Poems About a Crush by Top Critiquers
#crush
Poems about a crush by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Brother's Keeper
Youngest of three brothers
I'm stuck being his
Oldest Brother Keeper
Makes you feel like shit
Because your oldest brother
Likes the creature called
Hard Liquor which causes
Him to do crazy things like
engaging in sexual congress
With an 18 year old girl
Which is very creepy
Because she has Daddy Issues
I'm stuck being his
Oldest Brother Keeper
Makes you feel like shit
Because your oldest brother
Likes the creature called
Hard Liquor which causes
Him to do crazy things like
engaging in sexual congress
With an 18 year old girl
Which is very creepy
Because she has Daddy Issues
#brother
#erotic
#alcohol
#dirty
#crush
665 reads
5 Comments
Wanchorage
Like the city with a similar name
Wanchorage is a beautiful place,
with mountains greeting the ocean,
big bouncy whales
breaching their asses off,
and eagles riding air currents
like magic carpets
through endless azure skies.
Everyone in Wanchorage
has a mate,
a virtually perfect one
with whom they are virtually certain
they'd share a lifetime of sexual ecstasy
and day to day biss.
No one
is to say they are wrong.
No one is to say
there is someplace else they should be.
No one is to say ...
Wanchorage is a beautiful place,
with mountains greeting the ocean,
big bouncy whales
breaching their asses off,
and eagles riding air currents
like magic carpets
through endless azure skies.
Everyone in Wanchorage
has a mate,
a virtually perfect one
with whom they are virtually certain
they'd share a lifetime of sexual ecstasy
and day to day biss.
No one
is to say they are wrong.
No one is to say
there is someplace else they should be.
No one is to say ...
#happiness
#love
#magic
#escape
#crush
236 reads
4 Comments
Tragedy
a season of ripened fruit
no taste of sugar
to my tongue
did drip
no taste of sugar
to my tongue
did drip
#crush
#lust
114 reads
1 Comment
Need
I drip
and
I wait
I'm horny
and
need your
attention
I'm
in
position
and
need your
opaline
submission.
and
I wait
I'm horny
and
need your
attention
I'm
in
position
and
need your
opaline
submission.
#lust
#crush
588 reads
16 Comments
Sun in Rouge
wistful feelings kept hidden
behind glistening eyes
subtly sneaking glimpses
like the peeking sun in rouge
through the veil of clouds
at the distant moon
across the sky
always in sight yet forever distant
behind glistening eyes
subtly sneaking glimpses
like the peeking sun in rouge
through the veil of clouds
at the distant moon
across the sky
always in sight yet forever distant
#crush
86 reads
Soon The Time Shall Come
The loops of playtime
threaded through mind
it took just one look
and I was transported
the seduction of your mouth
before turning around
to be entered
It never fails
to provoke a need in me
to feel the energy
of your want
But I can no longer quietly wait
and deny myself
the opportunity
to find it
with another
That time has expired
and this mind must be rewired
I scan the faces sometimes
waiting for that delicious gleam in eye
I haven't seen it in some...
threaded through mind
it took just one look
and I was transported
the seduction of your mouth
before turning around
to be entered
It never fails
to provoke a need in me
to feel the energy
of your want
But I can no longer quietly wait
and deny myself
the opportunity
to find it
with another
That time has expired
and this mind must be rewired
I scan the faces sometimes
waiting for that delicious gleam in eye
I haven't seen it in some...
#acceptance
#crush
#lust #MovingOn
#lust #MovingOn
140 reads
3 Comments
Blue
#lust
#sex
#crush
808 reads
3 Comments
More Refreshing Than The A C Unit
The cool
breeze on her
naked
skin seems to be more
refreshing than the
A C unit in
the house...
or so Scott
figured.
breeze on her
naked
skin seems to be more
refreshing than the
A C unit in
the house...
or so Scott
figured.
#home
#summer
#fiction
#sensual
#crush
174 reads
0 Comments
russian=rushing pussy honey got her pay day here we go ffffamily......
Vixen's dick is bigger than yours here the sirens hearing you will see and seeing you will here as you each wish.
#lust
#crush
188 reads
0 Comments
Weeds and thorns
#beauty
#crush
#FallingInLove
166 reads
2 Comments
Teacher's pet
In the depths of night
"At a friend's house"
When shadows dance
Between the sheets
Our secret romance
A student's needs
So pure and true
Within these walls
Teacher's infatuation
Our passion grew
My body yearning
And heart entranced
Our desires...
A forbidden chance
Together we'll defy
My passion filled...
A flame that burns
Our secret kept
And bodies aligned
Through the year
Eyes that glow,
with lust and fire
Teacher, student,
Learning to submit
Forever inspired
"At a friend's house"
When shadows dance
Between the sheets
Our secret romance
A student's needs
So pure and true
Within these walls
Teacher's infatuation
Our passion grew
My body yearning
And heart entranced
Our desires...
A forbidden chance
Together we'll defy
My passion filled...
A flame that burns
Our secret kept
And bodies aligned
Through the year
Eyes that glow,
with lust and fire
Teacher, student,
Learning to submit
Forever inspired
#lust
#confessional
#learning
#crush
#temptation
509 reads
36 Comments
So Anyway, Later
So Anyway, Later
Um, hey.
I don't know.
Maybe it seems silly
that I would like to hold your hand.
Maybe we could go to a concert,
check out some stellar band.
I just, uh, know that when I see you,
wow! You really make me smile!
My troubles seem to float away
for like a little while.
I'm like, not the greatest dancer
but maybe I'd give it a try.
Man! I can't believe I'm doing this
'cuz I'm really pretty shy!
So, whatever,
I just thought that maybe
we could hang out. ...
Um, hey.
I don't know.
Maybe it seems silly
that I would like to hold your hand.
Maybe we could go to a concert,
check out some stellar band.
I just, uh, know that when I see you,
wow! You really make me smile!
My troubles seem to float away
for like a little while.
I'm like, not the greatest dancer
but maybe I'd give it a try.
Man! I can't believe I'm doing this
'cuz I'm really pretty shy!
So, whatever,
I just thought that maybe
we could hang out. ...
#love
#FallingInLove
#crush
291 reads
0 Comments
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