Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 12:21pm
30th Oct 2024 12:21pm
The nature of order
The nature of order
Nature of order
Distorts the reality
Beauty of her lips
When I press upon her
Goddess of my thoughts
Want her to lay down with my heart
Seconds go by I don’t know why
God created the woman of my dreams
Whenever I’m around her I can’t concentrate
I’m distracted by her beautiful being
I put my lunch in the printer
I can’t stop thinking about her
Hope that night will calm
The storm of love I feel for you
I’m clocking out watching her
Walk away...
Nature of order
Distorts the reality
Beauty of her lips
When I press upon her
Goddess of my thoughts
Want her to lay down with my heart
Seconds go by I don’t know why
God created the woman of my dreams
Whenever I’m around her I can’t concentrate
I’m distracted by her beautiful being
I put my lunch in the printer
I can’t stop thinking about her
Hope that night will calm
The storm of love I feel for you
I’m clocking out watching her
Walk away...
#boyfriend
#love
#obsession #romantic
#obsession #romantic
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Koulouri
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
There is No Floor Here
I want to be possessive of you.
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
#boyfriend
#crush
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#LookingForLove
407 reads
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oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 2:14pm
24th Oct 2024 2:14pm
I’m in Love Man
I’m in love man
It feels better than being a god
I’m in love man
Watch out for the potholes in your life
But I’m in love man
Yes I’m in love man
Can’t think about explaining anymore of it
But I’m in love man
Silence sails through my brain
I can’t explain but
I’m in love man
If you don’t feel it I can’t explain it to you but
I’m in love man
You’ll know it when it hits you between the heart
It might hit a little higher like a head shot
But you know when it’s real it...
It feels better than being a god
I’m in love man
Watch out for the potholes in your life
But I’m in love man
Yes I’m in love man
Can’t think about explaining anymore of it
But I’m in love man
Silence sails through my brain
I can’t explain but
I’m in love man
If you don’t feel it I can’t explain it to you but
I’m in love man
You’ll know it when it hits you between the heart
It might hit a little higher like a head shot
But you know when it’s real it...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
207 reads
0 Comments
Fallen_Angel_194
Angel.
Angel.
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 1:56am
8th Oct 2024 1:56am
Eighteen
He kissed me in the rain a few months ago, and I swear to god, in that moment, I fell in love with him so much, in such a way that it took my breath away.
When he makes love to me, he is slow with his movements; as if i'd melt away if he didn't. When he is kissing his way down my stomach, he makes sure to comment on how beautiful i am, no matter where we are; he always tells me i'm beautiful, he says it so much, and so often that sometimes I think he is trying to instill the love he has for me, into the caverns of my lungs, so that hopefully i'll believe it, too.
He told me he...
When he makes love to me, he is slow with his movements; as if i'd melt away if he didn't. When he is kissing his way down my stomach, he makes sure to comment on how beautiful i am, no matter where we are; he always tells me i'm beautiful, he says it so much, and so often that sometimes I think he is trying to instill the love he has for me, into the caverns of my lungs, so that hopefully i'll believe it, too.
He told me he...
#boyfriend
#love
173 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 11:04am
17th Sep 2024 11:04am
She likes her floors clean and her boyfriend dead
Martha Fokker of Lincoln, Nebraska greased the floor of her kitchen in an attempt to kill her one-legged boyfriend in 1993. She slipped on the floor and knocked herself unconscious instead. Police found more grease near the top of the stairs and by the bathroom door. The boyfriend, Lou Briccant, insisted that Martha was doing a little housework. Six months later, Martha fell backwards killing herself on a flight of stairs in the basement. She was carrying up that same bucket of grease that she tried using on her boyfriend to kill him. Was she going to clean the floors or attempt to kill him...
