Poems About Bullying Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about bullying seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 11:02pm
6th Apr 2024 11:02pm
Some needed justice
I hear a pig's radio outside my window
It's 2:30 am
I look out the window
I see a pig screaming in some youths face
I decide to crack the window open and I hear...,
"YOUR HAMMERED, TANKED, WASTED, BLASTED, SKUNKED, FRIED, LOADED, SLOSHED, WRECKED, TOASTED AND PIE-EYED!"
"I HAVE COMPLAINTS OF YOU DEFACING PROPERTY AND DISORDERLY CONDUCT!!"
"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF??!"
I couldn't hear the boy, he's talking to low
He couldn't be no more then 15
Pig says, "WHAT IT WASN'T YOU?!",...
It's 2:30 am
I look out the window
I see a pig screaming in some youths face
I decide to crack the window open and I hear...,
"YOUR HAMMERED, TANKED, WASTED, BLASTED, SKUNKED, FRIED, LOADED, SLOSHED, WRECKED, TOASTED AND PIE-EYED!"
"I HAVE COMPLAINTS OF YOU DEFACING PROPERTY AND DISORDERLY CONDUCT!!"
"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF??!"
I couldn't hear the boy, he's talking to low
He couldn't be no more then 15
Pig says, "WHAT IT WASN'T YOU?!",...
#lies
#corruption
#murder
#bullying
#uplifting
52 reads
0 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 7:12pm
6th Apr 2024 7:12pm
Breaking free
Enthusiasm blended with intelligence,
Has power to lift you higher over the fence,
But it's the landing that's going to dictate,
Whether it's your cranium or leg that's gonna break.
Never knew I would fall into a lion's den,
Didn't know that the world would be so cruel damn,
Being lied to under the dogma of fear and belief,
Man, manipulation got a soldier defenseless in grief.
They say keep your friends close but your enemies closer,
I guess I was stupid keeping them far closer,
Drained my energy away, nothing i could foster, ...
Has power to lift you higher over the fence,
But it's the landing that's going to dictate,
Whether it's your cranium or leg that's gonna break.
Never knew I would fall into a lion's den,
Didn't know that the world would be so cruel damn,
Being lied to under the dogma of fear and belief,
Man, manipulation got a soldier defenseless in grief.
They say keep your friends close but your enemies closer,
I guess I was stupid keeping them far closer,
Drained my energy away, nothing i could foster, ...
#strength
#bullying
#TimeHeals
#redemption
#hurt
43 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 11:05pm
1st Apr 2024 11:05pm
brutal
the brutality of death
can only be exceeded
by the brutality
of living
can only be exceeded
by the brutality
of living
#bullying
59 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 7:18pm
11th Mar 2024 7:18pm
What Makes Her Get A Restraining Order
Every Monday
night, Wendy
gets a phone call
from her ex husband Bob
who wants her back into
his life even though she
already hooked up with Pamela.
night, Wendy
gets a phone call
from her ex husband Bob
who wants her back into
his life even though she
already hooked up with Pamela.
#husband
#lesbian
#bullying
#fiction
#lover
68 reads
0 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 2:01pm
11th Mar 2024 2:01pm
A David you're not
If you want to throw stones
at a giant
make sure there is a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits your target
Sling it in an arch
big enough
to make the degree scream
sign language to the deaf
Let the whistling of its trajectory
wake the earth
let every eye follow the arc
of its intended path
breaking sound barriers
along the way
If you want to sling stones
at a giant
make sure there’s a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits...
at a giant
make sure there is a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits your target
Sling it in an arch
big enough
to make the degree scream
sign language to the deaf
Let the whistling of its trajectory
wake the earth
let every eye follow the arc
of its intended path
breaking sound barriers
along the way
If you want to sling stones
at a giant
make sure there’s a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits...
