Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 2:57am
30th Jul 2024 2:57am
The Things I Miss
I saw you today...
Passed each other by
Like the strangers we've become.
Sobriety is becoming on you,
Even in the undoing of what used to be us.
Words catch in my throat
Of things better left unsaid.
A younger, crueler me
Would run my fingers through your beard
And pull your face closer to mine
For one more dive into hell.
The taste of unrequited love is a liar,
But it is so sweet.
It tastes like gravel road sunsets
At the edge of nowhere
Two dumbass kids
Meeting up to steal pieces of heaven
In the...
Passed each other by
Like the strangers we've become.
Sobriety is becoming on you,
Even in the undoing of what used to be us.
Words catch in my throat
Of things better left unsaid.
A younger, crueler me
Would run my fingers through your beard
And pull your face closer to mine
For one more dive into hell.
The taste of unrequited love is a liar,
But it is so sweet.
It tastes like gravel road sunsets
At the edge of nowhere
Two dumbass kids
Meeting up to steal pieces of heaven
In the...
#boyfriend
#gratitude
#love
#lover
#memories
179 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 7:01pm
15th Jun 2024 7:01pm
Almost a death sentence
He got her pregnant and left her
She didn't know what to do
She was to scared to get an abortion
She was to scared to have the kid
She jumped off the roof of her apartment building
Yeah she died
When he found out he was troubled
His troubled feelings soon gave way to relief
In a month he had forgotten about it
He was just another swinging single cock walking down the street again
She didn't know what to do
She was to scared to get an abortion
She was to scared to have the kid
She jumped off the roof of her apartment building
Yeah she died
When he found out he was troubled
His troubled feelings soon gave way to relief
In a month he had forgotten about it
He was just another swinging single cock walking down the street again
#boyfriend
#LifeStruggles
#pregnancy
#SelfHarm
#suicide
258 reads
6 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
16th May 2024 3:17pm
16th May 2024 3:17pm
Cherry Coke
#boyfriend
#FirstLove
#girlfriend
#relationships
#sex
377 reads
12 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
15th May 2024 10:30am
15th May 2024 10:30am
In the Back Seat
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#lust
#orgasm
#sex
355 reads
2 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
8th May 2024 4:41am
8th May 2024 4:41am
Chesapeake Bay
I started this note
somewhere in the middle
of Chesapeake Bay…staggering
upper deck on a ferry named FANTASY,
floating towards Foreverville.
Your arms surrounded me
like a memory,
chestnut hair wildly dispersed,
September chill on sky-mist stationary,
your tongue on the crease
of my sticky envelope,
tendrils of curls crossing the t’s,
dotting the eyes…
When you set yourself to reading,
be apprised that the ink is still wet;
the paper is thin as lingerie lace,
and because you are beautiful,
the...
somewhere in the middle
of Chesapeake Bay…staggering
upper deck on a ferry named FANTASY,
floating towards Foreverville.
Your arms surrounded me
like a memory,
chestnut hair wildly dispersed,
September chill on sky-mist stationary,
your tongue on the crease
of my sticky envelope,
tendrils of curls crossing the t’s,
dotting the eyes…
When you set yourself to reading,
be apprised that the ink is still wet;
the paper is thin as lingerie lace,
and because you are beautiful,
the...
#boyfriend
#crush
#FallingInLove
#relationships
#romantic
398 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Apr 2024 10:47am
28th Apr 2024 10:47am
This can happen
When will it be over?
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#sex
#funny
#identity
192 reads
8 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 6:31pm
22nd Apr 2024 6:31pm
The Lady Blue (The Proposal)
One night at the club, after I finished singing, Gary came up to me from behind me taking me by surprise.
"How is the most beautiful woman in all of New Orleans doing tonight?"i turned around to face him with a big smile on my face.
"You caught me on my way out," I said meeting his eyes.
"Don't go," he said embracing me, "Stay with me awhile!"
"Joe's at home waiting for me."
"Let him wait, Babe." He said then moved his tongue over my right ear. ...
"How is the most beautiful woman in all of New Orleans doing tonight?"i turned around to face him with a big smile on my face.
