Butterfly by Top Critiquers Poems
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butterfly by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
Butterfly
If the darkness cleaned our bodies
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
If the dreams that filled us with hope
Only would have outlasted us
If the air that we suffocated with
Only hadn't let us go
...
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
If the dreams that filled us with hope
Only would have outlasted us
If the air that we suffocated with
Only hadn't let us go
...
#butterfly
#nature
136 reads
8 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
18th May 2024 2:00pm
18th May 2024 2:00pm
Vulnerable
the current world
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
is a tough place
too much hate
i am vulnerable
and break easily
so many people
are insensitive to
needs of others
and some of us
are an easy prey
to the predators
who shatter us
when someone
harasses attacks
or critiques me i
break like glass
sometimes i wish
there was a sticker
on my face that says
fragile handle with care
#butterfly
#vulnerability
234 reads
24 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 8:45pm
7th Dec 2024 8:45pm
From a different perspective
Question about what you think and believe that what you see 👁️👁️ For have you ever seen through the eyes of nature, as it sometimes is a reflection of life, told from a different perspective of a mother and child 🙏 For sure there are some similarity that really reflects, the deepness of the moments of birth, from a WOLF mother's eyes watching over her young child, supporting them and to teach them how to survive 😔 in life. But yet it's here in the nature zone, in the mountains and tree's in the forest life is very different. HERE from the outside...
#animals
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#motherhood
41 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Feb 2021 1:51pm
28th Feb 2021 1:51pm
In & Beyond The Burial Ground Greys.. I Breathe (In) You...
viz :: Burial Ground Greyz
#love
#night
#butterfly
#spiritual
#sensual
553 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
Waiting on the Wings
Sometimes you have to wait for the right time
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
#butterfly
#nature
#LifeChangingMoment
145 reads
4 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 7:02pm
11th Jul 2024 7:02pm
Butterflies with hand grenades
#butterfly
#lover
#passion
#relationships
#romantic
274 reads
18 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Aug 2024 1:40pm
1st Aug 2024 1:40pm
Mind Obesity
In the labyrinth of his mind he wandered.
A man with thoughts as heavy as lead.
His brain, swollen with ideas and musings
became an obese repository of dreams.
Each thought a bloated morsel.
Lodged in the crevices of his consciousness.
He carried them like stones in his pockets.
Their weight pulling him deeper into solitude.
But one day, a butterfly fluttered by.
Its delicate wings a whisper of grace.
It danced upon his mental clutter.
A reminder of weightlessness and flight.
The man watched entranced. ...
A man with thoughts as heavy as lead.
His brain, swollen with ideas and musings
became an obese repository of dreams.
Each thought a bloated morsel.
Lodged in the crevices of his consciousness.
He carried them like stones in his pockets.
Their weight pulling him deeper into solitude.
But one day, a butterfly fluttered by.
Its delicate wings a whisper of grace.
It danced upon his mental clutter.
A reminder of weightlessness and flight.
The man watched entranced. ...
#butterfly
#fate
#meditation
#mirror
#WritingPoetry
87 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
31st Jul 2024 5:13pm
31st Jul 2024 5:13pm
Magic in the Water
Magic in the Water
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best "
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
'neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the...
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best "
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
'neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the...
#butterfly
#fish
#mountains
#nature
#water
102 reads
2 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 12:58pm
4th Nov 2023 12:58pm
butterfly...
I am
an invisible
butterfly
hidden
from the world
roam
from place to place
explore
every inch of bar
celebrate
the pleasure of flesh
suck
the nectar
flutter
in silent heart
fall in love
with the flowers
taking shape
swim
in the sea of sensuality
disappear
into the fog...
an invisible
butterfly
hidden
from the world
roam
from place to place
explore
every inch of bar
celebrate
the pleasure of flesh
suck
the nectar
flutter
in silent heart
fall in love
with the flowers
taking shape
swim
in the sea of sensuality
disappear
into the fog...
#love
#butterfly
251 reads
14 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
6th Aug 2021 11:53pm
6th Aug 2021 11:53pm
keep smiling ..
scientists say in the future we’ll
all be eating insects, whilst
at the same time insect numbers are declining
all be eating insects, whilst
at the same time insect numbers are declining
#butterfly
357 reads
4 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
1st Jan 2017 10:27am
1st Jan 2017 10:27am
A Kaleidoscope of Butterflies
flutters of beauty
hovering over dewy flowers
dawn seen with sparkling hues
welcome them, the floating colours
little ballerinas
wings of little fairies
friends of nimble elves
dragonflies hover, guarding them
harbinger of visitors
to homes
when flutterby drops by
and rests on your window sill
for all butterflies
the one much loved
is Rajah Brooke butterfly
commemorating the White Rajah
his star shone once
among the tribes of Borneo
faded now, even as his butterflies
flutter...
hovering over dewy flowers
dawn seen with sparkling hues
welcome them, the floating colours
little ballerinas
wings of little fairies
friends of nimble elves
dragonflies hover, guarding them
harbinger of visitors
to homes
when flutterby drops by
and rests on your window sill
for all butterflies
the one much loved
is Rajah Brooke butterfly
commemorating the White Rajah
his star shone once
among the tribes of Borneo
faded now, even as his butterflies
flutter...
#butterfly
#historical
813 reads
12 Comments
Lamjhnsn1
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 12:17pm
15th Aug 2024 12:17pm
Nature Moving
One only waxes poetic,
Recounting nature's perfect kinetics.
Uses only immaculate phrasing,
To emphasise how amazing,
The stems, heavy hips.
The dropping of honey drips,
From the honeycomb,
That it's swaying whips.
The bee, hovers over, with power.
But gentle, goes into her flower.
The plosion of pollen.
What remains, the wind devours.
The cyrsos that conceals
A mirage that is real.
In flutters, her wings are spread,
A sensuous reveal
The Monarch, making love with The...
Recounting nature's perfect kinetics.
Uses only immaculate phrasing,
To emphasise how amazing,
The stems, heavy hips.
The dropping of honey drips,
From the honeycomb,
That it's swaying whips.
The bee, hovers over, with power.
But gentle, goes into her flower.
The plosion of pollen.
What remains, the wind devours.
The cyrsos that conceals
A mirage that is real.
In flutters, her wings are spread,
A sensuous reveal
The Monarch, making love with The...
#bees
#birds
#butterfly
#flowers
#nature
120 reads
5 Comments
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