Acrostic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#acrostic
LightWithin256
Poem Published
16th Feb 2018 11:52pm
16th Feb 2018 11:52pm
Once upon a...
Once upon a...
you played your part
acting out all of...
the things you said to me
I wonder why I still...
fall for fake loves
and all that's left to do is blame you.
you played your part
acting out all of...
the things you said to me
I wonder why I still...
fall for fake loves
and all that's left to do is blame you.
#acrostic
675 reads
10 Comments
LightWithin256
Poem Published
13th Feb 2018 4:57pm
13th Feb 2018 4:57pm
Everyone could see the trapdoor but me
I fall away from everyone
fighting for what I could
wondering what I had failed to see
feels like the end of the...
No. Don't fall through that trapdoor.
I could blame you but...
it's time to focus on me.
fighting for what I could
wondering what I had failed to see
feels like the end of the...
No. Don't fall through that trapdoor.
I could blame you but...
it's time to focus on me.
#acrostic
694 reads
13 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
11th Jan 2018 9:24pm
11th Jan 2018 9:24pm
ACROSTIC - MASSAGE
(Specially for women to know
How men react to touch below.)
Men
Are
Sensitively
Skinned
At their
Genital
Extremities.
How men react to touch below.)
Men
Are
Sensitively
Skinned
At their
Genital
Extremities.
#erotic
#acrostic
1052 reads
0 Comments
archetype23
Poem Published
20th Aug 2017 6:51pm
20th Aug 2017 6:51pm
MEMORIES SLAYED (ACROSTIC)
Midnight magick melds and mingles
Evening's tragic hands-held tingles
Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now
Reveries of destiny
Inside the fading rest of me
Evoking a moment that will always be
Some joke of neverending mystery
Solemn silence screams resistance
Laughter lingering in the distance
All that is still still fails to stay
Yesterday still torn away
Evening flickering within persistence
Dead like yesterday
Evening's tragic hands-held tingles
Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now
Reveries of destiny
Inside the fading rest of me
Evoking a moment that will always be
Some joke of neverending mystery
Solemn silence screams resistance
Laughter lingering in the distance
All that is still still fails to stay
Yesterday still torn away
Evening flickering within persistence
Dead like yesterday
#rhyming
#acrostic
828 reads
3 Comments
David_Macleod
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14397816
Poem Published
13th Aug 2017 5:37pm
13th Aug 2017 5:37pm
Resistance (An acrostic poem)
Resistance for you is futile
Enablers of freedom fighters are terrorists
Standing in protest will be met by deadly force
Islam will be made a prescribed terrorist organisation
South Korea is expendable
Totalitarian government in control
Americans must subscribe or die
North Korea now in ruins, Russia next
Can you see the missiles flying Halleluiah!
End of days has begun: God is great; Amen!
Enablers of freedom fighters are terrorists
Standing in protest will be met by deadly force
Islam will be made a prescribed terrorist organisation
South Korea is expendable
Totalitarian government in control
Americans must subscribe or die
North Korea now in ruins, Russia next
Can you see the missiles flying Halleluiah!
End of days has begun: God is great; Amen!
#power
#politics
#America
#acrostic
#war
1790 reads
17 Comments
BlackHyde17
Poem Published
1st Aug 2017 11:07pm
1st Aug 2017 11:07pm
Have a Happy Valentines Day
Have A Happy Valentines Day
H ave a happy valentines day
A lthough i am far away
P lease dear hear the words i say
P erhaps in a near future day
Y ou and i will find the way
V ery much i care for you
A lthough sometimes it seems untrue
L ets try to remember what we have to do
E nduring all of the hullabaloo
N ever forgetting the words i do
T ruly you and i can be as one
I n times of strife in times of fun
N eatly fitting like slugs in gun
E ven though you are moon and i am sun
S weetheart we are far from done ...
