Poems About a Crush Seeking Honest Critique
#crush
Poems about a crush seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Koulouri
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 6:24pm
1st Nov 2024 6:24pm
I see you often
You are
the sun on my bed
on a calm afternoon
the orange in the leaves
during the change to autumn
the smell of clothes
after they have just been washed
the large chunk of chocolate
in my ice cream
the quiet whirring
of the fan overhead
the sun on my bed
on a calm afternoon
the orange in the leaves
during the change to autumn
the smell of clothes
after they have just been washed
the large chunk of chocolate
in my ice cream
the quiet whirring
of the fan overhead
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove #love
#FallingInLove #love
184 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 5:19pm
29th Oct 2024 5:19pm
Cinnamon' Pumpkin Sardonic Smile
I don't want to carve a pumpkin,
I want to shape it with tender hands,
crafting contours that capture your smile,
the warmth that lights up the room.
Orange flesh beneath my touch,
transforms with each careful movement,
until the lines mirror your joy,
etched in the ephemeral surface.
No sharp edges or hollow eyes,
only the gentle curve of laughter
and the softness of a thousand shared moments,
whispered secrets held in the glow.
In this creation, fleeting and fragile,
I find a piece of you,
a...
I want to shape it with tender hands,
crafting contours that capture your smile,
the warmth that lights up the room.
Orange flesh beneath my touch,
transforms with each careful movement,
until the lines mirror your joy,
etched in the ephemeral surface.
No sharp edges or hollow eyes,
only the gentle curve of laughter
and the softness of a thousand shared moments,
whispered secrets held in the glow.
In this creation, fleeting and fragile,
I find a piece of you,
a...
#crush
#dark
#despair
#evil
#ghosts
83 reads
7 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
There is No Floor Here
I want to be possessive of you.
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
#boyfriend
#crush
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#LookingForLove
235 reads
0 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 6:28pm
22nd Oct 2024 6:28pm
Ask Me
I want you to ask.
What's my favorite color?
What's my favorite food?
Who is my favorite artist?
I want you to ask me why.
Why do I love this painting?
Why do I listen to this song?
Why are you my favorite color?
Please, examine me.
Learn me.
Feel me.
Ask me.
I want my being to be
completely mapped out and
rewritten over
and over
As you memorize the answers,
only to ask me again,
just in case they have
changed.
All of this because
I simply...
What's my favorite color?
What's my favorite food?
Who is my favorite artist?
I want you to ask me why.
Why do I love this painting?
Why do I listen to this song?
Why are you my favorite color?
Please, examine me.
Learn me.
Feel me.
Ask me.
I want my being to be
completely mapped out and
rewritten over
and over
As you memorize the answers,
only to ask me again,
just in case they have
changed.
All of this because
I simply...
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#learning
#love
147 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 12:50pm
17th Oct 2024 12:50pm
looking for your scent
I spend time
looking for you
trying to find out
where are you
where are all the wires
your feet-thoughts
your mouth-regret
where are you?
where is the ecstasy?
that you knew how to achieve
that you knew how to hide
that you knew you didn't know
time passes
glued to your feet
penances
quiet on your lips
flames
I waste my time
lurking for you
where will you be
when I'm not
looking for you?
looking for you
trying to find out
where are you
where are all the wires
your feet-thoughts
your mouth-regret
where are you?
where is the ecstasy?
that you knew how to achieve
that you knew how to hide
that you knew you didn't know
time passes
glued to your feet
penances
quiet on your lips
flames
I waste my time
lurking for you
where will you be
when I'm not
looking for you?
#crush
#rain
#revenge
#secrets
#wind
101 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 8:16pm
16th Oct 2024 8:16pm
Ethereal Longing The Touch ThatWasnt
saddest thing ever
your skin and mine ~ will never
touch ~ except in dreams
your skin and mine ~ will never
touch ~ except in dreams
#crush
#love
#senryu #UnrequitedLove
#senryu #UnrequitedLove
144 reads
5 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 8:29pm
13th Oct 2024 8:29pm
Your Name
I say your name in my mind
like it is a secret.
Tasting it slowly,
feeling its curves inside my mouth.
I want to ask you
if you like it
as much as I do.
I want to know if you hear
the desire
behind each letter
as I spell it out loud.
I will hold onto your name,
for many years to come.
Its syllables
forever encapsulated
in my ear drums.
like it is a secret.
Tasting it slowly,
feeling its curves inside my mouth.
I want to ask you
if you like it
as much as I do.
I want to know if you hear
the desire
behind each letter
as I spell it out loud.
I will hold onto your name,
for many years to come.
Its syllables
forever encapsulated
in my ear drums.
