Poems About Bullying Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about bullying seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 4:19pm
6th Feb 2024 4:19pm
Dragon's Sauna
In a leisure centre based in the badlands of South London, man cub Tio acts like he's straight out of Compton.
He plays water basketball, and he only just made the squad. It was the only positive thing in his life, since his mum said, "Get a job!"
He would play after the sauna, and the heat would get him creamed, and he fancied all the chicas that were playing in his team.
In the pool, it could get quite vicious, just like lambs to the slaughter, in his speedo trunks n goggles on so that he could see under water.
He caught the ball in a...
He plays water basketball, and he only just made the squad. It was the only positive thing in his life, since his mum said, "Get a job!"
He would play after the sauna, and the heat would get him creamed, and he fancied all the chicas that were playing in his team.
In the pool, it could get quite vicious, just like lambs to the slaughter, in his speedo trunks n goggles on so that he could see under water.
He caught the ball in a...
#bullying
#fiction
#dragons
200 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Jan 2024 11:54am
29th Jan 2024 11:54am
DMV
A man just recently had his license reinstated. He failed to pay child support for his 7 year old kid. He needed to go to the DMV and get everything back on track. The man was approached by a bum asking him for some money. The man raised his voice saying, "ASSHOLE!, GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME!!" The bum said in a drunken slurred voice, "Come on guy don't be like this. Where are your manners." The man punched the bum directly in the mouth. The bum fell to the ground. Before anyone could stop this assault, the man then kicked him in the head and between his legs twice. The...
#hate
#abuse
#bullying
129 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 11:53am
25th Jan 2024 11:53am
One Handed
A man minding his own business is sitting in a bar. Enjoying some downtime after a hard days work. Sometime later, a drunken, loud, brash man comes stumbling in. He's causing a raucous all around him. He sits his ass down right near the quiet man. This drunk stunk of sweat and booze. The drunk turned to the quiet man and said, "What's your issue? Why do you look like that? Why do you look troubled?" The quiet man said, "No issue, just minding my own business". The drunk didn't like that answer and continued egging the man on. The drunk then began to point his finger and...
#anger
#violence
#bullying #ShortStory
#bullying #ShortStory
132 reads
10 Comments
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
The Gardener
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 6:44am
24th Jan 2024 6:44am
Dilution
After someone has cornered you, dominated you,
broken you down,
stripped you back until all that you are is their needs,
their wants, pain and rejection the closest taste of love,
after you grow a backbone enough to see the degrading dynamic for what it is,
they'll try bullying,
they'll try negotiating,
pacifying, lashing out,
gaslighting,
they'll try pretending they never understood,
or you never made it clear,
you never seemed in pain,
they'll try tears,
to call you home,
only to reject you again, ...
broken you down,
stripped you back until all that you are is their needs,
their wants, pain and rejection the closest taste of love,
after you grow a backbone enough to see the degrading dynamic for what it is,
they'll try bullying,
they'll try negotiating,
pacifying, lashing out,
gaslighting,
they'll try pretending they never understood,
or you never made it clear,
you never seemed in pain,
they'll try tears,
to call you home,
only to reject you again, ...
#anger
#regret
#abuse #bullying
#abuse #bullying
260 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Jan 2024 3:11pm
7th Jan 2024 3:11pm
After She Caught Us Doing It
She said "Marry me
or I would tell Dad you were
humping my maid of honor!"
or I would tell Dad you were
humping my maid of honor!"
#marriage
#bullying
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
200 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Nov 2023 9:04pm
21st Nov 2023 9:04pm
If You Wish To See Her Again, Give Us What We Want!
Pamela was in
the middle of enjoying
her massage before
two thugs kidnapped and held her
for ransom from her parents.
the middle of enjoying
her massage before
two thugs kidnapped and held her
for ransom from her parents.
#parent
#bullying
#fiction
#tanka
#mystery
118 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Nov 2023 3:24pm
9th Nov 2023 3:24pm
Thought She Made It Out
Veronica thought
she made it out of the life
but that was before
some guy named David blackmailed
the Lynx to pull one more job.
she made it out of the life
but that was before
some guy named David blackmailed
the Lynx to pull one more job.
