Poems About Conflict Seeking Honest Critique
#conflict
Poems about conflict seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 10:27am
3rd Dec 2024 10:27am
Searchin for death
Death
I've been looking for you
I have choked life
Shook it by it's scrawny neck
Fucked the taste out of it's mouth
Made it scream
Making it want to die
Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail
Come on
Show me what you got!
I've been looking for you
I have choked life
Shook it by it's scrawny neck
Fucked the taste out of it's mouth
Made it scream
Making it want to die
Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail
Come on
Show me what you got!
#conflict
#dark
#death
#fate
#LifeStruggles
129 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 8:14pm
29th Nov 2024 8:14pm
A Gross Abecedarian tale...backwards
#conflict
#dirty
#illness #money
#illness #money
147 reads
14 Comments
ChaosScripted
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 7:29pm
25th Nov 2024 7:29pm
“Winter Weddings”
Turned my back;
Promises betrayed.
Vows broken.
Wishing I had stayed.
Decisions made in desperation,
Too late to turn around.
Running from my past,
A path of destruction found.
Blinded by pain.
Stupid became self-destructive:
Searching for death
Proved productive.
Clean is the razors cut;
Clean is the deadly dope.
Consumed in anguish
Killing myself to cope.
The hour soon to strike,
Fate deeply rooted.
Embrace the path,
Every step sure-footed.
Heart in His hands
Saved by His Grace. ...
Promises betrayed.
Vows broken.
Wishing I had stayed.
Decisions made in desperation,
Too late to turn around.
Running from my past,
A path of destruction found.
Blinded by pain.
Stupid became self-destructive:
Searching for death
Proved productive.
Clean is the razors cut;
Clean is the deadly dope.
Consumed in anguish
Killing myself to cope.
The hour soon to strike,
Fate deeply rooted.
Embrace the path,
Every step sure-footed.
Heart in His hands
Saved by His Grace. ...
#betrayal
#conflict
#regret
#sadness
#TimeHeals
138 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 8:30pm
17th Nov 2024 8:30pm
Do Not Disturb
silence.
respect
my
wishes
respect
my
wishes
#conflict
#minimalist
#silence
98 reads
7 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 11:15pm
16th Nov 2024 11:15pm
Clay Pigeons (Part 3)
Easter egg planted Pineapples
cluster claymore laden poem verse
Trap lines trigger booby detonator
deadlock provoked drown immerse
SS Britanica land mine sunk to shore
on typhoon hurricane pull pins inverse
Magellan cognition gore circumnavigated
mind blown particulates spray disburse
Air-to-air taut pyro nuggets pluck telekinetic
on sonic brain combust ocean splatter curse
Motion vile explosive fragments bang attune
dissect shrapnel pitch out cranial void hurts
Tannerite incendiary gas can...
cluster claymore laden poem verse
Trap lines trigger booby detonator
deadlock provoked drown immerse
SS Britanica land mine sunk to shore
on typhoon hurricane pull pins inverse
Magellan cognition gore circumnavigated
mind blown particulates spray disburse
Air-to-air taut pyro nuggets pluck telekinetic
on sonic brain combust ocean splatter curse
Motion vile explosive fragments bang attune
dissect shrapnel pitch out cranial void hurts
Tannerite incendiary gas can...
#bittersweet
#conflict
#soldiers
#war
#violence
148 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 7:07am
15th Nov 2024 7:07am
Another Problem Solved
How can I miss you?
When you never go away
Water’s wet sky is blue
Another victim falls prey
Outside in the distance
A stranger lies in wait
Steeped in persistence
Always guarding the gate
When did I get wise?
Is the proper question
As soon as a crow flies
It disregards suggestion
Across from the station
Where young lovers flirt
All over God’s creation
Someone’s slinging dirt
When did you sell it?
And why wasn’t I involved?
Shut up and take a hit
Another...
When you never go away
Water’s wet sky is blue
Another victim falls prey
Outside in the distance
A stranger lies in wait
Steeped in persistence
Always guarding the gate
When did I get wise?
Is the proper question
As soon as a crow flies
It disregards suggestion
Across from the station
Where young lovers flirt
All over God’s creation
Someone’s slinging dirt
When did you sell it?
And why wasn’t I involved?
Shut up and take a hit
Another...
#conflict
#marijuana
210 reads
17 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 11:53am
12th Nov 2024 11:53am
lack of appetite
this is faint-astic
and in-cunt-prehensible
way out of the real cap a city
give some room
to the space extent range
in the scope of a hole sun of a compass
sorry, no pun intended...
die, motherfucker, die.
and in-cunt-prehensible
way out of the real cap a city
give some room
to the space extent range
in the scope of a hole sun of a compass
sorry, no pun intended...
die, motherfucker, die.
