Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Mar 2024 2:05am
24th Mar 2024 2:05am
Temperment
I see and I don't see you
commanding in presence
you must think me foreign to you
well I've done my best
my forged road is the right road for me
if I'm not desired...so be it
I will not keep you on your way
aching in the moment
wondering about what you classify as pain
cold calculation, cruelty for what reason?
within a push-pull action
I wonder if you would be happier?
when she breaks your heart
and when they do...using you as a pawn
I know only survival of the heart
guarding my...
commanding in presence
you must think me foreign to you
well I've done my best
my forged road is the right road for me
if I'm not desired...so be it
I will not keep you on your way
aching in the moment
wondering about what you classify as pain
cold calculation, cruelty for what reason?
within a push-pull action
I wonder if you would be happier?
when she breaks your heart
and when they do...using you as a pawn
I know only survival of the heart
guarding my...
#love
#aliens
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4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2024 10:01pm
22nd Mar 2024 10:01pm
Cosmic Beings
I saw today aliens wearing bad toupee's
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
#sex
#drugs
#fiction
#aliens
#scifi
137 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Mar 2024 00:06am
19th Mar 2024 00:06am
Truce Father
pent-up pain no need to explain...
with a scalpel's precision,
you make the incision to an affected infliction
causing me to bleed eternally, internally
external scorn adds insult to injury
looking through clouds it is no mystery
confounded glory...never
Father, why did you have to wake me from my slumber?
If your Goddess, My Mother would have been an attentive wife
you never would have taken another to your bed chambers
I treat you with reverence
she requested my exile
petty thief of the soul
cruelty will...
with a scalpel's precision,
you make the incision to an affected infliction
causing me to bleed eternally, internally
external scorn adds insult to injury
looking through clouds it is no mystery
confounded glory...never
Father, why did you have to wake me from my slumber?
If your Goddess, My Mother would have been an attentive wife
you never would have taken another to your bed chambers
I treat you with reverence
she requested my exile
petty thief of the soul
cruelty will...
#love
#vampires
#aliens
117 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 4:44am
10th Mar 2024 4:44am
Echo Dot
my thoughts become convoluted
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
#angels
#aliens
#scifi
162 reads
15 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
9th Mar 2024 4:02pm
Designs and Visions
it's happening again it's warming up and I'm not feeling good
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
#bipolar
#angels
#MentalHealth #aliens
#MentalHealth #aliens
143 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Mar 2024 4:29pm
5th Mar 2024 4:29pm
Meeting With My Father
exalting the universes
I take a moment to recognize my origins
deep space, time traveling in an instant
I enter the onyx corridor and rise
entering the throne room I greet those at court
it is with great care and emphasis I approach my Father
with an audience of a thousand eyes
I am told to leave ceremony at the door
to speak plainly
I am asked what I've seen
I answer I am worried about humankind
there are great shifts in power
history is being altered
I'm afraid they will forget where they've been
then I...
I take a moment to recognize my origins
deep space, time traveling in an instant
I enter the onyx corridor and rise
entering the throne room I greet those at court
it is with great care and emphasis I approach my Father
with an audience of a thousand eyes
I am told to leave ceremony at the door
to speak plainly
I am asked what I've seen
I answer I am worried about humankind
there are great shifts in power
history is being altered
I'm afraid they will forget where they've been
then I...
#dark
#aliens
144 reads
8 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
4th Mar 2024 3:50pm
4th Mar 2024 3:50pm
Immortal Love 2
I was the only being existing on earth with immortal love.
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
#love
#universe
#aliens
#scifi
#travel
174 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2024 8:24pm
3rd Mar 2024 8:24pm
Progeny
alpha waves are affected sending synapses misfiring
the message is translated as an act of war
communications in
visuals stimulate thoughts
radio signals cause a disturbance
complex chaos ensues
I communicate with beings I can't see
it disrupts my alpha rhythms
so I block them out
the mind won't accept what the eyes can't see
telepathy, some beings communicate mind-to-mind
are part of a collective thought
they are here and can appear as human
they have no problem assimilating our language
because they...
the message is translated as an act of war
communications in
visuals stimulate thoughts
radio signals cause a disturbance
complex chaos ensues
I communicate with beings I can't see
it disrupts my alpha rhythms
so I block them out
the mind won't accept what the eyes can't see
telepathy, some beings communicate mind-to-mind
are part of a collective thought
they are here and can appear as human
they have no problem assimilating our language
because they...
#aliens
#scifi
161 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 9:14pm
1st Mar 2024 9:14pm
Elizabelle the series~Bren
Daddy did you not know?
Bren has come from her wandering in the universes
she has returned to Earth to rest
while I silently listen to her observations taking note
she is an earthling I am not
I am here with her experiencing secondhand what she feels
I make my observations and share them with you my father
I am brens alien spirit child
she is my mother and host
I would like to have my own mortal body someday
but I should also very much like to travel space
like a space pirate
Bren is communing today with the...
Bren has come from her wandering in the universes
she has returned to Earth to rest
while I silently listen to her observations taking note
she is an earthling I am not
I am here with her experiencing secondhand what she feels
I make my observations and share them with you my father
I am brens alien spirit child
she is my mother and host
I would like to have my own mortal body someday
but I should also very much like to travel space
like a space pirate
Bren is communing today with the...
#universe
#aliens
129 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 00:55am
1st Mar 2024 00:55am
Hidden Memories The Regress
my tapestry of hidden memories
rise within me bringing back to memory past lives
a place of visions
a place where I can breathe
I regress into nothingness
to the void before time existed
like a space mermaid, I swim
echoing high and low seeking the others
swimming so deep into the abyss that I tire
I cover myself with the dark and anchor in to rest
waking from startling visions of what is to be
first, I was awake and aware I was
using sonar-like pings
I send them out on the waves in space
then wait to...
rise within me bringing back to memory past lives
a place of visions
a place where I can breathe
I regress into nothingness
to the void before time existed
like a space mermaid, I swim
echoing high and low seeking the others
swimming so deep into the abyss that I tire
I cover myself with the dark and anchor in to rest
waking from startling visions of what is to be
first, I was awake and aware I was
using sonar-like pings
I send them out on the waves in space
then wait to...
#universe
#aliens
#scifi
138 reads
8 Comments
Abracadabra
Poem Published
11th Feb 2024 9:16pm
11th Feb 2024 9:16pm
They've Landed -- Don't Panic
At the bottom of the garden
gleams a ship from outer space
They've come back
to keep us company
to save the human race
With technology that's smarter
they've abolished wars and greed
There's no money on their planet
and everything is free
The weather gets controlled
so the skies are always blue
No-one catches colds
and sneezing is taboo
They don't eat fish or meat
your dinner's just a pill
you take one every day
but two can make you ill
Having sex
is rather...
gleams a ship from outer space
They've come back
to keep us company
to save the human race
With technology that's smarter
they've abolished wars and greed
There's no money on their planet
and everything is free
The weather gets controlled
so the skies are always blue
No-one catches colds
and sneezing is taboo
They don't eat fish or meat
your dinner's just a pill
you take one every day
but two can make you ill
Having sex
is rather...
#humankind
#evolution
#aliens
130 reads
2 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
31st Jan 2024 00:03am
31st Jan 2024 00:03am
Ancient Memories: Justice on Centar Thir
#technology
#war
#aliens
#revenge
#morality
108 reads
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