#bullying
#fiction
#tanka
#sacrifice
#choices
149 reads
0 Comments
Results_May_Vary
Poem Published
18th Sep 2023 11:20am
18th Sep 2023 11:20am
Straw House
Knock three times and blow your house down
Watching you scratch from atop the cloud
Open up and watch them all drown
I'm screaming without making a sound
All I wanted was a piece
All I needed was to hear
All I got was rot and disease
All you had was the fear
I'd find you out
Snap your fingers and my attention breaks
Demanding more than what it takes
Hold back the rage till my eyes leak
Slam the door and toss the key away
All I wanted was a ghost
All I needed was a hand
All I got was codependence ...
Watching you scratch from atop the cloud
Open up and watch them all drown
I'm screaming without making a sound
All I wanted was a piece
All I needed was to hear
All I got was rot and disease
All you had was the fear
I'd find you out
Snap your fingers and my attention breaks
Demanding more than what it takes
Hold back the rage till my eyes leak
Slam the door and toss the key away
All I wanted was a ghost
All I needed was a hand
All I got was codependence ...
#family
#abuse
#bullying
#denial
#manipulation
200 reads
2 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
14th Jul 2023 10:17am
14th Jul 2023 10:17am
Karens
Watching these poor men
I can fractionally understand
When the thought crosses
Shit
I wish I could hit a woman.
I can fractionally understand
When the thought crosses
Shit
I wish I could hit a woman.
#bullying
#support
163 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
7th Jul 2023 11:29pm
7th Jul 2023 11:29pm
Rusty Fulcrum
No one laughs
watching a homeless lady
agonize to cross the street
at a snail’s pace
except for a lone dude
in the park
He shifts his weight from the bench,
stands on both legs
and decides to use humor
to cover whatever triggered
the uncomfortable knot
curling its fist in his chest.
He makes a joke
about homelessness
and laughs.
Riddles the poor
lazy leeches sucking taxes
from the working class
and laughs.
My compassion uncoils itself
as an aching frond— ...
watching a homeless lady
agonize to cross the street
at a snail’s pace
except for a lone dude
in the park
He shifts his weight from the bench,
stands on both legs
and decides to use humor
to cover whatever triggered
the uncomfortable knot
curling its fist in his chest.
He makes a joke
about homelessness
and laughs.
Riddles the poor
lazy leeches sucking taxes
from the working class
and laughs.
My compassion uncoils itself
as an aching frond— ...
#bullying
#homelessness
#poverty
551 reads
9 Comments
Orc_Pirate_68
Poem Published
21st Jun 2023 5:44pm
21st Jun 2023 5:44pm
Snowflake of Hearts
On my forearm, right below the elbow,
A design that I've been planning,
A rebuke of each of you, blow, after blow,
For me, and everyone who's different, you've been banning.
A little snowflake made of hearts,
Soon-to-be inked in a gentle pale brown like a birthmark,
To represent the turning away of your hearts,
And the resilience I've always had towards y'alls remarks.
The bullying I faced on that afternoon, will stay with me to this day,
Not for the hurt, but because here I stand, and here I stay,
The cold never bothered me anyway.
A design that I've been planning,
A rebuke of each of you, blow, after blow,
For me, and everyone who's different, you've been banning.
A little snowflake made of hearts,
Soon-to-be inked in a gentle pale brown like a birthmark,
To represent the turning away of your hearts,
And the resilience I've always had towards y'alls remarks.
The bullying I faced on that afternoon, will stay with me to this day,
Not for the hurt, but because here I stand, and here I stay,
The cold never bothered me anyway.
#hope
#bullying
#suffering
231 reads
1 Comment
Vixen_venusSSB4U
Vixen Venus
Vixen Venus
Poem Published
4th May 2023 4:09am
4th May 2023 4:09am
Just biding my time
#abuse
#bullying
#despair
#hurt
#fear
240 reads
3 Comments
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