Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sandals
Poem Published
29th Jul 2022 00:45am
29th Jul 2022 00:45am
On A New Meaning
If thy night would move in
We would know aluv's new meaning
Of this awetly chance of knowing
What our bodies would mean to say
On a new meaning u and I would
Stand, prosper, and not be denied
What our togetherness is and was
Within new life we would fly
The both of us would truly
See luv in a new of great do
How the picture perfect beauty
Is that be of first u
Thy long scapula middle back length
Hair with her to darling upon ah touch
I long to be tantilized of upclosely
This I groove to prove to u ah...
We would know aluv's new meaning
Of this awetly chance of knowing
What our bodies would mean to say
On a new meaning u and I would
Stand, prosper, and not be denied
What our togetherness is and was
Within new life we would fly
The both of us would truly
See luv in a new of great do
How the picture perfect beauty
Is that be of first u
Thy long scapula middle back length
Hair with her to darling upon ah touch
I long to be tantilized of upclosely
This I groove to prove to u ah...
#lust
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#UnrequitedLove
#passion
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Sandals
Poem Published
27th Jul 2022 11:15pm
27th Jul 2022 11:15pm
What U Saying To Me
Go on....And....break it....Down.....
What u mean girlfriend?
I truly wish to be your only need
For the power of the rice and cheese
In which to we that both shall feed
Thy sicknesses if any could come
I wish to cater to u strongly upon
And the common of colds use too
Still within this heart medicine for u too
What........u saying.......to...me
How this that wasn't can now be
Remember those things of interesting
Within thy mind and thy span of time
U are the heart that didn't sublime
To me of...
What u mean girlfriend?
I truly wish to be your only need
For the power of the rice and cheese
In which to we that both shall feed
Thy sicknesses if any could come
I wish to cater to u strongly upon
And the common of colds use too
Still within this heart medicine for u too
What........u saying.......to...me
How this that wasn't can now be
Remember those things of interesting
Within thy mind and thy span of time
U are the heart that didn't sublime
To me of...
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships
#romantic
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Sandals
Poem Published
21st Jul 2022 4:12pm
21st Jul 2022 4:12pm
U Help Me Breathe
Girl u help me breathe
U keep ah float my heart pace
Girl u truly infatuate
U heighten my aluv ah fate
Girl I truly need u
Damn I truly need u too
What u need for dinner
What's for supper in your mind brew
Boy I truly aluv u
These steaks are always done
Boy u be a gift to me
Boy u be alot of fun
U keep ah float my heart pace
Girl u truly infatuate
U heighten my aluv ah fate
Girl I truly need u
Damn I truly need u too
What u need for dinner
What's for supper in your mind brew
Boy I truly aluv u
These steaks are always done
Boy u be a gift to me
Boy u be alot of fun
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#erotic
#sensual
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Sandals
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 6:44pm
23rd Jun 2022 6:44pm
Still In Luv With U
Listen.......hear.....me out......
I'm still the man for u
Always to u I'm true
To many this don't mean nothing
And I'm still in luv with u
Said.......I'm still in.......luv with u......
It don't matter to some
How u and I be and do
They are just envious
Of me and also us...u
It is not a care of mine
To not kiss u in aluv yah
Because my lady of two
Years I'm still in luv with u
Said.....I'm still in......luv with u.......
I can't to my heart shatter
What I...
I'm still the man for u
Always to u I'm true
To many this don't mean nothing
And I'm still in luv with u
Said.......I'm still in.......luv with u......
It don't matter to some
How u and I be and do
They are just envious
Of me and also us...u
It is not a care of mine
To not kiss u in aluv yah
Because my lady of two
Years I'm still in luv with u
Said.....I'm still in......luv with u.......
I can't to my heart shatter
What I...
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#lover
#passion
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Sandals
Poem Published
27th May 2022 8:19am
27th May 2022 8:19am
A Funny Woman's Come On(Melt Into U V)
#kindness
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#romantic
#ForbiddenLove
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6 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
26th May 2022 11:55pm
26th May 2022 11:55pm
Melt Into U IV
#love
#boyfriend
#women #ForbiddenLove
#women #ForbiddenLove
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Sandals
Poem Published
16th May 2022 4:00pm
16th May 2022 4:00pm
Why Do U Not Wanna f**k Me
What's the problem
Why is it that
U do not
Wanna hit this cat
I apologize but
Hear the none gig
It's because my dick's
Not the size of enough big
That's a big pussy Lue
And that's quite a pussy
Lue don't feel hurt now
That's a big pussy u hear me
Of course u would
Pussy whip me vigorously
In tantricity of thee
In thine of me need
But I need
A bigger dick
Because I do truthly
Wanna dick whip thee
Why is it that
U do not
Wanna hit this cat
I apologize but
Hear the none gig
It's because my dick's
Not the size of enough big
That's a big pussy Lue
And that's quite a pussy
Lue don't feel hurt now
That's a big pussy u hear me
Of course u would
Pussy whip me vigorously
In tantricity of thee
In thine of me need
But I need
A bigger dick
Because I do truthly
Wanna dick whip thee
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#dreams #funny
#dreams #funny
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2022 1:35am
23rd Apr 2022 1:35am
YOU (for D. H.) (6-23-03, while eating at 'The SPOT', along the seawall on Galveston Island Texas)
while sitting in
a burger joint
looking out at
this gulf of mexico s
sunny blue green
horizon line
while munching on
a veggie burger
writing down
sweet words of heart
as they gently arise
here now
upon these little cards
for you
i briefly pause
to take a sip of soda
as a classic old
connie francis hit tune
comes on
the restaurant s radio
i suddenly notice
in the stillness
of this relatively surreal
passing...
