Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 8:20pm
1st Nov 2024 8:20pm
Dilemmhaiku
Very cold Vodka
An after sex dilemma
Just refill the glass
An after sex dilemma
Just refill the glass
#alcohol
#drugs
#haiku #WritingPoetry
#haiku #WritingPoetry
75 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:47am
1st Nov 2024 11:47am
Vodkhaiku
Clear liquid, ice cold
Burning warmth in every sip
Glass echoes its tale.
Burning warmth in every sip
Glass echoes its tale.
#addiction
#alcohol
#art
#lust
#passion
81 reads
10 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:30am
1st Nov 2024 11:30am
Alcoholic Haiku
two shots of vodka
from underneath the iceberg
love's freezing my friend
from underneath the iceberg
love's freezing my friend
#alcohol
#art
#freedom
#love
#spiritual
72 reads
9 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 5:55am
1st Nov 2024 5:55am
What's the occasion?...
Lost your job? Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
#alcohol
#funny
#LifeGoals
108 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 4:12am
30th Oct 2024 4:12am
Live in the bottom of a bottle
Live in the bottom of a bottle
Storms coming I’m looking for shelter
I see you but the glass is empty
You’re the lighthouse but my boat is drifting
I set a point something to go after
You point me to the shore but I need a little more
Something within me is missing boat drifting
I set my compass back to us but I’m lost
Many days have past where did we lose our principles
I ship myself off to you
I see you in my sleep
Tides are turning but time comes around
...
Storms coming I’m looking for shelter
I see you but the glass is empty
You’re the lighthouse but my boat is drifting
I set a point something to go after
You point me to the shore but I need a little more
Something within me is missing boat drifting
I set my compass back to us but I’m lost
Many days have past where did we lose our principles
I ship myself off to you
I see you in my sleep
Tides are turning but time comes around
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
63 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 4:05am
29th Oct 2024 4:05am
Red and Green
Red and Green
Red and Green within me
Sleep on a purple dream
Green relaxes me and me
Red is demon within me
Float on a puff of green
When I’m Red better watch out
Try to sleep Purple with you
Colors on Spectrum
Who is our audience that pays for it
Im Red and Green within me
You die for my former self
Im Autism within us
Everyone is on the Spectrum
Red and Green within me
Sleep on a purple dream
Green relaxes me and me
Red is demon within me
Float on a puff of green
When I’m Red better watch out
Try to sleep Purple with you
Colors on Spectrum
Who is our audience that pays for it
Im Red and Green within me
You die for my former self
Im Autism within us
Everyone is on the Spectrum
#alcohol
#Autism
#culture #marijuana
#culture #marijuana
82 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 2:25am
28th Oct 2024 2:25am
Baptized by Taylor’s Port and Mary Jane
Baptized by Taylor’s Port and Mary Jane
My black robe needs tailoring
Pinch my nose and I fall back into
The red waters of my sins
MJ throws a lifeline
Inhale my savior
Breathing Holy Spirit out of my lungs
Fog forms on the altar
Leave some quarters to light a candle
On my knees in the bottle
Doesn’t take the tarnish off of who I am
So I dip myself in again
Hoping to shed some sins
At least a little
Leave my flank open
Mary Jane comes back in
With her sins
...
My black robe needs tailoring
Pinch my nose and I fall back into
The red waters of my sins
MJ throws a lifeline
Inhale my savior
Breathing Holy Spirit out of my lungs
Fog forms on the altar
Leave some quarters to light a candle
On my knees in the bottle
Doesn’t take the tarnish off of who I am
So I dip myself in again
Hoping to shed some sins
At least a little
Leave my flank open
Mary Jane comes back in
With her sins
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#confessional #marijuana
#confessional #marijuana
104 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 12:33pm
27th Oct 2024 12:33pm
You say you won’t be like Daddy
So you say you won’t be like daddy
Mirror turns I look like him
I cursed him every day
When he went away
I love him to this day
But I’m too much like him
In the bottom of a bottle
That’s where we connect
Swimming in my sins
Swimming in red wine
I don’t want to be like him
And I wake up staring at me
Have to break this cycle
For I don’t want to pass this onto
My little champion he looks like me but
I don’t want him to be anything like me
Especially in...
Mirror turns I look like him
I cursed him every day
When he went away
I love him to this day
But I’m too much like him
In the bottom of a bottle
That’s where we connect
Swimming in my sins
Swimming in red wine
I don’t want to be like him
And I wake up staring at me
Have to break this cycle
For I don’t want to pass this onto
My little champion he looks like me but
I don’t want him to be anything like me
Especially in...
#addiction
#alcohol
#father
96 reads
6 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 6:27pm
20th Oct 2024 6:27pm
James Gang
Life in lockdown, no different for me,
I lived it all wild, and I lived it all free.
Posters on the windows, "No mask, no serve!"
"Don’t enter bare-faced. You’ve got some nerve!"
But out I’d go in, lanyard 'round my neck,
Snap a selfie, give a cheeky peck,
To Instagram with vids, “Mr Exempt”
Mockin' the masks felt so contempt.
Me and Snooper, down the leprechaun’s lane,
Mobility car, she weren’t the same,
Up to L-Town, we’d head for a score,
Boxes o’ weed, rip-offs galore.
Drive down Pembz, drop...
I lived it all wild, and I lived it all free.
Posters on the windows, "No mask, no serve!"
"Don’t enter bare-faced. You’ve got some nerve!"
But out I’d go in, lanyard 'round my neck,
Snap a selfie, give a cheeky peck,
To Instagram with vids, “Mr Exempt”
Mockin' the masks felt so contempt.
Me and Snooper, down the leprechaun’s lane,
Mobility car, she weren’t the same,
Up to L-Town, we’d head for a score,
Boxes o’ weed, rip-offs galore.
Drive down Pembz, drop...
#addiction
#alcohol
#drugs
#marijuana
#temptation
92 reads
5 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 2:19pm
20th Oct 2024 2:19pm
Throwing Up From Last Night's Party
Yvonne woke
up hungover
and found
herself naked
and on top of Kai
and that her
husband
Steven was
on top
of Oona's
bare belly
before going to
the bathroom and throwing
up
from last night's party.
up hungover
and found
herself naked
and on top of Kai
and that her
husband
Steven was
on top
of Oona's
bare belly
before going to
the bathroom and throwing
up
from last night's party.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#suffering
120 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 6:03am
18th Oct 2024 6:03am
Johnny Hockey Died
Johnny hockey died
Riding on two wheels with his brother
On a two lane road sometimes you can pass
Trees stand strong on each side of each other
But if you are not in your memory linger forget
That passing cars is dangerous especially
Cut back to the other side that’s when I collide upon you
I’m a drunk I just killed two human beings
That’s not the end of the story tomorrow
We should be groomsmen for our sister
So Johnny Hockey won’t see his sister get married
A...
Riding on two wheels with his brother
On a two lane road sometimes you can pass
Trees stand strong on each side of each other
But if you are not in your memory linger forget
That passing cars is dangerous especially
Cut back to the other side that’s when I collide upon you
I’m a drunk I just killed two human beings
That’s not the end of the story tomorrow
We should be groomsmen for our sister
So Johnny Hockey won’t see his sister get married
A...
#alcohol
#anger
#bittersweet
#dark
#grief
68 reads
0 Comments
hgnichols
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 00:13am
18th Oct 2024 00:13am
New York Supplication
#alcohol
#depression
#sex #suicide
#sex #suicide
69 reads
3 Comments
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