#boyfriend
#fiction
#mystery #tragedy
#mystery #tragedy
157 reads
7 Comments
CoffeeMan_YQX
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 7:06pm
1st Sep 2024 7:06pm
Easy
Like riding a bike
Like slipping on a pair of flip flops
Like making a cheese sandwich
Like wrapping up in a warm blanket
Like laying on a comfy bed
Like taking a drink of water
Like putting on a glove
It would be so easy
All the parts are already there
The firm foundation has already been laid
There is always work to do
But it would be so easy
Like slipping on a pair of flip flops
Like making a cheese sandwich
Like wrapping up in a warm blanket
Like laying on a comfy bed
Like taking a drink of water
Like putting on a glove
It would be so easy
All the parts are already there
The firm foundation has already been laid
There is always work to do
But it would be so easy
#boyfriend
#dating
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
329 reads
1 Comment
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 2:57am
30th Jul 2024 2:57am
The Things I Miss
I saw you today...
Passed each other by
Like the strangers we've become.
Sobriety is becoming on you,
Even in the undoing of what used to be us.
Words catch in my throat
Of things better left unsaid.
A younger, crueler me
Would run my fingers through your beard
And pull your face closer to mine
For one more dive into hell.
The taste of unrequited love is a liar,
But it is so sweet.
It tastes like gravel road sunsets
At the edge of nowhere
Two dumbass kids
Meeting up to steal pieces of heaven
In the...
Passed each other by
Like the strangers we've become.
Sobriety is becoming on you,
Even in the undoing of what used to be us.
Words catch in my throat
Of things better left unsaid.
A younger, crueler me
Would run my fingers through your beard
And pull your face closer to mine
For one more dive into hell.
The taste of unrequited love is a liar,
But it is so sweet.
It tastes like gravel road sunsets
At the edge of nowhere
Two dumbass kids
Meeting up to steal pieces of heaven
In the...
#boyfriend
#gratitude
#love
#lover
#memories
219 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 7:01pm
15th Jun 2024 7:01pm
Almost a death sentence
He got her pregnant and left her
She didn't know what to do
She was to scared to get an abortion
She was to scared to have the kid
She jumped off the roof of her apartment building
Yeah she died
When he found out he was troubled
His troubled feelings soon gave way to relief
In a month he had forgotten about it
He was just another swinging single cock walking down the street again
She didn't know what to do
She was to scared to get an abortion
She was to scared to have the kid
She jumped off the roof of her apartment building
Yeah she died
When he found out he was troubled
His troubled feelings soon gave way to relief
In a month he had forgotten about it
He was just another swinging single cock walking down the street again
#boyfriend
#LifeStruggles
#pregnancy
#SelfHarm
#suicide
293 reads
6 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
16th May 2024 3:17pm
16th May 2024 3:17pm
Cherry Coke
#boyfriend
#FirstLove
#girlfriend
#relationships
#sex
421 reads
12 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
15th May 2024 10:30am
15th May 2024 10:30am
In the Back Seat
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#lust
#orgasm
#sex
395 reads
2 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
8th May 2024 4:41am
8th May 2024 4:41am
Chesapeake Bay
I started this note
somewhere in the middle
of Chesapeake Bay…staggering
upper deck on a ferry named FANTASY,
floating towards Foreverville.
Your arms surrounded me
like a memory,
chestnut hair wildly dispersed,
September chill on sky-mist stationary,
your tongue on the crease
of my sticky envelope,
tendrils of curls crossing the t’s,
dotting the eyes…
When you set yourself to reading,
be apprised that the ink is still wet;
the paper is thin as lingerie lace,
and because you are beautiful,
the...
somewhere in the middle
of Chesapeake Bay…staggering
upper deck on a ferry named FANTASY,
floating towards Foreverville.
Your arms surrounded me
like a memory,
chestnut hair wildly dispersed,
September chill on sky-mist stationary,
your tongue on the crease
of my sticky envelope,
tendrils of curls crossing the t’s,
dotting the eyes…
When you set yourself to reading,
be apprised that the ink is still wet;
the paper is thin as lingerie lace,
and because you are beautiful,
the...
#boyfriend
#crush
#FallingInLove
#relationships
#romantic
455 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Apr 2024 10:47am
28th Apr 2024 10:47am
This can happen
When will it be over?
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#sex
#funny
#identity
222 reads
8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
