Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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#addiction
Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 2:22am
3rd Mar 2025 2:22am
To Notice The Spiked Punch
Oh, God! My head hurts!
Trust me, Laraine. My head hurts worse.
What were we thinking, Brandon?
Had too much fun at Susan's party.
To notice the spiked punch. Right?
Trust me, Laraine. My head hurts worse.
What were we thinking, Brandon?
Had too much fun at Susan's party.
To notice the spiked punch. Right?
#alcohol
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
107 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 11:19am
28th Feb 2025 11:19am
A Result Of Gulping Too Many Beers
Dean woke naked and hungover.
He noticed Lisa sleeping next to him.
He went into the bathroom.
After throwing up, Dean saw his reflection.
A result of gulping too many beers.
He noticed Lisa sleeping next to him.
He went into the bathroom.
After throwing up, Dean saw his reflection.
A result of gulping too many beers.
#alcohol
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
137 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 2:12am
27th Feb 2025 2:12am
One Result Of Helen's Parties
Faye woke up so hungover.
She saw herself naked in the mirror.
One result of Helen's parties.
She saw herself naked in the mirror.
One result of Helen's parties.
#alcohol
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
185 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 8:30pm
22nd Feb 2025 8:30pm
You're That Guy From My Sister's Party
Oh, God! My head hurts!
Who the freaking hell are you, anyway?
Wait. Just let me think.
Oh, no. Don't tell me.
You're that guy from my sister's party.
That explains no bikini top.
Are you hungover like me?
Sure do look like it to me.
That's my last beach party.
Got a shirt I'll borrow?
Need something to cover up my chest.
Thanks for the tee shirt.
Now, could you please help me up?
I gotta get home before my husband.
Who the freaking hell are you, anyway?
Wait. Just let me think.
Oh, no. Don't tell me.
You're that guy from my sister's party.
That explains no bikini top.
Are you hungover like me?
Sure do look like it to me.
That's my last beach party.
Got a shirt I'll borrow?
Need something to cover up my chest.
Thanks for the tee shirt.
Now, could you please help me up?
I gotta get home before my husband.
#alcohol
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
176 reads
2 Comments
Ambjr
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 12:00pm
20th Feb 2025 12:00pm
12 steps thru the ruins
coffee burns black as secrets
and fluorescent lights hum truth
thru our weary bones
scattered souls gather
drawn to the warmth of familiar scars
words float between metal chairs
and steamin styrofoam cups
in this rented sanctuary
where shadows pool in corners
patient predators at watch
in their presence
we learn to shed our defenses
layin our ghosts down
like weapons carried far too long
no man needs armor here
just the courage to speak truth
and the strength to hear it
we’ve all found God...
and fluorescent lights hum truth
thru our weary bones
scattered souls gather
drawn to the warmth of familiar scars
words float between metal chairs
and steamin styrofoam cups
in this rented sanctuary
where shadows pool in corners
patient predators at watch
in their presence
we learn to shed our defenses
layin our ghosts down
like weapons carried far too long
no man needs armor here
just the courage to speak truth
and the strength to hear it
we’ve all found God...
#alcohol
#PersonalGrowth
#redemption
191 reads
5 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 00:26am
18th Feb 2025 00:26am
my cuticles are fine, thanks
didn’t know what a nail bar
was until I went into one
looking for a pint
was until I went into one
looking for a pint
#alcohol
96 reads
3 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 8:47pm
15th Feb 2025 8:47pm
Limbo
I cannot live without you;
there would not be enough left of me to function.
But as your nemesis takes you from me, piece by piece,
I cannot live with you.
there would not be enough left of me to function.
But as your nemesis takes you from me, piece by piece,
I cannot live with you.
#addiction
#alcohol
#motherhood #teens
#motherhood #teens
244 reads
10 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 7:35pm
15th Feb 2025 7:35pm
I wonder
Will the government finally give credit to,
The drug they try so hard to hate?
The only thing that gave me happiness,
When they took my kid away.
Will the government finally realize,
That when you isolate,
There is no one to give credit to,
Except the drugs they dearly hate.
Now that I'm doing better,
And friends don't make play dates,
Will the government care for my daughter,
And fully compensate?
The drug they try so hard to hate?
The only thing that gave me happiness,
When they took my kid away.
Will the government finally realize,
That when you isolate,
There is no one to give credit to,
Except the drugs they dearly hate.
Now that I'm doing better,
And friends don't make play dates,
Will the government care for my daughter,
And fully compensate?
#alcohol
#philosophical
187 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 2:52pm
13th Feb 2025 2:52pm
Oh, No! How Am I Going To Explain This To Jim?
Keith
woke up
hungover
and with some chick
naked and sleeping
next to him. After he
threw up in the bathroom, Keith
started getting dressed before he
took one look at the chick and noticed
that it was Jim's future bride Tiffani.
woke up
hungover
and with some chick
naked and sleeping
next to him. After he
threw up in the bathroom, Keith
started getting dressed before he
took one look at the chick and noticed
that it was Jim's future bride Tiffani.
#alcohol
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
180 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 4:23am
7th Feb 2025 4:23am
As A Result Of Attending Wyatt's Bash
On one Sunday, Kim
woke up and discovered that
she was naked and
hungover as a result
of attending Wyatt's bash.
woke up and discovered that
she was naked and
hungover as a result
of attending Wyatt's bash.
#alcohol
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
112 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 9:57pm
6th Feb 2025 9:57pm
Pastor Harry
Pastor Harry has had a little too much to drink
A couple of forties and now it's kind of hard to think
He jumps up behind the wheel and hits the gas
Little do the kiddies know: he's drunk off his ass
He sways and swerves and goes into the other lane
The other drivers are shouting "What the fuck? are you insane?"
He flicks them off and vomits on the windshield
Everybody on this motherfucking bus might get killed
Pastor Harry drives the motherfucking school bus
He doesn't let all the kids yell or cuss
This asshole is drinking...
A couple of forties and now it's kind of hard to think
He jumps up behind the wheel and hits the gas
Little do the kiddies know: he's drunk off his ass
He sways and swerves and goes into the other lane
The other drivers are shouting "What the fuck? are you insane?"
He flicks them off and vomits on the windshield
Everybody on this motherfucking bus might get killed
Pastor Harry drives the motherfucking school bus
He doesn't let all the kids yell or cuss
This asshole is drinking...
#alcohol
#children
#religion
#rhyming
#devil
110 reads
13 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 11:33pm
4th Feb 2025 11:33pm
I remember you
the old bloke in the pub
snorts when the publican shouts
“time, gentleman, please!”
please yourself,
the old bloke in the pub says,
I remember you from school,
you in your shorts, with your
sticky out knees ..
snorts when the publican shouts
“time, gentleman, please!”
please yourself,
the old bloke in the pub says,
I remember you from school,
you in your shorts, with your
sticky out knees ..
#alcohol
107 reads
3 Comments
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