Poems About Conflict Seeking Honest Critique
#conflict
Poems about conflict seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sable_Oceana
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:21pm
Yesterday 9:21pm
Duality Within
In the depths of my being, a conflict resides
Two sides of myself, they constantly collide
One filled with light, the other with dark
A battle for dominance, a perpetual mark
Identity torn between these opposing forces
One seeks love and peace, the other enforces
A cold and calculating agenda of pain
Striving for control, driving me insane
Evil's allure can be hard to resist
A seductive force, a dangerous twist
Temptation lures me to the darker side
A place where morality is cast aside
Yet, a glimmer of hope still...
Two sides of myself, they constantly collide
One filled with light, the other with dark
A battle for dominance, a perpetual mark
Identity torn between these opposing forces
One seeks love and peace, the other enforces
A cold and calculating agenda of pain
Striving for control, driving me insane
Evil's allure can be hard to resist
A seductive force, a dangerous twist
Temptation lures me to the darker side
A place where morality is cast aside
Yet, a glimmer of hope still...
#conflict
#identity
#evil
#acceptance
#philosophical
13 reads
0 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
15th Mar 2023 7:35pm
15th Mar 2023 7:35pm
The Strawman Cult
The belief is that Christ is the Appeaser of the Father’s fury, influencing Him to act contrary to His real character. He supposedly shows mercy when it is not in His heart or nature to do so.” - F.W.
For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. John 3:16
How could Fred Write be right when most preachers lead with John 3:16?
This depiction of the majority Christianity in the book The Character of God appears to be for the purpose of isolating the movement...
For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. John 3:16
How could Fred Write be right when most preachers lead with John 3:16?
This depiction of the majority Christianity in the book The Character of God appears to be for the purpose of isolating the movement...
#conflict
#religion
#God #apocalypse
#God #apocalypse
47 reads
1 Comment
DreamIllusions
Poem Published
15th Mar 2023 3:04pm
15th Mar 2023 3:04pm
FIGHTING
Was last night even real
Did I just make believe
Or dream, of a broken deal
That I was in a hole
Lights blinding my soul
Shining in my face
Couldn’t hide
No matter how hard I tried
Blankets ripped away
Cold air sucked in my lungs
Cruel words, heavy weight
Spat out statements
That no one should ever say
Beating my eardrums
Until light of day
The warmth of the night
Just
Stripped away
Did I just make believe
Or dream, of a broken deal
That I was in a hole
Lights blinding my soul
Shining in my face
Couldn’t hide
No matter how hard I tried
Blankets ripped away
Cold air sucked in my lungs
Cruel words, heavy weight
Spat out statements
That no one should ever say
Beating my eardrums
Until light of day
The warmth of the night
Just
Stripped away
#sadness
#heartbroken
#conflict
#betrayal
#disappointment
61 reads
0 Comments
Skelly
Poem Published
14th Mar 2023 2:56am
14th Mar 2023 2:56am
Thorns
Thorns mourn the rose
clipped and displayed
to wilt and dispose
in a life and death trade
lost love gone
memories fade
thorns carry on
not lonely but neglected
not bitter but betrayed
not discouraged but rejected
forever unafraid
mourning the rose
clipped and displayed
clipped and displayed
to wilt and dispose
in a life and death trade
lost love gone
memories fade
thorns carry on
not lonely but neglected
not bitter but betrayed
not discouraged but rejected
forever unafraid
mourning the rose
clipped and displayed
#strength
#conflict
#fate
43 reads
2 Comments
Skelly
Poem Published
11th Mar 2023 11:13pm
11th Mar 2023 11:13pm
Deeper
Childhood trauma
backwards karma
dig deeper
bachelors and masters
financial disasters
dig deeper
forced resignations
false allegations
dig deeper
shattered visions
failed decisions
dig deeper
deeper and deeper
through your skin
through your bones
to the soul that lies within
through your craziest twilight zones through dimensions never known
and deeper deeper evermore
backwards karma
dig deeper
bachelors and masters
financial disasters
dig deeper
forced resignations
false allegations
dig deeper
shattered visions
failed decisions
dig deeper
deeper and deeper
through your skin
through your bones
to the soul that lies within
through your craziest twilight zones through dimensions never known
and deeper deeper evermore
#breakup
#conflict
#betrayal
#faith
#MovingOn
65 reads
2 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2023 8:17am
3rd Mar 2023 8:17am
Tartan picnic blanket
I take refuge
on the pink tartan picnic blanket
and stare up at the clouds overhead
ask myself science questions
I don't know the answers to
and could ask Google later
but probably won't
I watch the birds fly over
watch the wind rustle the leaves
look at flowers I've forgotten the names of
scattered through my overgrown herb garden
and wish that life
was always this peaceful
on the pink tartan picnic blanket
and stare up at the clouds overhead
ask myself science questions
I don't know the answers to
and could ask Google later
but probably won't
I watch the birds fly over
watch the wind rustle the leaves
look at flowers I've forgotten the names of
scattered through my overgrown herb garden
and wish that life
was always this peaceful
#conflict
#peace
#SelfReflection
80 reads
6 Comments
Louisamay
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2023 8:23pm
2nd Mar 2023 8:23pm
Is it worth it?