#politics
#bullying
246 reads
14 Comments
Breedlove
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 2:21am
9th Mar 2024 2:21am
Crisis Mode
#bullying
#despair
#bittersweet #fear
#bittersweet #fear
35 reads
0 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 4:19pm
6th Feb 2024 4:19pm
Dragon's Sauna
In a leisure centre based in the badlands of South London, man cub Tio acts like he's straight out of Compton.
He plays water basketball, and he only just made the squad. It was the only positive thing in his life, since his mum said, "Get a job!"
He would play after the sauna, and the heat would get him creamed, and he fancied all the chicas that were playing in his team.
In the pool, it could get quite vicious, just like lambs to the slaughter, in his speedo trunks n goggles on so that he could see under water.
He caught the ball in a...
He plays water basketball, and he only just made the squad. It was the only positive thing in his life, since his mum said, "Get a job!"
He would play after the sauna, and the heat would get him creamed, and he fancied all the chicas that were playing in his team.
In the pool, it could get quite vicious, just like lambs to the slaughter, in his speedo trunks n goggles on so that he could see under water.
He caught the ball in a...
#bullying
#fiction
#dragons
115 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Jan 2024 11:54am
29th Jan 2024 11:54am
DMV
A man just recently had his license reinstated. He failed to pay child support for his 7 year old kid. He needed to go to the DMV and get everything back on track. The man was approached by a bum asking him for some money. The man raised his voice saying, "ASSHOLE!, GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME!!" The bum said in a drunken slurred voice, "Come on guy don't be like this. Where are your manners." The man punched the bum directly in the mouth. The bum fell to the ground. Before anyone could stop this assault, the man then kicked him in the head and between his legs twice. The...
#hate
#abuse
#bullying
98 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 11:53am
25th Jan 2024 11:53am
One Handed
A man minding his own business is sitting in a bar. Enjoying some downtime after a hard days work. Sometime later, a drunken, loud, brash man comes stumbling in. He's causing a raucous all around him. He sits his ass down right near the quiet man. This drunk stunk of sweat and booze. The drunk turned to the quiet man and said, "What's your issue? Why do you look like that? Why do you look troubled?" The quiet man said, "No issue, just minding my own business". The drunk didn't like that answer and continued egging the man on. The drunk then began to point his finger and...
#anger
#violence
#bullying #ShortStory
#bullying #ShortStory
90 reads
10 Comments
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
The Gardener
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 6:44am
24th Jan 2024 6:44am
Dilution
After someone has cornered you, dominated you,
broken you down,
stripped you back until all that you are is their needs,
their wants, pain and rejection the closest taste of love,
after you grow a backbone enough to see the degrading dynamic for what it is,
they'll try bullying,
they'll try negotiating,
pacifying, lashing out,
gaslighting,
they'll try pretending they never understood,
or you never made it clear,
you never seemed in pain,
they'll try tears,
to call you home,
only to reject you again, ...
broken you down,
stripped you back until all that you are is their needs,
their wants, pain and rejection the closest taste of love,
after you grow a backbone enough to see the degrading dynamic for what it is,
they'll try bullying,
they'll try negotiating,
pacifying, lashing out,
gaslighting,
they'll try pretending they never understood,
or you never made it clear,
you never seemed in pain,
they'll try tears,
to call you home,
only to reject you again, ...
#anger
#regret
#abuse #bullying
#abuse #bullying
211 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Jan 2024 3:11pm
7th Jan 2024 3:11pm
After She Caught Us Doing It
She said "Marry me
or I would tell Dad you were
humping my maid of honor!"
or I would tell Dad you were
humping my maid of honor!"
#marriage
#bullying
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
127 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Nov 2023 9:04pm
21st Nov 2023 9:04pm
If You Wish To See Her Again, Give Us What We Want!
Pamela was in
the middle of enjoying
her massage before
two thugs kidnapped and held her
for ransom from her parents.
the middle of enjoying
her massage before
two thugs kidnapped and held her
for ransom from her parents.
#parent
#bullying
#fiction
#tanka
#mystery
83 reads
0 Comments
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