Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 8:18pm
26th Dec 2024 8:18pm
A Result Of The New Years Eve Party
New Years Day
finds Jillian waking
up and seeing her robe open and
flashing her naked body before she saw Rob
in the bathroom throwing up as a
result of the New Years
Eve party.
finds Jillian waking
up and seeing her robe open and
flashing her naked body before she saw Rob
in the bathroom throwing up as a
result of the New Years
Eve party.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
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dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 1:11am
25th Dec 2024 1:11am
stream of barely consciousness
the rhine, he maintains, is far superior to
the thames in every way bar one chap says
then pray tell us what it is always the
bloody same with old blokes down the pub
the thames in every way bar one chap says
then pray tell us what it is always the
bloody same with old blokes down the pub
#alcohol
65 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 00:50am
24th Dec 2024 00:50am
old bloke in the pub stuff
thought the old bloke in the corner
was unable to hear their conversation,
being intimate, he chose to ignore it,
but he heard right enough ..
was unable to hear their conversation,
being intimate, he chose to ignore it,
but he heard right enough ..
#alcohol
59 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 2:41am
23rd Dec 2024 2:41am
Result Of Last Night's Party
#alcohol
#confessional
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
111 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 5:09am
14th Dec 2024 5:09am
(Man In Black) Tethered to my Body by a Johnny Thread
(Man in Black)Tethered to my body by a Johnny thread
Been poppin pills
Til the sun rises
Cash is in trouble
Can’t walk the line
It’s in a cave
In Tennessee
Fighting the demons
Heroin numbs him
June comes along
He can’t resist
His secret crush
She’ll save him
Folsom prison blues
San Quentin too
But my name is Sue
How do you do
Rosanne said daddy you gotta
Go to Betty Ford
Can’t have this no more
The man in black
She said no more
...
Been poppin pills
Til the sun rises
Cash is in trouble
Can’t walk the line
It’s in a cave
In Tennessee
Fighting the demons
Heroin numbs him
June comes along
He can’t resist
His secret crush
She’ll save him
Folsom prison blues
San Quentin too
But my name is Sue
How do you do
Rosanne said daddy you gotta
Go to Betty Ford
Can’t have this no more
The man in black
She said no more
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#drugs #heroin
#drugs #heroin
54 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:32pm
10th Dec 2024 2:32pm
Oh My God! What Have I Been Drinking Last Night?!
Xaviera
was sitting naked on
the foot of the bed and looking scared
before she turned and glanced at Aaron and Skylar
still sleeping until she stood up and
looked at the Las Vegas
skyline there.
was sitting naked on
the foot of the bed and looking scared
before she turned and glanced at Aaron and Skylar
still sleeping until she stood up and
looked at the Las Vegas
skyline there.
#alcohol
#city
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
132 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:45pm
9th Dec 2024 8:45pm
Got Beer?
In 2010 Lance Lyde threw a giant party to mark his tenth anniversary as a master brewer. In the middle of the celebration, Lyde took a dive into a giant vat of beer. Friends and relatives at the party were unable to pull him out. He drowned in his own brew.
#alcohol
#fiction
#ignorance
#satirical
#ShortStory
66 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 11:27am
9th Dec 2024 11:27am
Some Friends Crashed A Neighbor's New Years Eve Party
Pam
and some
friends crashed a
neighbor's New Years
Eve party because
they figured that nothing
bad would happen to them. But
that was before she woke up the
next day naked, hungover and with
realizing they've gotten in too deep.
and some
friends crashed a
neighbor's New Years
Eve party because
they figured that nothing
bad would happen to them. But
that was before she woke up the
next day naked, hungover and with
realizing they've gotten in too deep.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
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oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 7:09pm
7th Dec 2024 7:09pm
Red Wine and Money
Feel like the home team prevails
Perfect day to play two
Popcorn and pretzels
On
Bleachers scream home team
Grabbing some dogs and beer
Phone bet 200
Settle seat rooting for money
9th inning tied game
Buckner 1st base
Pitch in place
Man on third
Ball rolling down the line
Sets his feet
Glove almost down
Ghost ball through the 5 hole
Next day put down 20 wine and spirits
Green bottle in bag
Look down the green lens
See empty bottle
...
Perfect day to play two
Popcorn and pretzels
On
Bleachers scream home team
Grabbing some dogs and beer
Phone bet 200
Settle seat rooting for money
9th inning tied game
Buckner 1st base
Pitch in place
Man on third
Ball rolling down the line
Sets his feet
Glove almost down
Ghost ball through the 5 hole
Next day put down 20 wine and spirits
Green bottle in bag
Look down the green lens
See empty bottle
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#money #sports
#money #sports
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0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 00:26am
5th Dec 2024 00:26am
to the bloke in the pub who likes to shout
think what you will
you ever keep quiet
and still it’s your right
or wrong to spurt what you like
a child who demands loudly to be heard,
night after night
I try to write
and find the very word ..
you ever keep quiet
and still it’s your right
or wrong to spurt what you like
a child who demands loudly to be heard,
night after night
I try to write
and find the very word ..
#alcohol
61 reads
4 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
Ode to the Drunk Girl, Don't Text That Man
Babe, we’ve talked about this too many times to be sane.
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
#alcohol
#breakup
#friendship
#love
#motivational
189 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 11:49am
26th Nov 2024 11:49am
This Is How We Found Her On New Years Day
Julie staggered in
hungover and wearing Keith's
shirt on her naked body.
hungover and wearing Keith's
shirt on her naked body.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
94 reads
0 Comments
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