"You caught me on my way out," I said meeting his eyes.
"Don't go," he said embracing me, "Stay with me awhile!"
"Joe's at home waiting for me."
"Let him wait, Babe." He said then moved his tongue over my right ear. ...
#boyfriend
#love
#lover #marriage
#lover #marriage
190 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 2:12pm
21st Apr 2024 2:12pm
The Lady Blue (The Affair)
At last, I was living a dream life. I was having a hot and heavy romance with with Gary. I found I was unquestionably and hopelessly in love with him. I had grown up admiring him and fantasized about us having a close relationship. It did not occur to me to turn away from him even though he wasn't really mine.
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
#boyfriend
#love
#lover
#men
#sex
205 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 1:29pm
21st Apr 2024 1:29pm
The Lady Blue (The Dreams)
Our affair began that night There was already a party planned at my house for after my audition. When I asked Gary if he wanted to come he said he wouldn't miss it for anything. I knew we were going to make love for the very first time in my very own bed. How was I so sure? I saw it happening in a dream one night.
I guess I should explain about the dreams. For as long as I can remember I have special dreams sometimes that present themselves as glimpses of the future. My mother had them, too, though not nearly as often as I did. She had a fancy name for them but over the years...
I guess I should explain about the dreams. For as long as I can remember I have special dreams sometimes that present themselves as glimpses of the future. My mother had them, too, though not nearly as often as I did. She had a fancy name for them but over the years...
#boyfriend
#erotic
#lover #sex
#lover #sex
158 reads
8 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 7:20pm
10th Mar 2024 7:20pm
I Fell
Sleepless nights with the clock ticking by
I’ve been grounded for so long with no access to the sky
It seemed rather destined that I had met you
Seeds planted long ago had finally emerged to bloom.
I fell. I fell so hard
Nothing could have stopped this
You’ve managed to lower my guard
My heart yearns for your touch and your kiss.
You’ve reignited my slumbering passion
In marvelous ways that I could never have imagined
You have a way of speaking directly to my soul
Your love had seeped through to fill in the black hole.
...
I’ve been grounded for so long with no access to the sky
It seemed rather destined that I had met you
Seeds planted long ago had finally emerged to bloom.
I fell. I fell so hard
Nothing could have stopped this
You’ve managed to lower my guard
My heart yearns for your touch and your kiss.
You’ve reignited my slumbering passion
In marvelous ways that I could never have imagined
You have a way of speaking directly to my soul
Your love had seeped through to fill in the black hole.
...
#love
#boyfriend
#fate
#rhyming
#FallingInLove
471 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 3:47pm
9th Mar 2024 3:47pm
Scented by shampoo
I wear you
my sweat shampoo
inside the nose
behind the ears and
at my fingertips
the edges
burning in the tongue
my vinegar shampoo
(with pepper)
I wear you
my sweat shampoo
inside the nose
behind the ears and
at my fingertips
the edges
burning in the tongue
my vinegar shampoo
(with pepper)
I wear you
#love
#lust
#boyfriend
#passion
#Romanticism
138 reads
0 Comments
Angel24
Poem Published
26th Jan 2024 7:37am
26th Jan 2024 7:37am
Seduction
My favourite pass time is
With seduction
His long black hair
I want to dive in
Like it's a black ocean
And his eyes are so
Comforting , I fall in love.
As the seasons change
I wonder if he sees me
Like his sister, lover, wife,
Girlfriend
Or am I just a seductive
Wave of eternity
Waiting to be blessed
By him and his magic
I love the
His magic is so pure
And cures agony
And Rape
And that's where
We left off
Now I have to start
Again I look into his eyes ...
With seduction
His long black hair
I want to dive in
Like it's a black ocean
And his eyes are so
Comforting , I fall in love.
As the seasons change
I wonder if he sees me
Like his sister, lover, wife,
Girlfriend
Or am I just a seductive
Wave of eternity
Waiting to be blessed
By him and his magic
I love the
His magic is so pure
And cures agony
And Rape
And that's where
We left off
Now I have to start
Again I look into his eyes ...
#boyfriend
#admiration
#ForbiddenLove
255 reads
0 Comments
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