Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
DampKitten
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 6:09am
26th Apr 2024 6:09am
Second Coming
Ten, nine, eight,
seven, six, five, four
Behold, I knock upon the door
that whosoever… three, two, one
We have ig-ni-tion.
Orian sighs and by his breath,
all life returns from after death.
A swarm of ships from Heaven’s realm
amass and duly overwhelm
the somber dark before the light.
A thief has come unto the night.
Swirling spheres that make no sound
split the sky and torch the ground,
zig and zag with proton speed,
phantoms of the galaxy.
Angels lead a vast descent
inside their shiny armament. ...
seven, six, five, four
Behold, I knock upon the door
that whosoever… three, two, one
We have ig-ni-tion.
Orian sighs and by his breath,
all life returns from after death.
A swarm of ships from Heaven’s realm
amass and duly overwhelm
the somber dark before the light.
A thief has come unto the night.
Swirling spheres that make no sound
split the sky and torch the ground,
zig and zag with proton speed,
phantoms of the galaxy.
Angels lead a vast descent
inside their shiny armament. ...
#aliens
#apocalypse
#God
#religion
#spiritual
391 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2024 11:20am
23rd Apr 2024 11:20am
Distant Travels
As my mind reflects
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
#aliens
#identity
#memories
#scifi
#universe
196 reads
10 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 00:54am
8th Apr 2024 00:54am
Inter-Planet Janet and the Alien Doomsday Device
#forgiveness
#childhood
#sex
#aliens
#scifi
141 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 9:05pm
26th Mar 2024 9:05pm
Stars Eclipse the Moon
smothering the dawn...never
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
#stars
#angels
#aliens
174 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 3:37pm
26th Mar 2024 3:37pm
Loca
with my head to the dirt I listen
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
#love
#angels
#aliens
204 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 9:35pm
25th Mar 2024 9:35pm
Spendor in the Storm
resolving the differences
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
#love
#angels
#aliens
185 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 3:46am
25th Mar 2024 3:46am
Honey and Vinegar
I see a narrow minded civilation out for greed
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
#angels
#aliens
155 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Mar 2024 2:05am
24th Mar 2024 2:05am
Temperment
I see and I don't see you
commanding in presence
you must think me foreign to you
well I've done my best
my forged road is the right road for me
if I'm not desired...so be it
I will not keep you on your way
aching in the moment
wondering about what you classify as pain
cold calculation, cruelty for what reason?
within a push-pull action
I wonder if you would be happier?
when she breaks your heart
and when they do...using you as a pawn
I know only survival of the heart
guarding my...
commanding in presence
you must think me foreign to you
well I've done my best
my forged road is the right road for me
if I'm not desired...so be it
I will not keep you on your way
aching in the moment
wondering about what you classify as pain
cold calculation, cruelty for what reason?
within a push-pull action
I wonder if you would be happier?
when she breaks your heart
and when they do...using you as a pawn
I know only survival of the heart
guarding my...
#love
#aliens
177 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2024 10:01pm
22nd Mar 2024 10:01pm
Cosmic Beings
I saw today aliens wearing bad toupee's
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
#sex
#drugs
#fiction
#aliens
#scifi
176 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Mar 2024 00:06am
19th Mar 2024 00:06am
Truce Father
pent-up pain no need to explain...
with a scalpel's precision,
you make the incision to an affected infliction
causing me to bleed eternally, internally
external scorn adds insult to injury
looking through clouds it is no mystery
confounded glory...never
Father, why did you have to wake me from my slumber?
If your Goddess, My Mother would have been an attentive wife
you never would have taken another to your bed chambers
I treat you with reverence
she requested my exile
petty thief of the soul
cruelty will...
with a scalpel's precision,
you make the incision to an affected infliction
causing me to bleed eternally, internally
external scorn adds insult to injury
looking through clouds it is no mystery
confounded glory...never
Father, why did you have to wake me from my slumber?
If your Goddess, My Mother would have been an attentive wife
you never would have taken another to your bed chambers
I treat you with reverence
she requested my exile
petty thief of the soul
cruelty will...
#love
#vampires
#aliens
144 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 4:44am
10th Mar 2024 4:44am
Echo Dot
my thoughts become convoluted
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
#angels
#aliens
#scifi
209 reads
15 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
Designs and Visions
it's happening again it's warming up and I'm not feeling good
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
#bipolar
#angels
#MentalHealth #aliens
#MentalHealth #aliens
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