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YOU  (for D. H.)  (6-23-03, while eating at 'The SPOT', along the seawall on  Galveston Island Texas)


sitting in a burger joint
looking out at
this gulf of mexicos
sunny blue green
horizon line
while munching on
a veggie burger
writing down
sweet words of heart
as they gently arose
upon little cards
to you
i briefly pause
to take a sip of soda
as a classic old hit
connie francis tune
comes on
the restaurants radio
i suddenly notice
in the stillness
of this relatively surreal
passing moment
while simultaneously
gazing out
at shoreline breaking
waves
with my mouth still full
of sandwich
between jotting down
these mindfully sensed
carefully filtered
chosen words
as they arise
and appear to me here
i unexpectedly
recall
my lifelong passionate
lust for surf
which i instantly savor
and almost get
peripherally swept off
in its prolonged
sweet daydream
until i just as suddenly
discovered
and clearly realized
just now
that i cant
get my mind
my thoughts
nor my apparently
newly rerouted
raw passionate lust
off of you now
yes only you now
alone
for very
long
at all






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