Poems About Cats Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about cats seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Josiah
Poem Published
15th Mar 2023 3:46am
15th Mar 2023 3:46am
Matt and the Sniper
Breath in...Breath out...Pull.
A Mile and a Month away,
Matt's cats had grown fat.
A Mile and a Month away,
Matt's cats had grown fat.
#murder
#violence
#cats #haiku
#cats #haiku
187 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Mar 2023 1:34pm
9th Mar 2023 1:34pm
Not Those Weird Experiments
I walked
into my friend's
house for something, saw this
strange looking cat on the kitchen
floor and thought "Not those weird experiments!"
into my friend's
house for something, saw this
strange looking cat on the kitchen
floor and thought "Not those weird experiments!"
#home
#cats
#fiction
#dialogue
#scifi
213 reads
2 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 5:01pm
2nd Feb 2023 5:01pm
Catsong
~ Written on the 24th of October 2008 ~~
A never-ending autumn is living in my head.
My soul's empty and my world is blackened.
I'm living in a desert, and a desert's living in,
It feels like the song of the lonely wind,
like the birds on the live wire, like a strange drawing.
It looks like I'm staying, but actually I'm crawling.
I'm far away from people, I live in a different place.
There's ghost mist in my soul and mist in my face.
Deeper is my pleasure, deeper are my feelings,
I'm just a living sleeper, a paper doll who...
A never-ending autumn is living in my head.
My soul's empty and my world is blackened.
I'm living in a desert, and a desert's living in,
It feels like the song of the lonely wind,
like the birds on the live wire, like a strange drawing.
It looks like I'm staying, but actually I'm crawling.
I'm far away from people, I live in a different place.
There's ghost mist in my soul and mist in my face.
Deeper is my pleasure, deeper are my feelings,
I'm just a living sleeper, a paper doll who...
#loneliness
#cats
#tragedy
#despair
#emptiness
230 reads
1 Comment
KristinaX
Poem Published
24th Oct 2022 00:30am
24th Oct 2022 00:30am
Purring...
Mystery blue eyes
Peering bright through the darkness
and into my soul
Peering bright through the darkness
and into my soul
#love
#animals
#senryu #cats
#senryu #cats
732 reads
52 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
12th Aug 2022 9:24pm
12th Aug 2022 9:24pm
The Phantom Villian And A Queen With A Cat In Her Hat
It was the strangest thing I'd ever seen
The dead cat in her hat
Lying next to the queen
A lantern was lit
That exposed where her brain had exploded
And left her twisted body quite eroded
It's so hard to be sure
What actually happened that night
To make the queen and her cat
Be brutally bludgeoned like that
For the kitty's eyes were missing
And it's tongue had turned black
Was it the queen or her cat
That first met their demise
No one could tell from the Queen's half opened eyes
Which one was the intended...
The dead cat in her hat
Lying next to the queen
A lantern was lit
That exposed where her brain had exploded
And left her twisted body quite eroded
It's so hard to be sure
What actually happened that night
To make the queen and her cat
Be brutally bludgeoned like that
For the kitty's eyes were missing
And it's tongue had turned black
Was it the queen or her cat
That first met their demise
No one could tell from the Queen's half opened eyes
Which one was the intended...
#death
#evil
#cats
#scary
#horror
410 reads
9 Comments
nightbirdblue
Poem Published
9th Aug 2022 1:01am
9th Aug 2022 1:01am
Brewing Dead Cat In The Witch’s Hat: A Nightmare Retold
#cats
#despair
#nightmares
#witches
#curse
431 reads
4 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
15th Jul 2022 6:04am
15th Jul 2022 6:04am
Struck
a bolt of lightning hit me yesterday
a friend casually observed
how gaunt a homeless cat was
i kept breathing
kept walking
it's inconvenient to fall to the ground
when struck down by sadness
clouds gathered that evening
in the filthy searing sky
it seemed a haboob was forming
-yes a real word-
a powerful dust storm
instead of much needed rain
it happens here in the desert
where life is best suited
to prickly plant life
creatures with deadly stings
and rich people who...
a friend casually observed
how gaunt a homeless cat was
i kept breathing
kept walking
it's inconvenient to fall to the ground
when struck down by sadness
clouds gathered that evening
in the filthy searing sky
it seemed a haboob was forming
-yes a real word-
a powerful dust storm
instead of much needed rain
it happens here in the desert
where life is best suited
to prickly plant life
creatures with deadly stings
and rich people who...
