
of the fan overhead
the sun on my bed
on a calm afternoon
the orange in the leaves
during the change to autumn
the smell of clothes
after they have just been washed
the large chunk of chocolate
in my ice cream
the quiet whirring
of the fan overhead
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove #love
#FallingInLove #love
253 reads
3 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 5:16pm
31st Oct 2024 5:16pm
I Don't Smoke
My mind is always thinking of you,
and it's like you are
smoke.
You stick in my mind,
like the smell lingers in clothes,
and like how it clings to the walls of this house.
And I find myself,
doing laundry slowly,
so I can inhale each thought once more.
There is a fear,
that after each wash,
you will not be there.
But I hope my mind holds onto you
like the walls here changed color.
The nicotine mixed into the paint.
You mixed into my soul.
I don't smoke,
but I find myself, ...
and it's like you are
smoke.
You stick in my mind,
like the smell lingers in clothes,
and like how it clings to the walls of this house.
And I find myself,
doing laundry slowly,
so I can inhale each thought once more.
There is a fear,
that after each wash,
you will not be there.
But I hope my mind holds onto you
like the walls here changed color.
The nicotine mixed into the paint.
You mixed into my soul.
I don't smoke,
but I find myself, ...
#dating
#greed
#love
#lust
#passion
170 reads
2 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 8:52am
31st Oct 2024 8:52am
Sordid and Sacred
In my waking dreams I see a lady walking with me in the wind
and I with her. We are the same in essence, different in function.
I'm on this road to find out whether she walks among us, or elsewhere
and what makes her the same as me. Sordid and sacred.
The wind may twist her stiff straight swarthy hair
but love spins all things round right.
Is there a lady going this way, brave enough to do her heart’s bidding
not gazing into the social mirror nor counting its reflection dearer, unwitting?
Point us in the direction of where the...
and I with her. We are the same in essence, different in function.
I'm on this road to find out whether she walks among us, or elsewhere
and what makes her the same as me. Sordid and sacred.
The wind may twist her stiff straight swarthy hair
but love spins all things round right.
Is there a lady going this way, brave enough to do her heart’s bidding
not gazing into the social mirror nor counting its reflection dearer, unwitting?
Point us in the direction of where the...
#dating
#hope
#LookingForLove
153 reads
0 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 6:28pm
22nd Oct 2024 6:28pm
Ask Me
I want you to ask.
What's my favorite color?
What's my favorite food?
Who is my favorite artist?
I want you to ask me why.
Why do I love this painting?
Why do I listen to this song?
Why are you my favorite color?
Please, examine me.
Learn me.
Feel me.
Ask me.
I want my being to be
completely mapped out and
rewritten over
and over
As you memorize the answers,
only to ask me again,
just in case they have
changed.
All of this because
I simply...
What's my favorite color?
What's my favorite food?
Who is my favorite artist?
I want you to ask me why.
Why do I love this painting?
Why do I listen to this song?
Why are you my favorite color?
Please, examine me.
Learn me.
Feel me.
Ask me.
I want my being to be
completely mapped out and
rewritten over
and over
As you memorize the answers,
only to ask me again,
just in case they have
changed.
All of this because
I simply...
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#learning
#love
197 reads
2 Comments
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