Bisexual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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bisexual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Beer and Men
#lust
#erotic
#bisexual
#morality
#passion
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Eyes Of Disgrace
Within these eyes of hers
Were a disgrace so unfair
But as I ah looked within them
The disgrace for me ah cared
I thought at first she would hit
Me but she only gave me a hug
And I returned at same time
Because that's just my aluv
She said my lady and I
Are ah funny no longer one
She wanted a child as a luva
I pulled the ah trigga bar none
Within the years we were
Together I couldn't see these signs
I had no desire to molest anyone
How did this become of her binds
Into her face I ah plunged...
Were a disgrace so unfair
But as I ah looked within them
The disgrace for me ah cared
I thought at first she would hit
Me but she only gave me a hug
And I returned at same time
Because that's just my aluv
She said my lady and I
Are ah funny no longer one
She wanted a child as a luva
I pulled the ah trigga bar none
Within the years we were
Together I couldn't see these signs
I had no desire to molest anyone
How did this become of her binds
Into her face I ah plunged...
#gay
#lover
#redemption
#bisexual
#witches
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Show Me
#lesbian
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
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Power
#lesbian
#gay
#secrets
#sex
#bisexual
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Do U
Whatever thy luv style is
Or should I ah say style of love
U do u be u enjoy u within
And remember the u there of
If thy ah style is flowers and
Candy all the ah time to ah she
Even if ah funny u ah be ah
To her ah flowers and ah candy
If thy ah style is eat some dinner
At an ah nice ah restaurant too
U be the ah class of the ah restaurant
To thy ah luv'z I ah do luv u
If it's super fancy ah restaurant
Y'all ah hear my acquired ah say
Live like that upon thine ah hygeine
Even if thou art truly Awet ah...
Or should I ah say style of love
U do u be u enjoy u within
And remember the u there of
If thy ah style is flowers and
Candy all the ah time to ah she
Even if ah funny u ah be ah
To her ah flowers and ah candy
If thy ah style is eat some dinner
At an ah nice ah restaurant too
U be the ah class of the ah restaurant
To thy ah luv'z I ah do luv u
If it's super fancy ah restaurant
Y'all ah hear my acquired ah say
Live like that upon thine ah hygeine
Even if thou art truly Awet ah...
#lesbian
#gay
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
#passion
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U Can Ah See My Ah Heart
#dark
#identity
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
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In Cold Blood
#dark
#erotic
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
#passion
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U Pushed Me Far
#love
#dark
#scary
#lover
#bisexual
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Full Disclosure
You said I’m sorry that they treat you
Like your somebody else
I’m sorry they don’t see you
As yourself
But don’t feel bad
They don’t know they’re hurting you
When they say stupid shit
About who you’re turning into
But if I show them what’s in my mind
I’ll be somebody they won’t like
I’m really tired of having to hide
I always want to die
I don’t think life has a point
Most of the time
I keep too much inside
So I’m sorry mom
I only like boys sometimes
I mean they’re fine ...
Like your somebody else
I’m sorry they don’t see you
As yourself
But don’t feel bad
They don’t know they’re hurting you
When they say stupid shit
About who you’re turning into
But if I show them what’s in my mind
I’ll be somebody they won’t like
I’m really tired of having to hide
I always want to die
I don’t think life has a point
Most of the time
I keep too much inside
So I’m sorry mom
I only like boys sometimes
I mean they’re fine ...
#identity
#confessional
#bisexual
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Steady
This one did not work
Well life will become something else
Though this one did not work
This will be an ah good for my ah health
Her 5'0 one hundred 36 pound frame
Really like she said wasn't for me
She sometimes within my arms
Felt guilty of it not being an ah womanly
Only...a female that's gay or lesbian be
I couldn't argue at all about this with she
I let her go as asked all because of this
She felt it better than our ah kiss
............Steady...........Steady.............Steady
Steady it keeps me...
Well life will become something else
Though this one did not work
This will be an ah good for my ah health
Her 5'0 one hundred 36 pound frame
Really like she said wasn't for me
She sometimes within my arms
Felt guilty of it not being an ah womanly
Only...a female that's gay or lesbian be
I couldn't argue at all about this with she
I let her go as asked all because of this
She felt it better than our ah kiss
............Steady...........Steady.............Steady
Steady it keeps me...
#dark
#lesbian
#gay
#respect
#bisexual
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She's Beautiful
#dark
#gothic
#fiction
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
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I Promise U....I'm With It...It's This Good To Me
#dark
#gay
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
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