H ave a happy valentines day
A lthough i am far away
P lease dear hear the words i say
P erhaps in a near future day
Y ou and i will find the way
V ery much i care for you
A lthough sometimes it seems untrue
L ets try to remember what we have to do
E nduring all of the hullabaloo
N ever forgetting the words i do
T ruly you and i can be as one
I n times of strife in times of fun
N eatly fitting like slugs in gun
E ven though you are moon and i am sun
S weetheart we are far from done ...
#ValentinesDay
#acrostic
710 reads
1 Comment
twolilprinces
Poem Published
7th Jun 2017 11:11pm
7th Jun 2017 11:11pm
Finding Gold (Acrostic)
Freely pilfering through worn pages
Ink haphazardly scrawled
Nondescript ramblings
Dissertation or acrostic
Intricately carved words on repetition
Narrowly escaping writer's block
Gnawing through my paper-like wounds
Gnawing through my paper-like words
Orchestrating weapons with their fangs
Like precious metallics
Delicately carving my veins
Ink haphazardly scrawled
Nondescript ramblings
Dissertation or acrostic
Intricately carved words on repetition
Narrowly escaping writer's block
Gnawing through my paper-like wounds
Gnawing through my paper-like words
Orchestrating weapons with their fangs
Like precious metallics
Delicately carving my veins
#acrostic
#WritingPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
616 reads
1 Comment
UnderYourSpell
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2016 3:05am
2nd Jul 2016 3:05am
A Quadruple Acrostic
A Quadruple Acrostic
(Double Acrostic first letters of each line spell a word, as do the end letters reading backwards, plus top and bottom lines)
Sweeping high over weathered Elms,remember
How withered, dry leaves now spring to re-awake
Only to shed their weighty gathered overflow
When the heavens suddenly unleash a concerto
Enveloping far across the land and encroach
Rivers, endlessly wending onwards, hunting seas.
(Double Acrostic first letters of each line spell a word, as do the end letters reading backwards, plus top and bottom lines)
Sweeping high over weathered Elms,remember
How withered, dry leaves now spring to re-awake
Only to shed their weighty gathered overflow
When the heavens suddenly unleash a concerto
Enveloping far across the land and encroach
Rivers, endlessly wending onwards, hunting seas.
#trees
#river
#nature
#acrostic
#spring
802 reads
7 Comments
Mocosa
Poem Published
8th Apr 2015 6:32pm
8th Apr 2015 6:32pm
Choices *Acrostic poem*
Choosing the right from the wrong is very hard,
However it will have its pros and cons.
Other than wasting time on what people want you to be just be you.
It's hard when many people are so judgemental but it's possible.
Choose the right path even if it feels wrong.
Everything will turnout alright.
So just do you and make your own choices!
However it will have its pros and cons.
Other than wasting time on what people want you to be just be you.
It's hard when many people are so judgemental but it's possible.
Choose the right path even if it feels wrong.
Everything will turnout alright.
So just do you and make your own choices!
#acrostic
#choices
2659 reads
1 Comment
EngrVV
Poem Published
30th Sep 2014 7:39am
30th Sep 2014 7:39am
CLIFF
(acrostic-limerick)
#love
#lust
#acrostic
1348 reads
13 Comments
EngrVV
Poem Published
7th Jun 2013 5:13pm
7th Jun 2013 5:13pm
TRUTH (acrostic-tanka)
Telltale signs of lies
Revealed through his rolling eyes
Under scrutiny
The sacred truth will come out
Held captive by the devils
Revealed through his rolling eyes
Under scrutiny
The sacred truth will come out
Held captive by the devils
#lies
#acrostic
#honesty
2803 reads
2 Comments
EngrVV
Poem Published
13th Dec 2012 6:55pm
13th Dec 2012 6:55pm
FAIRY (acrostic-tanka)
Folks often mention
Adjacent to your kingdom
In the black forest
Resides this ugly monster
You subdued only with charm
Adjacent to your kingdom
In the black forest
Resides this ugly monster
You subdued only with charm
#acrostic
#fairies
1407 reads
2 Comments
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