Poems About Animals Seeking Honest Critique
#animals
Poems about animals seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
natural connection
languid day, contempt with boredom
moving in slow motion
still moments of life caught in black and white
An old photograph, quiet but poignant
bittersweet in its presentation
The gentle flower blowing in the wind
The grass blades reach for the sun
The trees gossip among each other
talking about the girl with sunshine hair
wondering, could I see the beauty in the long day
With grumblings of nothingness and sorrow I languish
Then the day reached for me
inviting me in
I contemplate her graciousness
Humanity...
moving in slow motion
still moments of life caught in black and white
An old photograph, quiet but poignant
bittersweet in its presentation
The gentle flower blowing in the wind
The grass blades reach for the sun
The trees gossip among each other
talking about the girl with sunshine hair
wondering, could I see the beauty in the long day
With grumblings of nothingness and sorrow I languish
Then the day reached for me
inviting me in
I contemplate her graciousness
Humanity...
#animals
#flowers
#happiness
#nature
#trees
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Could You Please Get It Down For Me?
Mommy, I can't
reach to grab
the chocolate
Easter bunny.
reach to grab
the chocolate
Easter bunny.
#animals
#dialogue
#Easter
#fiction
#FreeVerse
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the lost flies
A bunch of flies decided to fly till they see the light
Many obstacles came but despite all of them
They did not give up and managed to still go until they see a light
And of course the commitment did pay up making them, happy
Yet ,they still didn’t know there was a spider among the light
Flies continued to explore the light and still thought
The light was something mythical, they accepted it
Until the spider itself showed up and killed several brutally
Since the light was man made the heat killed many
Causing the flies to realize...
Many obstacles came but despite all of them
They did not give up and managed to still go until they see a light
And of course the commitment did pay up making them, happy
Yet ,they still didn’t know there was a spider among the light
Flies continued to explore the light and still thought
The light was something mythical, they accepted it
Until the spider itself showed up and killed several brutally
Since the light was man made the heat killed many
Causing the flies to realize...
#animals
#evolution
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beauty in chaos
the roaring sky cried in joy
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
#animals
#beauty
#birds
#hope
#nature
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balance
With outstretched arms, nature calls to me
With the sunrise and birdsong
The wildflowers in the garden
dazzle my vision
the trees hold up the sky
I knew it was going to be a beautiful day
sacred harmony, everything working in order after their kind
My day started as all days, feeding the cats
Chickens and roosters mine eat together
It's a funny alliance
My dog, still asleep in bed will need to be walked soon
But for now, it is a quiet morning of observation
The earth is humming, and whether you realize it...
With the sunrise and birdsong
The wildflowers in the garden
dazzle my vision
the trees hold up the sky
I knew it was going to be a beautiful day
sacred harmony, everything working in order after their kind
My day started as all days, feeding the cats
Chickens and roosters mine eat together
It's a funny alliance
My dog, still asleep in bed will need to be walked soon
But for now, it is a quiet morning of observation
The earth is humming, and whether you realize it...
#animals
#birds
#cats
#dogs
#nature
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Little Buddy
Little Buddy
Why do you like zucchini so much
You need more nutrients than that
Why are you so dramatic when I give you leafy greens
That's what your species is supposed to eat
You are so pampered that you are being picky
You won’t even eat the nutrient pellets that literally all reptiles tend to eat
Little Buddy
You drive me crazy
And make me worry
Why do you refuse to eat what’s good for you
You remind me of a toddler
Even though you are a tortoise
You really need to eat other types of food
Little Buddy
Why do you like zucchini so much
You need more nutrients than that
Why are you so dramatic when I give you leafy greens
That's what your species is supposed to eat
You are so pampered that you are being picky
You won’t even eat the nutrient pellets that literally all reptiles tend to eat
Little Buddy
You drive me crazy
And make me worry
Why do you refuse to eat what’s good for you
You remind me of a toddler
Even though you are a tortoise
You really need to eat other types of food
Little Buddy
#animals
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Univocalic (U): Fluffy Wuffy Bunny and the compulsory-fun Easter egg hunt
Sunny sky - sun, cumulus;
Lush, bushy suburbs; tumulus.
Up, up, up... bunny jumps; susumus.
"Hurry up!" blurts Fluffy Bunny.
"Try my fun pud hunt!"
Bunny's chums shrug numbly.
"Hurry hurry, Punky Puppy!"
Punky Puppy jumps up, runs - rumbly tummy!
"Try my fun pud hunt!" blurts Fluffy Wuffy, Cuddly Wuddly Bunny.
