Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
I don't talk about weather or politics
No weather speak
No politico speak
Everyone gets pissed
If I shut them down mid-complaining
I'm a pompous grouchy fuck
Pass the snakes
No politico speak
Everyone gets pissed
If I shut them down mid-complaining
I'm a pompous grouchy fuck
Pass the snakes
#anger
#environment
#politics
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Love and War
How are we so far apart in this bed?
Sleeping with venom in our hearts
Tension fills the room when we’re together
It’s love and war between us
Since when did we become enemies?
Fighting on opposite sides
Two atomic bombs ready to explode
The battle line was drawn when the arguments lingered long after malicious words were spewed
Like a gunshot what’s said can’t be taken back
The wound stays hidden under layers of resentment
Building like mold until it festers over the foundation we’ve made
What remains is similar to a war torn...
Sleeping with venom in our hearts
Tension fills the room when we’re together
It’s love and war between us
Since when did we become enemies?
Fighting on opposite sides
Two atomic bombs ready to explode
The battle line was drawn when the arguments lingered long after malicious words were spewed
Like a gunshot what’s said can’t be taken back
The wound stays hidden under layers of resentment
Building like mold until it festers over the foundation we’ve made
What remains is similar to a war torn...
#anger
#conflict
#marriage #sadness
#marriage #sadness
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0 Comments
I'm not you
I'm not you and you are not me 😞 to tell me that what, I got going on in my own body and mind and spiritual soul, is not what I have been dealing with for awhile now ain't cancer. FOR sure you don't have to take my words of what I say is the truth. For sure who are you to judge someone who's whole life, has been turned up side down having to deal with cancer. For like I've said I'm not you and you are not me, fighting for my life s second time in my own life time. 🙏 Yet you insist that you know me when you really don't bother to do your own research, for sure I don't have no...
#anger
#fear
#frustration
#grief
#sadness
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The Violence Continues
She had enough. Many times her father would could home staggering drunk, and force himself onto her. He didn't care. He had no regret when he would sober up. Her mother knew that if she ever said a word she'd be beaten & thrown out into the streets. She cared about her own hide and not her own flesh & blood. She came into this marriage with nothing and will leave the marriage with nothing.
Her daughter is now dependent on drugs. Any drugs to release her from this horror. Pills, heroin, meth, alcohol, anything to get her fucked up and to drown these memories.
...
Her daughter is now dependent on drugs. Any drugs to release her from this horror. Pills, heroin, meth, alcohol, anything to get her fucked up and to drown these memories.
...
#abuse
#anger
#family
#prison
#ShortStory
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8 Comments
Move Along
A land that's been invaded
by hate and vitriol
waiting on a king
to fix the troubles
two babies in the backseat
shame on us
took too long
Detroit's cold in the winter
move along move along
someone's gotta get stepped on
move the fuck along
sell some pillows or apple cider vinegar
million likes on social media
this is how far we've come
on and on we keep ranting
as our world comes undone
but what you gonna do
if they don't pay yah
move along move along
peace be with you ...
by hate and vitriol
waiting on a king
to fix the troubles
two babies in the backseat
shame on us
took too long
Detroit's cold in the winter
move along move along
someone's gotta get stepped on
move the fuck along
sell some pillows or apple cider vinegar
million likes on social media
this is how far we've come
on and on we keep ranting
as our world comes undone
but what you gonna do
if they don't pay yah
move along move along
peace be with you ...
#anger
#grief
#hope #PopCulture
#hope #PopCulture
86 reads
4 Comments
Down Goes Big Brother
This shit show can't slow my roll
This Punk bitch stays in control
Left side is speaking to the right
I'm raging & searching for a fight
Tying me to your whipping post
Slipping your fingers like a ghost
If you must, wallow in your hate
I don't owe karma any of my fate
Gov't wikked, throughout history
Even snakes aren't that slippery
The mighty dollar a fiscal issue
Seems the dow needs a tissue
Citizens to become self sufficient
Shadow solidarity being resistant
This land is our...
