Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
faithmairee
Poem Published
31st Oct 2020 9:06am
31st Oct 2020 9:06am
What A Little Charm Can Do
Oh, what a little charm can do
As it goes from me to you
It's a part of the sexual chemistry
That runs through and through
While charm can be disarming
It need not be alarming
It's lovely how it often times
Gets that old ball a rolling
As it goes from me to you
It's a part of the sexual chemistry
That runs through and through
While charm can be disarming
It need not be alarming
It's lovely how it often times
Gets that old ball a rolling
#love
#boyfriend
#lover
398 reads
6 Comments
marina2020
Rain Woman
Rain Woman
Poem Published
29th Oct 2020 00:29am
29th Oct 2020 00:29am
My Angel
I want to break into a million pieces
But I look at you
And I know life will get better
It must
I have you in it
That’s all I need
All the stress and the worrying and frustration
Means nothing when I have you to hold me
You’re my light
That keeps me lit
When all I want to do
Is fall into the darkness
You’re the voice that I hear
That drown out the screams
Echoing in my head
Night after night
We dance to the same rhythm
And walk to the same beat
I can’t imagine my life without you in it
All the...
But I look at you
And I know life will get better
It must
I have you in it
That’s all I need
All the stress and the worrying and frustration
Means nothing when I have you to hold me
You’re my light
That keeps me lit
When all I want to do
Is fall into the darkness
You’re the voice that I hear
That drown out the screams
Echoing in my head
Night after night
We dance to the same rhythm
And walk to the same beat
I can’t imagine my life without you in it
All the...
#love
#boyfriend
#lover
698 reads
3 Comments
ravibabygirl
Poem Published
19th Oct 2020 6:12am
19th Oct 2020 6:12am
love story
i remember when i first saw you
I were so tall
I thought you were so cool
I was afraid to fall
we had met online
you didn't want anyone to know the fear of being judged
had to protect your good boy image
I didn't know so it slipped
you were my first actual real relationship
i don't regret my time with you good or bad
latter we got signed into a partnership
some memories make me sad
you are my best friend always and forever
no matter how bad things get you have my heart
I learned to never so never
I...
I were so tall
I thought you were so cool
I was afraid to fall
we had met online
you didn't want anyone to know the fear of being judged
had to protect your good boy image
I didn't know so it slipped
you were my first actual real relationship
i don't regret my time with you good or bad
latter we got signed into a partnership
some memories make me sad
you are my best friend always and forever
no matter how bad things get you have my heart
I learned to never so never
I...
#husband
#boyfriend
#relationships
#FallingInLove
#dating
612 reads
1 Comment
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
21st Sep 2020 2:31pm
21st Sep 2020 2:31pm
Purfumed Virgin Vessel
#lust
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#teens
#sex
523 reads
1 Comment
faithmairee
Poem Published
20th Sep 2020 7:12am
20th Sep 2020 7:12am
Chasing Amy
It started out as an innocent flirtation
but when he and Amy's eyes met
and she smiled wide at him he knew
he had to have her for his own
To say that he was drawn to Amy
would clearly be an understatement
there was something about her that intrigued him but he couldn't say what
He went after her hard and fast
leaving her with no doubt he wanted her
but it didn't seem to matter much
he saw it was only driving them apart
It wasn't supposed be this way
Amy turned the chase into...
but when he and Amy's eyes met
and she smiled wide at him he knew
he had to have her for his own
To say that he was drawn to Amy
would clearly be an understatement
there was something about her that intrigued him but he couldn't say what
He went after her hard and fast
leaving her with no doubt he wanted her
but it didn't seem to matter much
he saw it was only driving them apart
It wasn't supposed be this way
Amy turned the chase into...
#love
#rejection
#boyfriend
#dialogue
#hurt
523 reads
14 Comments
Stephanie_Knapik
Poem Published
12th Sep 2020 11:58pm
12th Sep 2020 11:58pm
Gate keeping us apart
When I see you walking towards the screen, and I look into those eyes of blue, you have no clue just what you mean to me, I have to remind myself that our future is still unseen
I'll never forget the first day we met, the thoughts of you and what l'd love you to do, my heart was about as broken as it could get, but you made me forget about the pain and wish for someone new.
After 3 almost years from that day I decided to email you just to say hi, not really sure of what to really say, I was shocked when I got your replay I won't lie, and so now I'm glad I did cause we...
I'll never forget the first day we met, the thoughts of you and what l'd love you to do, my heart was about as broken as it could get, but you made me forget about the pain and wish for someone new.