#crush
#FallingInLove
#love
162 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 12:58pm
12th Oct 2024 12:58pm
Mr Confidence (little schoolboy)
Mr confidence little schoolboy
Who are you discovering
Your true self or a parade of lies
Sit by the beating heart of my being
Pulse quickens blood restricts
Walking with my princess
But I’m a hollow shell
Fake a laugh
When all I want to say is
Run away with me
On a beach for two
With a fuzzy drink and umbrella
Had my chance
Struck out looking
Didn’t swing the bat
Take my best chance to show her
Kicking up dust
On the way back to the dugout
Spit on...
Who are you discovering
Your true self or a parade of lies
Sit by the beating heart of my being
Pulse quickens blood restricts
Walking with my princess
But I’m a hollow shell
Fake a laugh
When all I want to say is
Run away with me
On a beach for two
With a fuzzy drink and umbrella
Had my chance
Struck out looking
Didn’t swing the bat
Take my best chance to show her
Kicking up dust
On the way back to the dugout
Spit on...
#beauty
#crush
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
81 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 11:17am
8th Oct 2024 11:17am
Because I Love You
You walk into a room,
and you see the door smack your back
Never once would you believe,
that you now need to leave
Then you fall through the wall,
no escape, as you begin to crawl
You decide there's an easier way,
this is how you're life will change, for you
Some people say that I'm alone... yeah!
They can't understand the reason why...yeah!
When the bell of my heart rings,
I'll know what to sing
That is why I sing to you,
because that I love you
All these feelings I know are true...
and you see the door smack your back
Never once would you believe,
that you now need to leave
Then you fall through the wall,
no escape, as you begin to crawl
You decide there's an easier way,
this is how you're life will change, for you
Some people say that I'm alone... yeah!
They can't understand the reason why...yeah!
When the bell of my heart rings,
I'll know what to sing
That is why I sing to you,
because that I love you
All these feelings I know are true...
#crush
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou #romantic
#ILoveYou #romantic
188 reads
8 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 9:16am
28th Sep 2024 9:16am
Caramel Kitten of My Dreams
Caramel kitten of my dreams
Persian rugs silk sheets
Preys on me like a tiger
Electric light in her eyes
I’m hypnotized by beauty
Purrs like a mustang
Wonder what’s under her hood
I prowl on the perimeter of her
Want to dip into her love
Toss and turn try to forget
Caramel kitten of my dreams
I am in your reach
Want to put kisses on your pillow
You know I’m here you want me too
I’ll be your tried and true
I’ll keep you coming back for more
And my love keeps giving...
Persian rugs silk sheets
Preys on me like a tiger
Electric light in her eyes
I’m hypnotized by beauty
Purrs like a mustang
Wonder what’s under her hood
I prowl on the perimeter of her
Want to dip into her love
Toss and turn try to forget
Caramel kitten of my dreams
I am in your reach
Want to put kisses on your pillow
You know I’m here you want me too
I’ll be your tried and true
I’ll keep you coming back for more
And my love keeps giving...
#beauty
#crush
#gratitude
#relationships
#romantic
170 reads
0 Comments
SommersWill
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 9:04pm
15th Sep 2024 9:04pm
Let the sirens sing
Tonight is not remarkable
tonight won't ever matter again
Tomorrow I will see you for the first
and final time
My heart will ache and I'll soothe
its soft cries
With the hard-won knowledge I have found.
But before reason and sense overrule me
I will wade into this wide ocean first
Let its currents try to drown me with
Hope and Despair
Let its waves crush me with Promise
and Disappointment
Let me gulp down the salt and praise
my swift end.
Once more into the Deep, Dark Below
One more time...
tonight won't ever matter again
Tomorrow I will see you for the first
and final time
My heart will ache and I'll soothe
its soft cries
With the hard-won knowledge I have found.
But before reason and sense overrule me
I will wade into this wide ocean first
Let its currents try to drown me with
Hope and Despair
Let its waves crush me with Promise
and Disappointment
Let me gulp down the salt and praise
my swift end.
Once more into the Deep, Dark Below
One more time...
#crush
#FallingInLove
#relationships
#sadness
#UnrequitedLove
112 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 00:23am
13th Sep 2024 00:23am
Sweet Tooth
I never considered myself as having a sweet tooth
if my coffee is too sweet
I pour it out
if the frosting of a cake is too sweet
I push it aside
Even if the fruit is too ripe
I will not take a bite
Then you came along my views changed
My thoughts converted to all sorts of delectable delights
I wondered how your lips would taste
After you ate that grape
How your skin would taste
With that shimmery hue
Making me wonder if it tastes like...
if my coffee is too sweet
I pour it out
if the frosting of a cake is too sweet
I push it aside
Even if the fruit is too ripe
I will not take a bite
Then you came along my views changed
My thoughts converted to all sorts of delectable delights
I wondered how your lips would taste
After you ate that grape
How your skin would taste
With that shimmery hue
Making me wonder if it tastes like...
#admiration
#crush
#romantic
162 reads
19 Comments
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