I struggle to understand
how a four letter word can describe
the pain, the anguish, the confusion and the complete happiness
so, maybe the answer is there in that simple four letter word
don't understand, but live, breathe, immerse and trust
grab the possibility hold onto the promise
trust in the process, value the experience
and don't let go
because after all, its all that ever really mattered
how a four letter word can describe
the pain, the anguish, the confusion and the complete happiness
so, maybe the answer is there in that simple four letter word
don't understand, but live, breathe, immerse and trust
grab the possibility hold onto the promise
trust in the process, value the experience
and don't let go
because after all, its all that ever really mattered
#happiness
#love
#courage
#conflict
#confusion
103 reads
2 Comments
luddep
Poem Published
24th Feb 2023 10:37pm
24th Feb 2023 10:37pm
Eggshell defense
It’s not up to me
I bend
Or cup my hand
To drink myself happy
For the moment
It’s not up to you
You wrestle with old apartment dust
In every corner
It multiplies to infinity
It’s not up to the man on the street
He’s got nothing to say about it
He’s got nothing to say about us
And knows nothing of it
I think the egg
Came before the chicken
Thats logical
To me
I bend
Or cup my hand
To drink myself happy
For the moment
It’s not up to you
You wrestle with old apartment dust
In every corner
It multiplies to infinity
It’s not up to the man on the street
He’s got nothing to say about it
He’s got nothing to say about us
And knows nothing of it
I think the egg
Came before the chicken
Thats logical
To me
#love
#relationships
#conflict
79 reads
0 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
15th Feb 2023 10:26pm
15th Feb 2023 10:26pm
Jus Bellum
Rare is the righteous fight
Defending what is worth burned in war's light
Nations clash with just cause in their heart
To safeguard freedom or prevent evil's start
Their cause is noble, their intent is true
To vanquish tyranny, and a tyrant's crew
The cost is steep and the price is high to pay
But for the greater good they march to fray
With honor in their soul
They seek to win and remain whole
The battles rage and the he fury never end
Might prevails and new dawn ascends...
Defending what is worth burned in war's light
Nations clash with just cause in their heart
To safeguard freedom or prevent evil's start
Their cause is noble, their intent is true
To vanquish tyranny, and a tyrant's crew
The cost is steep and the price is high to pay
But for the greater good they march to fray
With honor in their soul
They seek to win and remain whole
The battles rage and the he fury never end
Might prevails and new dawn ascends...
#dark
#conflict
#war
#rhyming
#narrative
34 reads
0 Comments
Fishmander
Poem Published
8th Feb 2023 7:43pm
8th Feb 2023 7:43pm
New Disease
Oh you like my soul
Well hey look I like it too
Cash consent, full access through
Chop me up to bits and then
Boost me up your recommends
Sure it's harrowing
Digitized we broadcast wide
Simulation in your mind,
Feeding you while feeling me
Donate to our new disease
Download endlessly
Cybernetic sympathies
Ripping off identities,
More of me in you than me
Like grand wildfire entropy.
Well hey look I like it too
Cash consent, full access through
Chop me up to bits and then
Boost me up your recommends
Sure it's harrowing
Digitized we broadcast wide
Simulation in your mind,
Feeding you while feeling me
Donate to our new disease
Download endlessly
Cybernetic sympathies
Ripping off identities,
More of me in you than me
Like grand wildfire entropy.
#dark
#conflict
#technology
#evolution
#HumanRights
120 reads
2 Comments
BlueBeastGirl
Beasty
Beasty
Poem Published
30th Jan 2023 6:42pm
30th Jan 2023 6:42pm
mistaking adrenaline for butterflies
The people in my family are cursed by their own hand
Generational trauma attracting a certain kind of lover
Broken with sad eyes and a story that breaks your heart
Anger living in their fists and haunting their mouths
Using life ruining methods to numb their pain
When your home was never safe for you
You have to distrust those who feel like home
Beautiful damage meeting beautiful damage
Doesn't always make something beautiful
Feeling comfortable in feeling unsafe with them
Mistaking adrenaline for butterflies is dangerous
There's a...
Generational trauma attracting a certain kind of lover
Broken with sad eyes and a story that breaks your heart
Anger living in their fists and haunting their mouths
Using life ruining methods to numb their pain
When your home was never safe for you
You have to distrust those who feel like home
Beautiful damage meeting beautiful damage
Doesn't always make something beautiful
Feeling comfortable in feeling unsafe with them
Mistaking adrenaline for butterflies is dangerous
There's a...
#anger
#anxiety
#conflict
#DomesticViolence
#fear
119 reads
6 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
26th Jan 2023 2:01pm
26th Jan 2023 2:01pm
Rump Pa Pa Pum
Don't have to agree with your point of view
In order for me to amicably respect you
Too few ride this midnight train of thought
Ignorantly disrespecting; erecting wars to be fought
Causing rage to inject its deadly venom
Civility ejects before destroying kingdoms
Rump pa pa pum bellowing is the chorus
As bullets fly in the sky like they're Horus
In order for me to amicably respect you
Too few ride this midnight train of thought
Ignorantly disrespecting; erecting wars to be fought
Causing rage to inject its deadly venom
Civility ejects before destroying kingdoms
Rump pa pa pum bellowing is the chorus
As bullets fly in the sky like they're Horus
#conflict
148 reads
3 Comments
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