#grief
#cats
#storm #determination
#storm #determination
458 reads
12 Comments
CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
27th Apr 2022 6:41am
27th Apr 2022 6:41am
The Rat of Hell-Hamelin : Acts 1-4
Act1
In a time, called twelve eighty nine;
By night and by day
They crept through gaps
In floorboards
In the roof, in the house
Into barns full of hay
As the mediaeval town
By candles and lanterns
In their gowns
and beds did they lay
The creatures need more
Even crumbs from the cake
Strudels and ginger
Bread and trails
Visitors and kinder
leave behind by the door
They whacked them
with broomsticks
Dashed them with pottery
They burned them and drowned them
Unleashed their...
In a time, called twelve eighty nine;
By night and by day
They crept through gaps
In floorboards
In the roof, in the house
Into barns full of hay
As the mediaeval town
By candles and lanterns
In their gowns
and beds did they lay
The creatures need more
Even crumbs from the cake
Strudels and ginger
Bread and trails
Visitors and kinder
leave behind by the door
They whacked them
with broomsticks
Dashed them with pottery
They burned them and drowned them
Unleashed their...
#dark
#oppression
#cats
#revenge
#horror
274 reads
0 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
21st Feb 2022 2:01pm
21st Feb 2022 2:01pm
2/18/22
The dogs and cats
Are all lined up
They know how valuable
Your cuddle is
WAITING IN THE CUDDLE LINE
Are all lined up
They know how valuable
Your cuddle is
WAITING IN THE CUDDLE LINE
#love
#dogs
#cats
241 reads
0 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 1:55pm
29th Dec 2021 1:55pm
My new cat
My new guy, Hobbes,
instead of playing with
the branches of my Christmas tree,
now wants to race and dart inside my fridge
right when I open up its door.
He hops inside and won’t come out,
until I, scolding, catch the little fellow
by his scruff
and drag him (gently, never rough)
out from his frosty lair.
And how he’ll mewl and huff a bit,
disliking he’s brought back to warmer air.
He likes to linger up aslant
the tupper-ware and sit
and purr awhile.
This little impish ball of feline fur
desired to be, I must...
instead of playing with
the branches of my Christmas tree,
now wants to race and dart inside my fridge
right when I open up its door.
He hops inside and won’t come out,
until I, scolding, catch the little fellow
by his scruff
and drag him (gently, never rough)
out from his frosty lair.
And how he’ll mewl and huff a bit,
disliking he’s brought back to warmer air.
He likes to linger up aslant
the tupper-ware and sit
and purr awhile.
This little impish ball of feline fur
desired to be, I must...
#cats
432 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2021 8:24pm
3rd Sep 2021 8:24pm
The Crows
Based on a true story
It’s a breezy afternoon in New Kingston.
An unfledged crow falls from its nest.
It flaps its scantily feathered wings, But it’s unable to fly.
The black birdling is very scared,
It peeps repeatedly,
And it quickly runs into the flower garden to hide.
Luckily, no cats are prowling nearby.
The mother crow becomes angry.
She jumps from one branch of the tree to another,
And she caws loudly.
Then she flies down to the ground. She can’t put her baby back in the nest. ...
It’s a breezy afternoon in New Kingston.
An unfledged crow falls from its nest.
It flaps its scantily feathered wings, But it’s unable to fly.
The black birdling is very scared,
It peeps repeatedly,
And it quickly runs into the flower garden to hide.
Luckily, no cats are prowling nearby.
The mother crow becomes angry.
She jumps from one branch of the tree to another,
And she caws loudly.
Then she flies down to the ground. She can’t put her baby back in the nest. ...
#cats
#flowers
#birds
#wind
#food
325 reads
5 Comments
Mastersensation
Pent
Pent
Poem Published
5th Aug 2021 2:18am
5th Aug 2021 2:18am
Triple Jeopardy
Balcony railing cat
Anxiety ridden wife
Unsympathetic husband
Unpredictable life
Anxiety ridden wife
Unsympathetic husband
Unpredictable life
#anxiety
#cats
#TruthOfLife
280 reads
6 Comments
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