Cinquain Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#cinquain
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Jun 2024 10:41am
7th Jun 2024 10:41am
What's For Breakfast?
Morning…
What can we eat?
How about some pig’s feet?
There enjoyable with coffee
No thanks.
What can we eat?
How about some pig’s feet?
There enjoyable with coffee
No thanks.
#cinquain
#food
#funny
124 reads
8 Comments
Josiah
Poem Published
14th Mar 2024 3:40am
14th Mar 2024 3:40am
Scar Tissues
Streams fall
Mine leak for you
But it will never be
So, keep breathing as I decay
Drops dry
Mine leak for you
But it will never be
So, keep breathing as I decay
Drops dry
#love
#cinquain
134 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Feb 2024 8:30pm
28th Feb 2024 8:30pm
Tit For Tat
Yo, prick
cross your fingers
I hope to see you die
you’ve given me nothing but pain
my turn
cross your fingers
I hope to see you die
you’ve given me nothing but pain
my turn
#cinquain
119 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 9:45pm
5th Feb 2024 9:45pm
No Thanks
Morning…
What can we eat?
How about some pig’s feet?
There enjoyable with coffee
No thanks.
What can we eat?
How about some pig’s feet?
There enjoyable with coffee
No thanks.
#cinquain
#food
117 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Jun 2023 12:25pm
8th Jun 2023 12:25pm
He Saw It Looked Great
Girlfriend.
She who loves him.
She modeled a swimsuit
and he saw it looked great on his
lover.
She who loves him.
She modeled a swimsuit
and he saw it looked great on his
lover.
#romantic
#fiction
#cinquain
#lover
#seductive
205 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
8th Jun 2021 4:42pm
8th Jun 2021 4:42pm
your love alone
a garland cinquain
kiss me
like that once more,
that i may know how deep
the fountains of love’s aquifer
reside.
reside
where shines the sun,
ere morning arrows past
and too soon evening covers me
with gloom.
with gloom
shall i not walk,
though heavy shadows stir
an appetite for requiem.
begone,
begone,
sad countenance!
what now the warbler’s song:
your song alone of love shall yet
my heart,
my heart
re-elevate.
for it esteems...
kiss me
like that once more,
that i may know how deep
the fountains of love’s aquifer
reside.
reside
where shines the sun,
ere morning arrows past
and too soon evening covers me
with gloom.
with gloom
shall i not walk,
though heavy shadows stir
an appetite for requiem.
begone,
begone,
sad countenance!
what now the warbler’s song:
your song alone of love shall yet
my heart,
my heart
re-elevate.
for it esteems...
#relationships
#romantic
#cinquain
511 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
7th May 2021 8:46pm
7th May 2021 8:46pm
aquifer
butterfly cinquain
mercy
drier than the
river with no water:
how the lack of human kindness
mirrors
places in the arid desert,
where poor, helpless creatures
bow their heads in
silence!
© Copyright 2021 April 29
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
mercy
drier than the
river with no water:
how the lack of human kindness
mirrors
places in the arid desert,
where poor, helpless creatures
bow their heads in
silence!
© Copyright 2021 April 29
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#kindness
#cinquain
#inequality #poverty
#inequality #poverty
340 reads
2 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
1st May 2021 9:56pm
1st May 2021 9:56pm
Trapped in space
Father
drank the night sky,
sketched stars on my skin,
as bright as burning cigarettes.
Black holes
gave me Orion's belt and the
traces left by comets,
his atmosphere,
lifeless.
drank the night sky,
sketched stars on my skin,
as bright as burning cigarettes.
Black holes
gave me Orion's belt and the
traces left by comets,
his atmosphere,
lifeless.
#cinquain
675 reads
12 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
29th Apr 2021 8:42pm
29th Apr 2021 8:42pm
respite
butterfly cinquain
silence
is the recess
of the hurried spirit
if by chance it find some golden
respite
whereupon in deep reflection
it may life recover
in a world of
chaos
© Copyright 2021 April 29
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
silence
is the recess
of the hurried spirit
if by chance it find some golden
respite
whereupon in deep reflection
it may life recover
in a world of
chaos
© Copyright 2021 April 29
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#silence
#cinquain
#healing
403 reads
6 Comments
Hunterapsych
Poem Published
10th Feb 2020 1:08am
10th Feb 2020 1:08am
Cinquain
Spaced out
but stuck in time
tempted to make a break
I will stick it out for now though
patience
but stuck in time
tempted to make a break
I will stick it out for now though
patience
#cinquain
#WritingPoetry
#SelfReflection
359 reads
7 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
4th Nov 2019 5:09am
4th Nov 2019 5:09am
cinchona
lofty
your majestic
mountains shade my valleys
while i drink your cooling rivers
below
© Copyright 2019 November 03
by Clyve A Bowen♫
your majestic
mountains shade my valleys
while i drink your cooling rivers
below
© Copyright 2019 November 03
by Clyve A Bowen♫
#river
#nature
#mountains #cinquain
#mountains #cinquain
1125 reads
5 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
5th May 2019 7:48am
5th May 2019 7:48am
Arresting Motion
Today,
at around noon,
I will stop becoming
for a couple of hours; who wants
to join?
at around noon,
I will stop becoming
for a couple of hours; who wants
to join?
#cinquain
#parody
546 reads
12 Comments
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