#anger
#anxiety
#conflict
#myself
#violence
121 reads
6 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 9:27pm
9th Nov 2024 9:27pm
The Ultimate Cure (Part 2)
K][N][O][W] [T][H][Y] [S][E][L][F]
entering Enlightened ancient knowledge learning zone
What’s good for the Goose is lost for the Gander
to each temple [Understand] Hertz of its very own
Om chant Meditation seems to be practice
of putting your brain in tranquil aurora vegetative state
My avatar Aura uproots chakra 852 Hz frequency different
[ground beast] [all Beef] [no chase] [no hesitate]
Snatched raven(ous) out my life-suit to cloud thought tangent
Judas Clashed over a Quest(ionable) 3rd eye
30 second Yoga disappointed...
entering Enlightened ancient knowledge learning zone
What’s good for the Goose is lost for the Gander
to each temple [Understand] Hertz of its very own
Om chant Meditation seems to be practice
of putting your brain in tranquil aurora vegetative state
My avatar Aura uproots chakra 852 Hz frequency different
[ground beast] [all Beef] [no chase] [no hesitate]
Snatched raven(ous) out my life-suit to cloud thought tangent
Judas Clashed over a Quest(ionable) 3rd eye
30 second Yoga disappointed...
#conflict
#ThrillSeeking
#Hindu
#wisdom
#angels
266 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 9:12pm
6th Nov 2024 9:12pm
Strangling Yourself
Cover your scars again
Now fall into the pit
Break from the walls you've made
And fall into the pit
The darkest hole is where I dwell
Wait for the end to come
Coward inside of my own shell
The end has just begun!
Life takes its toll
Dig myself a deeper hole
Life takes its toll
Dig myself a deeper hole
Strangling yourself
Now fall into the pit
Break from the walls you've made
And fall into the pit
The darkest hole is where I dwell
Wait for the end to come
Coward inside of my own shell
The end has just begun!
Life takes its toll
Dig myself a deeper hole
Life takes its toll
Dig myself a deeper hole
Strangling yourself
#conflict
#depression
#emptiness #loneliness
#emptiness #loneliness
139 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 9:01pm
6th Nov 2024 9:01pm
Brine Song
Priest kissed those cold clay lips
Form mutilated on battle between ships
A gift given back from grey seas
Fish and brine ate up everything below the knee
Once a man of honor, strong and bold
A warrior forged in fire and mold
He sailed beneath both storm and star
To find his fate in realms afar
A tale of powder’s burn and sabres’ flash
Of cannon’s roar and timbers’ crash
Where mortal form on reefs was dashed
And hope, like sails, to tatters lashed
The waves bore witness, fierce and grim
As bloodied waters...
Form mutilated on battle between ships
A gift given back from grey seas
Fish and brine ate up everything below the knee
Once a man of honor, strong and bold
A warrior forged in fire and mold
He sailed beneath both storm and star
To find his fate in realms afar
A tale of powder’s burn and sabres’ flash
Of cannon’s roar and timbers’ crash
Where mortal form on reefs was dashed
And hope, like sails, to tatters lashed
The waves bore witness, fierce and grim
As bloodied waters...
#conflict
#dark
#death
#sea
#water
87 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 7:45pm
1st Nov 2024 7:45pm
My Eternal Flame
I’m reaching out for you
Feel my warmth come through
Screaming out your name
My love is driving me insane
Walking in the rain
Feel the touch of my face
You’re not here – to dry my tears away
How can I make you see
I am the other half
That reflects your eyes
Weren't you the love of my life?
My heart will never find peace
I always feel that something’s missing
Something’s missing....
My eternal flame
Feel my warmth come through
Screaming out your name
My love is driving me insane
Walking in the rain
Feel the touch of my face
You’re not here – to dry my tears away
How can I make you see
I am the other half
That reflects your eyes
Weren't you the love of my life?
My heart will never find peace
I always feel that something’s missing
Something’s missing....
My eternal flame
#breakup
#conflict
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#love
165 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 7:14pm
25th Oct 2024 7:14pm
These are the days
Smell the rain and watch the sky
This is what i give you
Touch the skin and taste the lips
This is what i have given you
The sand is warm and so are you
Swirl in the water that lick the shores
I have no light to guide you
So make your way by strife
I have nothing else to give you
But an ending life
Never ask why daylight dies
Why the herds head for higher ground
Never ask why i thought you to lie
And to hurt the one you love
Never ask why the night is cold
And why the wind tears in your soul
Never ask...
This is what i give you
Touch the skin and taste the lips
This is what i have given you
The sand is warm and so are you
Swirl in the water that lick the shores
I have no light to guide you
So make your way by strife
I have nothing else to give you
But an ending life
Never ask why daylight dies
Why the herds head for higher ground
Never ask why i thought you to lie
And to hurt the one you love
Never ask why the night is cold
And why the wind tears in your soul
Never ask...
#betrayal
#breakup
#conflict
#relationships
#sadness
170 reads
4 Comments
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