a burger joint
looking out at
this gulf of mexico s
sunny blue green
horizon line
while munching on
a veggie burger
writing down
sweet words of heart
as they gently arise
here now
upon these little cards
for you
i briefly pause
to take a sip of soda
as a classic old
connie francis hit tune
comes on
the restaurant s radio
i suddenly notice
in the stillness
of this relatively surreal
passing...
#love
#boyfriend
#romantic
#FallingInLove
#obsession
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
18th Apr 2022 1:00am
18th Apr 2022 1:00am
ocean blue
he said he was the hue of
ocean blue
turbulent tides, couldn’t sail them
i tried
eyes so wide, fatigued
an empty abyss of marine layer
something was missing there
maybe i was a lighthouse
steering you in the right direction
maybe i was a siren
i didn’t mean to drown you
it’s what i always do
yes, he was
pale blonde
sand and sea
an embrace that caught me
for a little while..
when i pushed him out of my mind
and left the house that condemned me
i knew i had dumped what ...
ocean blue
turbulent tides, couldn’t sail them
i tried
eyes so wide, fatigued
an empty abyss of marine layer
something was missing there
maybe i was a lighthouse
steering you in the right direction
maybe i was a siren
i didn’t mean to drown you
it’s what i always do
yes, he was
pale blonde
sand and sea
an embrace that caught me
for a little while..
when i pushed him out of my mind
and left the house that condemned me
i knew i had dumped what ...
#boyfriend
#breakup
#sea
#MovingOn
#NaPoWriMo2022
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Thepunkpoet
Poem Published
14th Apr 2022 4:26pm
14th Apr 2022 4:26pm
Nightmares in Nevada
Nightmares in Nevada"
I try to escape nightmares in Nevada
I scream for any magik, abracadabra
You snuck up on me with your charm
Lying deeply within your heavy arms
Your lips promise love's latest fashion
Hearts collide & our bodies smashing
I'm drunk on the bullshit you're selling
It's only the rosebuds that I'm smelling
Blakkened blue is what you left of me
Now I'm a slave to this agony & misery
Go fukk yourself reflection in the mirror ...
I try to escape nightmares in Nevada
I scream for any magik, abracadabra
You snuck up on me with your charm
Lying deeply within your heavy arms
Your lips promise love's latest fashion
Hearts collide & our bodies smashing
I'm drunk on the bullshit you're selling
It's only the rosebuds that I'm smelling
Blakkened blue is what you left of me
Now I'm a slave to this agony & misery
Go fukk yourself reflection in the mirror ...
#love
#boyfriend
#ILoveYou
#ForbiddenLove
#LookingForLove
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4 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 7:04am
6th Apr 2022 7:04am
To Love Thee
I did not know
How to air to u
The dear of my voice
And I ran because u
Needed before u
A much better choice
I was a girl scared
And I was so
Shy about it to tell
This for me has
Been the worst
To me of tormenting hell
Please hear me
This voice can now
Swiftly reply to thee
A boy from these eyes
Can be seen in an
Ah need to be loved by me
The tension of love
Scared is no longer
Walking dear beside me
Man I beg u please
Allow quickly this girl ...
How to air to u
The dear of my voice
And I ran because u
Needed before u
A much better choice
I was a girl scared
And I was so
Shy about it to tell
This for me has
Been the worst
To me of tormenting hell
Please hear me
This voice can now
Swiftly reply to thee
A boy from these eyes
Can be seen in an
Ah need to be loved by me
The tension of love
Scared is no longer
Walking dear beside me
Man I beg u please
Allow quickly this girl ...
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships
#FallingInLove
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KittyFromHell
Poem Published
1st Apr 2022 7:07am
1st Apr 2022 7:07am
Call Me Baby One More Time
How do I tell you that I miss you
Or that I wonder what we could have been?
I can't even be sure if this feeling is real
Or if I'm just in love with daydreaming.
All I know is I'm lonely;
In the silence, I hear my thoughts screaming.
Your mood swings and mine combined
Make for a hell of a playground.
They all tell me that you were crazy bout me,
But some part of me refuses to believe it's true.
A man could try to spoil me,
And to reject it seems like the only thing to do.
I can't figure out which of us are to blame, ...
Or that I wonder what we could have been?
I can't even be sure if this feeling is real
Or if I'm just in love with daydreaming.
All I know is I'm lonely;
In the silence, I hear my thoughts screaming.
Your mood swings and mine combined
Make for a hell of a playground.
They all tell me that you were crazy bout me,
But some part of me refuses to believe it's true.
A man could try to spoil me,
And to reject it seems like the only thing to do.
I can't figure out which of us are to blame, ...
#love
#regret
#boyfriend
#lover
#emotions
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