After 3 almost years from that day I decided to email you just to say hi, not really sure of what to really say, I was shocked when I got your replay I won't lie, and so now I'm glad I did cause we...
#boyfriend
#romantic
#FallingInLove #support
#FallingInLove #support
566 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
6th Sep 2020 8:33am
6th Sep 2020 8:33am
With You (It's Always Gonna Be A Sunny Day)
My life's been changed
since the day that I met you
You're quirky and you're cool
It's true I'm falling hard for you
I want you in
so many different ways
I don't know much about love
Still you're the one I'm thinking of
And there's one thing
I must say
With you it's always gonna be
a sunny day
since the day that I met you
You're quirky and you're cool
It's true I'm falling hard for you
I want you in
so many different ways
I don't know much about love
Still you're the one I'm thinking of
And there's one thing
I must say
With you it's always gonna be
a sunny day
#love
#boyfriend
607 reads
10 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
4th Sep 2020 12:11pm
4th Sep 2020 12:11pm
One Flesh?
#lust
#boyfriend
#sex
#disappointment
#FirstLove
625 reads
1 Comment
CarlMidas
Carl Midas
Carl Midas
Poem Published
29th Aug 2020 5:55am
29th Aug 2020 5:55am
Flicker
Flicker.
Flicker.
Flicker Flicker Flame baby
You've got a fire blazing in my heart lately
And everything I thought I knew about love has probably changed maybe
Swear to you the promises I make today will forever remain baby
There is nothing in this World that could ever put out all the flames burning
Flood.
Flood.
Flood Flood Let it Rain baby
Drowning in your love and I don't even need saving
Even as the sky falls, just take my hand, we are all we need baby
We are
You are
You are all I need baby ...
Flicker.
Flicker Flicker Flame baby
You've got a fire blazing in my heart lately
And everything I thought I knew about love has probably changed maybe
Swear to you the promises I make today will forever remain baby
There is nothing in this World that could ever put out all the flames burning
Flood.
Flood.
Flood Flood Let it Rain baby
Drowning in your love and I don't even need saving
Even as the sky falls, just take my hand, we are all we need baby
We are
You are
You are all I need baby ...
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#lover
#FallingInLove
542 reads
0 Comments
Poems4me
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2020 5:38pm
22nd Aug 2020 5:38pm
You
Thought about you today but that's nothing new
Thought about you yesterday and all the days before that too
In fact, I'm thinking of you right now
I can't get you out of my head, I don't know how
I will never do anything to make you cry.
Understand what I'm saying, this is not a lie.
Every time I think of you my stomach starts to twist
I can't help but love you and I've made a huge list.
You know exactly who you are and what you need from me
You're everything I need, you're very special to me
You always make me smile just by being there ...
Thought about you yesterday and all the days before that too
In fact, I'm thinking of you right now
I can't get you out of my head, I don't know how
I will never do anything to make you cry.
Understand what I'm saying, this is not a lie.
Every time I think of you my stomach starts to twist
I can't help but love you and I've made a huge list.
You know exactly who you are and what you need from me
You're everything I need, you're very special to me
You always make me smile just by being there ...
#love
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove #admiration
#FallingInLove #admiration
763 reads
14 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
25th Jul 2020 8:34pm
25th Jul 2020 8:34pm
Compassion On The Open Market
He who stills the swell
is loud to toll the bell
in relative/cognitive hell
of some one else's hearth & home
we work with compassion...........
we style our-selfs wit empathy.
we die like fools on display
in viewing rooms, (nary a lone
room with a truant view)
Nothing left to sell. Tap city, baby.
Go home & pay some sincerity to the kids
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2020dkzk @@@@@@@@@@@
is loud to toll the bell
in relative/cognitive hell
of some one else's hearth & home
we work with compassion...........
we style our-selfs wit empathy.
we die like fools on display
in viewing rooms, (nary a lone
room with a truant view)
Nothing left to sell. Tap city, baby.
Go home & pay some sincerity to the kids
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
2020dkzk @@@@@@@@@@@
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#LifeStruggles
#lover
418 reads
4 Comments
Whimsy_Ginger
Poem Published
15th Jul 2020 6:41am
15th Jul 2020 6:41am
this/that
She needs this
He needs that
Her this and his that
Are complete opposites
Yet, they need each other
There has to be a way
Together is what they need
Apart is not an option
I repeat, apart is not an option!
He needs that
Her this and his that
Are complete opposites
Yet, they need each other
There has to be a way
Together is what they need
Apart is not an option
I repeat, apart is not an option!
#love
#boyfriend
#relationships
#polyamory
#emotional
179 reads
3 Comments
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