Bisexual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#bisexual
bisexual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Girls
I never though I'm into girls
Until that dumb Billie Eilish song
Until I watched my friend too long
And wanted to be hers
I never thought I'd fall
For my ex-best friends ex
For the beauty of my sex
Just to be crushed against a wall
Being "cool" is just the same as nice
And I wanted you for every price
Wanted to change just to get a happy-end
But you said no and that's okay
Now I feel bad because I'm gay
And after all, we just remain "friends"
Until that dumb Billie Eilish song
Until I watched my friend too long
And wanted to be hers
I never thought I'd fall
For my ex-best friends ex
For the beauty of my sex
Just to be crushed against a wall
Being "cool" is just the same as nice
And I wanted you for every price
Wanted to change just to get a happy-end
But you said no and that's okay
Now I feel bad because I'm gay
And after all, we just remain "friends"
#bisexual
#hurt
#love
#music
#rejection
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Inevitable
No matter which way I do go
I still seem never to know
which way I will turn
which new bridge I will burn
An arsonist returning to the crime
I seek to sneak in some rhyme
while tiptoeing through the ashes
from these bisexual clashes
Living in the here and now
yet always willing to again plow
the present completely under
as I rape, pillage and plunder
The normal order of things
betraying these wedding rings
just to have a little fun...
only to leave after it has begun
...
I still seem never to know
which way I will turn
which new bridge I will burn
An arsonist returning to the crime
I seek to sneak in some rhyme
while tiptoeing through the ashes
from these bisexual clashes
Living in the here and now
yet always willing to again plow
the present completely under
as I rape, pillage and plunder
The normal order of things
betraying these wedding rings
just to have a little fun...
only to leave after it has begun
...
#betrayal
#bisexual
#confessional
#lust
#WritingPoetry
19 reads
6 Comments
my c**t has a date with your face

#bisexual
#erotic
#lesbian #sex
#lesbian #sex
582 reads
4 Comments
All night last night. - With EveAteRedApples

#bisexual
#collaboration
#erotic
#lesbian
#lust
535 reads
11 Comments
All night last night - with Betty

#erotic
#passion
#bisexual
#collaboration
#lesbian
337 reads
12 Comments
Cinderella

#BDSM
#bisexual
#dirty
#orgasm
#sex
572 reads
21 Comments
Enticing

#BDSM
#bisexual
#confessional
#erotic
#WritingPoetry
19 reads
6 Comments
Hard Ride on the Lift

#BDSM
#bisexual
#dirty
#orgasm
#sex
368 reads
19 Comments
Fuss
It does not cause a fuss when you speak against the king or president of a country.
And if you speak against the police or the military, you will not be labelled as a hater.
So why does it cause a big uproar when someone speaks against LGBTQ people?
When did homosexuals, bisexuals, and transgender people become so important?
If they were doing the right thing, they would not care what others say about them.
Heterosexuals do not march with flags and demonstrate for straight people rights,
Neither do they go around and talk nonsense about being proud to...
And if you speak against the police or the military, you will not be labelled as a hater.
So why does it cause a big uproar when someone speaks against LGBTQ people?
When did homosexuals, bisexuals, and transgender people become so important?
If they were doing the right thing, they would not care what others say about them.
Heterosexuals do not march with flags and demonstrate for straight people rights,
Neither do they go around and talk nonsense about being proud to...
#gay
#bisexual
#lesbian
#military
#transgender
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0 Comments
To not Decide is to Decide

#erotic
#confessional
#TruthOfLife
#sensual
#bisexual
18 reads
11 Comments
Stain of Ink
With all of the words I have written
all of these times I have been smitten
I still know not what love is
though I sought both hers and his
Confessions filling each page
every time I dare engage
the truth hidden deep inside
along with each lie I ever denied
Just tattoos upon my soul
mere puzzle pieces to the whole
of all that I do hope to be
cast adrift on every lonely sea
Trying hard to now understand
the closure of a gold wedding band
how it never quite felt right
always felt a...
all of these times I have been smitten
I still know not what love is
though I sought both hers and his
Confessions filling each page
every time I dare engage
the truth hidden deep inside
along with each lie I ever denied
Just tattoos upon my soul
mere puzzle pieces to the whole
of all that I do hope to be
cast adrift on every lonely sea
Trying hard to now understand
the closure of a gold wedding band
how it never quite felt right
always felt a...
#betrayal
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
#sensual
#bisexual
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7 Comments
We're Into It. The Main Question Is Are You?
Lindsay walked topless
towards Kevin only to
see that he married
Valerie who wants to have
a threesome with the two friends.
towards Kevin only to
see that he married
Valerie who wants to have
a threesome with the two friends.
#wife
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
#bisexual
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