Butterfly by Top Critiquers Poems
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butterfly by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
Butterfly
If the darkness cleaned our bodies
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
If the dreams that filled us with hope
Only would have outlasted us
If the air that we suffocated with
Only hadn't let us go
...
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
If the dreams that filled us with hope
Only would have outlasted us
If the air that we suffocated with
Only hadn't let us go
...
#butterfly
#nature
191 reads
8 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 7:02pm
11th Jul 2024 7:02pm
Butterflies with hand grenades
#butterfly
#lover
#passion
#relationships
#romantic
336 reads
18 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 8:45pm
7th Dec 2024 8:45pm
From a different perspective
Question about what you think and believe that what you see 👁️👁️ For have you ever seen through the eyes of nature, as it sometimes is a reflection of life, told from a different perspective of a mother and child 🙏 For sure there are some similarity that really reflects, the deepness of the moments of birth, from a WOLF mother's eyes watching over her young child, supporting them and to teach them how to survive 😔 in life. But yet it's here in the nature zone, in the mountains and tree's in the forest life is very different. HERE from the outside...
#animals
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#motherhood
94 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
Waiting on the Wings
Sometimes you have to wait for the right time
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
#butterfly
#nature
#LifeChangingMoment
190 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Feb 2021 1:51pm
28th Feb 2021 1:51pm
In & Beyond The Burial Ground Greys.. I Breathe (In) You...
viz :: Burial Ground Greyz
#love
#night
#butterfly
#spiritual
#sensual
604 reads
6 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
18th May 2024 2:00pm
18th May 2024 2:00pm
Vulnerable
the current world
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
#butterfly
#vulnerability
334 reads
24 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Aug 2024 1:40pm
1st Aug 2024 1:40pm
Mind Obesity
In the labyrinth of his mind he wandered.
A man with thoughts as heavy as lead.
His brain, swollen with ideas and musings
became an obese repository of dreams.
Each thought a bloated morsel.
Lodged in the crevices of his consciousness.
He carried them like stones in his pockets.
Their weight pulling him deeper into solitude.
But one day, a butterfly fluttered by.
Its delicate wings a whisper of grace.
It danced upon his mental clutter.
A reminder of weightlessness and flight.
The man watched entranced. ...
A man with thoughts as heavy as lead.
His brain, swollen with ideas and musings
became an obese repository of dreams.
Each thought a bloated morsel.
Lodged in the crevices of his consciousness.
He carried them like stones in his pockets.
Their weight pulling him deeper into solitude.
But one day, a butterfly fluttered by.
Its delicate wings a whisper of grace.
It danced upon his mental clutter.
A reminder of weightlessness and flight.
The man watched entranced. ...
#butterfly
#fate
#meditation
#mirror
#WritingPoetry
151 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 00:26am
20th Feb 2025 00:26am
don’t know how, or why
saw a butterfly drifting erratically past the window
in early february
and you said that’s not
possible of
course that it might quite well have been late january
but it definitely caught my eye
in early february
and you said that’s not
possible of
course that it might quite well have been late january
but it definitely caught my eye
#butterfly
#winter
69 reads
1 Comment
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
1st Jan 2017 10:27am
1st Jan 2017 10:27am
A Kaleidoscope of Butterflies
flutters of beauty
hovering over dewy flowers
dawn seen with sparkling hues
welcome them, the floating colours
little ballerinas
wings of little fairies
friends of nimble elves
dragonflies hover, guarding them
harbinger of visitors
to homes
when flutterby drops by
and rests on your window sill
for all butterflies
the one much loved
is Rajah Brooke butterfly
commemorating the White Rajah
his star shone once
among the tribes of Borneo
faded now, even as his butterflies
flutter...
hovering over dewy flowers
dawn seen with sparkling hues
welcome them, the floating colours
little ballerinas
wings of little fairies
friends of nimble elves
dragonflies hover, guarding them
harbinger of visitors
to homes
when flutterby drops by
and rests on your window sill
for all butterflies
the one much loved
is Rajah Brooke butterfly
commemorating the White Rajah
his star shone once
among the tribes of Borneo
faded now, even as his butterflies
flutter...
#butterfly
#historical
851 reads
12 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 12:58pm
4th Nov 2023 12:58pm
butterfly...
I am
an invisible
butterfly
hidden
from the world
roam
from place to place
explore
every inch of bar
celebrate
the pleasure of flesh
suck
the nectar
flutter
in silent heart
fall in love
with the flowers
taking shape
swim
in the sea of sensuality
disappear
into the fog...
an invisible
butterfly
hidden
from the world
roam
from place to place
explore
every inch of bar
celebrate
the pleasure of flesh
suck
the nectar
flutter
in silent heart
fall in love
with the flowers
taking shape
swim
in the sea of sensuality
disappear
into the fog...
#love
#butterfly
299 reads
14 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
20th Mar 2019 10:32am
20th Mar 2019 10:32am
A Little Levity and more
Painting by numbers always started with one, when I got to you I knew I was done
....screech.....stop right there...... remember I told you stop the cheesy rhyme...no you didn't...well I meant to
Humour has a way about things
lifting weights off our troubles
even if only for a moment in time
a relief, a comfort to alleviate pain
it borders on lunacy, I'm clearly insane
Man helping man in an hour of need
throwing fear to the wayside as well as his greed
Don't ever give up hope
as she sits on a shelf way up high ...
....screech.....stop right there...... remember I told you stop the cheesy rhyme...no you didn't...well I meant to
Humour has a way about things
lifting weights off our troubles
even if only for a moment in time
a relief, a comfort to alleviate pain
it borders on lunacy, I'm clearly insane
Man helping man in an hour of need
throwing fear to the wayside as well as his greed
Don't ever give up hope
as she sits on a shelf way up high ...
#love
#butterfly
#funny
#humankind
#myself
641 reads
12 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:07pm
14th Nov 2024 9:07pm
Mothballs
Cocooned between the rainbow twilight
And the rising moon
The metamorphosis failed
No butterflies emerged
A moth instead
Beautiful in its way
Lover of the dark
Slave to the flame
Death mask upon its wings
The horror
The corporate mothballs
Dropped in the night
They prayed to Uranus
To Gaia
To Cronus
To Zeus
And the rising moon
The metamorphosis failed
No butterflies emerged
A moth instead
Beautiful in its way
Lover of the dark
Slave to the flame
Death mask upon its wings
The horror
The corporate mothballs
Dropped in the night
They prayed to Uranus
To Gaia
To Cronus
To Zeus
#butterfly
136 reads
2 Comments
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