Punky Puppy gulps purply plums, gummy flumps.
Gulp, gulp... BURP!
"Hurry hurry, scurry scurry, Plucky Ducks!"
Plucky Ducks jump up, run... yum yum, munch...
Lush, bushy suburbs; tumulus.
Up, up, up... bunny jumps; susumus.
"Hurry up!" blurts Fluffy Bunny.
"Try my fun pud hunt!"
Bunny's chums shrug numbly.
"Hurry hurry, Punky Puppy!"
Punky Puppy jumps up, runs - rumbly tummy!
"Try my fun pud hunt!" blurts Fluffy Wuffy, Cuddly Wuddly Bunny.
Punky Puppy gulps purply plums, gummy flumps.
Gulp, gulp... BURP!
"Hurry hurry, scurry scurry, Plucky Ducks!"
Plucky Ducks jump up, run... yum yum, munch...
#animals
#food
#funny
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Byrds
In the sky was one bird, then another while I stood with my people; first, it was a white Hawk that I had called out to my people and shot at with no precision, and it seemed to have been grazed. As I noticed a dip in the hawk's flight pattern, a second bird, that was Swift, almost appeared outta thin air; it had feathers that were white, thick, and unfettered. The beak of the animal had the appearance of 24k gold as it gleamed from the sun behind me. Its sharp, long talons were nothing to be taken lightly. This wasn't your typical eagle it was a harpy. As I raised my head to the skies I...
#animals
#dreams
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Univocalic (A)
What a warm day!
Carry a damp bag;
hang a damp wash.
Stand back.
A small black cat ran past;
at a grassy patch, sat.
Had a play—
paws at that wash:
bat, tap and pat at wash.
Bat bat bat!
Tap tap tap!
Pat pat pat!
Cat back.
Glad small black cat
sat at path!
Brash, gallant cat can dash
past hatch!
Ha ha!
Salaam!
A snack?
Cat sat and drank,
had a raw snack,
and a pat,
and a wash;
crazy lass!
At last,
cat back at that...
Carry a damp bag;
hang a damp wash.
Stand back.
A small black cat ran past;
at a grassy patch, sat.
Had a play—
paws at that wash:
bat, tap and pat at wash.
Bat bat bat!
Tap tap tap!
Pat pat pat!
Cat back.
Glad small black cat
sat at path!
Brash, gallant cat can dash
past hatch!
Ha ha!
Salaam!
A snack?
Cat sat and drank,
had a raw snack,
and a pat,
and a wash;
crazy lass!
At last,
cat back at that...
#animals
#cats
#PowerOfWords
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"The Sea's Silent Symphony"
The sun, a molten gold coin, shimmered on the surface of the Coral Triangle, a vast, pulsating heart of the ocean. Spring’s gentle warmth had coaxed a symphony of life from the depths. Coral polyps, tiny architects of the sea, unfurled their delicate tentacles, capturing the sun-kissed plankton that drifted on the currents. Clownfish, their vibrant orange stripes flashing like jewels, darted amongst the anemones, their symbiotic dance a testament to the intricate balance of this underwater Eden.
A mother humpback whale, her massive form a gentle giant, guided her calf through the...
A mother humpback whale, her massive form a gentle giant, guided her calf through the...
#animals
#fish
#nature
#regret
#sea
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Some berries and a giraffe's kiss
Let me take you to a divine place
where strawberries blush and interlace.
In the heart of the savannah they bloom
soft whispers of life in nature’s room.
The rain falls warm, like a lover's sigh.
A tender caress from a generous sky.
Its drops linger embracing the earth
feeding the fields where beauty finds birth.
The light, so cool, shimmers and plays,
casting shadows in intricate arrays.
A gentle balm to the heat’s embrace
illuminating dreams in this secret space.
Feel the pulse of the land, its steady...
where strawberries blush and interlace.
In the heart of the savannah they bloom
soft whispers of life in nature’s room.
The rain falls warm, like a lover's sigh.
A tender caress from a generous sky.
Its drops linger embracing the earth
feeding the fields where beauty finds birth.
The light, so cool, shimmers and plays,
casting shadows in intricate arrays.
A gentle balm to the heat’s embrace
illuminating dreams in this secret space.
Feel the pulse of the land, its steady...
#animals
#birds
#flowers
#love
#nature
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9 Comments
~of a 2 random flashed paradisiacal poetic symbolisms.. of an otherwise prosaic day
1.
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
#animals
#flowers
#nature
#symbolism
#trees
91 reads
3 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Animals Seeking Honest Critique