This Punk bitch stays in control
Left side is speaking to the right
I'm raging & searching for a fight
Tying me to your whipping post
Slipping your fingers like a ghost
If you must, wallow in your hate
I don't owe karma any of my fate
Gov't wikked, throughout history
Even snakes aren't that slippery
The mighty dollar a fiscal issue
Seems the dow needs a tissue
Citizens to become self sufficient
Shadow solidarity being resistant
This land is our...
#anger
#politics
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2 Comments
Give Me Space
put me in a box
and nail the top shut
tell me i can only do
what you want me to
police my steps
police my words
steal my freedom
dim the lights
let no one see
let no one know...
i am someone
i am magic
i can do
what you say i can't
i am joy
let me dance
i can dance
i will dance...
and nail the top shut
tell me i can only do
what you want me to
police my steps
police my words
steal my freedom
dim the lights
let no one see
let no one know...
i am someone
i am magic
i can do
what you say i can't
i am joy
let me dance
i can dance
i will dance...
#anger
#confusion
#courage #strength
#courage #strength
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Hatred For Only You
You're a lying son of bitch
Talking crap behind everyone's back
Hell is the general direction which
You should direct yourself to
You don't stand for what you speak
Getting tired of your shit
In reality you're so weak
Your a god damn hypocrite
How can you find pride in being hated?
Or are you too blind to see the reality?
So you've decided on your stance
Your greed beats your empathy
To think I even respected you once
'Cos you're as much as an enemy
Though we're all conceited in some way
You're just way too...
Talking crap behind everyone's back
Hell is the general direction which
You should direct yourself to
You don't stand for what you speak
Getting tired of your shit
In reality you're so weak
Your a god damn hypocrite
How can you find pride in being hated?
Or are you too blind to see the reality?
So you've decided on your stance
Your greed beats your empathy
To think I even respected you once
'Cos you're as much as an enemy
Though we're all conceited in some way
You're just way too...
#anger
#hate
#hypocrisy
#lies
#relationships
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2 Comments
f**k Me Hey-Zeus!

#anger
#dirty
#hate
#religion
#sex
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10 Comments
letter to the universe’s absentee father
dear god
this is the closest I’ve come to prayer since the bottles stopped bringin me to my knees. I don’t believe in you…and you don’t believe in me. but sometimes I find myself callin out to that abandoned throne. my cries echoin back at me in the emptiness of your absence. I tried to believe but they lost me when they said we are made in your image. seems bit backwards. you are made in our image. twisted. broken. selfish. cruel.
we are lot alike. you and i. how else do you explain floods and rainbows. plagues and manna. the violent jealousies. the need to be...
this is the closest I’ve come to prayer since the bottles stopped bringin me to my knees. I don’t believe in you…and you don’t believe in me. but sometimes I find myself callin out to that abandoned throne. my cries echoin back at me in the emptiness of your absence. I tried to believe but they lost me when they said we are made in your image. seems bit backwards. you are made in our image. twisted. broken. selfish. cruel.
we are lot alike. you and i. how else do you explain floods and rainbows. plagues and manna. the violent jealousies. the need to be...
#addiction
#anger
#bipolar
#faith
#God
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2 Comments
Grocery Shopping
When you're having a super fantastic day
when nothing goes your way
and they look at you as if you're cuckoo
As you yell at them and say Fuck You!
I don't know what to do for you
I give you this and you want that
I can't even pull a rabbit out of this hat
I am absolutely confounded and astounded
that you will assume
that digging up issues laid to rest
from a forgotten tomb
Will give you what you want
What you seek
“Did you read the circular honey?
Eggs are 12.99 this week”
when nothing goes your way
and they look at you as if you're cuckoo
As you yell at them and say Fuck You!
I don't know what to do for you
I give you this and you want that
I can't even pull a rabbit out of this hat
I am absolutely confounded and astounded
that you will assume
that digging up issues laid to rest
from a forgotten tomb
Will give you what you want
What you seek
“Did you read the circular honey?
Eggs are 12.99 this week”
#anger
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16 Comments
Respect
I want some respect, to be human, complete,
I’m not just a vagina, but a soul to greet.
I’m weary of sex that cuts and demeans—
See me as human, not a fucking machine.
I’m not just a vagina, but a soul to greet.
I’m weary of sex that cuts and demeans—
See me as human, not a fucking machine.
#anger
#hate
#sex
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3 Comments
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